版权说明:本文档由用户提供并上传,收益归属内容提供方,若内容存在侵权,请进行举报或认领
文档简介
考向36读后续写之如何续写故事开头一个好的故事开头就好比是一堂成功的课的导入,能够迅速抓住学生和老师们的兴趣,并且愿意听下去,跟着授课老师的思路走。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味十足的诱饵,诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而一个拙劣的故事开头,定会让读者大倒胃口,恹恹欲睡。可见,写好一个好故事的好开头是多么的重要。那么在时间紧迫的考场上的英语读后续写的过程中,如何写出靓丽的开头呢?我们可以从语法手段和写作涉及的内容来具体涉及故事的开端。1.开端布局方法1:副词突显动作等
【典例赏析】Carefully,
hesteppedoverallthebrokenglass.
Joyfully
heskippedupthestreet.
【真题再现】Para1:
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.
Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.
(时间副词衔接+环境描写)
2.开端布局方法2:形容词短语表明心态【典例赏析】Curioustoknowwhatwasinside,hetiptoedintothedarkcave.
Unabletosayaword,hewasrootedtothespot.
【真题再现】
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:
Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.
Desperateandhopeless,
Jane
kneltdown,tearsstreamingdownherface.
(并列情绪形容词)
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para2:
ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.
Weakasshewas,shestruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingfor
assistance.
(状态形容词+as/though引导的倒装句)
(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:
Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.
AfraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.
(情绪形容词+从句)
(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.
Exhaustedandhungry,Iwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.
3.开端布局方法3:非谓语动词的烘托【典例赏析】Looking
aroundhimcautiously,heslippedintotheroomandsoftlyclosedthedoor.
Exhausted,hewasgladtheracewasfinallyover.
【真题再现】(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.
Feelingdisappointed,
Jane
hadtostayaloneforanothernight.
(现在分词+情绪形容词)
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para2:
ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.
Feelingrefreshed,
shecontinuedtowalkalongthe
stream
tofindthewayout.(现在分词+状态形容词)4.开端布局方法4:使用从句【典例赏析】Ashewalked,hewhistled
Althoughhewasafraid,hejumpedrightin.
5.开端布局方法5:使用介词短语【典例赏析】Attheendofthelane
hesuddenlystopped.
Atthesightofthesnake,thelittlegirlscreamedatthetopofhervoice.
6.开端布局方法6:对话或独白【典例赏析】“Let’sseewhogetstherefirst!”
Rachelshouted,asshepedaledfastandzoomedpastJenny.
“Holdontight!”
Myfatheryelled.Wejustfinishedbuckinginasthecoasterjerkedintomotion.Thiswasmyfirstrollercoasterride.
【真题再现】(2017.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:
Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.
"Getintothecar."
PaulshoutedatMac.
7.开端布局方法7:介绍人物身份【典例赏析】Markisastudiousboywholovesreading.HisclassmatesoftenteasehimforbeingtoohardworkingandtheycallhimMr.Smart.Oneafternoon,whilestudyingathome…
8.开端布局方法8:情绪烘托【典例赏析】ThemomentshesawhowshedidforherSciencetest,
tearsstartedwellingupinTina’seyesandfallingdownhercheeks.9.开端布局方法9:背景烘托【典例赏析】I
closedmyeyestoenjoythegentlebreezeandthesoundsoftheclashingwaves.
Gentlyopeningmyeyes,Isawmyparentstaking
arelaxingstrollalongthebeach.Thecavewasdarkandeverythingwassilent.Icouldn’tevenseemyhandinfrontofmyface.
IknewthisadventurewasgoingtobesomethingthatIwouldneverforget.【真题再现】(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para2:
Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.
Ilookedoutofthecarwindow,windingrivers,loftymountains,sunnybeachesanddeepvalleysholdingmeentirelyintheirfascination.
(视觉+环境描写+拟人)10.开端布局方法10:人物动作特写【典例赏析】Furry
startedwagginghistailandrunningaroundincircles
whenhesawhismastertakingaleashoutfromthedrawer.Furrywasallreadyforhiseveningwalk.【真题再现】(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:
Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.
Dad
exchangedaglancewithme.Whynotcamptosatisfy
Mom?
(动作描写+问句衔接)11.开端布局方法11:声音效果传情【典例赏析】BOOM,CRASH!
Thewindwashowlingoutsideofmyhouse.Wewerehavingaterriblethunderstorm.Iwasveryscared.12.开端布局方法12:设问激发思考【典例赏析】Haveyoueverbeenonaself-drivingtrip?
Letmetellyouanexcitingtripmyfamilytookthissummer.Whydoestroublealwaysfollowmearound?DoIhavea"kickme"signonmybackorsomething?fascination.
(视觉+环境描写+拟人)
【检测训练】1.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Boysliketobeconsideredtobebrave,butwhatkindofthingscanbeconsideredtobebrave?Itisnotaquestionthatcanbeansweredbywords,butbytheactualdeed.AboywiththenameHenrygaveusagoodexample.RonnyandHenryweretwofriendsinthesameclass.Theyalwaysplayedtogetherandwenthometogether.OnedayasRonnyandHenryweregoinghomeafterschool,theysawsomepeoplefightinginthestreetcorner.Ronnysaidexcitedly,“Somepeoplearefighting!Let’sgoandhavealook!”ButHenryrefused,“It’snoneofourbusiness.We’dbettergohomeanddon’tgetclosetothem.AlsoourparentsareexpectingtohavedinnerwithustogetherathomeandIdon’twantthemtoworryaboutme.”“Youareacoward,andafraidtogo,”saidRonny,andoffherantothespotwithsomeotherboys.Henryhadtogohomealoneanddidn'tthinkaboutitanymore.ButRonnythoughtHenrywasacowardandtoldalltheboysthat.Theylaughedathimagreatdeal.Fromthenon,theylookeddownuponHenryanddidn’twanttoplaywithhim.Henrywassadbuthewasn’tangrywithRonnyforhisrudebehavior,becausehehadlearnedthattruecouragewasshownmostinbearingmisunderstandingwhenitwasnotdeserved,andthatheoughttobeafraidofnothingbutdoingwrong.Thus,hejustignoredtheotherboys’laughterandcontinuedtosticktohisthoughtandgotoschoolandstudyaswell.However,Ronnydidn’tinviteHenrytogohomewithhimanymore.Instead,hehadhisnewfriendswhoalsothoughtHenrywasacoward.Everydayafterschool,theydidn'tgohomedirectlybutwenttotheriverorsomewheretoplaygamesandhadlotsoffun.注意:1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;Paragraph1:Afewdayslater,somethingterriblehappenedtoRonny.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Atthatmoment,Henryhappenedtopassby.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Itookajobasareceptionistforaveterinarianweeksago.Asanenthusiasticanimallover,IacceptedthepositionontheconditionthatIwouldn’thavetoassistwithanywoundedanimals.Icouldn’tbeartoseeanycreatureinpain.Attheendofmyfirstweek,wewereabouttoclosetheofficeforthedaywhenayoungmaninhisthirtiesranuptousholdingaseverelyinjuredDobermanpinscherpuppyinhisarmsandbeggingustosavehislife.Thefour-month-oldpuphadbeenhitbyacar.ThedoctorandIrushedbackintotheoperatingroomimmediately.Thepoorcreaturewasincriticalcondition.Theonlyplacetheskinwasstillattachedtothispoorlittleanimal’sbodywasaroundoneshoulder.Thevetworkedtirelesslyforwhatseemedlikehours,stitchinghimbacktogetheragain.Thatwastheeasypart.Thepuppyhadbrokenmultiplebones,includinghisspine.Ifhewasluckyenoughtosurvivethenextfewdays,wewerequitesurehewouldneverwalkagain.Thedayforeverchangedmylife.Theveterinarianinstructedme,andIbecamehisassistantinallthingsmedical.OneofmyfirstjobswastogivethatDobermanpuppydailyphysicaltherapy.Imovedhistinylegsonaregularbasistokeephismusclesfromweakening.Weekswentbyuntiloneday,Ifeltthislittlefighterpushbackeversoslightly.Andhecontinuedtopushbacktillhecouldfinallyusehislegs.Whatamiracle!Daybyday,thelittlefightermadealittlebitprogressuntilthevetcalledhisownertellinghimthathispuppywasreadytogohome.Havingaccompaniedthepuppyforseveralmonths,Icouldimaginehowexcitedandrelievedtheyoungmanwas.AndIwassurehewouldtookgoodcareof.Twodayslater,thepuppywastakenawaybyhisowner.1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:Aboutayearpassed,Iwalkedintotheclinic’scrowdedwaitingroom.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Iwentontobeavettechfor14years,andsinceretirement,I’vevolunteeredatano-killanimalshelter.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Myschoolhadatraditionduringtheninth-gradegraduation:abeautifulgoldandgreenjacket(theschoolcolors),wasawardedtothestudentwhohadmaintainedthehighestgradesfornineyears.IhadbeenastraightAstudentsincethefirstgradeandhadlookedforwardsverymuchtoowningthatjacket.Myfatherwasafarmlaborerwhocouldn'tearnenoughmoneytofeedfivechildren.Iwasgiventomygrandparentstoraise.Therewouldneverbeaschoolsportsjacketforus.Thisscholarshipjacketwasmyonlychance.OnedayinMay,Ihappenedtooverhearintheoffice.Mr.Schmidt,myhistoryteacher,andMr.Boone,mymathteacherarguingaboutme.“Irefusetodoit!Idon'tcarewhoherfatheris;hergradescan'tmatchMartha'satall.Iwon'tlieorfalsify(伪造)records.”saidMr.Schmidtangrily.ButMr.Boone'svoicesoundedcalm.“Joann'sfatherisnotonlyontheBoard(董事会),heownstheonlystoreintown:wecouldsayitwasaclosetieand…”Shakingandsad,I,waitedafewminutesandwalkedaway.Thenextdaywhentheprincipalcalledmeintohisoffice.“Martha,”hesaid,“There'sbeenachangeinpolicythisyearregardingthescholarshipjacket.ThisyeartheBoardhasdecidedtochargefifteendollars,whichstillwon'tcoverthecompletecostofthejacket.Soifyouareunabletopaythemoneyforthejacket,itwillbegiventothenextoneinline.”StandingwithallthedignityIcouldfind,Isaid,“I'llspeaktomygrandfatheraboutit,sir,andletyouknowtomorrow.”Icriedonthewayhome.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:BythetimeIgothome,myeyeswereredandswollen.Ifoundmygrandpainthebeanfield.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Idraggedintotheprincipal’sofficethenextday,sadanddisappointed.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Inourkitchen,therewasawoodentableandthreechairs—oneforDad,oneforMom,andoneforme.Inthecellar(地窖),theverylastjarofapplejamlayquietlyontheshelf,waitingtobeturnedintoanapplepiewhenDadcameback.Momsatatoneendofthetable.IsatinthemiddlebetweenherandDad.ItriednottolookatDad’semptyplace.Dadhadgonetothecitytolookforworkforalongtime.Everynight,Ilayawakeinbedandwaitedforthetraintostop.Waitedtohearthecreaky(嘎吱作响的)gateDad’sgoingtofixwhenhecamehome.Waitedtohearthesoundofhisworkbootsdroppingonthestepbythekitchendoor,andhisvoicecalling,“I’mhome!”Everynight,asIlaythere,IstaredatthewindowandthecurtainsMommadefromemptyfloursacks(麻布袋).Everynight,Momcametokissmegood-night—afterthetrain’sgoneby.Shehadbeenlistening,too.“Gotosleep.Yourdadwillbehomesoon.MaybeforThanksgiving.”Timedraggingby,itfinallycamethedaybeforeThanksgiving.Iwenttosleepwiththesoundoftrainwheelsinmyhead,whispering,“Maybetomorrow,maybetomorrow.”Earlythenextmorning,thesmellofcoffeewokeme.Iranintothekitchen.Therehewas!Dadliftedmeontohisshouldersandpretendedtostaggerfrommyweight.“How’smyboy?You’vegottensobigthatIcanbarelyliftyouupanymore.”Heputmedown,andIstaredatthetwosacksonthetable.OnesaidFLOUR—Iknewthatword.Itriedreadingtheother:S-U-G-A-R.Dadwhistledadmiringlyandwinkedatme.MomandIhadbeenpracticingmylettersmostdays.IcouldseethatMomwaspleasedwithme.“I’mgoingtobakeapieforyourdad’shomecomingdinner.Jimmy,bringmethatjarofapplejamfromtheshelfinthecellar.”Momsmiledatme.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Hearingthis,Itookthestepstwoatatimetothecellar.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Nevermind,boy,accidentshappen,”Dadsaidandwipedmytears.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasanArtlesson.Rachelsatatthedeskwatchingherclassmatesbusypreparingthewaterjarsandpaints.SheunderstoodwhyMrs.WestonaskedhertositdownandgotLisatofetcheverythingforher.ItwasalwaysadisasterwhenRacheltriedtodoArt!Rachelsighedandreachedouttodipherbrushinsomeblackpaintand—oh,no!Sheknockedoverthejar.Thewaterspreadacrossthedeskanddrownedthepaper.LisacalledMrs.WestontoseewhatRachelhaddone.Rachelwentredintheface.Shejumpedtoherfeettogetacloth.Herchairfelloverbackwards.SheturnedroundandherpaintbrushcaughtLisaacrosstheface,givingherablackmoustache.Lisawassosurprisedthatshefellbackagainstawirebookstand.Itcamecrashingdownandthebookswentalloverthefloor.Howclumsy(笨拙的)!Rachelthoughtasshewenthomeonthebus.Thebusstoppedoutsideherhouse.Shejumpedupandherelbow(肘部)knockedawoman’shatrightoverhereyes.Oh,no!Rachelsaidsorry,gotoffandranindoors.Mumwasn’tinthekitchenbutlayinbedasshecaughtanawfulcold.RachelofferedtomakeacupofteabutMumwouldratherwaitforDad.Rachelsighed.SheunderstoodMumwasafraidshewouldspill(溅出)it.“ButwouldyougotoMrs.Willowforsomecoldcure?”askedMum.Rachelturnedtothedooratonce.“ButRachel,Mrs.Willow’shouseisfullofbeautifulthings,soifsheasksyoutocomein,you’dbettersayno.”Rachelsighedandranout.Mrs.Willowwasanoldladywithwhitehairandsharpblueeyeslivinginanoldhouse.Sheopenedthedoorandinvitedherin.Rachelsaidwhyshecameandthatshepreferredtowaitoutsiderememberinghermother’swarning.Mrs.WillowinsistedRachelcomeinside.Racheltookadeepbreathandsteppedin.ShelookedroundMrs.Willow’ssittingroomandsawatoncewhyMumhadbeenworried.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Therewerebeautifulthingseverywhere—prettychinafigures(瓷雕)anddelicatevases.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:WithasmileMrs.Willowcomfortedhersayingithadbeenbrokenbefore.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iamadoctor,soIlovemyjob.Ialwayshave,butIfeelparticularlyproudtodoitatthemoment.WithCOVID-19sweepingthroughWuhan,peopleareavoidinghospitalsaspossibletheycan.However,pregnantwomenstillneedtocomeintothehospital.Babiesstillneedtobeborn.Rightnow,itisevenscarierforthesewomen,astheyhavetocomeinontheirown,oft
温馨提示
- 1. 本站所有资源如无特殊说明,都需要本地电脑安装OFFICE2007和PDF阅读器。图纸软件为CAD,CAXA,PROE,UG,SolidWorks等.压缩文件请下载最新的WinRAR软件解压。
- 2. 本站的文档不包含任何第三方提供的附件图纸等,如果需要附件,请联系上传者。文件的所有权益归上传用户所有。
- 3. 本站RAR压缩包中若带图纸,网页内容里面会有图纸预览,若没有图纸预览就没有图纸。
- 4. 未经权益所有人同意不得将文件中的内容挪作商业或盈利用途。
- 5. 人人文库网仅提供信息存储空间,仅对用户上传内容的表现方式做保护处理,对用户上传分享的文档内容本身不做任何修改或编辑,并不能对任何下载内容负责。
- 6. 下载文件中如有侵权或不适当内容,请与我们联系,我们立即纠正。
- 7. 本站不保证下载资源的准确性、安全性和完整性, 同时也不承担用户因使用这些下载资源对自己和他人造成任何形式的伤害或损失。
最新文档
- 做计划-变轻松心理健康教案
- 五下20课课件教学课件
- 《县级(区域)医疗资源集中化运行建设规范 第4部分:远程会诊中心(征求意见稿)》
- 2024年四川省广安市中考政治真题卷及答案解析
- 新教材同步系列2024春高中生物第3章基因工程第3节基因工程的应用课件新人教版选择性必修3
- 浅谈骨筋膜室综合症课件
- 2006年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(山东卷.文)答案
- 便携式电暖手器相关项目建议书
- 江苏省南通市崇川区田家炳中学2024-2025学年九年级上学期月考物理试卷(10月份)
- 2018年上半年软件水平考试(初级)网络管理员上午(基础知识)真题试卷
- 2022年消毒技术规范
- 清单控制价编制应急预案
- 人类生活在同一个地球村教学设计
- JCT908-2013 人造石的标准
- 有机肥料投标方案(技术标)
- 校园网络工程方案设计
- 深圳租房整租分租合同范本
- 工商银行申请表
- 传染病的流行病学研究:影响因素、疾病负担与防控策略研究
- 万物之理-爱因斯坦之梦智慧树知到课后章节答案2023年下中国海洋大学
- 生物炭及生物炭基肥在农业中的应用研究进展
评论
0/150
提交评论