读后续写练习+兄妹携手为海滩清洁而努力+课件-2025届高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

高考英语读后续写语篇练习兄妹携手，为海滩清洁而努力1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文MariaandPeterlivedinacoastalcity.Thegreatestpleasureinsummerforthemwastoswimattheirlocalbeachafterschool.Butonedaytheystartedtolosetheirenthusiasmforswimminginthewaters.Moreoftenthannot,theywouldfindplasticbagsthrownonthebeach.Worsesill,astheyswaminthewater,someplasticbagswouldfloataroundthemandevensticktotheirlegswhentheywalkedtotheshore.Theywereupsetanddecidedsomethingneededtobedonetostopthebeautifulseabecomingconsumedbywaste.Oneweekend,MariaandPeterbroughtabigbagtothebeachanddeterminedtocleanitup.Sweatstreameddownfromtheirforeheadwhiletheybentdownandpickeduptheplasticbags.Totheirdisappointment,afteraday’shardwork,therewerestillmanyplasticbagslyingonthebeachorfloatinginthewater.Goinghomewithachinglegsandarms,MariaandPeterwerealmostdefeatedbyastrongsenseoffailure.4续写原文Thatnightoverdinnerwiththeirparents,thepairatesilently.Noticingtheirlowspirits,Motheraskedgently,“Youtwolookedsodown.Whathappened?”ExchangingglanceswithPeter,Mariarepliedinalowvoice,“It’sthoseannoyingplasticbags.Wetriedtocleanupbutitwasjustimpossible.”Understandingthepair’sdisappointment,theirfatherpattedthemonthebackandcomforted,”Well,it’sreallyhardforjusttwoofyoutofixsuchabigproblem.”“Justtwoofus.”complainedMariaandPeter,lookingateachother.Suddenly,anidealashedthroughtheirminds,theireyesshiningwithexcitement.“Yes,that’sthepoint!Weshouldmakemorepeopleawareoftheproblemandencouragethemtotakeaction!”thepairsaidinchorus.5段首句Paragraph1：Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandstartedplanning.Paragraph2：Excitedandnervous,theypostedthevideoandarticleonWeChat.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8住在海滨城市的玛丽亚和彼得原本喜爱在当地海滩游泳，但日益增多的塑料垃圾让他们失去兴致。他们决心清理海滩，却因任务艰巨而失败。晚餐时与父母交流后，他们有了新主意。梗概如下：玛丽亚和彼得因海滩塑料污染而苦恼，一次清理尝试失败后，与父母交谈获得启发。他们决定通过制作并发布视频和文章，呼吁大家共同保护海滩。最终，他们的帖子引发广泛关注，众多志愿者响应，一场海滩清洁行动就此展开。汉语构思故事情节点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1:

Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandstartedplanning.快速吃完晚餐后，两人上楼开始策划。玛丽亚坐在桌前，全神贯注地撰写关于海滩塑料污染严重情况的文章。她详细描述塑料垃圾如何破坏海滩美景，还分享了游泳时垃圾袋缠身的糟糕经历，力求引起读者共鸣。彼得则在一旁挑选清理海滩时拍摄的照片，这些照片真实记录了污染现状。接着，他们把照片和文字精心组合，制作成呼吁保护海滩的短视频。为了让视频更具感染力，他们还添加了一些感人的音乐和醒目的标语，忙得不亦乐乎。10续写思路分析Para2：Excitedandnervous,theypostedthevideoandarticleonWeChat.怀着既兴奋又紧张的心情，他们在微信上发布了视频和文章。没想到，短短几个小时，帖子就迅速传播开来。许多人被他们的努力所打动，纷纷留言表示愿意加入海滩清洁行动。志愿者报名信息如潮水般涌来，很快就组建起了一支庞大的队伍。到了周末，众多志愿者带着清洁工具齐聚海滩。玛丽亚和彼得站在队伍前方，既自豪又激动。在他们的带领下，大家分工合作，认真清理海滩上的每一处垃圾。经过一天的努力，海滩面貌焕然一新，这次大规模的环保行动取得了显著成效。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandstartedplanning.Maria,filledwithdetermination,satatthedesktowriteanarticle.Init,shedetailedhowplasticpollutionhadtransformedtheironce-beautifulbeach.Shedescribedhowtheplasticbagsnotonlymarredthescenerybutalsodisruptedtheirswimmingexperience.Peter,ontheotherhand,carefullyselectedthephotoshehadtakenduringtheirpreviouscleaningattempt.Thesephotoswereclearevidenceoftheseverityofthepollution.Afterthat,theysetouttocreateashortvideo.Theycombinedthephotoswithpowerfulwords,aimingtoarousethepublic'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Tomakeitmoreappealing,theyaddedsometouchingmusicandeye-catchingcaptions.13范文呈现Excitedandnervous,theypostedthevideoandarticleonWeChat.Totheirastonishment,thepostspreadlikewildfirewithinhours.Afloodofpeopleweredeeplymovedbytheirefforts.Messagesofsupportandofferstovolunteerpouredin.Innotime,alargegroupofvolunteerswasorganized.Onthefollowingweekend,volunteersarrivedatthebeachwithcleaningtools.MariaandPeter,standingatthefrontoftheline,werefilledwithpride.Undertheirleadership,everyoneworkedtogether,carefullycleaningeverycornerofthebeach.Afteradayofhardwork,thebeachtookonacompletelynewlook.Thislarge-scaleenvironmentalprotectioncampaignachievedremarkableresults.14升级版范文呈现Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandwastednotimeinstartingtheircrucialplan.Maria,whoseeyessparkledwithdetermination,satatthedesk,composinganarticlethatvividlydepictedhowplasticpollutionhadgraduallyruinedtheironce-idyllicbeach.Sheelaboratedonhowtheplasticbagsnotonlyspoiltthepicturesquescenerybutalsofrequentlyinterruptedtheirenjoyableswimmingexperience.Meanwhile,Peterwasbusycarefullyselectingthephotostakenduringtheirinitialcleaningendeavor,whichservedascompellingevidenceofthedirepollutionsituation.Subsequently,theysetaboutcreatingashortvideo,combiningthesephotoswithimpactfulwords,allinanattempttorousethepublic'senvironmentalconsciousness.Addingsomeheart-rendingmusicandeye-catchingcaptions,theystrivedtomakeitasappealingaspossible.15升级版范文呈现Excitedandnervous,theypostedthevideoandarticleonWeChat.Littledidtheyexpectthatthepostwouldgoviralwithinafewhours.Amultitudeofpeopleweredeeplytouchedbytheirunwaveringefforts.Messagesofsupportandpledgestovolunteerfloodedin,andbeforelong,asubstantialgroupofvolunteerswassucces