2025届高考英语二轮复习好题专题06书面表达-读后续写或概要写作第03期含解析

书面表达—读后续写或概要写作1.【2025届湖北省六校第一次联考】阅读下面材料,依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。An80-year-oldmanwassittingonthesofainhishousealongwithhis45-year-oldhighlyeducatedson.Suddenly,acrowrestedontheirwindow.Thefatheraskedhisson,“What’sthis?”Thesonreplied,“Itisacrow.”Afterafewminutes,thefatheraskedhissonforthesecondtime,“What’sthis?”Thesonsaid,“Father,Ihavejustnowtoldyou,itisacrow!”Afteralittlewhile,theoldfatheragainaskedhissonthethirdtime,“What’sthis?”Atthistime,someexpressionofangerwasfeltinhisson’stonewhenhesaidtohisfatherwithafirmreply.“Itisacrow,acrow.”Alittlewhilelater,thefatheragainaskedhissonthefourthtime,“What’sthis?”Thistime,thesonshoutedathisfather,“Whydoyoukeepaskingmethesamequestionagainandagain,althoughIhavetoldyousomanytimes‘ITISACROW’.Areyounotabletounderstandthis?”Alittlelaterthefatherwenttohisroomandcamebackwithanolddiary,whichhehadkeptsincehissonwasborn.Onopeningapage,heaskedhissontoreadthepage.Whenthesonreadit,thefollowingwordswerewritteninthediary:“Today,mylittlesonaged3wassittingwithmeonthesofa,whenacrowwassittingonthewindow.Mysonaskedme23timeswhatitwas,andIrepliedtohimall23timesthatitwasacrow.Ihuggedhimlovinglyeachtimeheaskedmethesamequestion.IdidnotatallfeelangrybutIratherfeltloveformyinnocentson.”Paragraph1:Afterreadingthediary,thesonburstintotears,feelingsorryforwhathehaddonetohisfather.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Feelingashamed,thesongotdowntohiskneesbeforehisfather.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Afterreadingthediary,thesonburstintotears,feelingsorryforwhathehaddonetohisfather.Helosthispatiencewithhisfatherwhenhewasaskedthesamequestionforthefourthtime.However,comparedwithhim,hisfatherwaspatienteventhoughheaskedeven23times.Bycomparison,thesonbegantoreflectonhisownbehavior,admittinghisownmistake.Feelingashamed,thesongotdowntohiskneesbeforehisfather.Hemadeanapologytohisfather,begginghisfathertoforgivehim.Thefathergavehimahugandalloldmemoriescamecrowdingin.Itwashisfatherthatshowedgreatconcernabouthim.Neverwouldheforgetthedayswhenhisfatherusedtoattendtohimwithgreatcareandlove.Howluckyhewastobeblessedwithsuchagreatfather!Hepromisedthathewouldtakecareofhisfatherthewayhewastreatedbyhisfather.【解析】这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知，本文讲解并描述了父亲问了儿子四次“这是什么”，儿子回答是乌鸦后起先厌烦。父亲拿出以前记录不厌其烦回答儿子23遍同样问题的日记让儿子看。依据提示内容可知，续写第一段要写儿子读完日记后的感受，可以描述儿子看完日记后对自己之前的看法感到了懊悔和自责。其次段写读完日记后的做法，可以描述儿子感到惭愧后向父亲致歉，请求父亲的宽恕，以后会像父亲对待自己那样孝敬敬重父亲。最终还要留意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。【点睛】续写内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达精确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的实力。作者在范文中运用了较多高级词汇，如：befilledwithtears，usedtodo，withoutfeelingirritation，madeanapologyto，affordto等。强调句：Itwashisfatherthatshowedgreatconcernabouthim.宾语从句：Hepromisedthathewouldtakecareofhisfatherthewayhewastreatedbyhisfather.2.【2025届湖南省教化联合体高三7月联考】阅读下面材料，依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iwouldliketoshareanactofkindness,whichIpracticeregularlyandwhichgivesmegreatjoy.Ialwayscarryatleast$10inmycarandalsoinmypocket.IsaveitforthefirstpersonwhoasksifIcan“sparesomechange.Smilingattheperson,Ialwaysrespondverycheerfullywithacommentlike,“Yes,Iwouldloveto.”or“Itwouldbemypleasure.“AndIgivethemthemoney.ThenIreplaceitwithmynext$10forthenextperson.Ineverspendthismoneymyself.Ithinkthatitisthepossessionofthenextpersonwhoasksforit.Tendollarsisasmallamount,yetitmeansalottothepersonwhoexpectsit,especiallywhendeliveredwithjoyandrespecttothem.Ialsohavetakentocarryingthingsinmycar,suchashats,socks,glovesandumbrellas,justincasesomeoneneedsthem.RecentlyIputtogethersomecarepackagesforthehomeless.Itoccurredtomethatthingslikeband-aids,toothpaste,aspirin,combs,aswellasfoodandbottledwaterwouldbeofuse.Iimaginedthattheywouldneedthingsthatarenon-breakable,soIchoseplasticorpapercontainers.Thefolkswhoreceivedthemweredelighted.ButIfeelit’snotjustthatIgivethemthingsthatmatters.Ialwaysrememberitistheywhoblessmewithanopportunitytobekind.Whatajoy!留意：1.续写的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。TheideaofhelpingothersthiswaycametomewhenIgotsimilarhelpfromawoman.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Interestinglyenough,IoftengetsomethinginreturnfromthepersonIhelp.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheideaofhelpingothersthiswaycametomewhenIgotsimilarhelpfromawoman.Oneday,IwasshoppingatagrocerystoreandwhenIwenttopayformygroceriesIdiscoveredmywalletwasgone.YoucanimaginehowembarrassedIwasthen.Luckily,awoman,overhearingmyproblem,offeredtopaymybill.IwassothankfulandaskedforherphonenumbersothatIcouldpaybackthemoney.“Don’tpayitback.Payitforward,”thewomanrepliedwithasmile.ThatwaswhenIdecidedtodosomethingniceforwhoeverneedshelp.Interestinglyenough,IoftengetsomethinginreturnfromthepersonIhelp.Theotherday,ayoungladytowhomIgavesomechange,askedifIcoulduseasparepairofglovesshehad.SoIacceptedthemforthenextpersonwhoneedsthem.Iwastouchedtoseeshewantedtogivemesomething.Infact,shegavememore.Shegavemeafeelingofhappinessthatonlythosewhoarehappytoshowkindnesstootherscanunderstand.【解析】这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要为作者共享自己常常做的一件善事，它给了作者莫大的欢乐。作者总是在车里和口袋里至少带10美元，会把它留给第一个问“能不能给点零钱”的人。对着别人微笑，作者总是特别开心地回答说：“是的，我很乐意。”或者“这是我的荣幸。”然后我给他们钱。作者还习惯在车里放一些东西，比如帽子、袜子、手套和雨伞，以防有人须要。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当我从一位女士那里得到类似的帮助时，我产生了用这种方式帮助别人的想法。所以后文应当是讲解并描述让作者有了这种善举的缘由是，作者从一个女士那里得到了类似的帮助，记叙故事发生的经过；其次段开头是：好玩的是，我常常从我帮助的人那里得到一些回报。本段应当写作者是如何从自己帮助的人那里得到回报的。最终还要留意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，运用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：grocerystore，payfor，askfor，infact等高级词汇；Oneday,IwasshoppingatagrocerystoreandwhenIwenttopayformygroceriesIdiscoveredmywalletwasgone.运用时间状语从句；Shegavemeafeelingofhappinessthatonlythosewhoarehappytoshowkindnesstootherscanunderstand.运用定语从句等高级句式。3.【2025届江苏省徐州市第一中学新高考全国卷第一次适应性考试】阅读下面材料，依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。IhadbeenswimmingcompetitivelyforfiveyearsandwasreadytoquitbecauseIfeltIwashorribleatit.IwasoftentheonlyAfricanAmericanataswimmingcompetition.Ikeptreceiving“HonourableMentions”.Anyathleteknowsthatyoudon’twanttohaveabookshelffullof“HonourableMentions”,whichyougetjustbecauseyoushowedup.Onesummerday,thedaybeforeabigswimmeet,IdecidedtobreakthenewstomygrandmathatIwasquittingtheswimteam.WhenItoldherofmydesiretoquitswimming,shelookedmeintomyface,sayingfirmlybutwarmly,“Baby,rememberthesewords‘Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.’Yourgrandmotherdidn’traiselosersorquitters.Yougotothatmeettomorrow,andyouswimlikeyouareagrandchildofmine,youhear?”Iwastooafraidtosayanythingbut“Yes,ma’am.”Thenextdaywearrivedattheswimmeetlate,missingmygroupofswimmersinthe15/16agegroup.MycoachinsistedIbeallowedtoswimwiththeoldergroup.Iknewshewasincludingmeintheracesoourlongdrivewouldnotbewasted,andshehadnoexpectationswhatsoeverthatIwouldcomeinanythingbuteighthplaceandonlythatbecausetherewerenotninelanes.AsIwasmountingtheboard,alltheothergirlslookedatme.Iquicklynoticedthatthesegirlswereheretodoonething—beatme!Allofasuddenmygrandma’swordsranginmyhead：“Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.Youswimlikeyouareagrandchildofmine.Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit...”“Yes,grandma,IwillswimlikeIamagrandchildofyours,”Isaidtomyself.Paragraph1：SPLASH!IwasswimmingharderthanI’deverswumbefore.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Justthen,cheersandclapsoverwhelmedme.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OnePossibleVersion：SPLASH(扑通一声)!IwasswimmingharderthanI’deverswumbefore.AsIdrewmyrightarmback,InoticedIwastiedwithoneperson.IassumedwewerebattlingforeighthplaceandIrefusedtofinishdeadlast,soIaddedmorekickonthelast200yards.Ihitthewallandlookedtotheleftandtotherightfortheswimmerswhohadbeatme,butnoonewasthere.Theymusthavegottenoutofthewateralready.Justthen,cheersandclapsoverwhelmedme.Iraisedmyheadtoseemycoachscreaminghysterically.MyeyesfollowedherpointingfingerandIcouldn’tbelievewhatIsaw.Theotherswimmershadjustreachedthehalfwaypointofthepool!Thatday,atage15,Ibrokethenational17/18­year­old400­freestylerecord.Ihungupmyhonourablementionsandreplacedthemwithahugetrophy.“Yes,grandma,you’reright.Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.”【解析】这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知，上文讲解并描述了作者已经参与了五年的游泳竞赛，打算退出，因为觉得自己很糟糕。一个夏天的一天，在一个大型游泳竞赛的前一天，作者把确定退出游泳队的消息告知了奶奶，结果奶奶让作者坚持下去。其次天作者和奶奶来到竞赛地点，没有赶上作者15/16岁年龄组的游泳选手。教练坚持允许作者和年龄大一些的人一起游泳。当作者登上跳板时，其他全部的女孩都看着自己。作者很快留意到这些女孩是来做一件事的——战胜自己！突然，奶奶的话在作者的脑海里回响：“放弃者永不成功，成功者永不放弃。”续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：扑通一声！我游得比以前任何时候都努力。所以后文应当是讲解并描述作者竞赛的经过和心理活动；其次段开头是：就在那时，欢呼声和掌声沉没了我。本段应当写作者打破了17/18400自由泳的全国纪录，以及作者获胜后的感想。最终还要留意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，运用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：addon，hysterically，honourable等高级词汇；AsIdrewmyrightarmback,InoticedIwastiedwithoneperson.运用时间状语从句；MyeyesfollowedherpointingfingerandIcouldn’tbelievewhatIsaw.运用宾语从句等高级句式。4.【2025届山东临沂试验学校高考模拟（13）】阅读下面材料，依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。SaraSavickremembersonespecialEasterwhenshewasnineyearsold.Herparentsgaveherababyducklinginayellowbasket.“Momsaidlaterthatsheboughtthelittleduckbecauseshefeltsorryforit,”recalledSara.ThepeopleatthepetstorecoloredthefeatherspinkforEaster.SaranamedtheduckPinky.Sara’smotherreallydidn’tthinkthebabyduckwouldsurviveverylong.Buttohersurprise,Pinkygrewandgotstrongerandstronger.Soon,thelittleducklingwasahealthy,hungryduckwithwhitefeathers.“WefedPinkyoatmeal,cookedanduncooked,andsmallpiecesofvegetables,”saidSara.PinkylivedinsidethehousewithSaraandherfamily.ShespeciallyfanciedtakingbathswithSara.EveryonetreatedPinkyasafamilymember.Butjustwheneverythingappearedtobeperfect,thenightofthe“talk”came.Sara’sMomandDadsatherdown,explainingthatthebestthingforPinkywastoliveanormalducklife,withotherducks.Itwasnotnaturalforduckstoliveindoorswithafamily,herfathertoldher.HeaddedPinkyneededtoswiminpondsanddoallthesamethingsthatducksinthewilddo.Sarastartedtocry,knowingwhatwasgoingtohappen.Sara’sparentsdecidedtotakePinkytoapark,whichwastwomilesaway.Therewasapondwithalotofotherducks.PinkywouldhavethechancetoliveanaturallifeandSaracouldstillvisither.Thebigdaycame,SaraandherparentsputPinkyinaboxanddrovetothepark.SarasaidthatPinkydidnotlookhappy;maybePinkywasconvincedthatshewasahuman,notaduck.留意:所续写短文的词数应为l50左右;续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph1EveryonewassadwhentheyleftPinkyatthepond,evenSara’sfather.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2Thenextmorning,whenlookingoutofthekitchenwindow,Saracouldn’tbelievehereyes!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】EveryonewassadwhentheyleftPinkyatthepond,evenSara’sfather.ButhetriedtoconvinceSarathatPinkywasfine.Walkingtowardsthecar,SaralookedoverhershoulderandsawPinkystandingalone.Theotherduckswereswimmingaroundincircles,lookingatPinky.ToSara,itseemedthattheyweretryingtoidentifythestrangeanimal.Theydidn’trecognizePinkyasaduck.WorriedaboutPinky,SaradreamedofPinkybeingbulliedbyotherducksthewholenight.Thenextmorning,whenlookingoutofthekitchenwindow,Saracouldn’tbelievehereyes!TherewasPinky,happilywalkingaroundonthegrass.Thrilledatwhatshesaw,shekeptaskingherself,”Howdidshemakeit?”Afterall,itwastwomilesawayandhemanagedtowalkbackthroughthecitystreet.Incredible!ButherparentsdrovePinkybacktothepondagainregardlessofherrequest.Thefollowingmorning,therewasPinkyagainonthegrass!SeeingPinkyagain,herfather,wavinghisarmsaboutwildly,movedhislipswithoutsayinganything.Meanwhile,Sarah,overjoyed,huggedPinkytightly,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。SaraSavick九岁时的复活节，父母送给她一只小鸭子Pinky，在他们的细心照看下Pinky慢慢长大，有一天父母告知Sara，Pinky必需回到野外和其他鸭子过一样的生活，他们确定把Pinky带到旁边公园的一个池塘，那一天到来了。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当他们把Pinky放到池塘离开时，每个人都很难受……所以应当写Pinky第一天到池塘发生的事情，即他们恋恋不舍里离开池塘，其他鸭子看到Pinky后的反应及Sara对Pinky的担忧等内容。其次段开头是：其次天早上，当向厨房窗户外面看时，Sara不敢信任自己的眼睛……本段应当写Sara看到的状况，即Pinky回到了家里，Sara不知道它是怎么做到的，父母看到后把Pinky放回池塘，但是Pinky再次回到家里，Sara激烈得紧紧抱着Pinky。续写时留意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，运用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：lookedover，recognize…as，regardlessof等高级词汇；EveryonewassadwhentheyleftPinkyatthepond中when引导的时间状语从句；Thrilledatwhatshesaw,shekeptaskingherself,中what引导的宾语从句等高级句式。5.【2025届山东临沂试验学校高考模拟卷6】阅读下面材料，依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。LastyearatChristmastime,mywife,threechildrenandIwereonourwayfromParistoNice.Somehoweverythingwentwrong.Ourhotelswere“touristtraps”andourrentedcarbrokedown.OnChristmasEve,whenwecheckedintoadirtyhotelinNice,therewasnoChristmasspiritinourhearts.Itwasrainingandcoldwhenwewentouttoeat.Wefoundasmallrestaurantpoorlydecoratedfortheholiday.Onlyfivetablesintherestaurantweretaken.ThereweretwoGermancouples,twoFrenchfamilies,andanAmericansailor,byhimself.Theywereeatinginstonysilenceexceptthesailor.Hewaswritingaletter,andahalf-smilelightedhisface.Inthecornerapianoplayerwaslistlessly(无精打采地)playingChristmasmusic.AllofuswereinterruptedbyanoldFrenchflowerwomanthroughthefrontdoor.Shehadawornovercoatandheroldshoeswerewet.Carryingherbasketofflowers,shewentfromonetabletoanother.Nooneboughtany.Exhaustedandfrustrated,shesatdownatatable.Thesailorfinishedhismealandgotuptoleave.Puttingonhiscoat,hewalkedovertotheflowerwoman’stable.“MerryChristmas,”hesaid,smilingandpickingoutahandfulofflowers.“Howmucharethey?”“Twofrancs,sir.”Thesailorputatwentyfrancnoteinthewoman’shand.“Idon’thavechange,sir,”shesaid.“I'llgetsomefromthewaiter.”“No,ma’am,”saidthesailor,leaningoverandkissingtheancientcheek.“ThisismyChristmaspresentforyou.”留意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1：Thenthesailorheadedforourtablewiththeflowersinhishand.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Thepianoplayercamealiveandpleasantmusicfilledthewholeroom.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Paragraph1:Thenthesailorheadedforourtablewiththeflowersinhishand.Hepickedoutaredflowerandplaceditonourtable.“MerryChristmas!”hegreetedusinacheerfulvoice.Beforewecouldsay“Thankyou”,hewenttoothertables.Inaninstant,everyoneintheroomwaspresentedwithflowers,includingthewaiterandthepianoplayer.Inthebrightlight,theflowerswereglowinginfullbloom.Thesemagicalflowersmeltedourfrustratedheartsandblewawayalltheunpleasantmoods.Paragraph2:Thepianoplayercamealiveandpleasantmusicfilledthewholeroom.Afestivalatmospheredrownedallofus.Wemerrilydancedtothejoyfulmusic,singing,laughingandwishingeachothergoodluck.Theoldflowerwomanalsojoinedus,unabletoconcealherexcitementandgratitude.ThespiritofChristmascamebacktousagain.Itbroughtallofustogetherinthissmallrestaurantonaforeignland.AllthiswasduetoayoungAmericansailor,who,throughhiskindnessandgenerosity,brightenedourpaths.【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，去年圣诞节期间作者一家从巴黎前往尼斯，但是包括旅馆、汽车在内的一切都出现状况，令大家没了圣诞精神。出去吃饭的时候，又找了一家装修得很差的小餐馆。餐厅里除了水手以外，其他人都默默无语，连钢琴师都没有精神。这时水手去买了卖花老太婆的花。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：然后，那个水手手里拿着花朝我们的桌子走来，所以应当写水手把一朵花给了我们桌，也给了其他桌的客人，包括钢琴师和侍者。这些花发挥了强大的作用，驱散了大家不开心的心情等。其次段开头是：钢琴演奏者活跃起来，整个房间充溢了奇妙的音乐。本段应当写餐厅里的人都复原了开心的心情庆祝圣诞节，大家跟着欢快的音乐跳舞，唱歌，大笑，相互祝愿好运。是水手的和善感染了大家。续写时要求所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，运用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：bepresentedwith，blowaway，comebackto等高级词汇；Inaninstant,everyoneintheroomwaspresentedwithflowers,includingthewaiterandthepianoplayer.运用了现在分词作状语；AllthiswasduetoayoungAmericansailor,who,throughhiskindnessandgenerosity,brightenedourpaths.运用了非限制性定语从句等高级句式。6.【2025届山东临沂试验学校高考模拟卷11】Mr.Plumbeanlivedonastreetwhereallthehouseswerethesame.Helikeditthatway.SodideverybodyelseonMr.Plumbean'sstreet.ThenonedayaseagullflewoverMr.Plumbean'shouseandmadeabigorangesplot(斑块)onMr.Plumbean'shouse.“Oh!Toobad!”everybodysaid.“Mr.Plumbeanwillhavetopainthishouseagain.”SoMr.Plumbeangotsomebluepaintandsomewhitepaint,andthatnighthegotbusy.Hepaintedatnightbecauseitwascooler.Whenthepaintwasgone,theroofwasblue.Thewallswerewhite.Andthebigorangesplotwasstillthere.Thenhegotsomemorepaint.Hegotredpaint,yellowpaint,greenpaint,andpurplepaint.Inthemorningtheotherpeopleonthestreetcameoutoftheirhouses.Theirhouseswereallthesame.ButMr.Plumbean'shousewaslikearainbow.Itwaslikeajungle.Itwaslikeanexplosion.Therewasthebigorangesplot.Andtherewerelittleorangesplots.Therewerestripes.Therewerepicturesofelephantsandlionsandprettygirlsandsteam-shovels.ThatdayMr.Plumbeanboughtcarpenter'stools.Thatnighthebuiltatowerontopofhisroof,andhepaintedaclockonthetower.AtnightthenextdayMr.Plumbeangotatruckfullofgreenthings.Heplantedpalmtrees,baobabs,bushes,andonions.Whentheotherpeoplecameoutoftheirhouses,theysawMr.PlumbeanswingingbetweentwopalmtreesandMr.Plumbeanwasdrinkinglemonade.Plumbeanhasgonetoofar!“Plumbean,whathaveyoudonetoyourhouse?”thepeopleshouted.“MyhouseismeandIamit.MyhouseiswhereIliketobeanditlookslikeallmydreams,”Mr.Plumbeansaid.Thepeoplewentaway.TheyaskedthemanwholivednextdoortoMr.Plumbeantogoandhaveatalkwithhim."Tellhimthatwealllikeditherebeforehechangedhishouse.Tellhimthathishousehastobethesameasourssowecanhaveaneatstreet."留意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1ThemanwenttoseeMr.Plumbeanthatevening.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2Then,onebyone,theywenttoseeMr.Plumbean,lateatnight.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】读后续写Paragraph1ThemanwenttoseeMr.Plumbeanthatevening.Theysatunderthepalmtreesdrinkinglemonadeandtalkingallnightlong.Earlythenextmorningthemanwentouttogetropeandnailsandpaint.WhenthepeoplecameoutoftheirhousestheysawaredandyellowshipnextdoortothehouseofMr.Plumbean.“Whathaveyoudonetoyourhouse?”theyshoutedattheman.“MyhouseiswhereIliketobeanditlookslikeallmydreams,”saidtheman,whohadalwayslovedships.Paragraph2Then,onebyone,theywenttoseeMr.Plumbean,lateatnight.Theywouldtalkabouttheirdreams.WheneveranybodyvisitedMr.Plumbean'shouse,theverynextdaythatpersonwouldsetaboutchanginghisownhousetofithisdreams.Wheneverastrangercametothestreet,thestrangerwouldsay,“Thisisnotaneatstreet.”Thenallthepeoplewouldsay,“Ourstreetisusandweareit.Ourstreetiswhereweliketobe,anditlookslikeallourdreams.”【解析】这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知，这篇文章主要讲了Plumbean先生依据自己的想法设计和改造房子，使得街道看起来很不整齐，人们让Plumbean先生的邻居去劝告他。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：那天晚上，这个人去见了Plumbean先生，所以后文应当是讲解并描述这个人见到了Plumbean先生后，发生的事情，并且其次天这个人对自己的房子进行了变更。其次段开头是：然后，他们一个接一个地在深夜去见Plumbean先生。本段应当写同样的故事接着上演着，全部人都对自己的房子进行了变更。当有生疏人问起时，全部的人都会异口同声地回答Plumbean先生常常说的话。最终还要留意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，运用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：“MyhouseiswhereIliketobeanditlookslikeallmydreams,”saidtheman,whohadalwayslovedships.表语从句和非限制性定语从句的运用；WheneveranybodyvisitedMr.Plumbean'shouse,theverynextdaythatpersonwouldsetaboutchanginghisownhousetofithisdreams.时间状语从句的运用。7.【2025届山东临沂试验学校高考模拟卷12】阅读下面材料，依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Ilayonmybed,legsleaningagainstthewall,desperatelywishingmymotherwouldcall.ButIrememberedthelasttimeI'dseenher,rightbeforethetrainforProvidencepulledoutofthestation,“Youknowhowexpensiveitistocall,”shesaid,thenhuggedmetightandsaidgood-bye.Thiswasmyfirstbirthdayawayfromhome.Imissedmymom,missedmysister,andmostcertainlymissedthespecialpoundcakemymotheralwaysmadeformybirthday.Sincegettingtocollegethatyear,Iwouldwatchjealouslyastheotherfreshmenreceivedcarepackagesfromtheirparentsontheirbirthdays--andevenonordinarydays.Bigboxescontainingsummerslacksandblouses,packagesofM&M'sandSnickers,thingstheyneededandthingstheydidn't.Insteadoffeelingthrilledaboutmyupcomingeighteenthbirthday,Ifeltempty.Iwishedmymomwouldsendmesomething,too,butIknewthatshecouldn’taffordpresentsorthepostage.Shehaddoneherbestwithmysisterandme--raisingusbyherself.Thesimpletruthwastherejustwasneverenoughmoney.Butthatdidn’tstopherfromfillinguswithdreams.“Youcanbeanythingyouwanttobe,”shewouldtellus.“Politicians,dancers,writers--youjusthavetoworkforit;youhavetogetaneducation.”Thankstomymom'ssacrificesandbigdreams,I’dmadeittotheIvyLeague:BrownUniversityinProvidence,RhodeIsland.AsIwasrecallingthesethings,myroommatejoinedmeonthebed.“Hey.Afterwestudy,let'sbuyicecreamandcake.”Inodded,closedmyeyes,andimaginedthecakeMomwouldhavemade.Mmm.Icouldseethegoldenyellowofeachofthetwelveeggs,andIcouldalmostsmellthevanilla(香草)fillingthehousewhilethecakebaked.留意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1AsIdaydreamed,therewasaknockonthedoor.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2Howhadshemanagedtoaffordit?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】读后续写Paragraph1:AsIdaydreamed,therewasaknockonthedoor.Myroommateopenedittofindadeliverymanaskingforme.Hehandedheralargebox,whichshecarefullyplacedonthedesknearmybed.“Openit”.Idid,andinsidewasavanillacakewithchocolatefrosting.Inicingwerethewords:“HappyBirthday,Sande!Love,Mom.”Iwasfilledwithexcitement,asifMomwererighttherehuggingmeclose.Paragraph2:Howhadshemanagedtoaffordit?IfeltasifIwerebackathomewithher,safeandsecurewhileshesangandtoldmehowmuchshelovedhavingmeinherlife.Iranouttothehallandknockedonmydormmates’doors.“Birthdaycake,”Icalled.Icutcakeforthestudentsgatheringinmyroomandwatchedtheirfacesastheyate,becauseIdidn'tneedtoeattofeelbothfullandrichinside.【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写，要求续写两段内容。第1步：依据提示可知，本文要求续写两段内容（我收到妈妈送我的生日蛋糕和我的感受以及我和室友们一起共享的情节），留意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好时态应为一般过去时。第2步：依据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；deliveryman（送货员），carefully（当心翼翼地），excitement（兴奋），secure（平安），hug（拥抱）及gather（聚集）等。第3步：依据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，留意主谓一样和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，留意运用恰当的连词进行句子之间的连接与过渡，书写肯定要规范清楚，保持卷面的整齐美观。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中运用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有befilledwith（充溢），runout（跑出去），asif(仿佛、似乎)，askforsb（找某人）以及knockon（敲门），而且还运用了非限定性定语从句“Hehandedheralargebox,whichshecarefullyplacedonthedesknearmybed.”，状语从句“Iwasfilledwithexcitement,asifMomwererighttherehuggingmeclose.”以及“Icutcakeforthestudentsgatheringinmyroomandwatchedtheirfacesastheyate,becauseIdidn'tneedtoeattofeelbothfullandrichinside.”，非谓语动词“Myroommateopenedittofindadeliverymanaskingforme.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。8.【2025届山东省潍坊市高三英语三轮冲刺拉练八】阅读下面材料，依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的