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研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考Part1应用文写作（二）1．（2021·北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表达歉意并说明原因;2.提出建议并给出理由。注意：1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.Ihopethechangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.HowaboutgoingoutnextSaturdaymorning?Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetattheschoolgateat9:00.Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。【详解】1.词汇积累通知：tell→inform除此之外：inaddition→besides适合：fit→suit有空的：available→free2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.拓展句：Inaddition,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiParknextSaturday,whenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)2.（2021·天津卷第二次）假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：(1)表示感谢并问候；(2)计划与家人一起做的事情；(3)你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearNancy,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin【答案】DearNancy,IamverygladtoreceiveyourE-mail.IamverygratefultoyouandyourfamilyfortakingcareofmeduringmystudytourintheUK.Andwishyouallthebest.NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudies,myparentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.I'mgoingtoTian'anmentoseetheflagraisingandclimbtheGreatWall.Inaddition,IwanttogotoQinghuaGardentoenjoytheelegantdemeanoroffamousuniversities.Ihavedecidedtoregisterforthecomputermajor.WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternetindustry,thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.Beforechoosing,consultpeopleengagedinthismajororgototraininginstitutionsforconsultation.Onlywithacleargoal,wewillhavetargetedlearninginthefuture,whichwillbemoreefficient.Yours,LiJin【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。【详解】1.词汇积累照顾：takecareof→lookafter另外，此外：inaddition→besides→what’smore雇佣：employ→hire既然：nowthat→since2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternetindustry,thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.拓展句：AstheInternetindustrydevelopsrapidly，thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.【点睛】[高分句型1]Onlywithacleargoal,wewillhavetargetedlearninginthefuture,whichwillbemoreefficient.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudies,myparentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.(运用了nowthat引导的原因状语从句)3．（2021·全国甲卷）假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：1．阐明写信事由；2．征求建议；3．表示感谢。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearChris，Howareyoudoingthesedays?I’mwritingtoaskyousomeadvice.InordertopromoteChinesetraditionalcultureandpostsomeclassmeetingsonEnglishwebsites,ourschoolisgoingtoorganiseclassmeetings,thethemeofwhichistraditionalChineseculture.Wecanchooseavarietyofthemes,suchascalligraphy,martialarts,oilpaintings,papercuttingandsoon.I’mwonderingifyoucouldletmeknowwhichofthemyoulikebestandwhichofthempeoplefromoutsideofChinaaremorelikelytobeinterestedin.Thankyouforyourhelp.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldreplytomeatyourearliestconvenience.Yours，LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion→advice提高：heighten→promote各种各样：allkindsof→avarietyof选择：select→choose2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Wecanchooseavarietyofthemes,suchascalligraphy,martialarts,oilpaintings,papercuttingandsoon.拓展句：Wecanchooseavarietyofthemes,whichincludecalligraphy,martialarts,oilpaintings,papercuttingandsoon.【点睛】[高分句型1]InordertopromoteChinesetraditionalcultureandpostsomeclassmeetingsonEnglishwebsites,ourschoolisgoingtoorganiseclassmeetings,thethemeofwhichistraditionalChineseculture..（介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]I’mwonderingifyoucouldletmeknowwhichofthemyoulikebestandwhichofthempeoplefromoutsideofChinaaremorelikelytobeinterestedin.（if引导的宾语从句）4．（2021·全国乙卷）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1.分析优势与不足；2.提出学习建议。注意：1.词数100左右;2.题目和首句已为你写好。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】BesmartonlinelearnersNetworklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.Ofcourse,thesedisadvantagesareasfollows.Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,wecan’ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿，参加学校举办的英语演讲比赛。【详解】1.词汇积累充分利用：makefulluseof→makethemostof扩宽，丰富：broaden→enrich各种各样的：allkindsof→varietiesof影响：affect→influence2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.拓展句：Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcesinorderthatwecanbroadenthehorizon.【点睛】【高分句型1】Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,wecan’ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（运用了形容词短语作状语，which引导非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.（运用了现在分词短语作结果状语，it作形式宾语，不定式短语作真正的宾语）5．（2021·天津卷第一次）假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJin______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinSichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.What’smore,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.However,itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiazhaigouaswellastheconstructionDujiangyanIrrigationProject.【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：说明文时态：一般现在时结构：总分法第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。要求：1.说明四川省有很多著名的景点①四川的地理位置：中国西南部②著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程2.介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程①九寨沟是自然保护区②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用3.你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹第二步:列提纲（重点词组）belocatedin；world-famous；placesofinterest；anaturereserve；impressive；multi-levelwaterfalls；haveachancetodo…；rareanimals；scenicspot；datefrom；playanimportantpartin；beamazedby第三步：连词成句(1)SichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.(2)Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.(3)JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.(4)Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.(5)Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.(6)Therearemanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.(7)AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.(8)Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.(9)Itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.(10)I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbyitsconstruction.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表递进关系：whatismore2.表转折关系：however3.表示列举：suchas,like【点睛】[高分句型1]Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.（what引导的主语从句）[高分句型2]Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.（现在分词作状语）6．（2021·浙江1月高考）假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.表示欢迎；2.介绍活动安排；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Distinguishedguests,Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoconveymysincerewelcomeforyourvisiting.Atfirst,itisofsignificancetofullyunderstandtheschool.Asscheduled,allofyouwillvisitthemuseum,whichcontainsthesplendidhistoryofourschool.Furthermore,ourclassesareworthyofbeingattended,becauseyoucanappreciatethedifferencesbetweenChineseandwesternteachingmethods.Afterthat,itisatcanteenthatyoucanhaveaspeciallunchwithourstudents.Asmentionedabove,Iextremelyexpectyourcoming.Mayyouhaveanunforgettableexperience.【导语】本文是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，向即将到校的新西兰学生致欢迎辞。【详解】1.词汇积累诚挚的：sincere→genuine首先：atfirst→firstofall欣赏：appreciate→admire期待：expect→lookforwardto2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Atfirst,itisofsignificancetofullyunderstandtheschool.拓展句：Atfirst,itisofgreatsignificancethatyoucouldfullyunderstandtheschool.【点睛】[高分句型1]Asscheduled,allofyouwillvisitthemuseum,whichcontainsthesplendidhistoryofourschool.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Afterthat,itisatcanteenthatyoucanhaveaspeciallunchwithourstudents.(运用了强调句型)7.（2021·浙江7月高考）昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点;2.观展感受;3.推荐观展。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inordertoenrichstudents’after-schoollife,anexhibitionofstudents’traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool,whichsparksagrowinglovefortraditionalart.Theexhibitionisheldonthefirstflooroftheschoollitrary.Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthisexhibition，whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.Throughtheexhibition,notonlycanyouadmirewonderfulpictures,butalsoyouwillbeabletounderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingsbetter.Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks,andeverystudentiswelcometovisit.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于学校举办的学生国画作品展的宣传稿。【详解】1.词汇积累高度赞扬：thinkhighlyof→singhighpraisefor激发：spark→stimulate欣赏：admire→appreciate探索：explore→detect2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks,andeverystudentiswelcometovisit.拓展句：Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks,duringwhicheverystudentiswelcometovisit.【点睛】【高分句型1】Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthisexhibition，whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Throughtheex