2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+雪夜被困的救援之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习雪夜被困的救援之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文ThesnowstormwastohittheeveningofMonday,Jan.31,2022.Afterwork,Ihadtotakethelaptopmycolleagueleftinmyofficetohishousebeforeitcame.Onthewaytohisplace,IpickeduptwopizzasbecauseI’dpromisedmykidsI'dbringsomehomefordinner.Ittookmeabout15minutestogettomycolleague’shouse,whereIdroppedoffthelaptopcaseandgotrightbackontheroad.Thenthesnowstartedanditwascomingdownfast.Itcameinfastandsowindythatitscreamed.Thewindowswerefoggingupandgettingcoveredwithsnow.Ididn’thaveacluewhereIwas.IstoppedbecauseIwasafraidofdrivingintoafarmer'sfield.Icalled911.Thedispatcher(调度员)toldmetosittightandwaitthingsoutforthenight—nobodywascomingtogetmeuntilmorningattheearliest.4续写原文Thosesecondsafterthecallwereagony.Gettingouttowalkinthewhiteworldwithzerovisibility,highwindsandalowtemperaturewasn’tawiseoption.WouldthestormcontinueforlongerthanpredictedorwouldIbefoundtoolate?Mykids!Itwasthefirsttimetheywouldeverbespendinganightwithoutmeathome.Iwasliterallyterrifiedatthescenethatthesnowwaspiledup.IstayedinthecarandtextedmycolleaguewhoselaptopbagIhadjustreturned.Hehadanidea.“PinyourlocationonGoogleMapsandsendittome,”hesaid.Idid,andafewminuteslaterhetoldmethatIwasonaroadcalledBouvierLane,inbetweentwofarms.At6:30p.m,IpostedthisnewinformationtomyFacebookcommunitygroup,hopingforanyonewhoknewwholivedonthefarmstohelpmegetrescued.At8p.m,mycellphonerang.ItwasthesonofthefarmerwhoownedthelandbesidetheroadIwasstrandedon.Hetoldmethathisdad,Andy,wascomingtogetme.5段首句Paragraph1：Later,Isawatallfiguremovingtowardmeinthedark,carryingaflashlightandashovel(铲子).Paragraph2：InAndy’shome,hiswife,MaryannBouvier,treatedmetohotdrinks.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了文章讲述了作者在雪storm来临前，送同事的笔记本电脑回家，途中遭遇大雪被困。作者向911求助，之后同事帮忙定位，得知自己在一条叫布维尔巷的道路上。最终一位农民儿子打来电话，农民安迪前来救援。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Later,Isawatallfiguremovingtowardmeinthedark,carryingaflashlightandashovel(铲子).作者在黑暗中看到安迪拿着手电筒和铲子走来。安迪的身影在雪夜中显得格外清晰，他用手电筒照亮周围，走到车旁，打开车门，让作者下车。作者跟随安迪在雪地里艰难前行，雪不断地打在脸上。安迪一边走一边安慰作者，让作者不要害怕。10续写思路分析Para2：InAndy’shome,hiswife,MaryannBouvier,treatedmetohotdrinks.作者来到安迪家，安迪的妻子玛丽安端来热饮。作者坐在沙发上，喝着热饮，感受着温暖。安迪和玛丽安询问作者的情况，作者讲述了自己担心孩子的心情。安迪表示会帮助作者尽快回家，玛丽安也安慰作者，让作者放心。作者对安迪一家的帮助表示感激。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Later,Isawatallfiguremovingtowardmeinthedark,carryingaflashlightandashovel.Theflashlightilluminatedthepathahead,andIcouldseethesnowswirlingaroundhim.Asheapproachedthecar,heopenedthedoorandsaid,“I'mAndy.Let'sgetyououtofhere.”Igotoutofthecarandfollowedhimthroughthesnow.Thewindwasblowinghard,andthesnowwasfallingheavily.Andywalkedahead,usingtheshoveltoclearthesnowinfrontofus.13范文呈现InAndy’shome,hiswife,MaryannBouvier,treatedmetohotdrinks.Shehandedmeacupofhotteaandsaid,“Youmustbefreezing.Sitdownandwarmup.”Isatdownonthecouchandtookasipofthetea.AndyandMaryannaskedmeaboutmysituation,andItoldthemhowworriedIwasaboutmykids.Theyreassuredmethateverythingwouldbeokayandsaidthattheywouldhelpmegetbackhomeassoonaspossible.Iwasgratefulfortheirkindnessandhospitality.14升级版范文呈现Later,Isawatallfiguremovingtowardmeinthedark,carryingaflashlightandashovel.Thebeamoftheflashlightcutthroughthedarkness,revealingthesnow-coveredlandscape.Ashegotcloser,Icouldseehisdeterminedexpression.Heopenedthecardoorandsaid,“I'mAndy.Let'sgetyououtofhere.”Igotoutofthecarandfollowedhimthroughthesnow.Thewindwashowling,andthesnowwasfallingthickly.Andywalkedahead,usingtheshoveltoclearthepath.15升级版范文呈现InAndy’shome,hiswife,MaryannBouvier,treatedmetohotdrinks.Shehandedmeacupofhotteaandsaid,“Youmustbefreezing.Sitdownandwarmup.”Isatdownonthecouchandtookasipofthetea.AndyandMaryannaskedmeaboutmysituation.ItoldthemhowworriedIwasaboutmykids.Theyreassuredmethateverythingwouldbeokayandsaidthey'dhelpmegetbackhomeassoonaspossible.Iwasgratefulfortheirkindnessandhospitality.