高三年级上册期中考试英语读后续写+苦难铸就的科幻创意之旅+讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Ilovedreadingbooksverymuchasachild,butmysinglemotherwasstrugglingfinancially,

soIoftenwenttothelibrarytoreadforfree.Myfavoritebooksweresciencefiction（科幻〃、说）.

Once,Ispentawholeafternoonreadingsciencefictioninthelibrary.

WhileIwasenjoyingreading,anillnessnearlyknockedmedown.Myillnesswasvery

strange,andnoonereallyknewwhatitwas.Ialwayswokeupwitharushofurine（尿）.AndthenI

foundoutthatthediseasehadimpactedmyentirelife.IrememberwhenIwasinthesixthgrade,I

hadtogotothebathroominthemiddleofaclass.RealizingIhadtogotothefrontoftheclass

andwritemynameontheblackboardinordertogotothebathroom,Iputupwithit.Bytheend

ofclass,theurinehadsoakedinto（渗透）myjeansandmychair.SincethenIhadnodeskmate.

Andmyshamespreadfromclasstothewholeschool.

Afterthat,Ibecamemoreisolated（孤立的）andsilent,butIgotaridetothelibraryoncea

weekandcheckedoutallthesciencefictionnovelsIcouldcarry.Thankstothem,Igotthrough

thedayswhenIwassickandcouldn'tgotoschool.

WhenIwasfifteen,thehighschoolaskedmymothertotakemeoutofschool.Mymother

andIwerebothrelieved.Ihadmanagedtogetexcellentgradesdespitemissing85%ofmyclasses,

buttheschoolcouldn'tputupwithmyabsenceofschoolmostofthetime.Mymothercouldsee

howsickIwas,andknewhowmuchIactuallywantedtobethere.Buttheschoolofficialshad

startedtogetinvolved.

Worsestill,mymotherdiedsuddenlynotlongafterIdroppedoutofschool,leavingmean

orphan（孤儿）at17.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

JustwhenIcouldn'tliveanymore,ascience-fictionmagazinesavedme.

Mybackgroundmademyscience-fictionworksmorecreative.

、文章大意

文章讲述了作者自幼喜爱读书，尤其热爱科幻小说，但因家庭经济困难常去图书

馆免费阅读。作者身患奇怪疾病，导致在学校遭遇尴尬处境而变得孤立沉默。后

来因病缺课过多被学校要求退学，不久后母亲又突然离世，使作者成为孤儿，生

活陷入绝境。

、伏笔及续写回应

・伏笔1:作者对科幻小说的热爱贯穿始终，在困境中科幻小说是其精神寄

托，为后续科幻杂志拯救作者以及作者在科幻创作上取得成就做铺垫。

・续写回应：在续写中，作者因科幻杂志获得新生，开始创作科幻作

品，回应了之前对科幻小说的喜爱，以及科幻小说在其艰难生活中

所起的重要作用。

・伏笔2：作者因病在学校遭受歧视和孤立，生活充满苦难，这使他的经历

独特且情感丰富，为其科幻创作提供了潜在的素材和深度。

・续写回应：在后续情节中，作者的这些经历转化为创作的灵感和特

色，使其作品更具创意，回应了他所经历的苦难对其创作的影响。

・伏笔3：作者虽因病缺课很多，但仍能取得优异成绩，显示出其聪明才智

和学习能力，为他在科幻创作领域取得成功埋下伏笔。

・续写回应：在续写中，作者凭借自身的智慧和才能在科幻创作上有

所建树，回应了他在学习上的潜力以及在困境中展现出的坚韧和天

赋。

三、续写要点

第一段:

1.描述作者发现科幻杂志后的惊喜和如获至宝的感觉，以及杂志如何给他带

来希望和动力。

2.讲述作者开始尝试根据杂志上的内容进行科幻创作，投入其中并逐渐找到

生活的意义。

3.提及作者在创作过程中对自己疾病和生活经历的思考，以及如何将这些融

入到作品中。

第二段:

1.阐述作者的科幻作品因独特背景而具有的创意特点，如对人性、疾病、孤

独等主题的独特诠释。

2.讲述他的作品逐渐受到关注和认可，可能获得一些奖项或发表机会，以及

这对他生活的改变。

3.说明作者从这段经历中领悟到的关于苦难与创作、坚持与成功的道理，升

华主题。

四、情感线

从患病后的羞耻和孤立导致的绝望，到母亲离世后的极度痛苦和无助，再到因科

幻杂志找到希望的喜悦，最后到在创作中获得认可的自豪和对生活的重新热爱，

情感经历了巨大的起伏和转变。

五、故事线

作者喜爱科幻小说一患病在学校受辱T退学后母亲离世一科幻杂志拯救一开始

科幻创作一作品因独特背景有创意一获得认可及感悟

六、主旨升华句

1.Adversitycanbethecatalystforcreativity,andthroughthepowerof

imagination,wecantransformourpainintoartthattouchestheheartsof

others.（逆境可以成为创造力的催化剂，通过想象的力量，我们可以将痛

苦转化为触动他人心灵的艺术。）

2.Thehardshipswefaceinlifecanbecomethewellspringofourcreativity,as

weuseourexperiencestocraftstoriesthatresonatewiththeworldandfind

meaninginthemidstofchaos.（我们在生活中面临的困难可以成为我们创

造力的源泉，因为我们利用我们的经历来创作与世界产生共鸣的故事，并

在混乱中找到意义。）

3.Inthefaceofdespair,apassioncanbeoursalvation,leadingustocreate

worksthatnotonlyexpressourinnerselvesbutalsoconnectwithothersand

provethateventhedarkesttimescangivebirthtosomethingbeautiful.（在绝

望面前，一种激情可以成为我们的救赎，引导我们创作不仅表达我们内心

自我，还与他人联系的作品，并证明即使是最黑暗的时刻也能孕育出美丽

的东西。）

4.Ouruniquelifeexperiences,nomatterhowpainful,canbetheingredientsthat

makeourcreationsstandout,showingthatfromtheashesofadversity,the

phoenixofcreativitycanriseandsoar.（我们独特的生活经历，无论多么痛

苦，都可以成为使我们的创作脱颖而出的因素，表明从逆境的灰烬中，创

造力的凤凰可以崛起并翱翔。）

5.Thejourneyfromorphanedandhopelesstoarecognizedcreatorisatestament

tothepowerofperseveranceandtheabilityofthehumanspirittoturntragedy

intotriumphthroughthemediumofartandcreativity.（从孤儿和绝望至U成为

一个被认可的创作者的旅程证明了坚持的力量和人类精神通过艺术和创

造力将悲剧转化为胜利的能力。）

七、写作示范

写作示范一

JustwhenIcouldn'tliveanymore,ascience-fictionmagazinesavedme.Oneday,

whilewanderingaimlesslyinthestreet,Isawadiscardedscience-fictionmagazine

lyingontheground.IpickeditupwithtremblinghandsasifIhadfoundaprecious

treasure.Thevividpicturesandimaginativestoriesinitimmediatelycapturedmy

heart.Idevouredeverywordandpage,anditwaslikealightshiningintomydark

world.Inspiredbythemagazine,Idecidedtotrywritingmyownscience-fiction

stories.Ipouredallmyemotions,thoughtsaboutmyillness,andthelonelinessand

painIhadexperiencedintomywriting.Dayandnight,Iimmersedmyselfincreating,

andgradually,Ifoundanewpurposeinlife.Throughwriting,Iwasabletoexpress

theunspeakableandfindawaytocopewithmydifficultsituation.

Mybackgroundmademyscience-fictionworksmorecreative.Myunique

experiencesofdealingwithillnessandtheisolationitbroughtgavemystoriesadepth

andauthenticitythatsetthemapart.Iwroteaboutcharacterswhofacedextraordinary

challenges,muchlikemyself,andexploredthemesofsurvival,hope,andthepower

ofthehumanspiritinthefaceofadversity.AsIcontinuedtowrite,myworksbegan

toattractattention.Oneofmystorieswaspublishedinasmallliterarymagazine,and

itreceivedpositivereviews.Thisrecognitiongavemeahugeboostofconfidence.I

realizedthatmyhardshipshadnotbeeninvain.Theyhadbecomethesourceofmy

creativityandallowedmetoconnectwithreaderswhocouldrelatetothestruggles

andhopesinmystories.Iwasdeterminedtokeepwritingandsharingmyperspective

withtheworld,usingmywordstoturnmypainintosomethingmeaningfuland

beautiful.

写作示范二

JustwhenIcouldn'tliveanymore,ascience-fictionmagazinesavedme.Istumbled

uponascience-fictionmagazineinathriftstore.ThemomentIlaidmyeyesonit,I

feltastrangeconnection.IboughtitwiththelittlemoneyIhadandrushedhometo

readit.Theamazingworldsandconceptsinthemagazineopenedupanew

dimensionforme.Itgavemeanidea-whynotcreatemyownscience-fiction

universe?Istartedwritingimmediately,usingmyillnessasabackdropand

incorporatingthefeelingsofisolationanddesperationIhadfelt.Iimaginedafuture

wherediseasescouldbecuredinextraordinarywaysandwherepeoplelikemecould

findhopeandacceptance.AsIwrote,Ifeltasenseofliberation,asifIwasescaping

theharshrealityandenteringaworldofmyowncreation.

Mybackgroundmademyscience-fictionworksmorecreative.Thepainand

lonelinessIhadenduredbecametheessenceofmystories.Mycharacterswereoften

outsiders,strugglingtofitinaworldthatdidn'tunderstandthem,muchlikemy

experienceinschoolandaftermymother'sdeath.Mydescriptionsofthefuturewere

filledwithasenseoflongingforabetterlifeandahopethateveninthedarkesttimes,

therecouldbeaglimmeroflight.Eventually,myworkcaughttheattentionofalocal

writingcompetition.Isubmittedmystoryandtomysurprise,Iwon.Thisvictorynot

onlybroughtmesomefinancialsupportbutalsogavemeasenseofvalidation.I

understoodthatmypasthadshapedmeintoauniquewriter.Iwasnolongeravictim

ofcircumstancesbutacreatorwhocouldusemyexperiencestotouchtheheartsof

others.Fromthenon,Icontinuedtopursuemypassionforwriting,knowingthat

everyobstacleIhadovercomewasasteppingstonetoamorecreativeandfulfilling

lifeintheworldofsciencefiction.

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