2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：雨中的启迪：从困境走向希望之路+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习雨中的启迪：从困境走向希望之路1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文20yearsago,myfatherdiedofanaccidentresultedfromdrinking,leavingmysickmotherandtwoyoungerbrothersalone.Atthattime,Iwasinaseniorhighschool.Aftermyfather’sfuneral,thewholefamilywasinaworseconditionthanever.Astheeldestson,Ihadnochoicebuttoquitschoolandworkinafactory.Lifewentonwithoutanywonder.Idarednottoaskformore,justhopingtobringuptwoyoungerbrothers.However,thatwasnotaneasything,forIcouldn’taffordtheirtuitionevenifIworkedfromdaytonightwithoutstopping,andmuchworse,Ihadtotakemysickmotherintoaccount.Thepresentmiserymademewanttohaveanothertry,butitseemedimpractical,forIcouldn’tlosethisjobanymore.4续写原文Athreadofhopesparkledinthosegloomydayssuddenly.ItwasarainyduskwhenIputmyselfintherainandwalkedinthestreet.Suddenlytherainstopped!Tomybewilderment(困惑),Iraisedmyhead,andfoundthat“thesky”wasinfactadarkblueumbrella.ThenIheardadeepvoice.“Whynotrunwithoutanumbrella?”Amiddle-agedmanwithonelegoncrutchsaidtome,“Ifyourun,youwouldgetlessdrenched.”5续写原文Ishookmyhead,butafterasecondIthought:Right,whynotrunwithoutanumbrella?Hiswordsshockedmedeeply.Withoutmyfather,couldIonlybeaslavetothefate,andmydreaminchildhoodonlyanillusion?Lifeislikethis.Whenyouareinrainydaysinyourlife,ifyoucouldn’tfindawaytopreventyoufrombeingdrenchedearlier,youwouldhavebeenoverwhelmedbyit,butifyoudecidetogetridofit,you’lldiscoverthattherainydayslastnotsolongasyouimagined.6段首句Paragraph1：Whilewalkingtogetherintherain,hetoldmehisstory.Paragraph2：Then,Idecidedtoreturntoschoolandearnmoneytosupportmyfamilywhilestudying.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析920年前，父亲因酒后事故离世，留下患病母亲和两个弟弟，身为长子的“我”无奈辍学去工厂打工。生活艰难，“我”虽想改变却又不敢辞职。一个雨夜，一位独腿中年男子撑伞与“我”交谈，他的话和自身经历，给身处困境的“我”带来了希望与勇气，“我”决定做出改变。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Whilewalkingtogetherintherain,hetoldmehisstory.在雨中一同前行时，他向我讲述了自己的故事。曾经，他是一名前途光明的运动员，却因一场意外失去了一条腿。但他没有被这巨大的不幸打倒，反而凭借着顽强的意志，努力重新开始生活。他白手起家，创办了一家小公司，创业过程中遭遇了无数的艰难险阻。资金短缺、客户流失、市场竞争激烈，每一个问题都像一座大山横在他面前。然而，他凭借着不屈不挠的精神，一次次地克服困难，最终取得了成功。他的经历深深地震撼了我，让我在黑暗中看到了一丝曙光。11续写思路分析Para2：Then,Idecidedtoreturntoschoolandearnmoneytosupportmyfamilywhilestudying.听完他的故事后，我毅然决定重返校园，同时在学习之余赚钱养家。我利用课余时间四处寻找兼职工作，发传单、做家教、在餐厅打工，只要能赚钱，再苦再累我都愿意做。在学校里，我争分夺秒地学习，不放过任何一个知识点。虽然生活十分艰辛，但我始终牢记着他的话，从未有过放弃的念头。渐渐地，情况开始有所好转。我不仅能够负担起弟弟们的学费，还能给母亲买药治病。最终，我考上了一所理想的大学。多年后，我成为了一名成功的专业人士，而那个雨夜与他的相遇，永远改变了我的人生轨迹，我对此心怀无尽的感激。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Whilewalkingtogetherintherain,hetoldmehisstory.Hehadbeenapromisingathletebeforeanaccidentdeprivedhimofhishealthyleg.However,hedidn'tallowthismisfortunetobeathim.Instead,heusedhisstrongwilltostartlifeanew.Heestablishedasmallbusinessfromnothing.Duringtheprocess,heencounterednumerousdifficulties.Therewereshortagesoffunds,lossesofcustomers,andfiercemarketcompetition.Eachproblemwaslikeahugemountainstandinginhisway.Nevertheless,withhisindomitablespirit,heovercamethesedifficultiesonebyoneandfinallyachievedsuccess.Hisstorydeeplyshockedmeandgavemeaglimmerofhopeinthedarkness.14范文呈现Afterhearinghisstory,Iresolutelydecidedtoreturntoschoolandearnmoneytosupportmyfamilywhilestudying.Ilookedforpart-timejobsduringmybreaks.Ihandedoutflyers,gaveprivatelessons,andworkedinrestaurants.Iwaswillingtodoanyjob,nomatterhowhardortiringitwas,aslongasitcouldbringinmoney.Atschool,Imadethemostofeveryminutetostudy,notmissinganyknowledgepoints.Althoughlifewasextremelytough,Ialwaysrememberedhiswordsandneverhadthethoughtofgivingup.Gradually,thingsstartedtochangeforthebetter.Icouldaffordmybrothers'tuitionandbuymedicineformymother.Eventually,Iwasadmittedtoanidealuniversity.Yearslater,Ibecameasuccessfulprofessional.Andthatencounterwithhimonthatrainynighthadforeverchangedthecourseofmylife,forwhichIwasextremelygrateful.15升级版范文呈现Whiletraversingtherain-soakedstreetssidebyside,heunfoldedhislife'snarrative.Onceapromisingathlete,anaccidenthadbrutallysnatchedawayhishealthyleg.However,farfrombeingvanquishedbythismisfortune,hesummonedhisindomitablewilltoembarkonanewlifejourney.Fromthegroundup,helaunchedasmallbusinessventure,onlytobemetwithalitanyofchallenges.Financialconstraints,clientdefections,andcut-throatmarketcompetition—eachobstacleloomedlikeaninsurmountablemountain.Nevertheless,withunwaveringdeterminationandgrit,hesurmountedthesehurdlesonebyone,ultimatelyachievingresoundingsuccess.Hisstorystruckadeepchordwithinme,castingaglimmerofhopeintotheabyssofmydespair.16升级版范文呈现Havingabsorbedhisstory,Imadearesolutedecisiontoreturntothehallowedhallsoflearningwhilesimultaneouslyshoulderingthefinancialburdenofmyfamily.Duringbreaks,Iscouredthecityforpart-timeemploymentopportunities.Whetheritwasdistributingflyersonstreetcorners,tutoringstudentsintheirhomes,ortoilingawayinrestaurants,Iwasundeterredbythearduousnessortedium.Atschool,Iimmersedmyselfinmystudies,seizingeveryfleetingmomenttomasterknowledge.Despitetheover