2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+为家而赛：玛丽亚的洗衣机之梦+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习为家而赛：玛丽亚的洗衣机之梦1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Itwasmyjobtowatchmyyoungerbrother,Jack,andsister,Kelly,aswewalkedhomefromschool.“I’mtired,”Kellywhined“andhungry.”“Metoo,”addedJackSowestoppedtorest.“WhatdoyouthinkMamaiscooking?”Iasked.“Noodles!”Kellysaid.“Barbecue!”saidJack“Comeon.”Istoodup.“Weneedtokeepwalking.”Atabusycorner,Inoticedastreetbanner,reading“FirstWalkingRacetoJasanPark!ClimbtheMountaintoWinaWashingMachine.”Itmightbefuntorace.ButcouldIwalkfastenoughtowin?Athome,Mamawasworkinginthekitchen.Wehadonlyasingleburnerstove,soitoftentookagestoprepareameal.Sometimeswhenfathercamebackfromwork,Mamawasstillcookingwiththesingleburnerstove.4续写原文Afterward,MamaandIwasheddishes.WhenMamapulledouttwometallaundrytubs,hersmiledisappeared.IknewdoinglaundryhurtMama’sbackandknees.Mamaheatedakettleofwateronthesingleburnerstoveandfilledatub.Shefilledtheotherwithcoldwater.Thenkneeling,Mamabeganscrubbingshirts.Thenwecarriedthewetlaundrytotheflatroof,whereMamahungittodry.Onrooftopsalloverthecity,clothesandtowelsdancedinthewind.IlovedbeingontheroofwithMama,butIwishedwehadn’thadsomuchhousework.ThenIwouldhavehadmoretimetoplaywithfriends.5续写原文HowIwishwewouldhaveawashingmachine!BothMamaandIwouldbehappy.IrememberedthebannerandtoldMamaaboutit.Mamasighed,”Maria,manypeoplewillenterthatrace.Youcannotexpecttowin.”Ontheraceday,Iwokeupearly.Ilacedupmyshoesandputonaheadband.Mamakissedthetopofmyhead.“Becarefulandbesafe.Justkeepwalking!”Mamasaid.Atthefootofthemountain,largecrowdsofpeoplegathered.6段首句Paragraph1：Thentheracebegan.Paragraph2：Withthebigcardboardboxaside,Irangthedoorbellofourhouse.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文中讲述了玛丽亚每天放学要照顾弟弟妹妹，回家路上看到竞走比赛赢洗衣机的横幅，想到家中洗衣之累，母亲用单灶炉做饭艰难，洗衣更是辛苦，她便想参赛。母亲虽认为获奖希望渺茫，但玛丽亚仍在比赛日早起前往。文章生动展现了玛丽亚家庭生活的不易，以及她渴望通过比赛赢得洗衣机来减轻母亲负担、改善家庭生活的急切心情，描绘出一个充满生活气息且温暖朴实的家庭故事，凸显玛丽亚的懂事与担当。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Thentheracebegan.接着比赛开始了。随着发令枪响，人群如潮水般向前涌去。玛丽亚深吸一口气，按照自己的节奏稳步前行。起初，道路还算平坦，她轻松地超过了一些步伐凌乱的参赛者。可没过多久，道路变得崎岖陡峭起来，阳光也越发炽热，炙烤着她的后背。玛丽亚感觉双腿像灌了铅一样沉重，呼吸也变得急促，但她一想到妈妈辛苦劳作的身影，心中便涌起一股力量。她看到身边不断有人因体力不支放慢脚步，甚至放弃比赛，可她咬着牙坚持着，汗水湿透了衣衫，眼神却愈发坚定，一步一步向着山顶迈进。11续写思路分析Para2：Withthebigcardboardboxaside,Irangthedoorbellofourhouse.带着那个大纸箱来到自家门口，玛丽亚按响了门铃。妈妈打开门，看到玛丽亚站在门口，身旁放着一个巨大的纸箱，满脸疑惑。玛丽亚兴奋地指着纸箱说：“妈妈，我赢了！这是我们的洗衣机！”妈妈瞪大了眼睛，不敢相信自己的耳朵和眼前的景象。玛丽亚详细地讲述了比赛的过程，妈妈眼中闪烁着泪花，既心疼女儿的辛苦，又为女儿的坚强和努力感到无比骄傲。邻居们听到动静纷纷围过来，得知情况后都对玛丽亚竖起了大拇指，称赞她是个懂事又能干的孩子。玛丽亚看着妈妈开心的笑容，觉得自己所有的付出都是值得的，一家人的生活也因为这台洗衣机迎来了新的希望。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Thentheracebegan.Asthestartinggunfired,thecrowdsurgedforwardlikeawildtorrent.Mariatookadeepbreathandstartedatasteadypaceshehadplanned.Atfirst,thepathwasrelativelyflatandshemanagedtoovertakesomecompetitorswhoseemeddisorganized.However,itwasn'tlongbeforetheroadbecameruggedandsteep,andthesunblazeddownmercilesslyonherback.Maria'slegsfeltasiftheywerefilledwithleadandherbreathinggrewshortandrapid.Butwhenevertheimageofhermothertoilinghardflashedthroughhermind,asurgeofstrengthwelledupwithinher.Shesawpeoplearoundherslowingdownandevengivingupduetoexhaustion,butshegrittedherteethandpersevered.Herclothesweresoakedwithsweat,yethereyesgrewevenmoredeterminedasshepushedforwardstepbysteptowardsthemountaintop.14范文呈现Withthebigcardboardboxbesideher,Mariarangthedoorbelloftheirhouse.Hermotheropenedthedoor,lookingatMariawithconfusionwhenshesawthehugecardboardboxbesideher.Mariaexcitedlypointedattheboxandsaid,"Mom,Iwon!Thisisourwashingmachine!"Hermother'seyeswidenedindisbelief,unabletofathomwhatshewasseeingandhearing.Mariathenrecountedthedetailsoftheracevividly.Tearsglistenedinhermother'seyes,feelingbothheartacheforherdaughter'shardshipandimmenseprideforherstrengthanddetermination.Neighbors,hearingthecommotion,gatheredaround.Uponlearningwhathadhappened,theyallgaveMariaathumbsup,praisingherasasensibleandcapablechild.Lookingathermother'shappysmile,Mariafeltthatallhereffortswereworthwhile,andthefamily'slifewasnowfilledwithnewhopebecauseofthiswashingmachine.15升级版范文呈现Thentheracebegan.Withthestartinggun'sresoundingcrack,thecrowd,likeafrenziedherd,surgedforward.Maria,takingadeepbreathandwithafirmlookinhereyes,embarkedonherjourneyatameticulouslyplannedpace.Initially,thepath,whichseemedfairlyeven,allowedhertoovertakeseveralcompetitorswhosestepswereindisarray.Butsoon,thewaytransformedintoaruggedandsteepascent,thesunblazingoverheadwithunforgivingintensity.Herlegs,feelingasifweigheddownbylead,andherbreathcominginshort,rapidgasps,Marianeverthelesspressedon.Itwasthethoughtofhermother'slaborioustoilthatservedasthewellspringofstrengthwithinher.Despitethefactthatnumerousparticipantsaroundherwereslowingdownorabandoningtherace,Maria,herteethgrittedandherresolveunshaken,continuedundeterred.Stepbyarduousstep,shemadeherwaytowardsthesummit,thegoaleverinhersight.16升级版范文呈现BesideherstoodthebigcardboardboxasMariarangthedoorbelloftheirhumbleabode.Themomenthermotheropenedthedoor,alookofbewildermentcrossedherfaceuponseeingthelargebox.Inanexcitedtone,Mariaexclaimed,"Mom,Iwon!Thisisourwashingmachine!"Hermother'seyeswidenedinsheerdisbelief,asifunabletoaccepttherealitybeforeher.ItwasMariawhothenvividlyrecountedtheentirerace,sparingnodetail.Tearswelledupinhermother'sey