高考总复习之应用文建议信中秋节去北京游玩课件

Practicalwriting—应用文写作之建议信

1.TounderstandthestructureandfeaturesofagoodletterofAdvice;2.TomastersomeusefulexpressionsandsentencepatternsforAdvice;3.TopracticethebasicstepsofletterofAdvice.Learningobjectives李煜Step1LearnaboutthestructureandfeaturesofagoodletterofAdvice李煜Step1

LearnaboutthestructureandfeaturesofagoodletterofAdvice

1.ThestructureofaletterofAdvice:①Beginning:statingthetruth(background)writing_______________ ②Mainbody:specific_____________Supportingreasons③Ending: ________________ofmainpoint Expresswishespurposeadvicesummary李煜Step1

LearnaboutthestructureandfeaturesofagoodletterofAdvice

2.ThefeaturesofagoodletterofAdvice:specificcontentconvincinglanguagerelevanttopic李煜Step2Masterhowtowritethebeginningandending

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Part1WritethebeginningandendingUsefulexpressionsforthebeginning: 1.givesbsomeadvice(on)给某人提建议2.asfollows如下3.havedifficulty/troubleindoingsth在做某事时遇到困难4.makefulluseof/makethemostof充分利用5.asksbforadvice/suggestions向某人征求意见6.find..helpful/useful/beneficial认为……有用李煜7.takepartin/participation参加8.follow/takeone'sadvice听从某人的建议9.getimproved得到改善10.changeforthebetter有所好转11.inmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofview依我看来12.Ihavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyou.我已收到你的来信，得知你….…13.Iwouldliketosuggestthat../Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat./Iamwritingtoadviseyou../IfIwereyou,Iwould.../MayIsuggestthat.Iwouldliketoputforwardthesuggestionthat.我建议......李煜Sentencepatternsfortheintroduction:①I’mmorethangladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...我很高兴收到你的来信，问我关于……的问题。②I’mverydelightedtoreceiveyourletterandit'sapleasuretotellyousomethingabout...我很高兴收到你的来信，我很荣幸告诉你关于……的问题。李煜Sentencepatternsfortheintroduction:③However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou/Hereareafewsuggestions./Thefollowingaremysuggestions/Mysuggestionsareasfollows.然而，如果你采取我的意见，这个情形很容易改变，这是给你的一些建议。④Inmypersonalopinion,itwouldbewiseofyoutotakethefollowingaction.我个人认为，如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。李煜Sentencepatternsfortheending:

①Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。②Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。③Iwillbehappyifyoucantakemyadvice/ideasintoconsideration。如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会很开心。李煜Sentencepatternsfortheending: ④Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionshelpful/useful/practical/Ihopemysuggestionswillbeofbenefittoyou.我希望你会认为这些建议由帮助/有用/可行。/我希望我的建议将对你有益。⑤HopefullythesesuggestionswillbeofgreathelptoyouI’msureyoucansolveyourproblembeforelong.希望这些建议对你有帮助并相信你不久就能解决你的问题。李煜Part2FindsomeusefulexpressionsandlinkingwordsUsefulphrasesandexpressions:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Linkingwords:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________李煜Step3Masterhowtowritethebodypart李煜(2024·广东江门联考)假定你是李华,你校外教Smith准备利用即将到来的中秋节假期去北京游玩,想征询你的建议。请你给他写一封英文邮件，内容包括:1.旅行建议(景点、美食、交通等);2.表达祝愿。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.格式已给出,不计人总词数。DearMrSmith，______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________李煜Part1ListthemainpointsTouristattractionsThePalaceMuseum

（theForbiddenCity）

TheGreatWall

Hutongs(traditionalalleyways)Stunningarchitecture;Bedecoratedwithdelicatecarvings,goldentiles(瓦片)andbrilliantwalls;VisuallyappealingStretchesacrossthenorthernChinaLikeadragonShowcase/display/demonstratethewisdomoftheancientChinesepeople

AtypeofnarrowstreetoralleyFeelpeaceful/ateaseWell-preservedKeepthetraditionsandhistoryofBeijingalive李煜Part1ListthemainpointsDelicaciesBeijingroastduck

Friedsaucenoodles(zhajiangmian)

DouzhiRepresent/standforChinesecuisineTemptingcolor/crispyskin/juicyandtendermeat

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UniqueirresistibleTransportationBusesTaxisSubwaysConvenientHaveaneasyaccessto李煜Part2Translateandpolishthesentences(1)说到旅游目的地，强烈建议你参观故宫、长城和胡同，这样你就可以深入了解中国丰富的历史和文化遗产。Speakingofthetouristdestinations,Iadviseyou

tovisitthe

ForbiddenCity,

theGreatWallandhutongs,becauseyoucanhaveadeepunderstandingofChina'srichhistoryandculturalheritage.Whenitcomesto

thetouristdestinations,it'sstronglyrecommendedthatyoupayavisitto

the

ForbiddenCity,

theGreatWallandhutongs,fromwhichyoucan

harvestadeepinsightinto

China'srichhistoryandculturalheritage.李煜Part2Translateandpolishthesentences(2)至于当地的美食，建议你品尝著名的北京烤鸭，它以其酥脆的表皮和多汁的肉而闻名。Aboutthelocalfood,IsuggestthatyoutastethefamousBeijingroastduck.Itisknownforitscrispyskinandjuicymeat.Asforthelocaldelicacies,

it's

advisableforyoutogetatasteofthewell-receivedBeijingroastduck,whichisknownforitscrispyskinandjuicymeat.李煜Part2Translateandpolishthesentences(3)关于交通，如果我是你，我会乘坐地铁去大部分景点，因为地铁系统效率很高，并且北京是一个交通拥堵的城市。Withregardto

thetransportation,ifIwereyou,Iwouldtakethesubwaytogetaccessto

mostoftheattractions