2025年中考英语复习讲练测（全国）第21讲 书面表达之建议信（练习）（解析版）

第21讲书面表达之建议信（模拟精练+真题演练）（2023·湖南永州）最近你的笔友Mike在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助，请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件，提出你的一些建议，帮助他解决烦恼。注意：1）文中请勿使用真实人名。2）词数：不低于80词，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3）语句通顺，意思连贯，表达正确，可适当发挥。参考词汇：share,solve,friendly,respect(尊重)DearMike,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemswithyourschoolworkandclassmates.I’mgladtohelpyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeeverythingwillgowellwithyousoon.YoursLiHua【答案】例文DearMike,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemswithyourschoolworkandclassmates.I’mgladtohelpyou.First,whenyouhavedifficulties,youshouldtalktoyourparents,yourteachersoryourfriendsandshareyoursadnessandhappinessswiththem.Theywillhelpyousolvetheproblem.Second,whenyougetalongwithyourfriends,youaresupposedtorespectthem.Third,youshouldbefriendlytopeoplearoundyou.Youcanhelpeachother.Lastbutnotleast,youhavetobehonesttoyourfriends.Thenyouwillmakemorefriends.Ihopeeverythingwillgowellwithyousoon.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封邮件；②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏注意事项中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步：表明写作意图。借用“很抱歉听到你与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼”来引出重点介绍的内容。第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示词汇得到的要点——与同学分享悲伤和快乐、尊重对方、友善待人等均要一一阐述。第三步：书写结语。表达“我希望你很快好起来”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①shareyoursadness分享你的悲伤②befriendlyto对……友好③Lastbutnotleast最后的但不是最不重要的[高分句型]①whenyouhavedifficulties,youshouldtalktoyourparents,yourteachersoryourfriendsandshareyoursadnessandhappinesswiththem.(when引导的时间状语从句)②Ihopeeverythingwillgowellwithyousoon.(宾语从句)2．（2023·陕西咸阳）假如你是李华，你的朋友王磊给你发邮件说他最近很不开心。请你根据下面的表格提示，用英语给他回一封电子邮件，给他提一些建议，帮助他尽快摆脱烦恼。问题1）家庭作业多，几乎没有时间休息；2）压力大，经常感到紧张。建议1）制订学习计划，找到适合自己的学习方法；2）学会放松；3）多与父母、老师或朋友交谈。参考词汇：nervous(紧张的),greatpressure(压力大),makeaplan,goforawalk,relax…要求：1）参考提示内容，可适当发挥；2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3）文中不得出现任何真实信息；4）词数：不少于50词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）DearWangLei,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouareunhappythesedays.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearWangLei,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouareunhappythesedays.Yousayyouhavetoomuchhomeworkeverydayandhavelittletimetorest.Becauseofgreatpressure,youoftenfeelnervous.Nowletmegiveyousomeadvice.First,youshouldmakeaplanforyourstudyandtrytofindyourownwaysofstudying.Second,trytofindtimetorelax,suchaslisteningtolightmusicandgoingforawalk.Third,whynottalkmorewithyourparents,teachersorfriendswhenyoufeelnervous?Theymayhelpyoufeelbetter.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，回复电子邮件给王磊提一些能解决他的烦恼的建议。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写信目的，简述王磊的问题并引出自己的建议；第二步，分条给出建议。[亮点词汇]①everyday每天②becauseof因为③suchas例如④helpsb.dosth.帮助某人做某事[高分句型]①Nowletmegiveyousomeadvice.（let祈使句）②Third,whynottalkmorewithyourparents,teachersorfriendswhenyoufeelnervous?（whynotdosth.?固定句式；when引导时间状语从句）（2023上·陕西延安）青少年在成长过程中难免会遇到一些困惑。假如你是李华。昨天你收到你的美国笔友Jim的电子邮件。请你根据他提出的问题，给他回一封电子邮件，向他提出合理的建议。DearLiHua,How’severythinggoing?Iamnotgoodthesedays.IhavelotsofhomeworkeverydayandIhavenotimetodowhatIlike.AndIamalittlefat.Iworryaboutmyhealth.WhatshouldIdo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Iexpecttoreceiveyourreply.Yours,Jim要求：（1）语句通顺，逻辑合理，可适当发挥；（2）意思连贯，书写规范；（3）70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。DearJim,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemsinlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyoucanbebettersoon.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearJim,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemsinlife.Yousaythatyouhavesomuchhomeworkthatyouhavenotimetodowhatyoulike.Whydon’tyoutalktoyourteachers?Ifyoudo,theywillknowmoreaboutstudents’problemsandgiveyoulesshomework.Also,youcanmakegooduseofyourtime.Youarealsoworriedaboutyourhealth.Ithinkdoingsportscanhelpyoualot.What’smore,youshouldeatmorefruitandvegetables.You’dbetternotstayuplate.Itisnormaltohaveproblemsinlife.Whenyouhaveone,thefirststepistofindsomeonetotalkto.Sharingaproblemislikecuttingitinhalf.Hopeyoucanbebettersoon.Yours,

LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：写作材料已给出，注意不要遗漏材料中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，先针对邮件中的第一个问题，作业很多，没有时间做喜欢的事情给出建议。第二步，再针对邮件中的第二个问题，身体健康问题提出合理的建议。[亮点词汇]①makegooduseof充分利用②hadbetternotdo最好不要做某事③stayup熬夜[高分句型]①Ifyoudo,theywillknowmoreaboutstudents’problemsandgiveyoulesshomework.（if引导的条件状语从句）②Whenyouhaveone,thefirststepistofindsomeonetotalkto.（when引导的时间状语从句）（2023·浙江湖州）假设你是李华，以下是你的英国朋友Tony发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给他回复一封邮件。注意：（1）邮件中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；（2）词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。To:LiHuaFrom:TonyHi,LiHua,Longtimenosee.Ileftmyhometownwithmyparentsandwenttoanewschool.ButIdon’thaveanyfriendsnowsoIfeelupsetthesedays.LifeiskindofboringsoIwanttofindsomegoodwaystohavefun.Canyougivemesomeadvice?Hopetogetyourreplysoon.Yours,TonyHiTony,Iknowhowyoufeel.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearTony,Iknowhowyoufeel.Yousaidyouwenttoanewschoolandwantedtofindsomegoodwaystohavefun.Therearesomewaystodealwithyourproblems.First,itisagoodideatomakeaplanforyourdailywork.Ifyouhavesomethingtodo,youwon’thavewildthoughts.Second,youcanjoinsomeclubswhereyoucanmakesomefriends.Ithinkyouwillhavegreatfunthere.Finally,youcanvideowithyourparentsifyoumissthem.Itcouldrelieveyourhomesickness.Hopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：本文是给建议，以一般现在时为主；③提示：根据电子邮件内容给出合理的建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，用“Tony的当前面临的困境”引出下文；第二步，给出合理的建议；第三步，表达希望建议有效的美好期许。[亮点词汇]①dealwith处理②makefriends交朋友[高分句型]①itisagoodideatomakeaplanforyourdailywork.（动词不定式作主语）②youcanjoinsomeclubswhereyoucanmakesomefriends（定语从句）③youcanvideowithyourparentsifyoumissthem.（if引导的条件状语从句）（2023·江苏常州）假如你是李蕾，刚刚收到一封来自英国朋友Sandy的邮件。她在邮件中说自己想上一门艺术课，但是不知道选什么好，想听听你的建议。请根据表格提示，选择或自拟1—2门艺术课，给出建议并阐述理由，用英语给Sandy回复一封邮件。SuggestionsReasonspainting/drawinglessons.makeyoucreative…piano/violin/guitarlessonsmakeyourelaxed…dancing/singinglessonshelpyoustayhealthy…要求：1．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．词数：100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）DearSandy,Gladtohearfromyou.SinceI’mtakingartlessons,Ihavesomeideastosharewithyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiLei【答案】例文DearSandy,Gladtohearfromyou.SinceI’mtakingartlessons,Ihavesomeideastosharewithyou.Isuggestyouchoosethemusiclessons.Youknow,learningtoplaytheguitarorsingsongscanmakeyoumorepopularinthefuturesociety.What’smore,itwillbethemostenjoyabletolistentosomebeautifulsongsafteralongday’sstudy.Itcanmakeyourelaxed.Anditisalsoagoodideatotakedrawinglessonsthatcanmakeyoumorecreative.AndIthinkitwillhelpyouinothersubjects.Hopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiLei【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据表格内容给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，提出自己建议的艺术课以及理由；第三步，表达希望。[亮点词汇]①hearfrom收到……的来信②playtheguitar弹吉他[高分句型]①learningtoplaytheguitarorsingsongscanmakeyoumorepopularinthefuturesociety.(动名词作主语)②Anditisalsoagoodideatotakedrawinglessonsthatcanmakeyoumorecreative.(that引导的定语从句)（2023·广西·统考三模）假如你是李华，你的好朋友Lucy是月光中学的初三学生，中考将至，她写邮件询问你，如何缓解学习压力。请你根据下面的导图内容，用英文给她回复一封邮件。内容要点：Howtorelieve(缓解)studypressure?listentosomesoftmusicwatchsomeinterestingmoviesaskyourparentsorteachersforhelp……写作要求：1.文中须包含以上要点，可以适当发挥；2.文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名；3.字数80左右，开头不计入总词数。DearLucy,Howareyouthesedays?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearLucy,Howareyouthesedays?Inyoure-mail,youaskedhowtorelievestudypressure.Ihavesomeadvicetotellyou.Firstofall,youcanlistentosomesoftmusic.Musiccanmakeyourelaxed.Youcanalsowatchsomeinterestingmovieswhichwillmakeyoufeelhappy.Thenyoucanlearnmuchbetter.Besides,it’sagoodideatoaskyourparentsorteachersforhelpifnecessary.Atlast,exerciseisagoodway,too.EverythingwillbeOK.Ihopethesesuggestionscanbehelpful.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件，要求就如何减轻学习压力给好友提些建议。②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主③提示：题目要求根据所给提示，就好友关于缓解学习压力的问题回一封电子邮件，给出一些建议，并进行适当的内容扩展。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。[写作步聚]第一步，开篇点题。第二步，根据所给要点，给出一些建议，并进行适当补充。第三步，表达祝愿。[亮点词汇]①firstofall首先②ask...forhelp向……寻求帮助③atlast最后[高分句型]①Youcanalsowatchsomeinterestingmovieswhichwillmakeyoufeelhappy.（which引导的定语从句）②Besides,it’sagoodideatoaskyourparentsorteachersforhelpifnecessary.（it作形式主语）（2023·安徽合肥·统考一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike作为交换生，将于下个月来你校交流学习。请给他写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你们学校并提出一些旅行建议。要点如下：（1）介绍学校：课程多样，活动丰富；（2）旅行建议：绿色出行，体验文化……要求：（1）语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；（2）不可出现真实姓名与学校名称；（3）词数80—100。DearMike,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’llvisitourschoolasanexchangestudent.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyouhere.Allthebest!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMike,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’llvisitourschoolasanexchangestudent.Ourschoolhasmanycourses,suchasEnglish,art,dance,andbasketball.Afterclass,ouractivitiesarealsoverycoulorful.Ilikeplayingbasketball.Ioftenplaywithmyfriendsafterclass.Wealsohavemanyactivitygroups.WecanlearnPaperCuttings,cookandPekingOpera.Ifyouenjoytraveling,Isuggestyougogreen.Youcanrideabikeorwalk.YoucanvisitmuseumsandparkstoexperienceChineseculture.Ihopeyouhaveahappytimehere.I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyouhere.Allthebest!Yours,LiHua【详解】①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中对自己学校的介绍，并提出一些旅行建议。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山直接介绍自己的学校。第二步，具体阐述自己的旅行建议。第三步，书写结束语。表达“祝福以及尽快见面”的想法。[亮点词汇]①suchas例如②likeplayingbasketball喜欢打篮球③learnPaperCuttings学剪纸④lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①Ifyouenjoytraveling,Isuggestyougogreen.（if引导的条件状语从句。）②Ihopeyouhaveahappytimehere.（Ihope+宾语从句。）8．（2023·天津河西·统考模拟预测）假设你是戴安娜老师，你的学生Steve转入另一个城市的一所高中。Steve给你发邮件，倾诉他在新学校的一些烦恼。请根据提示内容，给Steve回一封邮件，提出如下建议。(1)主动问候同学，课间和同学交谈；(2)课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法；(3)参加班级活动和学校社团(如运动会、歌咏比赛等)；(4)你希望……参考词汇：小组讨论groupwork

表达express要求：(1)词数：80～100个。(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。DearDiana,Ijustcametoanewschool.Imissyouallverymuch.Ifinditdifficulttogetonwellwithmynewclassmates.WhatshouldIdo?Steve※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※DearSteve,Ihavelearnedaboutyourproblems.Ithink____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,Diana【答案】例文DearSteve,Ihavelearnedaboutyourproblems.Ithinkifyouwanttogetonwellwithyourclassmates,don’tforgettosayhellowhenyoumeetthem.Trytotalkwithyourclassmatesatbreak.Inaddition,youshouldbeactiveingroupworkinclassandbebraveenoughtoexpressyourideas.Beingfriendlyandhelpfulisalsoveryimportant.Youneedtotakepartinallkindsofclassactivities,suchassportsmeeting,footballgamesandsingingcompetitions.I’msureyouwillsoonbeamongfriends,andIhopeyouwillhaveagoodtimewithyourclassmates.Bestwishes,Diana【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，根据所给的中文提示给Steve具体的建议；第二步，表达自己的希望。[亮点词汇]①getonwellwithsb和某人相处融洽②forgettodosth忘记做某事③inaddition此外[高分句型]①Ithinkifyouwanttogetonwellwithyourclassmates,don’tforgettosayhellowhenyoumeetthem.（if引导的条件状语从句，when引导的时间状语从句）②Beingfriendlyandhelpfulisalsoveryimportant.（动名词作主语）（2023·浙江杭州·统考二模）美国朋友Sam发来的邮件，请阅读后以电子邮件的形式回复。要求：①可适当添加内容让行文通顺、连贯。②字数不少于80词。To:LiPingFrom:SamSubject:WhatshouldIdo?DearLiPing,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?I’mstressedoutthesedays.MylastexamresultsdroppedonceagainandIreallydon’tknowhowtoimprovemygrades.What’sworse,myparentsalwayscomparemewithothersandexpecttoomuchfromme.It’sdifficulttogetonwellwiththem.Iamsoupset.WhatshouldIdo?Pleasegivemesomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourquickreply!Yours,Sam____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearSam,I’msorrytohearaboutyourproblems.Firstofall,onetestdoesn’tmeananything.Aslongaswecontinuetostudyhard,I’msureyourgradeswillimprove.Ifyouhaveanyproblems,besuretoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpintime.Secondly,youcanfindsometimetohaveagoodtalkwithyourparents.Andtheywillsurelyunderstandyou.Finally,youshouldlearntorelaxyourself.Youcanrelaxyourselfbylisteningtomusic,doingrunning,etc.,anddoingsomethingyoulike.Ihopeyoufindthesesuggestionshelpful.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yours,LiPing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据邮件中的提到的问题给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，根据提到的问题具体给出相应的建议；第三步，表达希望。[亮点词汇]①aslongas只要②intime及时③listentomusic听音乐[高分句型]①Ifyouhaveanyproblems,besuretoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpintime.(if引导条件状语从句)②Ihopeyoufindthesesuggestionshelpful.(宾语从句)（2023·浙江杭州·校联考二模）假定你是李平，你的笔友Rose发来一封邮件，她计划九月份来杭州观看第19届亚运会。请根据Rose在电子邮件中的提问，给她写回信。词数80左右。To

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liping@DearRose,Yours,LiPing【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearRose,Iamdoinggreat!Howareyou?I’mgladtoreceiveyouremail.YouaskedmehowtolearnChinesewell.Here’ssomeadviceforyou.Ithinkit’simportanttotakeChineseclasses.You’llfindithelpful.What’smore,youcouldimproveyourChinesebywatchingChinesemovies.ItisalsoagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs.You’lllearnmoreChinesewordsbydoingthat.Ifpossible,youcanevenmakesomeChinesefriends.Theywillbepleasedtohelpyouandit’sagoodchanceforyoutolearnmoreaboutChineseculture.Learningisalifelongjourney.Keeppracticingeveryday,thenitwillbringsomethingnew.Asforgifts,Isuggestyoubuytea.ItisasymbolofChinesecivilization.Yourfriendswillloveit.I’mlookingforwardtoyourcoming!Wishyouallthebest.Yours,LiPing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己将提供一些建议；第二步，具体阐述这些建议；第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①begladto高兴做某事②What’smore另外③asymbolof……的象征[高分句型]①it’sagoodchanceforyoutolearnmoreaboutChineseculture.(it固定句型)②Learningisalifelongjourney.(动名词作主语)（2023·河北·统考中考真题）王梅的英国朋友Tony要来中国学习汉语，下面是Tony给她发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复。Youknow,inEnglish,givennames(名字)comefirstandfamilynames(姓)comelast.HowaboutChinesenames?AndcanyouhelpmechooseaChinesenameandtellmeitsmeaning?注意：（1）回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题，可适当发挥。（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名，所起名字只限于备选名字。（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。备选名字：王健（WangJian）；李聪（LiCong）；张友好（ZhangYouhao）HiTony,I’mveryhappytoknowthatyou’llcometoChinatolearnChinese._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoseeingyou.Yours,WangMei【答案】例文HiTony,I’mveryhappytoknowthatyou’llcometoChinatolearnChinese.ThereisnodoubtthatitisveryimportantandusefultolearnChinesewell.Wealwaysputourfamilynamefirst.Theyarefromourfamily,andit’ssurelyourChinesetradition.Thengivennamescomelast.Secondly,IpreferLiCongasyourChinesename.Ithinkthisnamerepresentsintelligenceandcleverness.Justlikeyou!AsfarasIamconcerned,thenamesarethecultureofacountry.Agoodnamestandsforagoodluck.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou.Yours,WangMei【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求针对邮件内容给出答复，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明学好中文的必要性；第二步，介绍中国的姓名文化并为对方推荐一个名字；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①importantanduseful重要的和有用的②Chinesetradition中国传统③standfor代表[高分句型]①ThereisnodoubtthatitisveryimportantandusefultolearnChinesewell.（Thereisnodoubtthat...句型）②Ithinkthisnamerepresentsintelligenceandcleverness.（省略that的宾语从句）（2023·山东滨州·统考中考真题）假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰；自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。参考词汇:diet(v.节食),appearance(n.外貌),innerbeauty(内在美)DearLiHua,IhavebeenabitlargerthanothergirlssinceIwaslittle.Foralongtime,thisreallytroubledme.IfeelmoreworriedbecauseIwillstartmyseniorhighschoollifesoon!IamafraidthatthestudentsinthenewschoolwilllaughatmebecauseIam“big”.Idecidetolookmorebeautiful,soIwanttoloseweightbydieting.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Amy要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3分；4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua【答案】例文DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.Asyoumentionedintheletter,Ihavesomeadviceforyou.Firstly,thereisnoneedtocareaboutwhatothersthinkofyou.Themostimportantthingistobeconfidentandpositive,asitwillhelpyouhavecouragetofaceandovercomeyourtrouble.Innerbeautyismoreimportantthanappearance.Secondly,keepahealthydiet.Stayawayfromhigh-fatfoodandeatmorefruitandvegetablesinstead.Abalanceddietisveryimportantforlosingweight.Thirdly,doingproperexerciseisnecessary.You’dbettergetupearlyinthemorninganddosomesportsregularly.Themoreyouexercise,thehealthieryou’llbe.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Yours,

LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据邮件内容提出建议，并适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，提出要给Amy的建议；第二步，具体阐述给Amy同学的三个建议；第三步，总结全文，表达期望。[亮点词汇]①thereisnoneedtodosth没必要做某事②stayawayfrom…与……保持距离③havecouragetodosth有勇气做某事[高分句型]①Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.（宾语从句）②Stayawayfromhigh-fatfoodandeatmorefruitandvegetablesinstead.（祈使句）（2022·广西河池·统考中考真题）今年4月，教育部颁发了《义务教育劳动课程标准（2022年版）》。从2022年秋季学期起，多种劳动技能将纳入中小学课程，引发同学们的热议和关注。假如你是李华，请根据下面内容对即将开设的劳动课（laborclasses）写一封信给校长，提出你的想法及建议。1.感觉非常高兴及兴奋。从中可以学到一些劳动技能，学会照顾自己（learnsomelaborskills,lookafter）。2.希望学校能提供给每班劳动课的场地。每周开课两节。由生活经验丰富的老师教授同学们如何做饭、种菜……（补充两个内容）（provide...for,withrichexperience,teach）。3.希望学校在期末举行各种劳动技能比赛；邀请家长们参观并分享劳动课成果（attheendof,hold,laborachievements）。写作要求：1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名；2.内容需包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；3.字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰；4.词数100左右。（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）Dearheadmaster,

MynameisLiHua.I’minClass6,Grade8.Itissaidthatwearegoingtohavelaborclassesnextterm.Allmyclassmatesareinterestedinit.I’mwritingtoyoutosharemyideasaboutthecominglaborclasses.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’sallmyopinions.We’relookingforwardtotheclasses.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：Dearheadmaster,

MynameisLiHua.I’minClass6,Grade8.Itissaidthatwearegoingtohavelaborclassesnextterm.Allmyclassmatesareinterestedinit.I’mwritingtoyoutosharemyideasaboutthecominglaborclasses.

Ifeelveryhappyandexcited.Ithinkwecanlearnsomelaborskillsandlearntolookafterourselves.Ihopet