【知识精研】高考英语复习读后续写练习+吉姆的足球之憾：输球后的内心波澜+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习吉姆的足球之憾：输球后的内心波澜1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Jimstaredatthegroundandsighedindisappointment.PlayersfromtheopposingteamracedpastJim,celebratingtheirshockingvictory.They’dscoredthegame-winninggoaljustsecondsbeforetheendofthegame.“Justonewordtodescribealosslikethat,”JimmumbledtohisteammateDevin.“Terrible!”Devinsighed.“Itwasatoughone.”Hetrotted(小步快跑)towardthemiddleofthefieldtoshakehandswiththewinningteam.JimwalkedslowlybehindDevin.Heunhappilyslappedhandswiththewinners,andthenstoppedtoshuthiseyesastheautumnaircooledhissweatyface.“Terrible,”herepeatedtohimselfashesatonthebenchandpulledhisjacketon.“Let’sgetsomehotchocolateandwatchthenextgame,”Devinsaid.TherewereeightteamsintheYMCAleague,sogameswouldgoonallmorning.“Sorry.I’mheadinghome,”Jimsaid,“I’vehadenoughsoccerfortoday.”4续写原文Ashereachedthegate,Jimglancedbacktoseethenexttwoteamstakethefield.Theywerejumpingandshouting,excitedtoplay.“Thatwasusalittlewhileago,beforewewerediscouraged.”Jimthought.Sowhywelostthegameatlast?Jimaskedhimself.Howdidsuchawell-playedgameendupwithsuchaterribleresult?Itwasstillclearinhishead:JimhadtheballdeepontheJets’sideofthefield,lookingforDevinoranotherteammatetopassto.HisteamhadoutplayedtheJetsformostofthegame,butfailedwithinthelastseconds.Jimletoutadeepbreath.Themorningwasgrowingwarmer.Perfectforsoccer.Jimlookedbacktowardthefield.Hecouldn’tseeit,buthecouldheartheexcitedvoicesasthegamecontinued.5段首句Para1:Withacar’shornbeeping,Jim’sfriendsTaraandBryanjumpedoutofthecar.Para2:TherecametheturnforTaraandBryan’steamtoplaythegame.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8主题围绕一场足球比赛失利后吉姆的情绪反应和内心思考展开。核心内容是吉姆所在球队在比赛即将结束时被对方进球，输掉比赛。吉姆心情沮丧，与队友交流失利感受，在经历一系列情绪波动后开始反思比赛失败原因，尽管比赛大部分时间表现出色，但最后几秒的失败让他难以释怀，而周围其他球队的兴奋场景与他们的失落形成鲜明对比。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1:Withacar’shornbeeping,Jim’sfriendsTaraandBryanjumpedoutofthecar.情节开端：汽车喇叭声引起吉姆注意，他看到好友塔拉和布莱恩从车上下来。塔拉和布莱恩看到吉姆沮丧的样子，关切地询问发生了什么事。吉姆向他们讲述了球队刚刚输掉比赛的经过，尤其是在比赛大部分时间表现出色却在最后几秒失败的遗憾。10续写思路分析Para1:Withacar’shornbeeping,Jim’sfriendsTaraandBryanjumpedoutofthecar.情节发展：塔拉和布莱恩安慰吉姆，告诉他失败是比赛的一部分，每一次失败都是成长的机会。他们提到自己球队也经历过类似的挫折，但从失败中吸取了经验，团队变得更加团结和强大。塔拉还分享了一些自己在面对失败时调整心态的方法，比如积极思考比赛中的优点和不足，而不是只纠结于结果。布莱恩则鼓励吉姆不要气馁，要保持对足球的热爱。在这个过程中，吉姆的情绪逐渐有所好转，开始认真思考朋友们的话。11续写思路分析Para2：TherecametheturnforTaraandBryan’steamtoplaythegame.情节衔接与准备：随着广播通知塔拉和布莱恩所在球队准备上场比赛，他们停止了与吉姆的交谈，开始做热身运动，互相鼓励，展现出积极的团队氛围。吉姆在一旁观看，被他们的热情所感染，回忆起自己球队在比赛前也是如此充满斗志，心中不禁泛起一丝感慨。12续写思路分析Para2：TherecametheturnforTaraandBryan’steamtoplaythegame.比赛过程与吉姆的关注：比赛开始后，塔拉和布莱恩在场上积极奔跑、传球、配合默契。吉姆的目光紧紧跟随他们的身影，看到他们遇到困难时不放弃，努力争取每一次机会，这让吉姆深受触动。他想起自己在比赛中的表现，意识到自己在最后时刻可能过于紧张，没有更好地处理球权。同时，他也看到了塔拉和布莱恩所在球队在比赛中遇到的一些问题，比如防守漏洞和进攻时机把握不准确，这让他更加明白比赛的复杂性和团队协作的重要性。13续写思路分析Para2：TherecametheturnforTaraandBryan’steamtoplaythegame.情节高潮与吉姆的领悟：在比赛的关键时刻，塔拉和布莱恩所在球队面临落后的局面，但他们没有放弃，通过一次精彩的战术配合，布莱恩成功进球，将比分扳平。这一刻，全场沸腾，吉姆也激动地为他们欢呼。这个进球让吉姆深刻领悟到，在比赛中无论遇到多大的困难，只要保持信念、团结协作，就有可能扭转局势。他开始反思自己球队在最后几秒失败的原因，不仅仅是运气不佳，可能还在于团队在关键时刻缺乏足够的默契和坚定的信念。此时，吉姆对足球比赛有了更深层次的理解，他决定从这次失败中吸取教训，在未来的比赛中更加努力，提升自己和团队的实力。比赛继续激烈进行，吉姆满怀期待地注视着场上的一切，内心充满了对未来的希望。14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Withacar’shornbeeping,Jim’sfriendsTaraandBryanjumpedoutofthecar.“Howdidyoudo?”Taraaskedeagerly.“Terrible!”Jimrepliedinadowntone,stilltryingtofigureouthowtheopposingteamscoredthegame—winninggoaljustsecondsbeforetheendofthegame.BryanpattedJim’sshoulderasking,“Iswinningthegametheonlyreasonwhyyouplaysoccerandwhatreallymatterswhenplayingagame?”Hearingthis,Jimdidn’twanttogohomebutdecidedtofollowhisfriendsandwatchtheirgame.16范文呈现TherecametheturnforTaraandBryan’steamtoplaythegame.JimwatchedwithfullattentionasTara’steamplayedfiercelyagainsttheiropposingteam.WhatimpressedhimmostwasthatalltheplayersinTara’steamcooperatedperfectlywithunwaveringresolveontheirfaces.Evenwhentheywereinatiewiththeopponent,theystayedpositiveandconfident.ItdawnedonJimthatsuccessdoesn’talwaysdependontheendresult,butratheronhowwefaceadversityandgrowfromit.17升级版范文呈现Withacar’shornbeeping,Jim’sfriendsTaraandBryanjumpedoutofthecar.TheirfaceswerefilledwithconcernastheysawJim'sdejectedlook."Jim,weheardaboutthegame.It'sokay,man.It'snottheendoftheworld,"Tarasaid,givinghimareassuringhug.Bryannoddedinagreement,adding,"Youguysplayedgreatformostofthegame.That'swhatmatters."Theirwords,likeabalmtohiswoundedspirit,madeJimfeelalittlebetter.Standingthere,surroundedbyhisfriends,Jimrealizedthathewasn'taloneinthisdisappointment.18升级版范文呈现TherecametheturnforTaraandBryan’steamtoplaythegame.Jimwatchedthementerthefieldwithamixtureofenvyandanticipation.Asthegameprogressed,hesawhowtheycommunicatedeffectivelywitheachother,theireyesconstantlysearchingforopenteammates.Despitefacingtough