专题05-2 读后续写高分句式之心理情绪情感描写（含答案解析）

专题05-2读后续写高分句式（解析版）心理/情绪描写高分句式心理/情绪描写高分句式心理/情绪情感描写描写指描写语篇中的人物在特定情境中的心理状态、精神面貌或者内心情感活动。语篇中的心理描写可以反映人物的性格，展示彼时彼刻人物的内心世界，并可以刻画人物的形象，突出人物的特点。有的心理描写可以表达人物的感受；有的则可以表达人物的情绪。构建公式1adj.作状语课本典例翻译练习Surprisedandterrifiedatthesametime,Icouldonlyagree.我既惊讶又害怕，只能同意。1.我失望又悲伤，忍不住思考，当其他孩子问我得到了什么时，我要说什么。Disappointedandsad,Icouldn'thelpthinkingwhatIwouldsaywhentheotherkidsaskedwhatI'dgot.2.我满怀热情和竞争精神，全身心地投入到比赛之中，这激发了我对跳出思维定式的热爱。Fullofenthusiasmandthespiritofcompetition,Ithrewmyselfintothecontest,whichsparkedmyloveofthinkingoutsidethebox.句式仿写1.我非常急切和兴奋地走进他的房间，用我那双闪烁着满足的光芒的眼睛表达了我诚挚的谢意。（2023•新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________2.大卫低着头静静地坐着，郁郁寡欢。（2022•新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________3.担心自己可能会失败，我什么也说不出来，只能焦急地等待结果。（2023•新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________4.似乎过了很长时间，大卫冲过了终点线，筋疲力尽但又激动不已。（2022•新高考I卷）____________________________________________________________________________________________5.Hilda对此事感到沮丧，但并没有气馁，她决定暗中监视Maya。（2024•九省新高考适应性考试）____________________________________________________________________________________________答案1.Extremelyeagerandexcited,Isteppedintohisroom,expressingmysincereappreciationwithmyeyesglitteringwithcontentment.2.Davidsatsilentlywithhisheaddropping,depressedandlow-spirited.3.WorriedthatImightbeafailure,Icouldn'tsayanythingbutanxioustowaitfortheresult.4.Afterwhatseemedlikeages/centuries,Davidcrossedthefinishline,exhaustedbutthrilled.5.Upsetbutnotdiscouragedbythisevent,HildadecidedtodosomespyingonMaya.构建公式2with＋表示情感的抽象名词高考典例翻译练习(2023·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)ShewouldhavestruggledwithextremepaintomakeittothataidcheckpointwithoutBailey'shelp.如果没有贝利的帮助，她会在极度痛苦之中挣扎着到达那个援助检查站。1.一看到那只凶猛的狼，她就吓得睁大了眼睛。Atthesightofthefiercewolf,sheopenedhereyeswideopenwithfear．2.一看到那只凶猛的狮子，我吓得僵住了。Onseeingthatfiercelion,IfeltsoscaredthatIfrozewithterror．伴随着喜悦：withdelight/excitement/

pleasure/happiness/joy伴随着满足：withsatisfaction伴随着生气：withanger/rage伴随着焦虑：withanxiety伴随着困惑：withconfusion/puzzlement伴随着耐心：withpatience伴随着恐惧：withfear/terror伴随着尴尬：withembarrassment伴随着自豪：withpride句式仿写1.她满怀自豪和高兴地解释说，这些都是来自墨西哥的特产。____________________________________________________________________________________________2.他转向我，眼中充满了恐惧。____________________________________________________________________________________________3.一见到丈夫Tom，Jane就立刻拥抱了他，眼睛里充满了喜悦。____________________________________________________________________________________________答案1.Withprideandjoy,sheexplainedthatthesewerespecialtiesfromMexico.2.Heturnedtome,

withhiseyesfulloffear.3.UponseeingherhusbandTom,Janeimmediatelyhuggedhim,withhereyesfullofdelight.构建公式3toone's(great)＋情绪名词/muchtoone's＋情绪名词续写典例翻译练习Tomysurprise,thoughIhadtreatedmygroupmembersbadlybefore,IwassurroundedandwarmlywelcomedbythemthemomentIenteredtheclassroom.令我惊讶的是，虽然我之前对待我的小组成员不好，但我一进入教室就被他们包围并受到他们的热烈欢迎。1.令我非常吃惊的是，许多人来询问我问题并买了我的书。Muchtomysurprise,anumberofpeoplecameuptoaskmequestionsandboughtmybook.2.令我失望的是，经过一次又一次的修改，我的文章仍然不符合要求。Tomydisappointment,havingbeenrevisedagainandagain,myessaystillfailedtomeettherequirements.要想这个句子学好，必须积累情绪名词，比如：【正态度】amazement惊奇,delight高兴,joy高兴,satisfaction满足，excitement兴奋【负态度】annoyance烦恼,

disappointment失望,horror恐怖,shame,羞耻sorrow悲伤【中性态度】puzzlement迷惑,regret后悔,relief欣慰,surprise/amazement惊讶Tomysurprise,TomwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContest.令我惊讶的是Tom居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。构建公式4情感拟人化高考典例翻译练习(2022·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)Ibitbackmyfrustration.Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.我强忍住自己的懊恼。我知道教练的本意是好的——他认为他正在做正确的事。1.他被恐怖笼罩了。Fearentirelyseizedhim.2.他突然感到不寒而栗。Achillofhorrorsuddenlysweptoverhim.3.到目前为止，乐观变成了怀疑。Bynow,optimismhasgivenwaytodoubt.4.我气得说不出话。Angerchokedme.5.我们激动得喘不过气来。Excitementtookourbreathaway．6.喜悦的泪水从她的脸上滑落。Tearsofjoystreameddownherface．7.他站了起来，拥抱着他的父母，微笑着，尽力不让自己的情绪控制自己。Hestoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotionsgetthebetterofhim.8.每个人都离开后，我突然感到一阵子孤独。Aftereveryoneleft,Iwassuddenlyseizedwith/byafeelingofloneliness．9.当她听到她赢得一等奖的消息时，她欣喜若狂。Whensheheardtheannouncementthatshewonthefirstprize,awildjoytookholdofher.10.他的脸上露出灿烂的笑容。Ashiningsmilespreadacrosshisface.“awaveof+情绪名词+固定动词+sb”A

waveof

sorrow

washedoverme

as

Iheardthebadnews.Astrongsenseofdelighttookholdofme

themoment

Iheardthenews.描述心情的名词happiness/joy/delight

开心anger/rage/fury

狂怒sadness/sorrow/grief

悲伤gratitude/appreciation

感激admiration

钦佩/赞赏guilt/remorse

愧疚/悔恨fear/terror/fright/panic

害怕/恐慌astonishment/shock/surprise

震惊动词seizecatch(caught过去式)strike(struck

过去式)surroundtakeholdofwashovercomeover

+sb.有行为意义的名词：“一见到/一想到”Thesight/thoughtofsthmadesb+情绪形容词：一见/想到sth，某人---

Atthesight/thoughtofsth,sbdidsth:

一见/想到sth，某人---

句式仿写1.当主持人开始宣读获奖名单时，我感到一阵焦虑，心脏怦怦直跳。____________________________________________________________________________________________2.一想到考试失败，他就万念俱灰。____________________________________________________________________________________________3.当我的名字被宣布时，一种兴奋之情涌上心头。____________________________________________________________________________________________4.当他们的母亲意识到发生了什么时，一股骄傲和温暖的感觉席卷了她。____________________________________________________________________________________________答案1.Whenthehoststartedtoreadoutthewinninglist,awaveofanxietyseizedme,myheartracing.2.Despairoverwhelmedhimatthethoughtofhisfailureintheexam.3.Whenmynamewasannounced,asenseofexcitementsurgedthroughmyheart.4.Themomenttheirmotherrealizedwhathappened，awaveofprideandwarmthsweptoverhim.构建公式5细节描写代替概括描写高考典例翻译练习Theboywaslonelyandunhappy.这个男孩既孤独又不快乐。→(2022·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence...Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.我环顾四周，终于发现了戴维，他独自站在篱笆旁边。……他平常的咧嘴笑今天不见了。1.我如此紧张以至于心跳开始加速，头脑一片空白。Iwassonervousthatmyheartbegantoraceandmymindwentblank.2.一听到那个坏消息，她心痛不已，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。Themomentsheheardthebadnews,herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks．so......that句型1.

他感到生气。【概括描写】Hefeltangry.【细节描写】Hefeltsoangry______

hestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoor.Hefeltsoangrythathe

_____(slap)himintheface.He_____(feel)soangrythathecouldn’tsayaword.答案：thatslappedfelt2.

他感到累。【概括描写】Hefelttired.【细节描写】Hefeltso_____(tire)thathecouldn'twalkforward/moveaninch.Hefeltsotiredthathethrew______(him)intothesofaandfellasleepimmediately.答案：tiredhimself3.

我感到害怕。【概括描写】Hefeltfrightened.【细节描写】Hefeltsofrightenedthathedidnotdare____(

move)aninch.答案：tomove4.

他感到紧张。【概括描写】Hefeltnervous.【细节描写】Hefeltsonervousthathekept______(rub)hishandstogetherfiercely.Hefeltso______(nerve)thathislegsstartedshaking.答案：rubbingnervousbeat5.

他感到羞愧/尴尬。【概括描写】Hefeltashamed/embarrassed.【细节描写】Hefeltso_______(embarrass)thathecouldfeelhisfaceburning.Hefeltsoashamed/embarrassedthathehung/droppedhishead,_____(dare)nottolookathisfather.答案：ashameddaring6.

他感到伤心。【概括描写】Hefeltsad/depressed.【细节描写】Hefeltsosad/depressedthathesobbed______(bitter).Hefeltsosad/depressedthathistears