2024-2025学年译林版八年级英语上学期考点 专题04 Unit1 ~Unit4书面表达串讲【考点清单】

Unit1本单元以“朋友”为话题,要求学生对朋友的外貌特征、个人品质及未来计划进行描述,同时给出一些建议。素材积累1.描写人物外貌和品格的常用词汇:Appearance:tall//short//fat//thin//slim//beautiful//pretty//good-looking//handsome//lovely//cute//strong...Personality:clever//smart//polite//friendly//kind//generous//hard-working//helpful//honest//humorous//patient...假如梅是你的好朋友,住在你家隔壁,你们既是邻居又是最好的朋友。请根据下列内容,写一篇短文介绍她。外貌大眼睛,圆脸,长直发,是朋友中最苗条的,总是面带微笑个性1.

慷慨大方,乐意和朋友分享2.

心地善良,从不说别人的坏话3.

乐于助人,有烦心事的时候,我总是找她倾诉4.

可以告诉她任何事,因为她总能保守秘密特长有好的嗓音,歌唱得好;擅长骑自行车未来计划长大后想当一名歌手并周游世界写作提纲[高分范文]Mayisbothmyneighbourandmybestfriend.Wearenowstudyingatamixedschool.Shehasaroundfacewithbigeyes.Shehaslongstraighthair.Sheistheslimmestofmyfriends.Shealwayswearsasmileonherface.Mayisgenerousandiswillingtoshareherthingswithfriends.Sheiskindandneversaysabadwordaboutanyone.Sheisalsoveryhelpful.Shealwayslistenstomyproblemscarefullyandgivesmesomehelp.Icantellheranythingbecauseshecanalwayskeepasecret.Shehasagoodvoiceandsingswell.Sheisalsogoodatridingabike.Shewantstobeasingerandtravelaroundtheworldwhenshegrowsup.写作任务请根据下面提示,以“Mybestfriend”为题写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友Daniel。特点圆脸,

瘦高个儿;

很幽默,

经常讲笑话让我们开怀大笑。品行愿意和朋友分享东西;

对人友善;

时刻准备帮助别人。爱好喜欢阅读,

每天看英文报刊和杂志。喜欢运动,

每周二和周四下午放学后和同班同学们一起打棒球。喜欢旅行,

希望每周进行一次学校旅行。未来计划长大想当……

要求:1.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯;2.短文必须包括所有的信息,省略号部分适当发挥1~2句;3.100词左右。MybestfriendIhaveawonderfulfriendnamedDaniel.I’dliketotellyousomethingabouthim.Heistallandthinandhasaroundface.Hehasagoodsenseofhumourandoftentellsusfunnyjokestomakeuslaugh.Heisgenerousandalwayswillingtosharewhathehaswithothers.Heisalsokind.Heisreadytohelppeopleinneedanytime.Hehasmanyhobbies.HelovesreadingandhereadsEnglishnewspapersandmagazineseveryday.Helikesdoingsportstoo.EveryTuesdayandThursdayafternoon,heplaysbaseballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Healsoenjoystravellingandhehopesthathecangoonaschooltripeveryweek.Hewantstobecomeasocialworkerwhenhegrowsup,becausehewouldliketohelpmorepeople.Unit2本单元以“学校生活”为话题,要求学生对心中理想的学校生活进行描述,包括课程的开始、结束;课程的内容及作业等。素材积累1.描写学校生活的常用词汇:科目:Chinese//Maths//English//French//Physics//PE//History//Geography...运动:badminton//basketball//football//tabletennis//tennis//volleyball...校园俱乐部:ArtClub//ChessClub//DanceClub//ReadingClub...2.描写学校生活的常用重点句型:Myidealschoolstartsat...andfinishesat...Wehaveanhourfor...Ihave...becauseIthink...isveryinteresting.Ilove...,soIhave...everyday.Wehavelotsof...Every...,wegoonaschooltrip.经典例题请根据提示,以“Myidealschool”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。提示:1.学校有五幢教学楼、两千多名学生、三百多名教师;2.教室宽敞明亮,教师亲切,学生友好且乐于助人;3.早上八点上课,每天上六节课,星期六和星期天不上学;4.没有许多家庭作业,有许多时间进行课外活动……写作提纲[高分范文]MyidealschoolMyidealschoolhasfiveteachingbuildings.Therearemorethan2,000studentsandmorethan300teachersinit.Theclassroomsarebrightandbig.Theteachersareverykindandthestudentsarefriendlyandhelpful.Thefirstclassbeginsat8o’clockinthemorning.Wehavesixlessonseveryday.Wedon’tgotoschoolonweekends.Wedon’thavetoomuchhomeworktodoeveryday.Instead,wehavemuchtimeforafter-schoolactivities.Wefeelveryhappyinthiskindofschool.丰富多彩的“课后服务”活动让我们的校园生活更加充实,促进我们成长。请以“ColorfulActivitiesatSchool”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。要求:1.短文应包含思维导图中的所有信息,可适当发挥;2.主要写“课后服务”期间参加的活动,如作业辅导、社团活动等;3.摘抄试卷内容不得分,文中不得出现考生真实姓名、学校校名。Colorful

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...ColorfulActivitiesatSchoolSincetheimplementationofthe“doublereduction”policy,allkindsof“after-schoolservice”activitieshaveenrichedourcampuslife.Letmeintroducesomeofmyownactivities.First,afterschool,Iusuallyplaybasketballontheplaygroundforhalfanhour.Anditwillmakemefullofenergy.Then,Ifinishmyhomeworkatschool.SoIdon’thavetodomyhomeworkwhenIgohome.Finally,Iwilltakedrawinglessons.BecauseIlikedrawingthingsonpaperbest.Ithinkit’sveryrelaxingforme.Unit3本单元以“出行游记”为话题。要求完成一个短篇游记写作。素材积累1.出行游记的常用词汇:plan//journey//trip//square//museum//arrive(at/in)//reach//getto//placesofinterest//boring//exciting//interesting//culture//geton//getoff//cost//ticket...出行游记的常用重点句型:Weareplanningadayouton...Wewillmeetat...Wewilltaketheunderground/busto...Wewillvisit/see...Wewillgobackto...Thecostisabout...perstudent.经典例题请根据下列提示,以学生会的名义,写一则本周日学校旅行的通知。1.地点和费用:浙江西塘古镇,每位80元;2.周日早上6:30在校门口上车,不要迟到,坐车需要大约两个小时;3.主要活动:欣赏古镇的美景,了解不同的文化,买礼物送给家人和朋友;4.在当地一家有名的饭馆吃午餐;5.下午4点返回学校。写作提纲[高分范文]October20,2023Dearall,WewillgoonaschooltriptoXitang—anoldtowninZhejiangthisSunday.Wewillgetonthebusattheschoolgateat6:30a.m.thisSunday.Don’tbelate.Itwilltakeusabouttwohourstogetthere.Wewillenjoythebeautifulsightsoftheoldtownandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.Wecanalsobuysomepresentsforfamilyandfriends.Wewillhavelunchinafamouslocalrestaurant.Wewillbebacktoschoolat4p.m.Thecostofthetripis80yuanperstudent.TheStudents’Union假如去年“五·一”期间你和你的父母到南通旅游,你在这次旅游中收获颇丰。请你根据下表所提供的要点,以“ThetriptoNantong”为题,用英语写一篇短文,并就这次旅游的所见所闻谈谈你的收获。活动项目上午1.

游览狼山遇见外国人，与其交谈

(自拟一点收获)2.

参观园艺博览园观赏花木，拍摄照片

(自拟一点收获)下午1.

参观海底世界(自拟一点收获)2.

畅游美丽濠河(自拟一点收获)活动感受

(自拟旅游的感受)(

自拟旅游的感受)注意:1.短文必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥;2.词数不少于90,开头已写好,不计入总词数;3.文中不得提及真实的校名和人名。参考词汇:theWolfHill狼山;theHorticulturalExposition园艺博览园;theUnderseaWorld海底世界;theHaoheRiver濠河ThetriptoNantongLastMayDayholiday,myparentsandIwenttoNantong.Thisexperienceimpressed(给……留下印象)me.Inthemorning,wewentsightseeingontheWolfHill.ImetaforeignerandtalkedwithhiminEnglishwhenweclimbedthehill.IwasveryhappythatIfounditusefultolearnEnglish.ThenwewenttotheHorticulturalExposition.Wesawmanykindsofflowersandtooklotsofphotos.Welearnedalotabouttheflowers.Intheafternoon,IlearnedalotaboutthenamesoffishwhenwewenttotheUnderseaWorld.Laterthatday,wetookaboattripontheHaoheRiver.Ienjoyedthebeautifulviewsandsanghappilyalltheway.Wehadsuchanexcitingtripthatwewillneverforgetit.WehopetovisitNantongagainsomeday.Unit4本单元的话题与DIY有关。现在DIY在青少年中越来越受欢迎。他们喜欢动手做各种各样的物品。在写关于DIY的短文时,要包括DIY的目的、内容、过程、结果以及收获的喜悦之情。1.DIY的常用词汇:instructions//tool//paint//brush//glue//rope//scissors//tape//fix//repair//decorate//stick//putin//putup//fill...with...//makeamistake//cutout//mix//tidyup//gowrong//correct2.DIY的常用重点句型:Idecideto...bymyself....helpmewith...Wehadfunworkingtogether.Ittookme...minutes/hourstofinishit.Imadesomemistakeswhen...Intheend,...WhenIcompleted...,...经典例题假如你是一个DIY迷,请你根据下面的提示写一篇短文,介绍你的DIY。提示:要求:1.短文应包括提示中所给的信息,可以适当发挥;2.句意连贯,语句通顺;3.80词左右。写作提纲[高分范文]IamcrazyaboutDIY,andIoftendosomethingswithmyownhandsinmyfreetime.SometimesIhavetoreadtheinstructionscarefully.Lastweek,Ithoughtmybedroomwasboring,soIdecidedtopaintityellow.Mymumtoldmetostop,butIkeptonpaintinguntilthewallsandtheceilingwereyellow.YesterdayIputupashelfabovemybed,andputmanystorybooksonit.NowitisveryeasyformetogetthebooksbecauseIdon’thavetogotothestudytogetthemanymore.近年流行DIY,DIY源于为节省费用人们在闲暇时自行整修房屋的行为,渐渐地DIY的概念也被扩及到所有可以自己动手做的事物上。请以“MyViewonDIY”为题写一篇英语短文。要求:1.词数80左右,书写工整,语句通顺,意思连贯;2.文中不得提及真实的人名和校名等个人信息。要点:*WhatdoyouthinkofDIY?*WhatDIYjobdidyouoncedo?*Whattoolsandmaterialsdidyouuse?*Wasyourworkwelldone?*WhatdoyoulearnfromDIY?MyViewonDIYDIYisverypopularnow.IthinkDIYcanhelpimproveourabilitiesindoingsomethinganditcanmakeususelessmoney.Myparentsneverletmedoanything.ButonMother’sDay,Iwantedtomakemymothersurprised.Iplannedtomakethecardforherbymyself.Iusedsometoolsandmaterials,suchaspaper,glue,scissorsandsoon.AlthoughIdidn’tdoitwell,mymotherwasstillhappy.ItisveryimportantformeandIamsureDIYwillhelpmemore.Let’sDIYfromnowontomakeusactbetterinthefuture.练习1.假如你是校报的英语记者李平,请你根据以下信息,给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信,欢迎他们来到新学校,并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。写作要点:1.欢迎他们来到新学校。2.介绍学校:(1)课程有趣;(2)有多名外教;(3)课外活动丰富。3.请对他们在学校如何做合格的(qualified)中学生提出具体建议。写作要求:1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4.至少80词。Dearnewfriends,It’smypleasuretowriteyouthisletter.

Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing[思路点拨]①题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作。首先欢迎新生来到新学校,然后从课程、外教及课外活动方面对学校进行介绍,最后对新生在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。②写作指导:题目中给出了具体的写作内容,我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息,不能遗漏要点,并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称,通过分析可知,这篇短文应使用一般现在时。[标准范文]Dearnewfriends,

It’smypleasuretowriteyouthisletter.Welcometoourschool!

AtfirstI’llintroducetheschooltoyou.Therearemanyinterestingsubjectsinourschool,suchaspainting,swimmingandmusic.Youcanlearnalotfromthesubjects.Therearealsomanyforeignteachersinourschool.Theyarewelltrainedandhavemuchteachingexperience.Wealsohavemanycolourfulactivitiesinourschool.Howtobeaqualifiedstudent?Here’ssomeadvice.First,youshouldobeytheschoolrules.Second,workhardandmakeprogresseveryday.Nothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartintoit.Third,learntogetonwellwithyourclassmatesatschool.Fourth,youcanaskyourteachersorfriendsforhelpwhenyou’reintrouble.Ihopeyoucangrowasapersoninourschool.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiPing

[高级语块]重点句型Second,workhardandmakeprogresseveryday.努力学习,每天进步。(and连接两个简单句,并列句)Nothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartintoit.如果你用心投入,没有什么是困难的。(if引导条件状语从句)重点短语suchas例如;makeprogress取得进步;putyourheartinto...用心投入到……2.你们班将于期中考试后外出游玩一天,参观扬州名胜。请你以班长的名义写一封信,向全班同学发出邀请,并对行程和交通工具做出安排。要点:1.上午8∶00在校门口集合上车;参观瘦西湖(theSlenderWestLake)和个园(theGeyuanGarden)并拍照。2.午饭后到茱萸湾风景区(theZhuyuBayScenicSpot)看熊猫并欣赏美景。3.傍晚到东关街购物,品尝扬州小吃,在DIY商店学做水果色拉。4.每人费用100元。旅行结束后会把照片放在网上供同学们浏览。5.希望每个同学会喜欢本次旅行并玩得开心。注意:1.词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.邀请信必须包括所有内容要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺。Dearclassmates,