高考英语复习读后续写练习：作弊背后：学业压力下的冲动与教训+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习作弊背后：学业压力下的冲动与教训1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文ACheatingIncidentRajlookedintotheteacher’sstonyfaceassheraisedaneyebrow.Withhisforeheadbathedinsweat,heattemptedtohidethebookbeneathhisdesk,butinvain.Thewatchfulteacherhadalreadycaughtsightofhisbehavior.Sheswiftlysnatchedthebookawayandorderedhimtostandtillthetimewasup,aperiodthatseemedtostretchendlessly.ToRaj’sregretanddisappointment,hehadforgottentostudyfortheimportantquiz.ItwasCAI,thecrucialstageofhisacademicyear,andRajwashavinghisSciencepaper.Heclosedhiseyesashetriedtorecall.Then,itdawnedonhim.Aweekearlier,hisScienceteacherhadclearlyinformedtheclass,“Nextweek,we’llbehavingaquizfocusingonInteractionsandMatter.Makesureyoustudythesetopicsthoroughly.”Rajblamedhimselfforlettingsuchvitalinformationsliphismindamongthechaosofdailyschoollife.4续写原文Withtheclockticking,hewasbrieflyglancingthroughthepagesofhistextbook,desperatelytryingtoabsorbanylast-minuteknowledgebeforethequizbegan.However,justashewasdoingso,theteacherseverelyinstructedeveryonetopackawayeverythingexcepttheirpencilcases.Rajletoutalowsigh,despairsettlingheavilyinhischest.Astheteacherhandedoutthepapers,hefeltnervousandhishandsgrewicyandslickwithsweat,showinghisanxiety.Dropsofsweatstoodoutonhisforeheadashetriedtofocus.Thoughtsofbeingafailureranthroughhismind.Hemovedhisbodyfromsidetosideinhisseatashethoughtofthenoteshehadsecretlyhiddeninhispencilcase.Finally,theteacherannounced,“Class,thetimeis10:00a.m.Wewillstopat11:00a.m.sharp.Youmaybegin,now.”Thenoiseofflurryingpaperswasheardasstudentsattentivelyturnedtothefirstpage.Rajrapidlyfilledoutthemultiple-choicesectionwithoutmuchconsideration,hisheartpoundingfasterwitheachtickoftheclock.5段首句Paragraph1:Whenhecametotheopen-endedquestions,hesigheddesperatelyfromthebottomofhisheart.Paragraph2:NataliesaidTobin’sunexpectedbirthwasalljustpartofherjob.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8拉杰在参加重要的学年阶段性考试（CAI）的科学科目测验时，因忘记复习，考试前还在临时抱佛脚。老师要求大家收拾好书本等物品后，拉杰满心绝望。考试开始，他紧张得手冰凉出汗，额头也布满汗珠，脑海中不断闪过自己会失败的念头，还想着藏在铅笔盒里的小抄。他快速做完了选择题，然而当做到简答题时，麻烦来了。他看着题目，毫无头绪，内心无比绝望，因为之前的疏忽，此刻的他根本答不上来。他知道一旦作弊被抓，后果不堪设想，但看着时间一分一秒过去，又实在不甘心交白卷。最终，他还是没能抵挡住诱惑，偷偷拿出了小抄。可他的小动作没能逃过老师的眼睛，老师迅速发现了他的作弊行为，当场没收了他的书，并让他站着直到考试结束，那一个小时对他来说无比漫长。考试结束后，老师将他带到了校长办公室。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Paragraph1:Whenhecametotheopen-endedquestions,hesigheddesperatelyfromthebottomofhisheart.当他做到简答题时，他从心底里绝望地叹了口气。看着试卷上那一道道陌生又复杂的题目，他的大脑一片空白，仿佛所有的知识都在这一刻离他而去。他的手紧紧地握着笔，指关节因为用力而泛白，额头上的汗珠不停地滚落，滴在试卷上，晕开了一片水渍。他偷偷地环顾四周，同学们都在奋笔疾书，专注地答题，没有人注意到他的窘迫。他的心跳越来越快，仿佛要跳出嗓子眼。他又一次想起了藏在铅笔盒里的小抄，心中的挣扎愈发激烈。一方面，他知道作弊是不道德的行为，一旦被发现，后果将不堪设想；另一方面，他又害怕考出一个糟糕的成绩，让父母和老师失望。在时间的催促下，他的理智渐渐被恐惧和焦虑吞噬。终于，他咬了咬牙，颤抖着把手伸向了铅笔盒。他小心翼翼地拿出小抄，眼睛紧张地盯着老师，生怕被发现。就在他准备抄答案的时候，老师突然抬起头，目光直直地看向了他。他的手僵在了半空中，脸色瞬间变得煞白，心中充满了懊悔和恐惧。10续写思路分析Paragraph2:Oncethetimewasup,theteachertookhimtotheheadmaster’soffice.考试一结束，老师就带着拉杰来到了校长办公室。拉杰低着头，脚步沉重地跟在老师身后，每走一步都像是在拖着千斤重的石头。他不敢看老师的眼睛，更不敢想象接下来会发生什么。进入校长办公室后，校长一脸严肃地坐在办公桌前，看着拉杰。老师向校长详细地讲述了拉杰作弊的经过，校长的脸色越来越阴沉。拉杰站在那里，低着头，双手紧紧地握在一起，手心全是汗水。校长严厉地批评了他，告诉他作弊不仅违反了学校的纪律，更是对自己的不负责，是一种欺骗行为。拉杰听着校长的话，心中充满了愧疚和悔恨。他意识到自己的错误是多么严重，不仅伤害了自己的学业，也辜负了老师和父母的信任。他抬起头，眼中含着泪水，向校长和老师诚恳地道歉，表示自己以后再也不会犯这样的错误了。校长看着拉杰真诚的样子，语气稍微缓和了一些，告诉他要为自己的行为负责，并会给予相应的处罚。拉杰接受了处罚，他暗暗发誓，以后一定要认真学习，用自己的努力去取得好成绩。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Whenhecametotheopen-endedquestions,hesigheddesperatelyfromthebottomofhisheart.Lookingattheunfamiliarandcomplexquestionsonthepaper,hismindwentblankasifalltheknowledgehadlefthimatthatmoment.Hishandtightlygraspedthepen,hisknucklesturningwhiteduetotheforce.Beadsofsweatkeptrollingdownhisforeheadanddroppedontothepaper,creatingawaterstain.Hesecretlylookedaround.Theclassmateswereallwritingbusily,focusingonansweringthequestions,andnoonenoticedhisembarrassment.Hisheartwasbeatingfasterandfaster,asifitwasabouttojumpoutofhisthroat.Hethoughtofthecheatnoteshiddeninhispencilcaseagain,andthestruggleinhisheartbecamemoreintense.Ontheonehand,heknewthatcheatingwasimmoralandtheconsequenceswouldbedisastrousifhewascaught.Ontheotherhand,hewasafraidofgettingabadgradeanddisappointinghisparentsandteachers.Underthepressureoftime,hisrationalitywasgraduallyconsumedbyfearandanxiety.Finally,hegrittedhisteethandreachedforthepencilcasewithatremblinghand.Hetookoutthecheatnotescarefully,hiseyesnervouslyfixedontheteacher,fearingtobediscovered.Justashewasabouttocopytheanswers,theteachersuddenlylookedupandstaredstraightathim.Hishandfrozeinmid-air,hisfaceturningdeathlypale,filledwithregretandfear.13范文呈现Oncethetimewasup,theteachertookhimtotheheadmaster'soffice.Rajloweredhisheadandfollowedtheteacherwithheavysteps,eachstepfeelinglikedraggingathousand-jinstone.Hedarednotlookintotheteacher'seyes,norcouldheimaginewhatwouldhappennext.Afterenteringtheheadmaster'soffice,theheadmastersatatthedeskwithaseriouslookonhisface,lookingatRaj.TheteachertoldtheheadmasterindetailaboutRaj'scheatingincident,andtheheadmaster'sfacebecamemoreandmoregloomy.Rajstoodthere,withhisheaddown,hishandstightlyclaspedtogether,hispalmsfullofsweat.Theheadmasterseverelycriticizedhim,tellinghimthatcheatingnotonlyviolatedtheschool'sdisciplinebutalsowasirresponsibletohimselfandakindofdeception.Rajlistenedtotheheadmaster'swords,filledwithguiltandremorse.Herealizedhowserioushismistakewas,notonlyhurtinghisownstudiesbutalsobetrayingthetrustofhisteachersandparents.Helookedup,withtearsinhiseyes,andsincerelyapologizedtotheheadmasterandtheteacher,sayingthathewouldnevermakesuchamistakeagain.TheheadmasterlookedatRaj'ssincereappearanceandhistonesoftenedabit.HetoldRajthathehadtoberesponsibleforhisactionsandwouldbegivencorrespondingpunishment.Rajacceptedthepunishmentandsecretlyvowedthathewouldstudyhardandachievegoodgradesthroughhisowneffortsinthefuture.14升级版范文呈现Whenhecametotheopen-endedquestions,adesperatesighescapedfromtheverydepthsofhisheart.Gazingattheunfamiliarandintricatequestionsonthetestpaper,hismindwentcompletelyblank,asifalltheknowledgehehadeverlearnedhadsuddenlyevaporatedintothinair.Hishandclutchedthepensotightlythathisknucklesturnedaswhiteassnow.Beadsofsweattrickleddownhisforeheadincessantly,splashingontothepaperandcreatingsmall,spreadingwaterstains.Stealthily,hestoleglancesaroundtheroom.Hisclassmateswereallengrossedinwriting,theirheadsbowedovertheirpapers,completelyabsorbedinansweringthequestions,oblivioustohisdistress.Hisheartpoundedwildly,asifitwereabouttoburstthroughhischest.Onceagain,histhoughtsdriftedtothecheatnotesconcealedinhispencilcase,andtheinternalstrugglewithinhimintensified.Ononehand,hewasacutelyawarethatcheatingwasunethicalandthattheconsequencesofbeingcaughtwouldbedire.Ontheotherhand,thefearofobtainingapoorgradeanddisappointinghisparentsandteachersgnawedathimrelentlessly.Astimetickedaway,hisrationalitygraduallysuccumbedtotheoverwhelmingtideoffearandanxiety.Eventually,heclenchedhisteethandreachedforthepencilcasewithatremblinghand.Heextractedthecheatnoteswithutmostcaution,hiseyesfixednervouslyontheteacher,terrifiedofbeingdetected.Justashewasonthevergeofcopyingtheanswers,theteacherabruptlyliftedherheadandstareddirectlyathim.Hishandfrozeinmid-air,hisfacedrainedofallcolor,andhisheartfilledwithaprofoundsenseofregretandterror.15升级版范文呈现Oncethetimewasup,theteacherledhimtotheheadmaster'soffice.Rajhunghisheadlowandtrudgedalongbehindtheteacher,eachstepfeelingasifheweredraggingamassiveboulder.Hedarednotmeettheteacher'sgaze,norcouldhebringhimselftocontemplatewhatlayahead.Uponenteringtheheadmaster'soffice,theheadmastersatbehindthedesk,hisexpressionsternashefixedhiseyesonRaj.TheteacherrecountedindetailtheeventsofRaj'scheatingincident,andwitheachpassingword,theheadmaster'sfacegrewdarkerandmoremenacing.Rajstoodthere,hisheadbowedinshame,hishandsclaspedtightlytogether,hispalmssoakedwithsweat.Theheadmasterlaunchedintoascat