高考英语复习读后续写练习+校园音乐剧寻犬记与我的成长之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习校园音乐剧寻犬记与我的成长之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Ineighthgrade,ourdirectoranddramateacherMr.LoomisaskedmetolookforadogforasupportingroleSandyinourschool’smusical.Itriedveryhard,butinvain.Iknewthisdoghadtohaveawinningpersonality,butitwouldalsohavetolookthepartandteamupwellwiththeleadingroleKayla.“Ashley,IthinkIcanhelpyougetadog,”offeredJohn,ourassistantdirector,whenwewerealldonefortheafternoon.“That’dbegreat,”Isaid,openingthestagedoor.“Ihavenoideawheretogetthispuppy.”Johnflashedasmileatme,“Itextedmyneighbor,whorunsthelocalshelter.Shetextedmerightbacksayingshecouldhelpus.Don’tworry!Mr.Loomisalwayssaystheaterisforeveryone.”4续写原文Truerwordswereneverspoken.Mygiantbirthmarkthatcoveredhalfofmyfacewouldbetoomuchofadistraction.Ihadactedinonemusicalandlovedit,butafterwardIoverheardaladytellingMr.Loomishowkindithadbeenforhimtocastme.Afterthat,Istoppedperformingandworkedbehindthescenes.However,lookingfortheperfectSandylookedlikeanimpossibletask.Desperationforcedmetosayyes.HardlyhadwearrivedwhenJohn’sneighborinvitedustothebackyard.Therewesawthedog.“Thisisthedogyouwant!”sheannounced.“He’sobedientandcalm.”Asshesaidthat,thedogturnedaroundandkissedher.5续写原文“He’sathree-leggeddog!”Iexclaimed,statingtheobvious.“Yes,”theneighborexplained.“Abandonedafteranaccident,hewasadoptedbymyfriend,whosawhisfantasticpotential.”“Thankyou!Takehimfortherehearsal(排练)onMondaymorning,please,”Johnsaidasweleft.AllMondaymorningIwasabsent-mindedintheclassroom.WouldheworkoutasSandy?Wouldhecheworbarkordoanythingbad?SuddenlyIheardthefamiliarvoiceofJohn.“Ashley,Mr.Loomiswillbewaitingforyouathisofficeduringthelunchbreak.”6段首句Paragraph1：Duringthelunchbreak,IwenttotheofficeofMr.Loomis.Paragraph2：OnWednesdaynight,ourSandyfollowedKaylaconfidentlyontothestage.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了八年级时，导演让“我”为学校音乐剧寻找一只叫桑迪的狗，“我”久寻无果，助理导演约翰联系了在动物收容所工作的邻居帮忙。看到一只三条腿的狗，“我”虽惊讶但还是带它回去排练。“我”因脸上的胎记曾放弃表演转做幕后，对这只狗能否胜任忐忑不安。不过，在与它排练过程中，它表现出色，最终在周三晚的演出中，它自信地与凯拉登台，演出获得成功，“我”也克服了内心的障碍，重新体会到表演的快乐和意义。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Duringthelunchbreak,IwenttotheofficeofMr.Loomis.午休时，我怀着忐忑的心情走向卢米斯先生的办公室。一路上，我不停地在脑海中设想各种可能出现的场景，担心他会对这只三条腿的狗不满意。推开门，我看到卢米斯先生正坐在办公桌前，他微笑着让我把狗带进来。当狗乖巧地走到他身边时，卢米斯先生蹲下身子仔细观察，脸上露出了惊喜的表情，他称赞这只狗很有灵性，眼神中透露出的友善和专注非常适合桑迪这个角色。我悬着的心终于落了地，暗暗下定决心要和这只狗一起努力，让它在舞台上大放异彩。11续写思路分析Para2：OnWednesdaynight,ourSandyfollowedKaylaconfidentlyontothestage.周三晚上，我们的桑迪自信满满地跟着凯拉走上舞台。聚光灯洒在它们身上，桑迪丝毫没有表现出紧张或胆怯。它熟练地完成了每一个动作，与凯拉的配合默契十足。台下的观众被它的可爱和灵动所吸引，不时发出阵阵笑声和掌声。当演出结束，全场响起雷鸣般的掌声时，我激动得热泪盈眶。这只三条腿的狗不仅成功地完成了演出，更让我重新找回了对表演的热爱和信心，我知道，这次经历将成为我人生中一段难忘的回忆。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Duringthelunchbreak,IwalkedtowardsMr.Loomis'sofficewithapoundingheart.Alongtheway,variousscenarioskeptflashingthroughmymind,fearingthathemightbedissatisfiedwiththethree-leggeddog.Uponpushingopenthedoor,IsawMr.Loomissittingathisdesk.Hesmiledandaskedmetobringthedogin.Whenthedogwalkedobedientlyuptohim,Mr.Loomiscroucheddowntoobserveitcarefully.Tomyrelief,alookofpleasantsurpriseappearedonhisface.Hepraisedthedogforitsintelligenceandthefriendlinessandconcentrationinitseyes,whichwereverysuitablefortheroleofSandy.Withmyheartfinallyatease,Isecretlyresolvedtoworkhardwiththedogtomakeitshineonstage.14范文呈现OnWednesdaynight,ourSandyfollowedKaylaontothestagewithconfidence.Thespotlightshoneonthem,andSandyshowednosignofnervousnessortimidity.Itskillfullycompletedeveryaction,cooperatingwithKaylaseamlessly.Theaudiencewasattractedbyitscutenessandliveliness,burstingintolaughterandapplausefromtimetotime.Whentheperformanceendedandthethunderousapplausefilledthehall,Iwassoexcitedthattearswelledupinmyeyes.Thisthree-leggeddognotonlysuccessfullycompletedtheperformancebutalsohelpedmeregainmyloveandconfidenceinacting.Iknewthatthisexperiencewouldbecomeanunforgettablememoryinmylife.15升级版范文呈现Duringthelunchbreak,ImademywaytoMr.Loomis'soffice,myheartthumpinglikeadrum.AllmannerofanticipationsswirledwithinmeasIcontemplatedthepotentialreactionstothethree-leggedcanine.AsIentered,theresatMr.Loomis,hisexpressioninscrutable.Withbatedbreath,Iusheredinthedog.Instantly,Mr.Loomis'seyeslitupwithaglimmerofintrigue.Hekneltdown,andashedidso,itwasasifhehaddiscoveredahiddengem."Thisdog,"heexclaimed,"possessesaninnatecharmandafocusthatisnothingshortofperfectforSandy!"Awaveofreliefwashedoverme,andIvowedthenandtheretoensurethisremarkabledogwoulddazzleonthestage.16升级版范文呈现OnWednesdaynight,asthecurtainrose,ourSandytrottedalongsideKaylawithanairofself-assurance.Thespotlightbathedtheminagoldenglow,andSandy,unfazedbytheaudience'sgaze,executedeachmovementw