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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Krymzen,aged10andhersisterSamaraWagner,aged9,livedinEdmonton,neartheNorthSaskatchewanRiver.Itwas4p.m.onEasterSundayandtherewasstillsnowontheground.ThesistersdressedintheirfavoriteT-shirtsandpinkleggingsrantothewoodlandbehindtheirhome.TheylovedRundleParkintherivervalley.Itwasaperfectplacetoplaywhiletheirmom,MirandaWagner,wasbusypreparingthefamily’sfestivedinner.Beforelong,theygotbored.Theydecidedtodosomethingdifferent.KrymzenledthewayandSamarafollowed.Theywereheadingtotheoneplacetheirmomhadtoldthemnevertogo—theriver.Theystartedtakinglittlecarefulstepsacrosstheice,dippingtheirrubberbootsintothewater.Thentheyheardabigcrack.Afterhearingthecrack,Krymzenturnedaroundfastandgotbacktosafety.ButSamaradidn’t.Shefellintothecoldriver.Seeingthedangeroussituation,sheranbacktoSamara.“Samara,canyoureachmyhand?”shecriedashersisterstruggledinthewater.Notfarawayfromtheriver,ayoungcoupleAdamandKelseyShawwerewalkingtheirdogRocky,aneight-year-oldhusky.TheywerecrossingtheRundleParkfootbridgeonthewaybacktotheparkinglotwhentheyheardscreams.Theylookedoverthesideofthebridgeandspottedagirlwhohadfallenthroughtheiceandanothertryingtopullhertosafety.“Weseeyou!”Theyshouteddowntothem.“Helpiscoming!”AdamtoldKelseytocallanambulance.Thenheturnedtothedog.“Rocky,”hesaid,“we’regoingdown.”HeandRockyslippedandsliddownthesamehillthegirlstookjustminutesearlier.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Adamandhisdogmanagedtoreachthecrack.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Luckily,theambulancearrivedintimetorushSamaratohospital.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

文章大意10岁的克里姆岑(Krymzen)和9岁的萨马拉(Samara)在复活节周日下午到屋后的林地玩耍,这片靠近北萨斯喀彻温河的林地是她们玩耍的好地方。玩了一会儿她们觉得无聊,决定前往妈妈禁止她们去的河边。在冰面上行走时,冰面开裂,克里姆岑及时返回安全地带,但萨马拉掉进了河里。不远处,亚当(Adam)和凯尔西(Kelsey)夫妇正带着他们8岁的哈士奇洛基(Rocky)散步,听到尖叫声后发现了这一情况,亚当让凯尔西叫救护车,然后带着洛基前去救援。伏笔与续写回应伏笔:妈妈告诫姐妹俩不要去河边,为后文萨马拉掉入河中这一危险情况埋下伏笔,续写中姐妹俩不听劝告遭遇危险,引发了救援情节。伏笔:亚当让凯尔西叫救护车,为萨马拉获救后的救治情节做铺垫,续写中救护车及时赶到将萨马拉送往医院,使情节发展连贯。续写要点第一段情感线:紧张、坚定。亚当和洛基到达裂缝处时气氛紧张,亚当的行动表现出他救人的坚定决心,同时也为萨马拉的安危揪心。故事线:详细描述亚当在冰面上艰难爬行接近萨马拉并成功拉她上来的过程,以及洛基在旁边的反应。续写示范:Adamandhisdogmanagedtoreachthecrack.Adamcarefullystretchedhimselfontheice,hisheartpounding.Rockystoodby,whiningsoftly.AdammanagedtoclaspSamara'sarmandpulledwithallhismight.Inchbyinch,hedraggedheroutoftheicywater.Samarawastrembling,herfacepalewithfear.Adamheldherclose,tryingtowarmher.第二段情感线:庆幸、感激。救护车及时赶到,大家为萨马拉能得到救治而庆幸,萨马拉的家人对救援者充满感激之情。故事线:讲述救护车到来后的情景,包括将萨马拉送往医院、医生救治,以及家人的反应。续写示范:Luckily,theambulancearrivedintimetorushSamaratohospital.Theparamedicsquicklyputheronastretcherandintothevehicle.Atthehospital,doctorsworkedurgentlytostabilizehercondition.KrymzenandhermotherwereintearsofreliefwhentheysawSamarawasoutofdanger.TheythankedAdamandKelseyprofuselyforsavingSamara'slife.情感线从姐妹俩玩耍时的快乐、违反禁令的好奇,到萨马拉掉入河中的惊恐,再到救援时的紧张和获救后的庆幸、感激,情感起伏,扣人心弦,使读者仿佛置身其中。情感变化推动故事发展,让读者更关注救援结果和人物命运。故事线故事围绕姐妹俩在河边的冒险展开,从玩耍、涉险到救援、送医,情节完整、逻辑清晰,有起因、经过和结果。每个环节紧密相连,突出了在危险面前人与人、人与动物互助的主题,展现了人性的温暖和勇敢。主旨升华句"Inthefaceofdanger,ahelpinghandandaloyalcompanioncanbethelightthatguidesusbackfromthebrink."(在危险面前,援助之手和忠诚的伙伴可以成为将我们从边缘拉回的光。)"Therescueontheicyrivershowsthatcourageandkindnesscanbreakthroughtheiceoffearandindifference."(冰河上的救援表明,勇气和善良可以打破恐惧和冷漠的坚冰。)"Whendisasterstrikes,thebondbetweenstrangersandtheloveofourfurryfriendscancreatemiraclesonthefrozenwaters."(当灾难来袭时,陌生人之间的情谊和我们毛茸茸朋友的爱可以在结冰的水面上创造奇迹。)"Thisincidentbytheriverisareminderthateverylifeisprecious,andouractionsintimesofcrisisdefineourhumanity."(河边的这一事件提醒我们,每一个生命都是宝贵的,我们在危机时刻的行动定义了我们的人性。)"Theheroicdeedsontheriverprovethateveninthecoldestoftimes,thewarmthofthehumanheartandtheloyaltyofananimalcansavelives."(河上的英勇事迹证明,即使在最寒冷的时候,人心的温暖和动物的忠诚也能拯救生命。)写作示范范文一Adamandhisdogmanagedtoreachthecrack.Adam'seyeswerefixedonSamaraasheslidcloser.RockyusedhisstrongbodytostabilizeAdam.AdamfinallygotholdofSamara'shand.Withahugeeffort,hepulledherontotheice.Samarawascrying,herbodyshakingfromthecold.Adamhuggedhertightly,tryingtotransferhiswarmth.

Luckily,theambulancearrivedintimetorushSamaratohospital.Themedicalteamquicklytookover.Theywrappedherinwarmblanketsandstartedmedicalprocedures.Krymzenandhermomarrived,theirfacesfilledwithworryandgratitude.Thankstoeveryone'sefforts,Samaragraduallyrecovered.范文二Adamandhisdogmanagedtoreachthecrack.Adamlayontheice,ignoringthecoldseepingthroughhisclothes.Hereachedoutasfarashecould.Rockybarkedloudly,givinghimstrength.AdamgraspedSamara'swristandpulledherup.Shewashalf-conscious,herclothessoaked.Adamheldher,whisperingwordsofcomfort.

Luckily,theambulancearrivedintimetorushSamaratohospital.Theparamedicswereefficient.TheycheckedSamara'svitalsignsandrushedherinside.Atthehospital,thefamilyreunited.TheythankedAdamandKelseyfromthebottomoftheirhearts.Theeventmadethemcherishlifemore.范文三Adamandhisdogmanagedtoreachthecrack.Adammovedslowly,hismindfocusedonsavingSamara.Rockystayedbesidehim,providingsupport.AdamgotSamara'sarmandpulledhertowardshim.Itwasastruggle,buthedidn'tgiveup.WhenSamarawasoutofthewater,Adamrubbedherarmstogetherbloodflowing.

Luckily,theambulancearrivedintimetorushSamaratohospital.Thedoctorsandnursesworkedquickly.TheywarmedSamaraupandtreatedherforpossibleinjuries.Krymzen'sfamilywassorelieved.Theyrealizedtheimportanceofsafetyandthepowerofkindnessduringthisharrowingexperience.参考答案

Adamandhisdogmanagedtoreachthecrack.Atthismoment,ifthegirlhadalsoslippedintothecrackduetopullingtheother,thethingwouldhavebeenevenworse.

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