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08读后续写名校试题速递广东省2022-2023学年高三名校分类分项汇编解析版1.【华南师大附中2023届高三年级第一次月考】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Oncetherewasashiptravellingonthetoughseaandontheshiptherewasapairofcouple.Allofasudden,theshipmetwithanaccidentandthecouplehadnochoicebuttoruntothelifeboatwithoutdelay.Afterreachingthere,theyrealizedthattherewasspaceonlyforoneperson.Atthatverymoment,thehusbandpushedhiswifebehindhimandjumpedontothelifeboathimself,leavinghiswifestandingonthesinkingship,shoutingsomethingdesperatelytoherhusbandeyesfilledwithtears.”Theteacherstoppedherstory-tellingandaskedherstudents,“Guys,guesswhatitwasthatsheshouted.”Moststudentsanswered.“Ihateyou!”Afterlisteningtoallthisreply,theteacherglancedthroughthewholeclassagainandnoticedthattherewasaboysittingsilentlythroughout.Thensheaskedhimthesamequestion.Theboyanswered,“Ibelieveshewouldhaveshouted-Takecareofourchild.”Listeningtohisremarks,theteacherwassurprisedandaskedtheboydoubtfully.“Haveyouheardofthisstorybefore?”Shakinghishead,theboysaidsoftlyandsadly,“No,Ihaven’t.Butthat’swhatmymothersaidtomyfatherbeforeshediedofadeadlydisease.”Movedandfeelingsad,theteacherreplied.“Youranswerisabsolutelyright!”Thenshecontinued,“Let’stakeupthestory.Theshipsankeventuallyandthehusbandwenthomeandbroughtuptheirdaughteralone.Manyyearslaterafterthedeathoftheman,theirdaughterwastidyingupallhisbelongingswhenshefoundhisdiary.Inhisdiaryshefoundthatwhenherparentswereontheship,hermotherhadalreadybeendiagnosed(诊断)withadvancedillnessandatthecriticalmoment,thefatherrushedtotheonlychanceofsurvival.”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Inhisdiary,themanmentionedhewishedtosinktotheoceanwithhiswifebutfortheirdaughterhehadtolive.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thestorywasfinishedandtheclasswassilent.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Inhisdiary,themanmentionedhewishedtosinktotheoceanwithhiswifebutfortheirdaughterhehadtolive.Withouthim,theirbabydaughterwouldbecomeanorphan.Afterdrowninghimselfinsorrowforashorttime,heupliftedhimselfandlearnedhowtoraisebaby.Wheneverfacedwithhardships,hewouldinspirehimselfwithhiswife’words—“Takecareofourchild.”Seeingthelittlegirlgrowintoasunny,prettygirlwithdoublelovefrombothparents,themanknewhemadeittokeephispromise.Thestorywasfinishedandtheclasswassilent.Nobodytalkedorlaughedasusual.Instead,itseemedthateverystudentwaslostindeepthought,tastingthemovinglifestory.Theteacherwassurethatthestudentswerereflectingontheirrepliesandthattheyhadunderstoodthemoralofthestory.OftheGoodandEvilinthisworld,therearehiddensecretsbehindthem.Soweshouldnotreallyfocusonthesurfaceandjudgeanyonewithoutunderstandingthemfirst.Putyourselfinothers’shoesandthenyoucanreallyunderstandtheirbehavior.【解析】【分析】这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知,文章主要讲述了老师在课堂上给学生们讲了一个故事:故事的大致内容是一对夫妇在海上遇到事故,但是救生艇只能容纳一个人,最后,丈夫推着身后的妻子,自己跳上了救生艇,留下妻子站在正在下沉的船上,绝望地对着丈夫喊着什么。老师让学生猜想妻子说了什么,大多数学生的回答是“我恨你!”,但是一位学生却回答说妻子让丈夫照顾好孩子。老师继续说故事,多年以后,他们的女儿在整理遗物时发现了父亲的日记,原来母亲已经被诊断出病情严重,在关键时刻,父亲冲向了唯一的生存机会。【详解】续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:在他的日记中,他提到他希望和妻子一起沉入大海,但为了他们的女儿,他必须活下去。接下来可以写没有他,他们的宝贝女儿会变成孤儿。在短暂的悲伤之后,他提升了自己,学会了如何抚养孩子。每当遇到困难时,他都会用妻子的话激励自己——“照顾好我们的孩子。”看着小女孩成长为一个阳光明媚、漂亮可爱、受到父母双爱的女孩,这个男人知道他这样做是为了履行自己的诺言。第二段的开头是:故事讲完了,全班安静下来。接下来可以写没有人像往常一样说话或大笑。相反,每个学生似乎都陷入了沉思,品味着动人的人生故事。老师确信学生们正在反思他们的回答,并且他们已经理解了这个故事的寓意。这个世界上的善与恶,背后都隐藏着秘密。所以我们不应该只关注表面,在不了解任何人之前就对他们进行评判。设身处地为别人着想,你就能真正理解他们的行为。【点睛】续写内容得当,使用了固定短语和高分句型。如:befacedwith;takecareof;makeit;keepone’spromise;reflecton;focuson;putoneselfinothers’shoes等固定短语。①Seeingthelittlegirlgrowintoasunny,prettygirlwithdoublelovefrombothparents,themanknewhemadeittokeephispromise.中使用了现在分词seeing作状语;②Theteacherwassurethatthestudentswerereflectingontheirrepliesandthattheyhadunderstoodthemoralofthestory.中that引导的是宾语从句。2.【广东省广州市天河区2022-2023学年高三上学期11月月考英语试题】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。OnawinterSundaygoodforskiing,Suearrivedattheirholidaychalet(棚屋)withjoy.Sue’sskiswerestickingoutbehindher.Mark,anotherskier,trippedoverSue’sskis.BeforeSuecouldapologize,Mikeshouted,“Yourskisareintheway.You’vegotbigsmellyfeet!”Inviewofhisattitude,Sueignoredhim.Marklostfaceandwasmoreangry.Theskilifttookalltheskierstothetopofthemountain.Thehardsnowofthepiste(滑雪道)wasbelowthem.ThenSueskieddownthemountain.Asagoodskier,shedidn’tfallover.Mark,alongwithhisgoodfriendDavid,waswatchingherwithenvyandanger.Theywerealsogoodskiersbuttheydidn’tknowSueverywell.“She’sgood,”Davidsaid.“Butwe’rebetter,”Markrespondedwithdissatisfaction.Theyoungpeopleskiedallday.Theyenjoyedthemselvesandforgoteverything.OnWednesdaymorning,theyoungpeoplewerewaitingfortheskiliftwhentheirteacherannouncedaskirace.Theracewouldbearrangedforthelastdayoftheholidayonalonganddifficultten-kilometerpiste.Everybodywantedtowin!Theywentupthemountain,putontheirskisandskieddownthepiste,practicingfortherace.Sueskiedfast,sodidMarkandDavid.Obviously,thesethreebecamepowerfulopponents.ItwasSaturdayandtheracewasgoingtobeheldintheafternoon.Suewashungryandleftherskisatthesideofacafé.Shesatdownandorderedlunch.Later,DavidandMarkcamein.Theyalsoheadedtothesidetoputtheirskisthere.MarknoticedSue’sskisandaimedakickangrilyatthem.Thenhefoundascrew(螺丝)onSue’sskiwasloose,unsurewhetheritwascausedbytheforceoritwaslikethatoriginally.“Sue’sskiswon’twork.We’resuretowin,”Marksaidandpointed.Theysmiledknowinglyateachother.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Finallycamethetimeoftheraceandeveryonewasexcited._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Maybefeelingguiltyornervous,MarkmadeamistakeandfelldownwhenSueapproachedhim._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Paragraph1:Finallycamethetimeoftheraceandeveryonewasexcited.Withtherefereesaying“Getset,go”,allskiersraceddown.Unsurprisingly,Suefelloversecondslater.Noticingtheloosescrew,sheslidacrossthesnowandoffthepiste.Duringthisperiod,DavidandMarkskiedpast.MarkshoutedtoDavid,“We’regoingtowin.”Luckily,itwasnotatoughproblemforSue.Shequicklytightenedthescrew,madeanexaminationoftherestandskiedagain.Minuteslater,shewasaheadofmostcompetitors.Now,theonlyonebeforeherwasMark,whomshewasdeterminedtobeat.Paragraph2:Maybefeelingguiltyornervous,MarkmadeamistakeandfelldownwhenSueapproachedhim.SeeingMarkstruggledtostandup,Suestoppedandgavehimapull.Muchastonished,Markmurmured,“Thankyou.”Sueleftwithawaveofthehand.Twoplayerspassedjustthemoment.Suespedupwithallherstrength.Soonshecrossedthefinishlinefirsttothunderousapplause.“Congratulations!”MarkcametoSue.“Ishouldapologizeformywordsandbehavior.”Knowingwhathadhappened,Suewasalittleangry,butanyway,itwasinthepast,“Nevermind.I’vealsolearnedthelessonthatexaminingmyskisisnecessary,”Suejoked.“Andmaybewecouldskitogetherlater.”“Totallyagree!”【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Sue在滑雪时与Mark起了争执,Mark非常生气。Sue滑雪很棒,Mark与好友David嫉妒Sue。后来老师宣布进行滑雪比赛,三个人成了强大的竞争对手。比赛前Mark和David注意到Sue的滑雪板的螺丝松动了,他们认为他们一定会赢的比赛。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“比赛终于到了,每个人都很兴奋。”可知,第一段可描写在滑雪的过程中,Sue注意到螺丝松动了,停下来修理,然后努力追赶,最后只有Mark在她前面了,Sue努力追赶Mark。②由第二段首句内容“也许是感到内疚或紧张,马克犯了一个错误,当苏接近他时摔倒了。”可知,第二段可描写Sue帮助了Mark,最后赢得了冠军,Mark对Sue说出了实情,Sue原谅了他们,最后他们成为了好朋友。2.续写线索:比赛开始——Sue停下修滑雪板——被超越,努力追赶——帮助Mark——赢得比赛——说出实情——原谅——成为朋友3.词汇激活行为类①.摔倒:fallover/tumble/trip②.检查:makeanexamination/check/examine③.接近:approach/becloseto/comenear情绪类①.惊奇:astonished/surprised/amazed②.生气:angry/takeoffence【点睛】[高分句型1].Noticingtheloosescrew,sheslidacrossthesnowandoffthepiste.(现在分词作状语)[高分句型2].Now,theonlyonebeforeherwasMark,whomshewasdeterminedtobeat.(由关系代词whom引导非限制性定语从句)3.【广东省茂名市2022-2023学年高三上学期大联考】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Earlierthatday,KevinwaspassingbytheneighborhoodparkwhenhesawanadoutsideMrs.Murphy’shouse.Itsaidthatthe88-year-oldwomanhadlost$150ofhersavingsneartheirlocalgrocerystore,andshe’drequestedthefindertoreturnthemoneytoherasshereallyneededit.AsKevinstoodtherestaringatthead,anideastruckhim.Hehurriedhometohispiggybank,Pigzy,anddecidedtohelpMrs.Murphy.Afterhebrokethepiggybankintopieces,hecountedallthemoney,andtherewas$170intotal.Heputthe$20billinhisstudytabledrawer,therestinhispocket,andrantoMrs.Murphy’shouse.Whentheolderladyopenedherdoor,shewassurprisedtoseeaneight-year-oldinherdoorway,abrightsmileonhisface.“IgotyourMONEY!”saidKevinexcitedlyashepulledoutcrumpled(弄皱的)dollarbillsandcoinsfromhispiggybank.“Icountedit...it’s$150.”“Oh,honey,butdidyoufindthisoutsidethegrocerystore?”“No,Ididn’t,”repliedKevin.“IhadtobreakPigzy,mypiggybank.Iwassavingthisupformyskateboard,butthat’sokay.I’mhappytohelpyou.”Mrs.Murphy’seyeswerefilledwithtearsassheheldthemoney.Shesaid,“Oh,thank...thankyou.What’syourname,littleman?Doyoulivearoundhere?””I’mKevin,“hesaid.”Iliveacoupleofhousesaway.Iknowyouneededthemoneybadly,Mrs.Murphy.Iknowyoudon’thaveenoughmoney.Momoncetoldmeyouaren’trich...”Theolderladyhuggedhimwithfulltearsinhereyesandsaid,“Youhaveaheartofgold,honey.Thankyousomuch.Iappreciateyourhelp.Ihadsavedthatmoneytovisitmynewborngrandson,butafterlosingthemoney,Icouldn’tgo.NowthatIhaveitback,IthinkI’llvisitmyfamily.Thankyou.”注意1.续写词数应为150左右2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Aweeklater,KevinwaswatchingTVwhenheheardaknockonthedoor.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“OhGod,that’salotofmoney!Wecan’tkeepthis,”Kevin’smomsaid.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Aweeklater,KevinwaswatchingTVwhenheheardaknockonthedoor.Kevindasheddownstairstothedoorandsawayoungmanstandinginhisdoorway.BehindhimwasMrs.Murphy,smiling.“Mrs.Murphy?Andwhoareyou,sir?”“Hithere,Kevin,”repliedMrs.Murphy.“Thankstoyou,Icouldseemygrandson.Thisismyson,Peter,andwehavealittlepresentfouyou.”PetergaveKevinanenvelope,whichcontainedtentimestheamounthe’dgivenMrs.Murphy.Itwas$1,500intotal.“OhGod,that’salotofmoney!Wecan’tkeepthis,”Kevin’smomsaid.Sheadded,“Idon’tunderstandwhyyou’regivingittohim.WhatdidKevindo?”ThenMrs.Murphytoldherthewholestory.AndKevin’smomlookedatherson,teary-eyedandasked,“Didyoureallydothat,honey?DidyoubreakPigzy?Butyouloveditsomuch!”Kevinreplied,“Ilovedit,mom.Butyoualwaystellmeweshouldhelppeopleinneed.Mrs.Murphyneededthehelp,soIhadtobreakit.AndIamabigboynow,soIwon’tmissPigzy.’【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了小男孩凯文用自己存钱罐里的钱帮助丢失了150美元的墨菲夫人的故事。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“一个星期后,凯文正在看电视,突然听到敲门声。”可知,第一段可描写开门后发现是墨菲夫人来表示感谢的情况。②由第二段首句内容“哦,上帝,那是一大笔钱!我们不能留着它”可知,第二段可描写凯文妈妈对这笔钱的处理及墨菲夫人的回应和凯文的感受。2.续写线索:打开门——表感谢——送礼物——问原因——讲经过——说感想3.词汇激活行为类①猛冲:dash/rush/charge②回答:reply/answer③保留:keep/retain情绪类①感到惊讶的:surprised/amazed/astonished②高兴的:happy/glad【点睛】【高分句型1】PetergaveKevinanenvelope,whichcontainedtentimestheamounthe’dgivenMrs.Murphy.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Idon’tunderstandwhyyou’regivingittohim.(运用了why引导的宾语从句)4.【广东省普宁市2022-2023学年高三上学期11月月考英语试题】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Onacoldwindyday,apoorboytriedtopayhiswaythroughschoolbysellinggoodsdoortodoor.Wanderingonthestreet,hewasnotasuccessfulseller.What’sworse,hefoundthatheonlyhadonedimeleft.Hisemptystomachremindedhimconstantlythatfordayshehadn’teatenanything.Hehadnochoicebuttobegforamealatthenexthouse.Hesitantlyheknockedatadoor,thinkingaboutwhattosaywhenitwasopened.However,helosthisnervewhenalovelyyoungwomanopenedthedoor.“WhatcanIdoforyou?”askedtheyoungwoman.Theboypausedforawhile,“Wouldyoupleasegivemesome...adrinkofwater?”theboydarednottolookdirectlyintohereyes.Shelookedatthebonyboyandthoughthemightneedsomethingtogivehimenergysoshebroughthimaglassofmilk.Hisheadrisingandsmallhandstakingthecup,hedrankitupslowly,andthenasked,“HowmuchdoIoweyou?”“Youdon’towemeanything,”sherepliedwithawarmsmileonherface.“Mymotherhastaughtmenevertoacceptpayforakindness.”Deeplymoved,hesaidsincerely,“ThenIshallthankyoufromthebottomofmyheart.”AsHowardKellyleftthathouse,henotonlyfeltstrongerphysically,butitalsoincreasedhisfaithinthewholehumanrace.Asamatteroffact,hewasabouttogiveupandquitbeforethatpoint.Yearslatertheyoungwomanbecamecriticallyill.However,thelocaldoctorswereunabletogiveaneffectivemedicaltreatment.Finallytheysenthertoahospitalinthebigcity,wherespecialistscanbecalledintocureherraredisease.Amongthosefamousspecialists,Dr.HowardKellywascalledinfortheconsultation.Whenheheardthenameofthetownshecamefrom,astrangelightfilledhiseyes.Immediately,heroseandwentdownthroughthehospitalhallintoherroom.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dressedinhisdoctor’sgown,hewentintoseeher.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thebillwassenttoherroom.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dressedinhisdoctor’sgown,hewentintoseeher.Hesawherlieonthebedandrecognizedheratonce.Herlovelyfacelookedpale.Hewentbacktotheconsultationroomanddeterminedtodohisbesttosaveherlife.Fromthatdayon,hegavespecialattentiontohercase.Luckily,afteralongstruggle,shemadeafullrecovery.Dr.Kellyrequestedthebusinessofficetopassthefinalbilltohimforapproval.Helookedatitandthenwrotesomethingontheside.Thebillwassenttoherroom.Hesitantlyshetookit.Shewasafraidtoopenitbecauseshewassurethatitwouldtaketherestofherlifetopayitoff.Finallysheopenedit,onthesideofwhichanotecaughtherattention.Shereadthesewords,“Paidinfullwithaglassofmilk.”signedDr.HowardKelly.Tearsofjoyfloodedhereyes.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了贫穷的Kelly在小时候为了能够攒够学费,挨家挨户的推销商品,尽管如此,他还是没能成功,最后兜里只剩下一角钱。在别无选择的情况下,他敲开了一扇门,一个善良的女孩给了他一杯牛奶。也正是这样一个善良的行为让Kelly重拾人生信心。多年后,Kelly成为了一位知名医生,他遇到了一位病人,该病人就是小时候帮助过他的那位女孩,Kelly为女孩治病并且为她支付了所有的医疗费用,来感激她当年善意行为的故事。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“他穿着医生的大褂,进去看她。”可知,第一段可描写Kelly进病房认出女人并且下定觉醒帮助她。②由第二段首句内容“账单被送到了她的房间。”可知,第二段可描写女人收到账单时的反应以及最后,得知真相的感受。2.续写线索:见到女人——决定帮助——挽救她的生命——支付账单——女人恢复——得知真相——备受感动3.词汇激活行为类①.返回:gobackto/returnto②.尽全力做:doone’sbesttodo/makeeveryefforttodo③.吸引注意力:catchone’sattention/drawone’sattention情绪类①.犹豫地:hesitantly/vacillatingly②.快乐:joy/pleasure/delight【点睛】[高分句型1].Shewasafraidtoopenitbecauseshewassurethatitwouldtaketherestofherlifetopayitoff.(由that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2].Finallysheopenedit,onthesideofwhichanotecaughtherattention.(由介词+关系代词构成的定语从句)5.【广东省深圳市福田区红岭中学2022-2023学年高三上学期第二次统一考试】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。65-year-oldMr.Fairfaxhadretiredfromteaching.Hewasveryinterestedinadventure.Thistimehemadeanadventureonasparsely(稀少地)populatedland.Inthecoldwinter,hetriedanewplaceandforgottobringhiscellphone,theonlytimeonthetrip.Hetrekked(艰苦跋涉)morethanhalfanmilewithtwodogstoaharvestedwheatfield.Withhisdarkstaringeyesatthehorizoninexpectationofanotherrabbit,Mr.Fairfaxsteppedonthethinsnowonacanal.Suddenly,itcollapsed(坍塌)anddroppedhimfourfeettothebottom.Realizingthathewasintroubleandwasgoingtohurthimself,Mr.Fairfaxwassuddenlypickingupalotofspeed.Hisleftleghitfirst,andhelayonhissidetoreachforhisshotgun,unloadeditanduseditasacrutch(拐杖).Hespentanhourandahalfclimbingthecanalbutslippedandslidbackdownwhenhewaspartlyup.Thistime,oneofhisfeetgotfixedbetweentworocks.Mr.Fairfaxtoldhimselfthatifhedidn’tgethimselfoutofthatcanal,hewasn’tgoingtohaveaverygoodnight.Mr.Fairfaxwalkedhisfootfreeandclimbedmoreslowlyandcautiouslyoutofthecanal.Heimmediatelyrealizedthedifficultyofthetaskbeforehim.Theaccidentoccurredabout2p.m.,anditwasnearing5p.m.withtheroadfarawayasthesunwassetting.Mr.Fairfaxfocusedoncrawlingtosafety.Evenwithhisgunsupportinghim,hoppingwasimpractical.Instead,hesatdownandpushedhimselfbackwardlessthan40inchesatatimewithhisgoodleg.Hewasdeterminedandsurethathemustholdon.Hewasinexhaustionandhadmorefrequentbreaks.Temperaturesdroppedovernight,andhisglovesandbootsgotwet.Hishandsandfeetsoonwerecompletelynumb.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para.1Mr.Fairfax’sdogshadbeenplayinginthefieldandeventuallycameuptohim._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2However,gleams(微光)ofdaylightremained—Mr.Fairfaxsawthesixthcar._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Para.1Mr.Fairfax’sdogshadbeenplayinginthefieldandeventuallycameuptohim.Thetwodogssurroundedhisbodytowarmhimwhilebarkingwildly.Mr.Fairfaxfinallystruggledtothefenceneartheroadwiththehelpofthedogs.Despitehisexhaustionandpainfulleg,hestilltriedtowavedownadriverforfearthathemightloseconsciousnessatanytime.Hewavedwildlyandshoutedloudly,butinvain.Whenthefifthcarpassedwithoutstopping,hisheartsankindespair.Para.2However,gleams(微光)ofdaylightremained—Mr.Fairfaxsawthesixthcar.Musteringupallhisstrengthandcourage,hewavedwildlyagain.Fortunately,thistimethecarstoppedandthedriverrolleddownthewindowtoaskhimwhatwaswrong.AfterrealizingMr.Fairfax’ssituation,thedriverjumpedoff,assistinghimontothebackseatwithhistwolovelydogs.Withtearswellingupinhiseyes,Mr.Fairfaxexpressedhisgratitudeinaweekvoice.Finally,hegotrescuedandcured.Fromthenon,wheneverhewasconfrontedwithaterriblesituation,hewouldencouragehimselfwiththeaccident.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,65岁的费尔法克斯先生从教学岗位退休,他对冒险很感兴趣,于是带着两只狗去一片人烟稀少的土地上冒险。但是他遇到了危险,掉到了冰冷的河里,他努力的爬出水面,去寻求帮助。详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“费尔法克斯先生的狗一直在田里玩耍,最终向他走来”可知,第一段可描写作费尔法克斯先生向路过的车辆寻求帮助,但是过去的五辆车都没有停下来,他很绝望。②由第二段首句内容“然而,阳光依旧——费尔法克斯先生看到了第六辆车”可知,第二段可描写第六辆汽车的司机停了下来,救助了费尔法克斯先生,以及他对司机的感激之情,最后,他获救并被治愈。2.续写线索:求救——绝望——第六辆车停了下来——感激之情——被救治3.词汇激活行为类1.鼓励:motivate/encourage2.涌出:wellup/blowover3.表达:show/express情绪类1.可爱的:lovely/loveable2.绝望:indespair/disappointed【点睛】[高分句型1].Whenthefifthcarpassedwithoutstopping,hisheartsankindespair.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2].Withtearswellingupinhiseyes,Mr.Fairfaxexpressedhisgratitudeinaweekvoice.(运用了with复合结构)6.【广东省深圳市龙岗区2022-2023学年高三上学期期中考试】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Oneday,whileSuttersurfedtheInternetwatchingsomevideosofcuteanimalswithhismom,hecameacrossastorypostedbythelocalanimalshelter(收容所).Itexplainedthattherewasacat,whichwasnamedHazelbytheworkers,livingintheshelterandneedinghelp.Theworkersfoundthecatatatransferstationwheregarbageandotherwastearesorted.Atfirst,theworkersthoughtHazelwasjustlookingforfood.Buttheylaterdiscoveredthatthebacklegsofthecatwereinjured.Whatwasworse,afteraphysicalexamination,theyfoundthebonesofthecatwerebrokenandthatnecrosis—meaningthedeathofcellsinsomepartofthebody—hadsetin.TheworkersthoughtHazelwouldneedsurgery(手术)togetbetter.Sotheycalledonthecommunitytoraisemoneyforthecat.ThatwaswhenSuttergottowork.Afterheknewthestoryaboutthepoorcatinhiscommunity,thenine-year-oldcatloversaidtohismom,“Ijustcan’tstopthinkingaboutthecat.Itisinurgentneedofsurgery.Iwanttoraisemoneytohelpthecat.”Hearingthosewords,Sutter’smotherwashappythathersonwasakind-heartedboyanddecidedtohelphim.ThenSuttercameupwithagoodidea:makinguseofthepowerofcinnamonbuns(肉桂卷).Heknewiftherewasanythingthatcouldgetthecommunitymemberstoemptytheirpockets,itwouldbethissweettreat:cinnamonbuns.Thenheandhismomstartedbakingcinnamonbuns,andhismompostedSutter’seffortsonasocialmediapage.KnowingSutter’sgoodintention,thewholecommunityreachedoutanddonatedmoneytoSutter.Finally,Sutterwasabletoraise$850intotal.ThenSutterandhismomgladlywenttotheanimalshelteranddroppedthemoneythere.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Withthemoney,Hazelwasabletoreceivethesurgery.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SinceadoptingHazel,Sutterhasdonealottohelpitrecover.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Withthemoney,Hazelwasabletoreceivethesurgery.Sutterandhermotheralsowenttothehospital.Afterarrivingthere,thevetoperatedaninjectiononHazel.SuttercouldtellbytheexpressiononHazel’sfacethatshefeltachingbadly.ToSutter’ssurprise,shedidn’tcryoutandjustkeepstilltoacceptit.Touchedbyhercourage,Stuttersaidtohermomthatshewantedtoadopther.Luckily,hermomagreedimmediatelybecauseshealsolovedthispoorcatverymuch.SinceadoptingHazel,Sutterhasdonealottohelpitrecover.Everymorning,Suttersentfoodtofeedheranddidn’tdaretoletherliftanything.Sheknewitwasgoodforher

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