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PAGEUNIT5WORKINGTHELAND如何写争论文本单元要求写一篇争论性的文章。争论文通过争论或说理来表达作者的见解和主见。作者对某一问题持有一种看法，为了使读者同意自己的看法，提出若干理由，企图劝服他人。[基本框架]争论性的文章一般分为以下三段：第一段：先阐述争论的问题并表明自己的观点；其次段：阐述自己支持观点的缘由或者是另一方的观点及缘由；第三段：做一个总结。[常用词块]1．accordingtoarecentsurvey依据最近的一项调查2．withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy随着经济的快速发展3．awidespreadconcernovertheissue这个问题引起了广泛的关注4．advantagesanddisadvantages利弊；优点和缺点5．severalpositiveaspectsasfollows如下几个主动的方面6．reducethedisadvantagestotheminimum把弊处削减到最低限度7．becomemoreandmorepopular变得越来越受欢迎8．twodifferentopinionstowardit对于这件事有两种不同的观点9．forthefollowingthreereasons由于以下三个缘由10．onthebasisoftheabovediscussion基于以上探讨[常用语句]★精彩开头1．Manystudentshavebeenfacedwiththeproblemof...很多学生始终面临……的问题2．Recentlythephenomenonhasbecomeaheatedtopic.最近这种现象已经成为一个热门话题。3．Recentlytheissuehasarousedagreatconcernamong...最近问题已引起……的很大担忧4．Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernover...如今人们越来越担忧……5．Recentlyweheld/haveheldadiscussionaboutwhether...最近我们实行了一个关于是否……的探讨★正文佳句1．Asisknowntoall，...play(s)animportantpart/roleinourdailylife/modernsociety.However，differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsabout...众所周知，……在我们的日常生活/现代社会中起着重要的作用。然而，不同的人对……有不同的观点2．Somepeople/Themajorityofthestudentsthinkit(is)agoodidea/important/useful/convenientfor...todo...有些人/绝大多数的学生认为对……来说做某事是一个好办法/重要/有用/便利。3．Othersargue/claimthattheoppositeistrue.其他人认为/声称，状况恰恰相反。4．However，aseverycoinhastwosides，...alsohasitsdisadvantages.然而，事物都有两面性，……也有它的劣势。★余味结尾1．Thereisprobablysometruthinbotharguments/statements，but...两种观点/说法可能都有些道理，但是……2．Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove，wecandrawtheconclusionthat...从以上探讨，我们可以得出……结论3．Itishightimethatwetookmeasuresto.../We'dbettertakeeffectivemeasurestoprevent...是我们实行措施……的时候了/我们最好实行有效措施以防止……4．Insummary，ifwecontinuetoignoretheissue，moreproblemswillcomeup.总而言之，假如我们接着忽视这个问题，就会出现更多的问题。5．Takingalltheseintoaccount，we...把全部这些都考虑在内，我们……[升格示例]近日，你们班就中学生该不该进行军训进行了探讨。针对这一探讨，请你写一篇英语短文，发表你的看法。内容要点如下：1．军训目的；2．军训内容；3．你的看法。留意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：军训militarytraining[学生习作]Militarytrainingcandevelopasenseofdisciplineandteamworkinstudents.Studentsareexpectedtoimprovetheirstrongwill.Trainingprogramshaveplayedaroleinthedevelopmentofstudents.Forastudent,themilitarytrainingisoftenconsideredboring.Becausehejustfollowsadullwayofexercise,forexample,standinginthesunorrunningforalongtime.Theexerciseistoomuchforsomestudents.Studentsshouldbepermittedtodoitbasedontheirphysicalconditions.Itisnecessaryforstudentstobetrained.点评：1.文中出现了一些语言错误。如其次段其次句because引导的缘由状语从句独立成句。2.要点虽然齐全，但内容不充分，造成行文不太连贯。3.句式不够亮丽，高级句式一般。4.没有有效地运用语句连接手段，以至于全文不太清楚，上下文不太连贯。[升格作文]Theaimofmilitarytrainingistodevelopasenseofdisciplineandteamworkinstudentsandstudentsareexpectedtoexperiencethehardshipstoimprovetheirstrongwill.Butforastudent,themilitarytrainingisoftenconsideredboringbecausehejustfollowsadullwayofexercise,forexample,standinginthesunorrunningforalongtime.Theexerciseistoomuchforsomestudentswhoareweakphysically.Thoughaskedtodobasicexercise,studentsshouldbepermittedtodoitbasedontheirphysicalconditions.Inaword,itisnecessaryforstudentstobetrained.假如你是李华，你班就化学农业和有机农业进行了探讨，请写一篇文章阐述一下你的观点。内容包括：1．有机农产品更健康，让人放心；2．有机农耕对环境不造成破坏；3．有机农耕让农夫增加收入。留意：1.词数80左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：pesticideresidues农药残留AsfarasI'mconcerned,organicfarmingispreferabletochemicalfarming.Herearesomereasons.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allinall,I'minfavouroforganicfarming.Ihopemoreandmorefarmerswillturntoorganicfarminginthefuture.[参考范文]AsfarasI'mconcerned,organicfarmingispreferabletochemicalfarming.Herearesomereasons.Firstly,inorganicfarming,farmersareforbiddentospraychemicalpesticidesontheplants,sotherearenopesticideresiduesleftonthem.Secondly,farmersusenaturalwastefromanimals,whichwillbegoodforimprovingtheconditionofthesoil.Thirdly,organicfarmingcanincreasethefarmers'income.Withmoreandmorepeoplecaringmostabouttheirhe