中考冲刺七：写作技巧（巩固练习）

【巩固练习】I.书面表达真题演练。(2014南京)假如你是来自英国某中学的交换生Daniel,你想参加英文报纸JinlingDaily广告中介绍的机器人培训班。ROBOTROBOTCOURSERobotcourseforbeginnersatStarlightSchoolOrganizedvisitstoFriendlyRobotsCompanyE-mail:robotcourse@J请根据该广告内容，用英语写一封电子邮件，询问与该班相关的具体信息，邮件内容应包括：培训班的起止时间以及周末是否上课；参观机器人公司的具体安排你还想了解到该培训班其他信息。注意：文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；词数：80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。DearSir/MadamI'mwritingtoaskforinformationabouttherobotcourseforbeginnersatStarlightSchool.ThankyouforyourtimeandIlookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.(2014河北)请阅读Tony从美国发来的电子邮件，并根据所给提示和要求，以李华的名义回复。提示：（1）AskTonysomethingabouthisChinesecooking. （2）AnswerhisquestionaboutMid-AutumnFestival.要求： （1）邮件包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 （2）邮件中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）词数：60~80参考词汇：thelunarcalendar(阴历),mooncake,watchthemoon,thesymbolofreunion(团圆的象征)(2015泰安)假如你是某中学初三（1）班班长李华，请你为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文；记述前天主题班会“Tobesenttoschoolornot”的讨论情况。内容要点：1.部分同学认为上学应该接送，省时又安全。2.部分学生认为步行或骑自行车是最好的方式，环保又健身。3.你的看法和建议。注意：1.词数：80-100；2.可是当发挥，以使行文连贯；3.文中不要出现真实校名和人名。ToBeSentToSchoolOrNot(2015福州)假设你是李杰，正通过e-mail和美国友好姐妹校的朋友Tom交流校纪班规，请你用英语向他介绍下面的“班级公约”。要求：1、内容完整，书写清楚，表达通顺，书写规范；2、请勿逐字翻译，词数90左右，不包含已给出的句子的词数。参考词汇：schooluniform;beactiveinthinkingDearTom,I’dliketointroducemyclassrulesmadebyusall.First,weshould…It’sourdutytofollowalltherulesabove.Whataboutyours?Pleasewritesoon.Yours,LiJieII.书面表达综合演练。作文一：在和谐社会里，人与人之间的互帮互助已构成我们生活中的重要组成部分。下周英国友好学校将来你校访问，你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以“HelpingEachOtherMakestheWorldWonderful”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如李智要参加演讲比赛，请你以“李智”的名义用英语写一篇讲稿。内容要点提示：1．帮助同学——友谊;2．帮助老人——幸福;3．帮助病人——快乐;4．帮助别人体会……要求：1．词数：80词左右。正文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。HelpingEachOtherMakestheWorldWonderfulHello,everyone.I’mLiZhi.It’snicetospeakabouthelphere．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourlistening.作文二：在今年的“地球一小时(EarthHour)”活动中，中国很多城市的人们都自觉熄灯一小时，体现了低碳生活的新理念。假定你是CCTV9的记者，请你根据以下采访信息用英语写一篇80词左右的新闻稿。注意：部分内容已为你写好，不计入总词数。ThankyouforjoiningCCTV’sAroundChinashow!Nowit’s8:45p.m.duringthefamousEarthHour.Peopleinmanycitieshaveturnedofftheirlightsandarehavingaveryspecialtime.InShanghai,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Manypeoplesharewithustheirplans.___________________________________________作文三：假如你是某学生杂志社的编辑Diana，收到了读者Steve的一封来信，心中倾诉了他的烦恼。请根据提示内容，给Steve写一封回信。提示：与人交流课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法；课间和同学们交流表达善意主动问候同学；对同学友好；帮助同学参加活动积极参加班级活动（如：运动会、歌咏比赛等）参考词汇：小组讨论groupwork表达express要求：1．词数：80-100个。2．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。3．要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。DearDiana,Ijustcametoanewschool．AndIcan’tgetonwellwithmynewclassmates…WhatshouldIdo?SteveDearSteve,I’velearnedaboutyourproblem．Ithink________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes，Diana作文四：某英语网站进行了一次中学生健康情况调查，发现很多中学生的健康状况令人担忧。主要原因有：饮食结构不合理；体育锻炼不足；心理压力大，不能与人很好地沟通等等。为此，他们发起了题为HowtoKeepFit的征文活动，倡导中学生的健康生活方式。请你写一篇80词左右的英语短文，说明如何保持身体健康。HowtoKeepFit——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————作文五：一说到考试，同学们总有讲不完的故事。在你的记忆中，那些发生在考场内外的故事，一定有使你至今感慨、难忘的吧?请以考试为话题，写一篇题为“AnUnforgettable(难忘的)Experience”的短文。以下提示词语可能对你有帮助(可根据需要选用)：finalexam,mid-termexam,nervous,warmwords,relax,confident,givethebestperformance(dowell),fail.....要求：100词左右——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————【答案与解析】I.书面表达真题演练。(2014南京)DearSir/MadamI'mwritingtoaskforinformationabouttherobotcourseforbeginnersatStarlightSchool.Firstly,I'dliketoknowmoreaboutthecoursearrangement.Forexample,couldyoutellmehowlongthecoursewilllast?Iprefertoknowifthereisanyclassfortheweekend.Next,I'minterestedinthevisitstoFriendlyRobotsCompany.WouldyoutellmewhetherIneedtopay?Finally,IwonderwhetherI'llbeabletodesignarobotmyselfattheendofthecourse.ThankyouforyourtimeandIlookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.YoursfaithfullyDaniel(2014河北)Hi,Tony,Goodtohearfromyou!It'samazingthatyou'relearningChinesecooking.Whyareyouinterestedinit?Howareyoulearning?Andwhatcanyoucook?Hopetoenjoyyourdishesnexttime!Yes,wereallyhaveMid-AutumnFestival.It'sonAugust15thofthelunarcalendar.It'soneofthemostimportantfestivalsinChina.Allthefamilymembersgettogetherforabigdinnerthatday.Weusuallyeatmooncakeswhilewatchingthemoonatnight.Webelievethefullmoonisthesymbolofreunion.Byefornow,LiHua(2015泰安)Wehadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldbesenttoschoolornot.Wehavetwomainideas.Somestudentsthinkthatitcansavethestudents’timeifparentssendthemtoschool.Andparentswanttomakesurethestudentsaresafe,especiallywhentheweatheristerrible.However,ourcityismoreandmorecrowdedandpolluted,sootherstudentsthinkgoingtoschoolonfootorbybikeisthebestway.Firstofall,walkingtoschoolisawonderfulwaytoexerciseandit’sgoodforourhealth.What’smore,ifwewalk,orrideabike,therewillbefewercarsinthecity.Morewalkingandlessdrivinghelpmakeourcitycleaner.Thestreetswon’tbeascrowdedastheyarenow.Ihopemoreandmorestudentswillgotoschoolonfootorbybike.(2015福州)DearTom,I’dliketointroducemyclassrulesmadebyusall.First,weshouldcometoschoolontimeinschooluniforms.It’spolitetogreetourteacherswhenwemeetthem.Second,wemustlistencarefullyinclassandbeactiveinthinking.Also,weoughttodoourhomeworkcarefullyandhanditinontime.Third,weneedcleantheclassroomoftenandalwayskeepitclean.Andwe’rerequiredtoturnofflightsandclosewindowsanddoorsbeforeweleave.Fourth,beingfriendlyisimportant.We’resupposedtogetalongwellandhelpeachothertomakeprogresstogether.It’sourdutytofollowalltherulesabove.Whataboutyours?Pleasewritesoon.Yours,LiJieII.书面表达综合演练。作文一：〔解析〕本题是命题作文，根据汉语提示，简述乐于助人的好处，号召大家要积极参与乐于助人活动，从而使我们的世界更美好。OnepossibleversionHelpingEachOtherMakestheWorldWonderfulHello,everyone.I’mLiZhi.It’snicetospeakabouthelphere.Inourlifeweoftenhelpothersandalsogethelpfromothers.Whenwehelpourclassmateswiththeirstudyandotherthings,wecandevelopourfriendship.Ifwegiveahandtooldpeople,wecanunderstandthemeaningofpleasure.Asweknow,patientinourlife.Ithinkwecangetmuchwhenwehelpthepeoplearoundus.Asthesayinggoes,“Givingismuchbetterthanreceiving.”作文二：〔解析〕本题通过英文图表提示，要考生叙述地球一小时活动的情况，在关灯一小时，人们正在做什么有意义的活动，以后打算做什么活动来节约能源，保护环境，使我们的地球家园更美好。OnepossibleversionThankyouforjoiningCCTV’sAroundChinashow!Nowit’s8:45p.m.duringthefamousEarthHour.Peopleinmanycitieshaveturnedofftheirlightsandarehavingaveryspecialtime.Inshanghai,somepeoplearetakingawalkwiththeirfamily.Theyfeelveryrelaxed.InBeijing,somepeoplearehavinganicetalkwiththeirfriends.AndinNingbo,someyoungpeopleareholdingapartyinthepark,singinganddancing.Withoutlights,peoplecanalsoenjoythemselves.Manypeoplesharewithustheirplans.Somesaytheywillspendmoretimewiththeirfamilyandfriends.Otherssaytheywilltrytheirbesttoprotecttheenvironment,likeplantingmoretrees,savingwaterandsoon.What’smore,somepeopletellmethattheywillusepaperbothsides(driveless,ridebikes,useplasticbagsless…)intheirdailylife.LiuPengYours,LiMing作文三：〔解析〕本题要求写一封回信，帮Steve解决问题，要根据汉语提示要点去写，层次要清晰，句意不要重复，注意语气诚挚，句式多样。OnepossibleversionDearSteve,I’velearnedyourproblem．Ithinkyoushouldbeactiveingroupworkinclassandbebraveenoughtoexpressyourideas．Trytotalkwithyourclassmatesatbreak．Ifyouwanttogetonwellwithyourclassmates,don’tforgettosayhellowhenyoumeetthem．Beingfriendlyandhelpfulisalsoveryimportant．Youneedtotakepartinallkindsofclassactivities,suchassportsmeeting,footballgamesandsingingcompetitions．I’msureyouwillsoonbeamongfriends.BestwishesDiana作文四：〔解析〕本题要求就中学生健康问题进行简单阐述，中学生如何