2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+火灾后的珍贵回忆与温暖重逢+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习火灾后的珍贵回忆与温暖重逢1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文BringingBackMemories“ThecleanerssaidIcouldpickupourstufftoday.”Jet’smomsaidonthedrivetoschool.“DoyouthinktheywereabletocleanBigDog?”Jetasked,tryingnottosoundtooworried.Buthewasworried.BigDogwashisfavoritetoy.Grandpahadwonitforhimatthefairwhenhewasfiveyearsold.Jetwaseightnow,andhedidn’tneedtosleepwithitoranything.Buthedidneedit.Heneededittositontheshelfabovehisbed-theshelfthatwasnowburntbythehousefire.“I’mnotsurewhattheywereabletosave.”Momsaid.”Theysaidtheyweren’tabletosaveourphotoalbums.Iwillmissthosepictures.“Jetcouldtellshewasreallysad.”I’llpickyouupafterschool,andwe’llgothroughtheboxestogether.Momsaidbeforeshehuggedhimgood-byeanddroveoff.4续写原文Jettriedtofocusonhisschoolworkallday,buthecouldn’tkeephismindoffBigDog.Hecarriedhisbackpackthroughthehallsasifhewerecarryinghisoldstuffedfriend.Duringlibrarytime,hecheckedoutabookaboutdogs.Atbreaktime,heandhisfriendspretendedtheywereplayingcarnivalgamesandwinningprizes.RRRRRINNNGGG!TimeforartclassMr.Lightsaiditwas“artist’schoice”day,sotheycouldworkonwhatevertheywished.Jetstaredatanemptypage.Hethoughtofhismompickinguptheboxesofthingsthatbadbeendamagedbythefire.Thenherememberedhowsadhismomwasaboutthephotoalbums.Mostthingscouldbereplacedatthestore.Butthepicturesweregoneforever.5段首句Paragraph1：Heknewwhathecoulddraw.Paragraph2：WhenJet’smompickedhimupfromschool,BigDogwasinthebackseat.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了Jet一家遭遇火灾，清洁人员告知妈妈今天能取被抢救的物品。Jet十分担心五岁时爷爷在集市为他赢得的心爱的玩具大狗。妈妈说无法挽回相册，Jet一整天都在牵挂大狗。艺术课上，Jet看到空白画纸，想起妈妈对相册的遗憾，他决定凭借记忆，将珍贵照片重现。放学后，妈妈来接他，大狗玩具就在后座，Jet又惊又喜，同时把自己的画本交给妈妈，妈妈感动落泪，Jet也领悟到爱与回忆的珍贵。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Heknewwhathecoulddraw.他知道自己能画什么。Jet深吸一口气，脑海中浮现出那些熟悉又珍贵的画面。他先画了爷爷抱着五岁的自己，在热闹集市上，身旁就是大狗玩具，两人脸上洋溢着幸福。接着，他画出一家人围坐在餐桌旁，欢声笑语。Jet仔仔细细地勾勒每个人的表情，每一个细节都不放过。他回忆起每次翻看相册时的温馨，决心用画笔将这些美好定格。随着他的笔触不断舞动，一幅幅充满回忆的画面在纸上逐渐呈现，每一张都承载着他对过去生活的眷恋。艺术课结束时，他完成了一本独一无二的“回忆相册”。10续写思路分析Para2：WhenJet’smompickedhimupfromschool,BigDogwasinthebackseat.当Jet的妈妈从学校接他时，大狗玩具就在后座。Jet一眼就看到了它，眼睛瞬间亮了起来，迫不及待地扑过去，紧紧抱住大狗，仿佛抱住了全世界。随后，他小心翼翼地拿出自己的画本，递给妈妈。妈妈翻开画本，看到那些熟悉的场景，泪水不由自主地涌出。她看着Jet，满是欣慰地说：“宝贝，你太棒了，这些画太珍贵了。”Jet看着妈妈的反应，心中也充满了温暖。他意识到，虽然火灾带走了一些东西，但爱和回忆永远不会消失。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Heknewwhathecoulddraw.Jettookadeepbreath,andthefamiliarandpreciousimagesemergedinhismind.First,hedrewhisgrandpaholdinghimwhenhewasfiveyearsoldatthebustlingfair,withBigDogbesidethem.Bothofthemwerebeamingwithhappiness.Then,hepaintedhisfamilysittingaroundthediningtable,fulloflaughter.Jetcarefullysketchedeveryperson'sexpression,leavingnodetailunnoticed.Rememberingthewarmthoflookingthroughthephotoalbumseverytime,hewasdeterminedtofreezethesebeautifulmomentswithhisbrush.Ashispenkeptmoving,onepictureafteranotherfullofmemoriesgraduallyappearedonthepaper,eachcarryinghisattachmenttothepastlife.Whentheartclassended,hecompletedaunique"memoryphotoalbum".13范文呈现WhenJet’smompickedhimupfromschool,BigDogwasinthebackseat.Jetspotteditatthefirstglance,hiseyeslightingupinstantly.Hecouldn'twaittopounceonit,huggingBigDogtightlyasifhehadhuggedthewholeworld.Then,hetookouthissketchbookcarefullyandhandedittohismom.Momopenedthesketchbookandsawthosefamiliarscenes,andtearswelledupinhereyesinvoluntarily.LookingatJet,shesaidwithgreatrelief,"Honey,you'reamazing.Thesepaintingsaresoprecious."Jetfeltwarminhisheartwhenhesawhismom'sreaction.Herealizedthatalthoughthefirehadtakenawaysomethings,loveandmemorieswouldneverdisappear.14升级版范文呈现Heknewwhathecoulddraw.Takingadeepbreath,Jet'smindfloodedwithpreciousmemories.Hebegansketchinghisfive-year-oldselfinhisgrandpa'sarmsatthefair,BigDogbytheirside,theirfacesalightwithjoy.Thencamethefamilygatheredaroundthedinnertable,laughteretchedoneveryface.Jet,meticulousinhiswork,capturedeverynuance,determinedtopreservethesemoments.Ashispenglidedacrossthepaper,pageafterpagefilledwithscenesthatoncegracedtheirphotoalbums.Bytheendofclass,he'dcraftedapriceless"memoryalbum"ofhisown.15升级版范文呈现WhenJet’smompickedhimupfromschool,BigDogwasinthebackseat.Jet'seyeswidenedwithdelightatthesight.Lungingforward,heembracedhisbelovedtoytightly.Then,withpride,hepresentedhissketchbook.Ashismomflippedthrough,hereyeswelledup."Jet,"shechokedout,"this