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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。NearlythirtyyearsagoIwasatraineeengineerbasedinLiverpool.Iwashundredsofmilesfromhome,butIhadaniceplacetolivein,wasn’toverworked,hadagoodbunchoffriendsandplentyofmoneyinmypocket.OneSaturdaymorningIdecidedtowalkintoLiverpoolcitycentreandbuymyselfsomething.Ididn’tneedanything.Iwasjustgoingtospendsomemoney!ThewalkwasaboutfourmilesandtookmethroughToxteth,anareawhichtwoyearslaterwoulderuptintorioting(暴乱，骚乱),largelybecauseofthepovertyoftheplace.Istoppedinastoretobuymyselfsomesweetsforthewalk.WhileIwasmakingupmy mindwhichonetochoose,thedooropenedandinwalkedthis“ragamuffin”(邋遢的人).ItlookedlikeshemighthavebeenfouryearsoldatthemostShewaswearingasummerdressandsandals(凉鞋)eventhoughitwasabitterlycoldday,andshewasnotclean.Shewalkeduptothecounter,reachedupandplacedafiftypencecoinontheglass.Then,theproudlyannouncedthatshehadsavedthisupforherlittlebrother’sbirthdayandshewantedtobuyhimateddybearandshewantedthatonethere.Thewomanbehindthecountertoldthelittlegirltheteddybearcostmorethan50pence.Thegirltriedanotherone,andanotherone,andanotherone.BythistimeIhadbeenkeepinganeyeonthis.Iknewthatnoneofthebearscouldbeboughtfor50pence.IalsoknewthatIcouldeasilybuythebestbeartherewiththemoneyIwasgoingtowastethatday,butdidIwanttoencouragealittlegirltotakemoneyfromstrangers?注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请在答题卡上的相应位置作答。WhileIhesitated,thegirlannouncedtotheworld,“Ohwell,I’lljustgivehimmybearthen.”___________________________________________________________________________“Excuseme,”Icalledout,holdingthewrappedbearinmyhands.______________________________________________________________文章大意三十年前，身为实习工程师的“我”在利物浦工作，生活惬意。一个周六，“我”打算进城随意消费。途中经过两年后因贫困爆发骚乱的托克斯泰斯地区，在一家商店，“我”遇到一个最多四岁的邋遢小女孩。她在寒冷天气穿着夏装和凉鞋，拿着50便士为弟弟买生日礼物，满心期待给弟弟买只泰迪熊。然而，她看中的每只熊价格都超过50便士，她不断尝试挑选。“我”目睹这一切，虽有能力买下最好的熊，却在犹豫是否要让小女孩接受陌生人的帮助。故事山分析开端：“我”在利物浦工作，生活不错，周六准备进城花钱。发展：“我”在商店看到一个穿着单薄、不整洁的小女孩想用50便士给弟弟买生日礼物泰迪熊，但钱不够。高潮：“我”内心纠结是否帮助小女孩，而小女孩表示要把自己的熊给弟弟。结局（待续写）：“我”最终决定帮助小女孩，完成她的心愿，展现人与人之间的温暖与善良。伏笔以及在续写中的回应小女孩的穿着与寒冷天气不符：续写中可以体现“我”看到她的穿着，心生怜悯，更坚定帮助她的决心，如“看着她在寒风中瑟瑟发抖的单薄身影，我不再犹豫，决定一定要帮她实现心愿”。小女孩说为弟弟生日存钱买熊：这在续写中促使“我”采取行动，买下熊作为弟弟的生日礼物，如“想到她对弟弟满满的爱，我不想让她失望，于是迅速决定买下那只熊”。“我”有足够的钱买下最好的熊：在续写中得以实现，“我”用这笔钱帮小女孩买到了熊，如“我毫不犹豫地掏出钱包，用准备随意消费的钱买下了那只她心仪的熊”。“我”的犹豫：续写中通过内心挣扎后的决定来回应，如“经过一番内心的挣扎，我意识到帮助她传递爱比什么都重要，于是不再犹豫”。托克斯泰斯地区的贫困背景：在续写中可侧面体现小女孩的不易，以及“我”帮助她的意义，如“想到这个贫困地区孩子们的艰难生活，我觉得帮助她是我义不容辞的责任”。续写要点（两段）第一段：着重描写小女孩说要把自己的熊给弟弟后，“我”内心更加激烈的思想斗争，以及周围人的反应，如商店里其他顾客的表情、议论等。第二段：详细描述“我”喊住小女孩后的举动，比如“我”是如何把包装好的熊递给她，对她说了什么，小女孩的反应，以及“我”的感受，还可以适当提及之后“我”对这件事的思考。情感线起初，“我”怀着轻松逛街消费的心情，看到小女孩时，产生了疑惑和好奇。当看到她为弟弟买礼物钱不够时，内心开始纠结犹豫，既有帮助她的冲动，又担心不合适。小女孩决定把自己的熊给弟弟时，“我”深受触动，内心的善良被激发，最终不再犹豫，坚定地帮助她，完成帮助后的“我”感到温暖和满足，对人性的美好有了更深体会。故事线“我”在利物浦工作，准备进城随意消费。“我”在商店遇到小女孩想买泰迪熊给弟弟当生日礼物。小女孩钱不够，不断尝试挑选价格合适的熊。“我”内心纠结是否帮助小女孩。小女孩决定把自己的熊给弟弟，促使“我”做出决定。“我”买下熊送给小女孩，收获温暖与感动。主旨升华句Inthesimplestactsofkindness,wediscoverthetrueessenceofhumanity,transcendingtheboundariesofstrangersandbringingwarmthtotheworld.（在最质朴的善举中，我们发现了人性的真谛，它跨越了陌生人之间的界限，为世界带来温暖。）Asmallactofcompassioncannotonlybrightenachild'sdaybutalsosowtheseedsofhopeandloveintheharshsoilofpoverty.（一个小小的善举，不仅能照亮一个孩子的一天，还能在贫困的贫瘠土壤中播下希望与爱的种子。）Ourhesitationinthefaceofothers'needsisoftenovercomebythepureloveandselflessnesswewitness,leadingustoembracethebeautyofgiving.（我们在面对他人需求时的犹豫，常常会被我们所目睹的纯粹的爱与无私所战胜，引领我们拥抱给予的美好。）Inaworldfilledwithdifferencesandhardships,theconnectionformedthroughasimpleactofkindnesscanbridgethegapsandremindusofoursharedhumanity.（在一个充满差异和艰难的世界里，通过一个简单善举建立起来的联系，能够弥合差距，让我们铭记我们共有的人性。）Theencounterwiththelittlegirltaughtmethattruewealthliesnotinthemoneywespendcasually,butintheloveandkindnesswesharewiththoseinneed.（与小女孩的相遇让我明白，真正的财富不在于我们随意挥霍的金钱，而在于我们与有需要的人分享的爱与善良。）写作示范一WhileIhesitated,thegirlannouncedtotheworld,“Ohwell,I’lljustgivehimmybearthen.”Herwordshitmelikeathunderbolt.Isawthedisappointmentinhereyes,butalsotheunwaveringloveforherlittlebrother.Thepeoplearoundusweresilentforamoment,andthensomebegantowhispersympathetically.Istoodthere,myheartpounding.Ithoughtaboutmyowncarefreeshoppingplanandherearnestwishforherbrother.Finally,Imadeupmymind.“Excuseme,”Icalledout,holdingthewrappedbearinmyhands.“Thisisforyourbrother.It’shisbirthdaypresentfromme.”Thegirllookedatmeinsurprise,hereyeswideopen.“Really?”sheaskedinatremblingvoice.Inoddedandsmiled.Shetookthebear,huggedittightly,andthenthrewherarmsaroundme.“Thankyousomuch!”sheexclaimed.Atthatmoment,Ifeltawarmthspreadingthroughmybody.Irealizedthatthissimpleactofkindnesshadmademydayfarmoremeaningfulthananyshoppingcouldhave.写作示范二WhileIhesitated,thegirlannouncedtotheworld,“Ohwell,I’lljustgivehimmybearthen.”Hervoicewasfilledwithbothdisappointmentanddetermination.Thestoreclerklookedatherwithpity,andafewcustomersshooktheirheadssadly.Ifeltalumpinmythroat.IthoughtabouthowmuchItookforgrantedinmylife,whilethislittlegirlwastryingsohardtomakeherbrotherhappywithhermeagersavings.Icouldn'tstandbyanylonger.“Excuseme,”Icalledout,holdingthewrappedbearinmyhands.“Iheardyouwantedthisforyourbrother.Here,it’syours.”Thegirlstaredatme,asifshecouldn'tbelieveherears.Tearswelledupinhereyes,andshebitherlip.“Youaresokind,”shesaidsoftly.Ipattedherheadandsaid,“Youareaverylovingsister.I'msureyourbrotherwilllovethisbear.”Watchingherskipoutofthestorewiththebearinherarms,Ifeltadeepsenseofsatisfaction.Itmademeunderstandthatthegreatestjoyinlifecomesfromhelpingothers.参考答案第一段续写WhileIhesitated,thegirlannouncedtotheworld,“Ohwell,I’lljustgivehimmybearthen.”Hervoice,thoughsmall,wasfilledwithakindofdeterminationthattuggedatmyheartstrings.Shecarefullyputthefifty-pencecoinbackintoherpocket,andherlittleshouldersslumpedslightly.Thestoreseemedtogrowquiet,andIcouldfeeltheeyesofothersinthestore,filledwithamixofpityandhelplessness.Atthatmoment,Ithoughtabouthowmuchjoythatteddybearcouldbringtoherlittlebrother,andhowdisappointedhewouldbeifhedidn'tgetit.Ialsothoughtabouttheharshlifethesekidsinthispoor