Module+3+Heroes+模块提升写作课件 外研版英语九年级上册+

Module3

Heroes模块提升九年级上册WY初中英语本模块的写作话题是"描述自己心目中的英雄"。这种话题通常要求学生介绍一位伟人的生平。在写作时，如果叙述的是过去发生的情况，

应使用过去时；如果讲述的是现在的情况，应使用现在时。写作时，可

按照时间顺序展开叙述，写作过程中可使用本模块所学的状语从句对事

情的原因或结果进行阐述。文章的结尾可表达自己的观点或看法。如何写关于心目中的英雄的文章话题分析(桂林中考)

2021年5月22日，"世界杂交水稻之父"袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世。巨星陨落，举世皆哀，人们纷纷以各种不同的方式来纪念这位伟大的科学家。请你根据下列表格信息提示，以"Thegreatestheroinmyheart—YuanLongping"为题，写一篇英文短文简

单介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹(话题：人物介绍

人称：第三人称体裁：记叙文)。写作实践Facts

about

his

life

生平事迹(时

态

：一般过去时)1930

be

born,in

Beijing;1964

starta

special

study

about

rice;1974

develop

a

new

kind

of

rice;1980begin

to,help

people

grow

more

rice,not

only...but

also...,China,many

other

areas

around

the

world;2021

die,in

Changsha;Contributions成就贡献solve,the

problem

of

food,for

millions

ofpeople,call,the

"Father

of

Hybrid

Rice"(杂交水稻之父);One

of

the

bestways

to

remember

him

纪念他最好的方式之一should,savefood,neverwaste

any

food【写作要求】1

.短文应包括以上信息，为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。2.文章词数90左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。3.文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。Thegreatestheroinmyheart—Yuan

LongpingYuanLongpingisthegreatestheroinmyheart.Yuan

Longping

is

the

greatest

hero

in

my

heart.Hesolved

the

problemof

foodand

iscalled

the"Father

of

Hybrid

Rice".He

was

born

in...he

started

a

special

study...developed...helped

people

grow

rice...diedin..

save

food;never

waste

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only...but

also...不仅.....而且..around

the

world全世界waste

food浪费粮食give

advice

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born出生develop研发millions

of数百万的

save

food节约粮食suffer

from遭受句子1.In

the1960s,Chinese

people

were

suffering

from

hunger.在

二十世纪六十年代，中国人正遭受着饥饿。2.He

is

called

the"Father

of

Hybrid

Rice".他被称为"杂交水稻之父"。3.He

helped

people

not

only

in

China,but

also

in

manyotherareasaroundtheworld.他不仅帮助中国人，还帮助世界上许多其他地区的人。4.To

remember

him,we

should

save

food

and

never

wastefood.为了纪念他，我们应该节约粮食，绝不能浪费粮食。佳作展示The

greatest

hero

in

my

heart—Yuan

LongpingYuan

Longping

is

the

greatest

hero

in

my

heart.He

solved

theproblem

of

food

for

millions

of

people

and

is

called

the"Father

ofHybrid

Rice".①He

was

born

in

Beijing

in1930.②In

the1960s,Chinesepeople

were

suffering

from

hunger,so

he

decided

to

find

a

way

ofgrowing

a

better

kind

of

rice.In1964,he

started

a

special

studyabout

rice.Ten

years

later,he

developed

a

new

kind

of

rice.教材原句Norman

Bethune

was

born

in1890.(教材P20)At

that

time,there

were

few

doctors,so

he

had

to

work

very

hardonhisown.(

教

材P20)③In

1980,he

began

to

help

people

grow

more

rice

not

onlyin

China

but

also

in

many

other

areas

around

the

world.④He

died

in

Changsha

on22nd

May

2021,when

he

was

ninety-one

years

old.教材原句She

died

in

London

on

13th

August1910,when

she

wasninety

years

old.(教材P25)⑤One

of

the

best

ways

to

remember

him

is

that

we

shouldsave

food

and

never

waste

any

food.Yuan

Longping

will

live

in

my

heart

forever.名师点评本文层次清晰，要点齐全，语句通顺，简单句和复合句的合理使用使

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