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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Michaelsawthetroublecoming.TherestandinginthehallwaywasFrank,theboywhoenjoyedmakingfunofanyoneatanygivenmoment.Frankwastallandstrong,sofewofhisvictimsstooduptohim.MichaelhatedtheideathatFrankalwaysgotawaywithhiswrongdoing.Yetlikemostkidswhowerepickedon,hejusttookitquietlyandwaitedfortheunpleasanttopass.Frankwalkedup,hiseyeslockedonthebooksinMichael’sarms.Whentheymet,Frankstoppedunexpectedly,“Hey,letmeseethosebooks!”SomestudentswatchedasMichaelheldoutthebookshewascarrying,tryingnottogiveawayhisnervousness.Franktookabook,lookedinsideforasecond,andthenthrewthebookatMichael,whodroppedalltheotherbooks.“Hey,thoseareschoolproperty,”Frankbarked,“Becareful!”Thenhewalkedaway,laughingloudly.Michael,hischeeksturningred,halfkickedthefallenbooks.Suddenlyahandpickeduponebook.“Youlooklikeyoucoulduseapally(盟友),”afriendlyvoicesaid.ItwasRamon,themostathleticboyinthehighschool.Michaelcouldn’tbelieveRamonwasstoppingtohelphimastheybarelyspoke.“Thanks,”Michaelsighedwithrelief.“It’sconfusing.Idon’tknowwhathisproblemsis.”“Well,asIseeit,”Ramonsaid,“youneedtofindawaytoendthis.”Michaelnodded,stuckforwhattosay.Ramoncontinued,“YouknowmygrandmotherusedtotellmewheneverIhadaproblemwithsomeone.She’dsay,‘Youcancatchmoreflieswithhoneythanwithvinegar(醋).’”Lookingpuzzled,Michaelasked,“Whatdoesthatmean?”“Itmeanskindnessmaybemoreeffectivethananger,”Ramonexplained.“CanyoujusttellFranktostoppickingonme?”Michaelsuggested.“That’svinegar,”Ramonlaughedashewalkedaway.“Tryhoneyinstead.”Ramon’swordsleftMichaelthinking.ThenextschooldaybroughtMichael’susualpain.TherestoodFrank,andMichaelknewitwouldbejustsecondsbeforehehadtofacehiminthemiddleofthehall.Frankcamenearer.注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Then,suddenly,theunexpectedhappened.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MichaelbentdownandquicklypickedupFrank’sbooksonthefloor.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:在学校里,经常欺负人的弗兰克又盯上了迈克尔,抢走他的书并羞辱他。迈克尔对此敢怒不敢言,只能默默忍受。这时,学校里最健壮的拉蒙出现,他没有直接帮迈克尔对抗弗兰克,而是建议他用友善的方式解决问题,即“用蜜比用醋能捉到更多的苍蝇”,意味着友善可能比愤怒更有效。迈克尔虽不太明白,但记住了拉蒙的话,第二天在学校又遇到弗兰克时,故事开始续写。5处伏笔及续写中的回应伏笔:拉蒙建议迈克尔用友善而非愤怒的方式解决与弗兰克的问题,为后续迈克尔的行为转变做铺垫。回应:迈克尔在弗兰克摔倒后,没有像往常一样选择无视或暗自高兴,而是主动帮忙捡起书,这正是他尝试用友善(“蜜”)来对待弗兰克的体现,回应了拉蒙的建议,也推动了故事向友好解决矛盾的方向发展。伏笔:弗兰克经常欺负同学且无人敢反抗,这为迈克尔之后的勇敢尝试营造了紧张的氛围,也突出了迈克尔行为改变的不易和可贵。回应:迈克尔的友善举动打破了以往被欺负的沉默和恐惧,让弗兰克感到意外,从而有可能改变对迈克尔的态度,使故事出现转机,情节更加丰富和有张力。伏笔:迈克尔之前对弗兰克的欺负一直默默忍受,内心积累了不满和委屈,这为他尝试改变现状提供了内在动力。回应:迈克尔的友善行为是他内心渴望摆脱被欺负困境的外在表现,同时也展现了他的成长和勇气,从情感上丰富了人物形象,也使故事的情感线更加完整,从压抑走向希望。伏笔:拉蒙作为学校里最健壮的学生,他的出现和建议具有一定的影响力和权威性,为迈克尔的改变提供了外在支持和引导。回应:迈克尔听从拉蒙的建议,采取友善行动,不仅解决了与弗兰克的矛盾,也体现了朋友间积极影响的力量,进一步深化了故事的内涵,即友善和正确的引导可以改变人际关系和局面。伏笔:迈克尔对拉蒙的话“用蜜比用醋能捉到更多的苍蝇”感到困惑,这引发了读者对迈克尔后续行动的好奇,推动故事发展。回应:迈克尔在行动中逐渐理解了这句话的含义,通过自己的实践向读者展示了友善的力量,解开了之前的困惑,同时也完成了故事的主旨升华,使读者更深刻地体会到友善待人的重要性和积极效果。续写要点情感线:第一段:迈克尔看到弗兰克摔倒时,起初有些惊讶和犹豫,毕竟之前一直被他欺负。但很快,拉蒙的话在耳边响起,他决定尝试用友善的方式应对,于是克服内心的恐惧和不安,走向弗兰克,此时他的心情既紧张又带着一丝期待,期待自己的友善能换来不同的结果。第二段:当迈克尔弯腰捡起弗兰克的书时,他的内心逐渐平静下来,专注于这个友善的举动,感受到了一种从未有过的坦然和自信。他看到弗兰克眼中的惊讶和一丝愧疚,心中涌起一丝欣慰,仿佛看到了两人关系改善的希望,对未来不再被欺负充满了信心,完成了从害怕到勇敢、从绝望到希望的情感转变。主旨升华句Kindnessisapowerfulforcethatcanbreakthechainsofhostilityandbuildbridgesofunderstanding,eveninthemostunlikelyofsituations.(友善是一种强大的力量,即使在最不可能的情况下,也能打破敌意的枷锁,搭建起理解的桥梁。)Inthefaceofadversity,choosingkindnessoverangerisnotasignofweakness,butatestamenttothestrengthofourcharacterandourabilitytotransformrelationships.(在逆境中,选择友善而非愤怒不是软弱的表现,而是我们性格坚强以及有能力改变人际关系的证明。)Asingleactofkindness,likeasmallcandleinthedark,hasthepotentialtoilluminatetheheartsofothersanddispeltheshadowsofanimosity,leadingtoamoreharmoniousworld.(一个友善的举动,就像黑暗中的一支小蜡烛,有可能照亮他人的心灵,驱散敌意的阴影,创造一个更加和谐的世界。)Truecourageliesnotinretaliation,butinextendingahandofkindnesstothosewhohavewrongedus,foritisthroughsuchactsthatwecanhealwoundsandcreateabetterfuture.(真正的勇气不在于报复,而在于向那些伤害过我们的人伸出友善之手,因为正是通过这样的行为,我们才能治愈伤口,创造更美好的未来。)Whenwechoosekindness,webecomethearchitectsofourownpeaceandthecatalystsforpositivechangeinthelivesofothers,provingthatloveandcompassionarethemostpotentweaponsagainsthate.(当我们选择友善时,我们就成为了自己和平的缔造者和他人生活中积极变化的催化剂,证明了爱和同情是对抗仇恨最有力的武器。)写作示范第一篇Then,suddenly,theunexpectedhappened.Frank,whowasdistractedbysomethingonhisphone,walkedrightintoapole.Heletoutayelpofpainanddroppedallhisthings.Thestudentsaroundhimstartedtolaugh,butMichael'sfirstinstinctwasnottojoinin.Instead,hethoughtaboutwhatRamonhadsaid.Hetookastepforward,ignoringthestaresofhisclassmates.Hisheartwaspounding,butheknewhehadtodothis.MichaelbentdownandquicklypickedupFrank’sbooksonthefloor.HewalkedovertoFrank,whowasrubbinghisheadandlookingabitdazed."Hereyougo,"Michaelsaid,holdingoutthebooks.Franklookedup,hiseyeswidewithsurprise.Hetookthebookswithoutaword.Michaelthensaid,"Areyouokay?Thatlookedlikeithurt."Frankmumbledathanksandwalkedaway.Fromthatdayon,Frank'sattitudetowardsMichaelchanged.Henolongerpickedonhim.Michaelrealizedthatthesmallactofkindnesshadmadeabigdifference.Itwastruethatsometimes,beingkindwasmorepowerfulthanbeingangry.第二篇Then,suddenly,theunexpectedhappened.AsFrankwasapproachingMichael,heslippedonawetpatchonthefloor.Hisfeetwentoutfromunderhim,andhelandedhardonhisback.Hisbooksandpapersfleweverywhere.Thehallwaywentsilentforamoment.Michaelsawthisashischance.HerememberedRamon'sadviceandtookadeepbreath.MichaelbentdownandquicklypickedupFrank’sbooksonthefloor.Hesortedthroughthepapersandneatlystackedthemontopofthebooks.ThenhewalkedovertoFrank,whowasstilllyingonthefloor,lookingabitshocked.Michaelheldoutthebooksandsaid,"Hey,Ithinkyoudroppedthese."Franktookthem,astrangeexpressiononhisface."Uh,thanks,"hesaid.Michaelsmiledandsaid,"Noproblem.Maybeweshouldallbeabitmorecarefulinthehallways."Fromthenon,FrankseemedtohaveanewfoundrespectforMichael.TheincidenttaughtMichaelthatkindnesscouldindeedovercomehostility,andthatalittlebitofhoneycouldgoalongwayinsweeteningasoursituation.第三篇第一段:Then,suddenly,theunexpectedhappened.Frank,whowaswalkingbrisklyandnotlookingwherehewasgoing,trippedoverabackpackthatsomeonehadleftinthehallway.Hesprawledforward,hisbooksflyingoutofhisarmsandscatteringacrossthefloor.Agaspwentupfromthestudentsnearby.Michaelfrozeforamoment,hismindracing.Then,herememberedRamon'swords.Insteadofwalkingawayorfeelingasenseofschadenfreude,hetookadeepbreathandstartedwalkingtowardsFrank.第二段:MichaelbentdownandquicklypickedupFrank’sbooksonthefloor.Frank,stillontheground,lookedupinsurprise.Michaelhandedhimthebooksandsaid,“Hereyougo.Areyouokay?”Hisvoicetrembledslightly,buthemanagedtokeepitsteady.Franktookthebooks,hischeeksturningabitred.“Uh,thanks,”hemuttered.Michaelnoddedandwalkedaway,feelingastrangesenseofrelief.Fromthatdayon,FrankstoppedpickingonMichael.ItseemedthatMichael'ssmallactofkindnesshadworkedwonders.Maybe,justmaybe,honeyreallywasbetterthanvinegar.【答案】Then,suddenly,theunexpectedhappened.JustasMic

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