【读后续写】高二读后续写课件-尹娟

嵊州市高级中学2017学年第二学期期中考试高二读后续写嵊州市高级中学尹娟rug(地毯);____flowerpot(花盆);

happy;________family;________mom__________Useyourimaginationtocreateashortstorywiththegivenwordsastray(流浪的)dog;_________

house;_______night;________door;________asmallpuppy;imagination人物时间地点因果交流意图AnalysisAnalysethepassageI,Spotty,Dad,Mom,everyoneinthefamilywhenIwassevenyearsoldNasikastraydog---afamilymember作者旨在通过对Spotty的回忆，重现这段美好的时光，以寄托对Spotty这个家庭成员的思念。Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes.Ashehadyellowspotsonhiseyes,wecalledhimSpotty.Whichsentencesimpressyoumostinthepassagewhilereading?Iwentoutandfeltthoserefreshingraindropswithacoolbreezeonmyface.Itwasacolddark

night.Whichsentencesimpressyoumostinthepassagewhilereading?①一般现在时：itis...,therearetimeswhenIremember...②一般过去时：had,called,came;③过去将来时所表达的虚拟语气：wouldhavebeen...FocusonTensePara1:①一般过去时：was,moved,wentout,heard,felt,came...②过去完成时：hadputoutsidethedoor;③过去进行时：wasraining,wastrembling④直接引语里的一般现在时：shallwekeep...FocusonTenseOtherParas:Passivevoice(被动语态)：wasarranged,wassurrounded,wasamusedFocusonVoiceActicevoice(主动语态)：Iremember...,hehadyellow...,wecalledhim...,Wemovedinto...StyleWhat'sthestyleofthepassageReminiscence(怀旧)Briskness(轻快)Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes....feltthoserefreshingraindropwithcoolbreezeonmyface;Iwasreallyamusedwith;Spottyseemedveryhappy...描写Spotty的词汇描写作者的词汇描写周围环境的词汇WordsclassificationWordshadyellowspotsonhiseye,astray(流浪的)dog,asmallpuppylyingonanoldrug,wetandtrembling,hadablackbody,darkereventhanablackrainycloud,happy,wenttosleepimmediatelywentoutandfeltthoserefreshingraindropswithacoolbreezeonmyface,hadourmeal,wenttosleep,heardasound,gotupmycourageandpeepedoutofthewindow,wasreallyamusedwith,saw,recognizehisappearance,feltpityfor,wentoutwithanoldtowel,wentneartheinnocentone,heldhiminmyhandandwipedthepuppy,tookhiminsideandmadeabedforhim,questionedmymomwassurroundedbylotsofbushesandvines(蔓藤),Itwasrainingveryheavilyontheday,thoserefreshingraindropswithacoolbreezeonmyface,Itwasacolddarknight,theflowerpot(花盆)keptonthewindowfallingdownParagraph1:Motherthoughtamomentandfinallyagreed._________________

Paragraph2:Afterleavingthehospital,motherpattedthedog’sheadsoftly.____

PredictionTimePlaceCharacterTenseResult/LogicaldevelopmentThinking12345CharactercoherenceTimecoherencePlacecoherenceTensecoherenceLogical/Themecoherence(协调性,一致性)Appreciate

Paragraph1:Motherthoughtamomentandfinallyagreed.ThemomentIheardwhatmomanswered,Ijumpeduphappily.However,thenextday,thesmallpuppywasseriouslyillandwaslyingontheoldrug,dying.Mothersawhimanddecidedtothrowhimawayatonce,butIinsistedontakinghimtotheanimals’hospital.Intheend,motheragreedtogothere.Afterthedoctorhadobservedhimcarefully,hesaidthathecaughtabadcold,sohegavehimsomemedicineandtoldushowtotreathim.

Paragraph2:Afterleavingthehospital,motherpattedthedog’sheadsoftly.Whenwegotinthehouse,thefamilycameupandtookcareofhi