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专题03提纲作文高分宝典之活动报道
目录
1.三年高考考情透析,把握高考风向标;
2.评分标准早知道,明确得分失分点;
3.高分技巧心中有,“一式、两头、三写、四关”;
4.素材宝库赋能,句型模板全面掌握;
5.高考真题精讲,写作思路一目了然;
6.名校模拟提升,好题新题举一反三。
三年考情风向标
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议
书、活动介绍、人物介绍、日霸记或书信等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活,富有时代气息,体现了
新课程标准的要求,能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。
年份卷区命题形式话题
2023年浙江卷1月提纲类校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植
物”活动
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分,分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为:
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时,先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次,
最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意:
(1)词数少于60的,酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面,评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑,英美拼写及词
汇用法均可接受。书写较差,以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分):能写明全部要点,语言基本无误,行文连贯,表达无误。
第四档(10-12分):能写明全部或绝大部分要点,语言有少量错误,行文不够连贯,表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分):能写明基本要点,语言虽有较多错误,但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分):能写出部分要点,语言错误多,影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分):只能写出一两个要点,里面错误很多,只有个别句子正确。
零分:未作答,所写内容无法评判;所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之,在写活动报道时,考生应该注意“有话好好说”:体现出词语的魅力,展示精彩的语句;“有
话慢慢说”:要点齐全,叙述从容,运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的“万能模
板”并学会灵活运用,这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上挥洒自如,如鱼得水。
高分技巧心中有
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求,我们总结出行之有效的“一式、两头、三写、四关”高分技
巧,即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式:写对格式确定主题,记住报道的基本格式和特点
要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法,使文章开头和结尾的表达生动
两头:写好两头
准确,引人入胜,耐人寻味。
行文时书写规范化,力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合
三写:写美卷面
英语书写要求。
以主题为纲,进一步思考其内涵和外延,联系自己的学习、生活实际,凸
四关:破关夺隘
显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关
报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据,对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。语
言要准确、简练、通俗易懂。还要明确时态,一般是对过去事件的报道,所以多用一般过去时。
时态:一般过去时
写作结构:首段即导语,集中阐释所报道事件的来龙去脉,要讲清what、when、where和who。
主体详细描写所报道时间的起因,经过和结果
结语对该事件进行简要总结或评论
素材语料赋能
【开头黄金表达要记牢】
l.Toenhancemutualunderstanding,todaywehadanonlineclasswithHamptonSchool,oursisterschool
intheUK,introducingourtraditionalfestivalstoeachother.
为了增进相互了解,今天我们与英国的姐妹学校汉普顿学校进行了在线课程,介绍了我们的传统节日。
2.1nordertoenrichourcampuslife,ourschoolorganizeda5kmcross-countryrunningracelastSunday.
为了丰富我们的校园生活,我校于上周日组织了一场5公里越野跑比赛。
3.Anactivity,whosethemewasprotectingtheenvironment/withthethemeofprotectingthe
environment,washeldbytheStudents'Union.
学生会举办了一场以保护环境为主题的活动。
4.1nordertoraisestudents1awarenessofearthquakeemergencyevacuation,allthestudents,withtheguide
oftheteachers,engagedinanevacuationdrillorganizedbyourschoolintheschoolplayground.
为了提高同学们的地震应急疏散意识,全体同学在老师的带领下,在学校操场上组织了一次疏散演习。
5.Aimingtobuilduphealth,studentsfromHongXingMiddleSchoolparticipatedinamountain-climbing
activityorganizedbytheStudents1UnionlastMondaymorning.
为了增强体质,上周一上午,红星中学的学生参加了由学生会组织的登山活动。
6.Organizedbyourschool,allthestudentspaidavisittoXiwangAgriculturalEcologyGardenonthe
morningofApril29th,aimingtosavortheexperienceofnatureandbroadentheirhorizons.
4月29日上午,我校组织全体同学参观了希望农业生态园,体验自然,开阔视野。
7.Onarrivingatthedestination,students,guidedbytheowner,weretakentoadmirethebreathtaking
beautyofvariousplants,followedbyaquizaboutdistinguishingthenameoftheplants.Afterthat,they
embarkedonoperatingtheplantingmachinebythemselves.
到达目的地后,在厂主的带领下,学生们被带着欣赏各种植物令人惊叹的美丽,然后进行分辨这些植
物名称的小测验。从那以后,他们开始自己操作种植机器。
【结尾画龙点睛】
l.Manystudentswishthattheycouldpayavisittothespacestationonedayanddothewonderful
experimentsthereinperson.
许多学生希望有一天他们能去太空站,亲自做美妙的实验。
2.1twasthroughthisactivitythatwefullyrealizedthattheawarenessofrespectingtheoldshouldbe
raised.
正是通过这次活动,我们充分认识到应该提高尊老意识。
3.Thisactivityprovedtobeasuccess,strengtheningourwillpowerandmakingusmoreconfidentaboutour
futurestudy.
这次活动很成功,增强了我们的意志力,让我们对未来的学习更有信心。
4.Throughthisactivity,studentsgainedabetterunderstandingofmodernagriculture,broadeningtheir
horizonsandraisedtheirawarenessofgreenlifeaswell.
通过这次活动,同学们对现代农业有了更深入的了解,开阔了眼界,也提高了对绿色生活的认识。
5.Thisactivitybenefitedstudentsalot,helpingthemtoknowthesocietybetterandhowtohelppeople
around.
这次活动让学生们帮助他们更好地了解社会,帮助周围的人,受益匪浅。
6.Undoubtedly/Unquestionably,thisactivityprovedmeaningfulandbeneficialforstudentstoget
involvedin.
毫无疑问,对学生来说这次活动是非常有意义的。
7.Byunitingtheirpurposesandeffortstotackleconcreteproject,studentsbecomeincreasinglyawareof
thesignificanceofcooperationandteamwork.
通过联合他们的目的和努力来解决具体的项目,学生们越来越意识到合作和团队合作的重要性。
写作模板
1,活动类
(标题)
(导语)Inordertoencouragethestudentsto.Ourschoolorganizedaon(时间)
at(地点),which.
(正文)Itwasaday(介绍天气).Firstofall,.Then(介绍活动的过程).Finally,
(评价)benefitedusalot.Notonlydidit,italso.Whata(n)activity!
2、事故类
(标题)
(导语)Itisreportedthata(事件)brokeouton/at(地点)(时间).
(正文)Itwasaday(介绍天气).Firstofall,.Then(介绍活动的过程).
(评价)Fromthereport,welearnedalot.Notonlydidit,italso.Asaresult,weshould
improveawarenessdoingsth.
高考真题精讲
(2023浙江一月)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道,
内容包括:
1.活动的过程;
2.收获与感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
【满分范文欣赏】
GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs
Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs“activityorganized
byourStudents9Union.
Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristic
andusesofvariousplantspecies.Wethenwentonanaturalwalktoobserveandcollectsamplesof
differentplants.Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworld
andlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelter
foranimals.Ialsogainedagreaterappreciationfortherolethatplantsplayinmaintainingthebalanceof
ourecosystem.
Overall,itwasavaluableandenrichingexperience.
1.词汇积累
参与:participateinfattend
开始:begin-*start
观察,调查:observefsurvey
震惊:strikefastonish/surprise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs“activityorganisedb
yourStudents'Union.
拓展句:Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina,GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs“activityorganised
byourStudents?Union,whichbenefitedmealot.
【点睛】
【高分句型1]Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentch
aracteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2]Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourwo
ridandlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodands
helterforanimals.(运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句)
名校模拟提升练10篇
1(2023•新疆•校联考二模)假定你是校英语报的记者,上周末你校举办了“校园十佳歌手”大赛。
请你为校英文报写一篇报道。
内容包括:1.活动主题及参加人员;
2.活动详情;
3.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可适当增加情节,以使行文连贯。
【满分范文欣赏】
CampusTopTenSingersCompetition,whosethemewastoenrichschoollifeandgivefullplaytoyouth
aswellastheirpositiveoutlook,waslaunchedlastweekend.Westudentsandallteachingstaffgaveanactive
responseaswellasabigapplausetothisevent.
Thosewhoareenthusiasticaboutsingingparticipatedinthecompetition,whichwasfullofclimaxand
splendor.Thecontestantsfsingingstylesarediverse,expressingtheirloveformusicandtheirdeclarationof
youth.Afterfiercecompetition,thetoptensingerscameoutinpublic.Itnotonlyopensagrandeventfor
teachersandstudentsbutalsoattractsstudentstospeakoutfortheirdreams.Westudentswillcontinueto
followthebeatofyouthandfeelthelifeofcultureandart.
L词汇积累
主题:theme—subject
反应:response—reaction
充满:befulloffbefilledwith
各种各样的:diverse-varied
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句:Afterfiercecompetition,thetoptensingerscameoutinpublic.
拓展句:Itwasafterfiercecompetitionthatthetoptensingerscameoutinpublic.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]CampusTopTenSingersCompetition,whosethemewastoenrichschoollifeandgivefullplayto
youthaswellastheirpositiveoutlook,waslaunchedlastweekend.了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Thecontestants,singingstylesarediverse,expressingtheirloveformusicandtheirdeclarationof
youth.(运用了现在分词作状语)
2.(2023•甘肃•统考三模)假定你是李华,上周末你校举办了为期两天的美食节。请你为校英文报写
一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动准备;
2.活动现场概述;
3.活动反响。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
ATwo-dayFoodFestival
Anannualfoodfestivalwasheldlastweekendinourschool.
【满分范文欣赏】
ATwo-dayFoodFestival
Anannualfoodfestivalwasheldlastweekendinourschool.Beforethefestival,everyoneofus
launchedintosettinguptentsandpostingourmenus.
There'snothingbetterthanthesensesweexperiencedatafoodfestival一therowsoffoodtrucksand
tentsasfarastheeyecouldsee,therhythmicsoundweheardfromcooking,thesmellsofdozensofdelicious
foodbeingpreparedaroundusandofcoursethetasteofeverythingwecouldstomach.However,what
impressedmemostwasinfacttheculturesbehindthefoodvividlyintroducedbythecooks.Also,wonderful
backgroundmusicandcolorfulflagsaddedtothepleasureoftheoccasion.
Itwaseveryone^jointeffortsthatmadetheactivitysuchabigsuccessandifstheculturesbehindthe
foodthatmadethefestivalspecial.Everyoneofussanghighpraisefortheevent.
1.词汇积累
开始着手、积极投入:launchinto-*putinto
极目望去:asfarastheeyecouldseefinsight
美味的:delicious一tasty
赞不绝口:singhighpraiseforfspeakhighlyof
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:However,whatimpressedmemostwasinfacttheculturesbehindthefoodvividlyintroducedbythecooks.
拓展句:However,whatleftthebiggestimpressiononmewasthevividintroductionoftheculturesbehindthefood
bythecooks.
【点睛】
【高分句型11However,whatimpressedmemostwasinfacttheculturesbehindthefoodvividlyintroducedby
thecooks.(运用了what引导的主语从句,过去分词短语作后置定语)
【高分句型2]ltwaseveryone?sjointeffortsthatmadetheactivitysuchabigsuccessandit'stheculturesbehind
thefoodthatmadethefestivalspecial.(运用了强调句型,“make+宾语+补语”结构)
3.(2023•河北石家庄•正定一中校考模拟预测)上周你校组织了“捐赠旧书”的主题活动。请你
为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动的目的;
2.活动的主要内容;
3.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
【满分范文欣赏】
Lastweek,ourschoolorganizedanactivitythemed“donatingoldbooks”,whichwasintendedto
encouragestudentstomakethebestuseofoldbooks.
Thankstotheparticipationofamajorityofstudents,alargenumberofoldbookswerecollectedand
thendonatedtoaschoolinasmallvillage,whichshoweddeepandsinceregratitudeforourgenerousact.
Theactivityturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.Almostalltheparticipantsspokehighlyoftheactivity
becausetheythoughtitraisedtheirawarenessofcherishingbooksandspreadingkindness.
L词汇积累
目的是:beintendedtofbeaimedat
鼓励:encouragefinspire
充分利用:makethebestuseoffmakefulluseof
高度评价:speakhighlyoffthinkhighlyof
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句:Theactivityturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.
拓展句:Itistheactivitythatturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.
【点睛】
【高分句型1]Lastweek,ourschoolorganizedanactivitythemed“donatingoldbooks”,whichwasintendedto
encouragestudentstomakethebestuseofoldbooks.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2]Almostalltheparticipantsspokehighlyoftheactivitybecausetheythoughtitraisedtheir
awarenessofcherishingbooksandspreadingkindness.(运用了because弓I导的原因状语从句)
4.(2023•山东潍坊•统考模拟预测)你校最近举办了为期一个月的读书节活动,请为校英文报写篇
报道,内容包括:
1.活动过程;
2.收获与感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
ReadingFestival
【满分范文欣赏】
OurschoolheldaReadingFestivalthatlastedamonth,whichturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.
Wereadalot,frompoemsinbothChineseandEnglishtoclassicsallovertheworld.Thereading
openedthedoorstodifferentstylesofthewritersaswellasdifferentcultures.Wealsoorganizedabook
exchangetoshareourbooksandthoughtswitheachother.Finally,awonderfulshowwasheldintheschool
hall,whereweshowedourachievementsinvariousformsincludingrecitationsandplayperformances.
TheReadingFestivalwastrulyafruitfulactivity.Notonlydidwegainmoreknowledge,butalsoit
enrichedourschoollifeandinspiredustokeeponreading.
1.词汇积累
重大的:greatfsignificant
不相同的:different—contrasting
展览:showfexhibition
活动:activityfpursuit
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:Thereadingopenedthedoorstodifferentstylesofthewritersaswellasdifferentcultures.拓展句:The
readingexposedustodifferentstylesofthewritersaswellasdifferentcultures.
【点睛】
【高分句型11OurschoolheldaReadingFestivalthatlastedamonth,whichturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.(非
限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2]Notonlydidwegainmoreknowledge,butalsoitenrichedourschoollifeandinspiredustokeepon
reading.(notonly-butalso结构)
5.(2023•湖北•校联考模拟预测)假定你是李华,上周你班举行了一场主题为“人工智能(AI)与英
语学习”的讨论,请为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.讨论目的;
2.讨论内容;
3.你的收获。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
AIandEnglishLearning
【满分范文欣赏】
AIandEnglishLearning
InordertoexploretheimpactofAIonEnglishlearningandexchangeideasaboutitsadvantagesand
disadvantages,ourclasshostedadiscussionon“AIandEnglishLearningwlastweek.
ManystudentsnotedthepotentialbenefitsofAI,suchasprovidingpersonalizedlearningandinstant
feedback.However,somealsoexpressedconcernsaboutthenegativeeffectsontraditionalteachingmethods
andinterpersonalcommunication.
Frommyperspective,thiswasathought一provokingdiscussionwhichinspiredmetopondertheroleof
AIinEnglishlearningandhowwecanstrikeabalancebetweentechnologyandhumancommunication.
Overall,thisdiscussionhighlightedtheneedforcontinuedexaminationofAI'sroleinEnglishlearning
aswestrivetocreateeffectiveandengaginglearningenvironments.
1.词汇积累:
为了:inorderto—inagestureto/withtheaimof
在我看来:frommyperspective^asfarasIamconcerned/asIseeit
强调:highlight^layemphasison/stress
影响:impact^influence/effect
2.句式拓展:
简单句变复合句
原句:InordertoexploretheimpactofAlonEnglishlearningandexchangeideasaboutitsadvantagesand
disadvantages,ourclasshostedadiscussionon“AIandEnglishLearning“lastweek.
拓展句:Adiscussionon“AIandEnglishLearning“washeldbyourclass,withtheaimofexploringhowAIhas
animpactonEnglishlearningandexchangingideasaboutitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.
【点睛】
【高分句型11Frommyperspective,thiswasathought一provokingdiscussionwhichinspiredmetoponderthe
roleofAIinEnglishlearningandhowwecanstrikeabalancebetweentechnologyandhumancommunication.(运
用了which引导定语从句和how引导宾语从句。)
【高分句型2】
Overall,thisdiscussionhighlightedtheneedforcontinuedexaminationofAI'sroleinEnglishlearningaswestrive
tocreateeffectiveandengaginglearningenvironments.(运用了as弓|导状语从句。)
6.(2023•陕西西安•西安中学校考模拟预测)假定你是校英文报的记者李华,上周五你校学生会
在体育场刚举办了一场“慈善义卖”(CharitySale)活动,请你写一篇英语报道。要点如下:
1.活动目的和过程;
2.活动反响及意义。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【满分范文欣赏】
Aimedathelpingthestudentsfrompoverty-strickenareas,theStudentUnionlaunchedagrand
CharitySalelastFridayatourschool'sstadium,whichwitnessedthekindnessandgenerosityofallthe
studentsandteacherspresent.
Asscheduled,theactivitybeganat3:00p.m.,lastingthreehours.Whatcamefirstwasamovingspeech
deliveredbyavolunteer,mirroringtheauthenticlifeoftheneedystudentsandkindlingthekindness.What
subsequentlyfollowedwastheexcitingsalessectionwheremanysecond-handitems,rangingfromelectronic
devicestooldfancyclothes,weresoldataprettylowprice.Soenthusiasticwereourschoolmatesand
teachersthatallgoodsweresnappedupwithinhours.AllthemoneyraisedwouldbesenttotheRedCross
anddistributedtothoseneedystudents.
ThisCharitySaleprovedsuccessfulandmeaningful.Notonlydidwestudentspromoteoursocial
responsibilities,butwealsounderstoodeverybitofourkindnesscouldpileupenormousstrength.
1.词汇积累
见证:witness—see
按计划:asscheduledfasplanned
令人感动的:movingftouching
证明是:provefturnout
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:AllthemoneyraisedwouldbesenttotheRedCrossanddistributedtothoseneedystudents.
拓展句:AllthemoneywhichwasraisedwouldbesenttotheRedCrossanddistributedtothoseneedystudents.
【点睛】【高分句型1]Aimedathelpingthestudentsfrompoverty-strickenareas,theStudentUnionlauncheda
grandCharitySalelastFridayatourschool,sstadium,whichwitnessedthekindnessandgenerosityofallthe
studentsandteacherspresent.(运用了过去分词短语作状语以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2]Soenthusiasticwereourschoolmatesandteachersthatallgoodsweresnappedupwithinhours.(运
用了so…that…引导结果状语从句以及倒装句)
7.(2023-四川成都•成都七中校考模拟预测)假定你是李华。近期,你所在的城市向中学生发起
了“最美汉字”投票活动。请阅读下面一则新闻报道,以^TheMostBeautifulChineseCharacterw为题,向
学校NewBabel英文杂志投稿。内容包括:
1.简要概括这则新闻;
2.简述你最想推荐的汉字及理由;
3.谈谈你对该活动的感想。
注意:
词数100词左右。
可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
TheMostBeautifulChineseCharacter
【满分范文欣赏】
TheMostBeautifulChineseCharacter
Recently,somehighschoolstudentshaveconductedapolltochoosethemostbeautifulChinese
character.Amongtensofthousandsofcharacters,“ren,ai,yi,meng,xiao“arestronglyrecommended.
Obviously,moststudentsthinkthefivecharacterscarrytypicalChinesecultureintermsoftraditional
beliefsandcorevaluesconcerningmoralityandethics.
Ofthesecharacters,Iputmengonthetopofmylist.Holdingmeng,whichmeansbestwishesforthe
future,oneisnotonlytoseekforopportunitiesforabetterlife,butalsotocreatebrand-newthingsfor
peoplearoundtheworld.
Personally,Chinesecharactersaresocharmingthattheyaretreasuresofhumancultures.Withdeep
loveforChineseculture,weshouldstrivetopromotethemtotheworld.
L词汇积累
组织,进行:conductfcarryout
显然:obviously-^apparently
关于:concerning-^withregardto
在我看来:personallyffrommypointofview
2.句型拓展
合并句子
原句:Amongtensofthousandsofcharacters,“ren,ai,yi,meng,xiao“arestronglyrecommended.Obviously,
moststudentsthinkthefivecharacterscarrytypicalChinesecultureintermsoftraditionalbeliefsandcorevalues
concerningmoralityandethics.
拓展句:Amongtensofthousandsofcharacters,“ren,ai,yi,meng,xiao“arestronglyrecommended,whichmost
studentsthinkcarrytypicalChinesecultureintermsoftraditionalbeliefsandcorevaluesconcerningmoralityand
ethics.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Holdingmeng,whichmeansbestwishesforthefuture,oneisnotonlytoseekforopportunitiesfora
betterlife,butalsotocreatebrand-newthingsforpeoplearoundtheworld.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语
从句)
[高分句型2]Obviously,moststudentsthinkthefivecharacterscarrytypicalChinesecultureintermsoftraditional
beliefsandcorevaluesconcerningmoralityandethics.(运用了that引导宾语从句,that已省略)
8.(2023•广东广州•统考二模)为庆祝4月20日中文语言日,你校举办了主题活动。请你为校英文
报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动内容;
2.活动反响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
ChineseLanguageDayCelebrationsonCampus
【满分范文欣赏1】
ChineseLanguageDayCelebrationsonCampus
April20,thebirthdayofChinesecharacters^reatorCangjie,witnessedthegreatsuccessofourschool'
sfirsteverChineseLanguageDayCelebrations.
Onthatday,morethan20eventswereorganizedaroundthecampus,offeringthefullestexperienceof
thebeautyofourmothertongue.AmongthosemostpopulareventsweretheliveChinesecalligraphyshow
fromourteachers,andthepaper-cuttingcontest,withparticipantsdemonstratingdelicatelydesigned
patternsofChineseidioms.Whatwonthemostapplausewasthecontestoftonguetwisters,attracting
visitingforeignstudentstoshowcasetheirwonderfuloralChinese.
Thecelebrationshavehadapositiveeffectoneveryparticipant."Chineselanguageissobeautifuland
interesting,I'11definitelycarryonmystudyintoit,“onevisitingstudentfromFrancetoldthereporter.
【满分范文欣赏2】
ChineseLanguageDayCelebrationsonCampus
Tohelpstudentsfullyunderstandandappreciatethebeautyofourmothertongue,ourschoolheld
seriesofcelebrationsonApril20th,theChineseLanguageDay.Participantsincludelanguageexpertsandall
theschoolteachersandstudents.
Thecelebrationsincludevariouswonderfulactivities.LanguageexpertswereinvitedtowriteChinese
calligraphyonthescene,winningwhole-heartedpraisesfromtheaudience.Therewerealsospeechesgiven
byourteachersonhowtheChineselanguagehadthrivedallthewaythroughintomoderntimes.Themost
impressivepartwasthestudents5poetryrecitationcompetition,fullydisplayingtherhythmandimageof
Chineseliteraryworks.
OurChineseLanguageDayCelebrationsprovedtobeahugesuccess.Participantsthoughthighlyofit,
sayingthatthecelebrationshelpedthemseeintoourlanguageinamorecomprehensiveanddeeperangle.
L词汇积累
创造者:creator^inventor
母语:mothertonguefnativetongue/motherlanguage
比赛:contestgame/match/competition
展现:showcase-*show/demonstrate/display
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Onthatday,morethan20eventswereorganizedaroundthecampus,offeringthefullestexperienceofthe
beautyofourmothertongue.
拓展句:Onthatday,morethan20eventswereorganizedaroundthecampus,whichofferedthefullestexperience
ofthebeautyofourmothertongue.
【点睛】
【高分句型1]
AmongthosemostpopulareventsweretheliveChinesecalligraphyshowfromourteachers,andthepaper-cutting
contest,withparticipantsdemonstratingdelicatelydesignedpatternsofChineseidioms.(使用了with的复合结构)
【高分句型21Whatwonthemostapplausewasthecontestoftonguetwisters,attractingvisitingforeignstudents
toshowcasetheirwonderfuloralChinese.(使用了What连接主语从句)
9.(2023春•河南焦作•高三博爱县第一中学校考开学考试)为了让学生近距离接近大自然,上
周六你们班组织了一次春游踏青活动,请你写一篇文章报道此次活动,内容包括:
1.具体的活动安排;
2.活动的意义;
3.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数不少于100字;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【满分范文欣赏】
ASpringOuting
Springisagoodtimeforouting.Aimingtounderstandeachotherbetterandbuildupourbodies,
ourclasshadaspringoutinglastSaturday.
Asscheduled,wegatheredtogetherat8:30amatthegateofourschool.Wewenttoour
destinationbybus,laughingandsingingalltheway.Muchtoourdelight,thetripinvolvedmountain
climbingaswellasapicnic.Hardlyhadwereachedthetopofthemountainwhenweenjoyedanawesome
viewofthewholecity.
Exhaustedaswewereonthewaybacktoschool,weallregardedthisoutingasanunforgettable
experience,foritnotonlymadeusgetclosetonaturewithfreshairandfantasticscenery,butalsoenhance
thefriendshipbetweenusstudentsandpromoteourmutualcooperation.
1.词
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