新高考英语一轮复习练习考向36 读后续写之如何续写故事开头(原卷版)

考向36读后续写之如何续写故事开头一个好的故事开头就好比是一堂成功的课的导入，能够迅速抓住学生和老师们的兴趣，并且愿意听下去，跟着授课老师的思路走。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，定会让读者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡。可见，写好一个好故事的好开头是多么的重要。那么在时间紧迫的考场上的英语读后续写的过程中，如何写出靓丽的开头呢？我们可以从语法手段和写作涉及的内容来具体涉及故事的开端。1.开端布局方法1：副词突显动作等

【典例赏析】Carefully,

hesteppedoverallthebrokenglass.

Joyfully

heskippedupthestreet.

【真题再现】Para1：

(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.

（时间副词衔接+环境描写）

2.开端布局方法2：形容词短语表明心态【典例赏析】Curioustoknowwhatwasinside,hetiptoedintothedarkcave.

Unabletosayaword,hewasrootedtothespot.

【真题再现】

(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Desperateandhopeless,

Jane

kneltdown,tearsstreamingdownherface.

（并列情绪形容词）

(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para2:

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

Weakasshewas,shestruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingfor

assistance.

（状态形容词+as/though引导的倒装句）

(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

AfraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.

(情绪形容词+从句)

(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

Exhaustedandhungry,Iwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.

3.开端布局方法3：非谓语动词的烘托【典例赏析】Looking

aroundhimcautiously,heslippedintotheroomandsoftlyclosedthedoor.

Exhausted,hewasgladtheracewasfinallyover.

【真题再现】(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Feelingdisappointed,

Jane

hadtostayaloneforanothernight.

（现在分词+情绪形容词）

(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para2:

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

Feelingrefreshed,

shecontinuedtowalkalongthe

stream

tofindthewayout.（现在分词+状态形容词）4.开端布局方法4：使用从句【典例赏析】Ashewalked,hewhistled

Althoughhewasafraid,hejumpedrightin.

5.开端布局方法5：使用介词短语【典例赏析】Attheendofthelane

hesuddenlystopped.

Atthesightofthesnake,thelittlegirlscreamedatthetopofhervoice.

6.开端布局方法6：对话或独白【典例赏析】“Let’sseewhogetstherefirst!”

Rachelshouted,asshepedaledfastandzoomedpastJenny.

“Holdontight!”

Myfatheryelled.Wejustfinishedbuckinginasthecoasterjerkedintomotion.Thiswasmyfirstrollercoasterride.

【真题再现】(2017.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:

Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.

"Getintothecar."

PaulshoutedatMac.

7.开端布局方法7：介绍人物身份【典例赏析】Markisastudiousboywholovesreading.HisclassmatesoftenteasehimforbeingtoohardworkingandtheycallhimMr.Smart.Oneafternoon,whilestudyingathome…

8.开端布局方法8：情绪烘托【典例赏析】ThemomentshesawhowshedidforherSciencetest,

tearsstartedwellingupinTina’seyesandfallingdownhercheeks.9.开端布局方法9：背景烘托【典例赏析】I

closedmyeyestoenjoythegentlebreezeandthesoundsoftheclashingwaves.

Gentlyopeningmyeyes,Isawmyparentstaking

arelaxingstrollalongthebeach.Thecavewasdarkandeverythingwassilent.Icouldn’tevenseemyhandinfrontofmyface.

IknewthisadventurewasgoingtobesomethingthatIwouldneverforget.【真题再现】(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para2:

Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.

Ilookedoutofthecarwindow,windingrivers,loftymountains,sunnybeachesanddeepvalleysholdingmeentirelyintheirfascination.

（视觉+环境描写+拟人）10.开端布局方法10：人物动作特写【典例赏析】Furry

startedwagginghistailandrunningaroundincircles

whenhesawhismastertakingaleashoutfromthedrawer.Furrywasallreadyforhiseveningwalk.【真题再现】(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.

Dad

exchangedaglancewithme.Whynotcamptosatisfy

Mom?

（动作描写+问句衔接）11.开端布局方法11：声音效果传情【典例赏析】BOOM,CRASH!

Thewindwashowlingoutsideofmyhouse.Wewerehavingaterriblethunderstorm.Iwasveryscared.12.开端布局方法12：设问激发思考【典例赏析】Haveyoueverbeenonaself-drivingtrip?

Letmetellyouanexcitingtripmyfamilytookthissummer.Whydoestroublealwaysfollowmearound?DoIhavea"kickme"signonmybackorsomething?fascination.

（视觉+环境描写+拟人）

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__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Myschoolhadatraditionduringtheninth-gradegraduation:abeautifulgoldandgreenjacket(theschoolcolors),wasawardedtothestudentwhohadmaintainedthehighestgradesfornineyears.IhadbeenastraightAstudentsincethefirstgradeandhadlookedforwardsverymuchtoowningthatjacket.Myfatherwasafarmlaborerwhocouldn'tearnenoughmoneytofeedfivechildren.Iwasgiventomygrandparentstoraise.Therewouldneverbeaschoolsportsjacketforus.Thisscholarshipjacketwasmyonlychance.OnedayinMay,Ihappenedtooverhearintheoffice.Mr.Schmidt,myhistoryteacher,andMr.Boone,mymathteacherarguingaboutme.“Irefusetodoit!Idon'tcarewhoherfatheris；hergradescan'tmatchMartha'satall.Iwon'tlieorfalsify(伪造)records.”saidMr.Schmidtangrily.ButMr.Boone'svoicesoundedcalm.“Joann'sfatherisnotonlyontheBoard(董事会),heownstheonlystoreintown:wecouldsayitwasaclosetieand…”Shakingandsad,I,waitedafewminutesandwalkedaway.Thenextdaywhentheprincipalcalledmeintohisoffice.“Martha,”hesaid,“There'sbeenachangeinpolicythisyearregardingthescholarshipjacket.ThisyeartheBoardhasdecidedtochargefifteendollars,whichstillwon'tcoverthecompletecostofthejacket.Soifyouareunabletopaythemoneyforthejacket,itwillbegiventothenextoneinline.”StandingwithallthedignityIcouldfind,Isaid，“I'llspeaktomygrandfatheraboutit,sir,andletyouknowtomorrow.”Icriedonthewayhome.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:BythetimeIgothome,myeyeswereredandswollen.Ifoundmygrandpainthebeanfield.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Idraggedintotheprincipal’sofficethenextday,sadanddisappointed.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Inourkitchen,therewasawoodentableandthreechairs—oneforDad,oneforMom,andoneforme.Inthecellar(地窖),theverylastjarofapplejamlayquietlyontheshelf,waitingtobeturnedintoanapplepiewhenDadcameback.Momsatatoneendofthetable.IsatinthemiddlebetweenherandDad.ItriednottolookatDad’semptyplace.Dadhadgonetothecitytolookforworkforalongtime.Everynight,Ilayawakeinbedandwaitedforthetraintostop.Waitedtohearthecreaky(嘎吱作响的)gateDad’sgoingtofixwhenhecamehome.Waitedtohearthesoundofhisworkbootsdroppingonthestepbythekitchendoor,andhisvoicecalling,“I’mhome!”Everynight,asIlaythere,IstaredatthewindowandthecurtainsMommadefromemptyfloursacks(麻布袋).Everynight,Momcametokissmegood-night—afterthetrain’sgoneby.Shehadbeenlistening,too.“Gotosleep.Yourdadwillbehomesoon.MaybeforThanksgiving.”Timedraggingby,itfinallycamethedaybeforeThanksgiving.Iwenttosleepwiththesoundoftrainwheelsinmyhead,whispering,“Maybetomorrow,maybetomorrow.”Earlythenextmorning,thesmellofcoffeewokeme.Iranintothekitchen.Therehewas!Dadliftedmeontohisshouldersandpretendedtostaggerfrommyweight.“How’smyboy?You’vegottensobigthatIcanbarelyliftyouupanymore.”Heputmedown,andIstaredatthetwosacksonthetable.OnesaidFLOUR—Iknewthatword.Itriedreadingtheother:S-U-G-A-R.Dadwhistledadmiringlyandwinkedatme.MomandIhadbeenpracticingmylettersmostdays.IcouldseethatMomwaspleasedwithme.“I’mgoingtobakeapieforyourdad’shomecomingdinner.Jimmy,bringmethatjarofapplejamfromtheshelfinthecellar.”Momsmiledatme.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Hearingthis,Itookthestepstwoatatimetothecellar.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Nevermind,boy,accidentshappen,”Dadsaidandwipedmytears.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasanArtlesson.Rachelsatatthedeskwatchingherclassmatesbusypreparingthewaterjarsandpaints.SheunderstoodwhyMrs.WestonaskedhertositdownandgotLisatofetcheverythingforher.ItwasalwaysadisasterwhenRacheltriedtodoArt!Rachelsighedandreachedouttodipherbrushinsomeblackpaintand—oh,no!Sheknockedoverthejar.Thewaterspreadacrossthedeskanddrownedthepaper.LisacalledMrs.WestontoseewhatRachelhaddone.Rachelwentredintheface.Shejumpedtoherfeettogetacloth.Herchairfelloverbackwards.SheturnedroundandherpaintbrushcaughtLisaacrosstheface,givingherablackmoustache.Lisawassosurprisedthatshefellbackagainstawirebookstand.Itcamecrashingdownandthebookswentalloverthefloor.Howclumsy(笨拙的)!Rachelthoughtasshewenthomeonthebus.Thebusstoppedoutsideherhouse.Shejumpedupandherelbow(肘部)knockedawoman’shatrightoverhereyes.Oh,no!Rachelsaidsorry,gotoffandranindoors.Mumwasn’tinthekitchenbutlayinbedasshecaughtanawfulcold.RachelofferedtomakeacupofteabutMumwouldratherwaitforDad.Rachelsighed.SheunderstoodMumwasafraidshewouldspill(溅出)it.“ButwouldyougotoMrs.Willowforsomecoldcure?”askedMum.Rachelturnedtothedooratonce.“ButRachel,Mrs.Willow’shouseisfullofbeautifulthings,soifsheasksyoutocomein,you’dbettersayno.”Rachelsighedandranout.Mrs.Willowwasanoldladywithwhitehairandsharpblueeyeslivinginanoldhouse.Sheopenedthedoorandinvitedherin.Rachelsaidwhyshecameandthatshepreferredtowaitoutsiderememberinghermother’swarning.Mrs.WillowinsistedRachelcomeinside.Racheltookadeepbreathandsteppedin.ShelookedroundMrs.Willow’ssittingroomandsawatoncewhyMumhadbeenworried.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Therewerebeautifulthingseverywhere—prettychinafigures(瓷雕)anddelicatevases.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:WithasmileMrs.Willowcomfortedhersayingithadbeenbrokenbefore.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iamadoctor,soIlovemyjob.Ialwayshave,butIfeelparticularlyproudtodoitatthemoment.WithCOVID-19sweepingthroughWuhan,peopleareavoidinghospitalsaspossibletheycan.However,pregnantwomenstillneedtocomeintothehospital.Babiesstillneedtobeborn.Rightnow,itisevenscarierforthesewomen,astheyhavetocomeinontheirown,oft