高考英语复习读后续写练习+阿多大象国家公园的暖心救援+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习阿多大象国家公园的暖心救援1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文AddoElephantNationalPark,asanctuary(庇护所)fornumerousAfricanelephants,ishometobothforestelephants,whichcanweighupto4tons,andthelargerbushelephants,weighingbetween6and8metrictons.Onesummerday,ababybushelephantfounditselftrappedinamuddypit(坑),unabletoescape.Thesightwasheartbreakingforanyonewhowitnessedit.Theelephantherd,knownfortheirtight-knitbonds,didtheirbesttoassistthestrugglingbabyelephant.Theyattemptedtohelpbysprayingwateraroundtheedgesofthepit,hopingitwouldmakeiteasierforthebabyelephanttoclimbout.Despitetheirefforts,thesituationremainedterrible.4续写原文Thepark,lackingfencesorborders,madeanyhumanrescueattemptrisky,asitmeantgettingclosetothemassive,protectiveadults.Undiscouraged,thededicatedparkstaff,knownfortheirexpertiseandcommitment,tookimmediateactions.Theyquicklyarrivedatthesceneandbegandiggingaroundthepittocreateasafeescaperouteforthedistressedbabyelephant.Unfortunately,thiswell-intentionedplandidnotgoashoped.Insteadofhelping,thesituationworsened.Theanxiousherdhuddled(挤成一团)closeraroundthebaby,pushingthebabyfurtherintothewater-filledpit.Withtimerunningoutandthetensionrising,therescuershadtothinkofanewstrategyquicklyandcreatively.Inanimpressivedisplayofquickthinkingandcourage,therangersdecidedonanadventurousplan.5续写原文Theyusedtheirparkvehiclestogentlydrivetheadultelephantsaway.Theseadults,weighingseveraltonseach,presentedasignificantrisk.Buttherangers’determinationwasfirm.Miraculously,theadultelephants,sensingtheurgencyandunderstandingthehumans’intentions,movedaway,providingtherescuerswiththecriticalopportunitytheyneeded.Withtheadultsnowatasafedistance,therangersswiftlymovedintorescuethebabyelephant,whichweighedover200pounds.6段首句Paragraph1：Astherescuesucceeded,therewasatouchingturnfromthebabyelephant.Paragraph2：Butthestorydidn’tendthere.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了“我”独自在家的经历。家人去外地参加婚礼，“我”拒绝去邻居詹金斯先生家，因为他常被孩子们嘲笑议论，看起来像坏人。“我”按母亲指示锁门、做作业后看电视，却遭遇停电，屋内一片漆黑。正摸索找蜡烛时，听到有人朝家走来，“我”以为是小偷，心提到嗓子眼，还紧张地拿起菜刀准备自卫。结果是詹金斯先生敲门询问情况，这让“我”十分意外，也打破了对他的固有偏见，后续可能会改变对他的看法，故事在此留下悬念，引发读者对邻里关系的思考。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Astherescuesucceeded,therewasatouchingturnfromthebabyelephant.当救援成功后，出现了令人感动的一幕。小象并没有立刻跑回象群，而是转身面向救它的人们。它的眼睛里似乎闪烁着泪光，小小的身躯微微颤抖着。它慢慢地走向那位最靠近它的护林员，用鼻子轻轻地卷起护林员的衣角，仿佛在说“谢谢”。周围的人们都静静地看着这一幕，心中满是温暖。随后，小象才欢快地跑回象群，象群发出喜悦的叫声，用鼻子抚摸着小象，欢迎它的归来。11续写思路分析Para2：Butthestorydidn’tendthere.但这个故事并没有就此结束。在之后的日子里，公园的工作人员发现了一些奇妙的变化。每当他们的车辆在园区巡逻时，象群不再像以前那样惊慌地逃窜。有时，甚至还会有大象主动靠近车辆，友好地扇动着耳朵，像是在和工作人员打招呼。这种信任的建立，让公园的工作人员更加坚定了守护这些大象的决心，也让阿多大象国家公园充满了更多的温暖与和谐，成为了人类与动物友好共处的美好典范。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Astherescuesucceeded,therewasatouchingturnfromthebabyelephant.Insteadofscamperingbacktoitsherdimmediately,thelittleoneturnedaroundtofaceitsrescuers.Withwhatseemedlikeglisteningtearsinitseyesanditstinybodytremblingslightly,itwalkedslowlytowardstherangerclosesttoit.Gentlycurlingtheranger'sclothingwithitstrunk,asiftoconvey"thankyou",itlefteveryonearounddeeplytouched.Then,withajoyfulrun,itreturnedtotheherd,whichgreeteditwithjubilantcallsandaffectionatetrunkstrokes.14范文呈现Butthestorydidn'tendthere.Inthedaysthatfollowed,theparkstaffnoticedsomeremarkablechanges.Whenevertheirvehiclespatrolledthepark,theelephantherdnolongerfledinpanicasbefore.Sometimes,anelephantwouldevenapproachthevehicleamicably,flappingitsearsinafriendlymanner,asifgreetingthestaff.Thisnewfoundtruststrengthenedthestaff'sresolvetoprotecttheseelephantsandtransformedAddoElephantNationalParkintoaheartwarmingsymbolofharmoniouscoexistencebetweenhumansandanimals.15升级版范文呈现Astherescuesucceeded,thereemergedaheartwarmingscene.Thebabyelephant,insteadofhastilyrejoiningitsherd,pivotedtofacethosewhohadsavedit.Itseyes,glisteningwithwhatcouldonlybedescribedasgratitude,lockedontotherescuers.Withatremorrunningthroughitsdiminutiveframe,itadvancedwithmeasuredstepstowardsthenearestranger.Delicately,itcoiledtheranger'ssleevewithinitstrunk,anunspokenyetprofoundexpressionofthanks,renderingtheonlookersspeechlesswithemotion.Onlythendidittrotbacktotheherd,whichgreeteditwithexuberanttrumpetingandtendercaresses.16升级版范文呈现Butthestoryhadfurtherchapterstounfold.Intheensuingdays,theparkstaffbeheldatransformation.Astheirvehiclescruisedthroughthepark,theelephantherd,onceskittishandpronetoflight,nowexhibitedanewfoundcomposure.Onoccasion,anelephantwouldevenambletowardsthevehicle,itsearsswayinginagestureofamity,asiftoacknowledgethehumans'presence.Thisnewbondnotonlyfortifiedthestaff'scommitmenttosafeguardingthesemajesticcreature