【读后续写】读后续写讲评：The-spirit-of-Christmas-潘慧愉

ReadingThespiritofChristmas瑞安市上海新纪元高级中学潘慧愉Whatcomestoyourmindwhenyouseethisword?Christmas

WhatisthemeaningofChristmas?Asforme,Christmasmeansshopping/abigdinner…AChristmasCarolWhat

maythestorytalkabout?Maincharacter（主要人物）Whatwashelikeinthepast？

Whatishelikenow?

Hehappily______________

Healsogives__________________

Henowtreats__________________Henever____________________Heis_____________________Hedoesn’t__________________Readforbriefinformation__________Hejust_________________Hehates___________Feeling:__________Hedecidesto______Feeling:__________ThetruemeaningofChristmas:_______________________________________AChristmasCarolScroogelaughsorsmilesmeanandonlythinksabouthimselftreatothersnicelycaresaboutwhetherhecanmakemoremoneyChristmasUnhappyHappychangecelebratesChristmaswithhisrelativesgiftstopeopleinneedeveryonewithkindnessandwarmthSharingandgivingloveandjoytopeoplearoundus.A:吝啬的B:友好的

C:乐于助人的D:粗心大意的

Whatdoyouthinkofhim?inferinferring(推断）Itmeansyouhaveto“readbetweenthelines”togetthemeaningthatarenotclearlystatedinatext.根据阅读材料中所提供的信息，推断出未知的信息。WhatmadeScroogechange?HeseestheghostofJacobMarleyMarleyusedtobejustlikeScrooge,sohewaspunishedafterhedied.ThreeghostsvisithimA:SomethingbadhappensB:SomethinggoodhappensReadPara3andcompletethechartinferremindsbofsthhishappierdaysasachildLetsbthinkofHappyhowothersarespendingChristmasthisyearUnhappyheisdeadbutnobodycaresScaredWhatwasJacobMarleylike?1.Heismeanandonlythinksabouthimself.2.Hetreatsothersnicely.3.Hejustcaresaboutwhetherhecanmakemoremoney.Yes

No

Yes

MarleyusedtobelikeScrooge.inferYesorNoinferring(推断）ScroogeJacobMarleyDoesJacobMarleywanttohelpScrooge？Howdoyouknow?HewarnsScroogetochangehiswaysifhedoesn’twanttoenduplikehim.HealsotellsScroogetoexpectthreespiritstovisithim.inferWhyisScroogethemaincharacter?ScroogeinthepastScroogeatpresentA:Becausehewantstopunishothers.B:Becausehelearnstospreadloveandjoy.C:Becausehewantstomakemoremoney.inferring(推断）Spreadinglovemakesyouhappy.Truemeaning(spirit)ofChristmasWhatdoesScroogedoafterhewakesuponChristmasDay?inferring(推断）GroupWorkHewenttochurch,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________andfoundthateverythingcouldbringhimpleasure.WhatdoesScroogedoafterhewakesuponChristmasDay?inferring(推断）GroupWorkHewenttochurch,andwalkedaboutthestreets,andwatchedthepeoplehurryingtoandfro(匆忙来回),andpattedchildrenonthehead,andquestionedbeggars,andlookeddownintothekitchensofhouses,anduptothewindows,andfoundthateverythingcouldbringhimpleasure.Let’slearntospreadourlov