新高考英语一轮复习练习考向42 读后续写之情感情绪细节刻画(原卷版)

考向42读后续写之情感情绪细节刻画情感细节包括人物的感受、情绪，是续写中必不可少的细节描写之一。合理的情感情绪描写与刻画，可以凸显人物的性格、人际关系的特征、以及烘托故事高潮进而突出语篇主题等。因此，合理的情感情绪刻画在续写中是非常必要的。以下就是读后续写过程中，刻画人物情感情绪的四个方法：一、直接利用恰当的表情感的形容词、副词或名词、介词短语等表达人物的喜怒哀乐例如：快乐(happy,delighted,pleased,joyful,enjoyable等)、吃惊(surprised,shocked,amazed,astonished)等形容词或介词短语(toone'ssurprise,inrelief,inpanic)等描述人物的情绪。二、利用环境细节“融情于景”烘托人物的情感例如：Dellafinishedhercryinganddriedherface.Shestoodbythewindowandlookedoutunhappilyatagraycatwalkingalongagrayfenceinagraybackyard.(小说《麦琪的礼物》中利用3个形容词gray，体现了Della的难受和不开心。)三、利用恰当的动作描写反映人物的情绪例如：下面文章片段中的句子：Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hoping_to_see_the_lake.(动作描写，说明Jane满怀期望)Tohersurprise,(利用介词短语体现Jane的吃惊)shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnow­cappedmountaintop.(寓情于景，体现Jane的无望失落)Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.四、利用高级句式和修饰成分细化情感细节例如：①“Absolutely！”repliedJohn,excitementshinninginhiseyes.(利用名词excitement和独立主格结构，描写John的兴奋激动)约翰答道，“一定”，他两眼兴奋地闪闪发光。②Soangrywasthebearthatitroaredandsmackedthefenceviolently.(so...that倒装句型)熊怒火中烧，开始咆哮并用爪子猛烈地拍击护栏。③Youcannotimaginehowfrightenedwewereattheapproachofthepolarbear.(how引导的宾语从句，介词短语)你无法想象北极熊向我们逼近时我们多么的恐惧。【策略微练】Ⅰ.按要求补全下面动作、情感和心理细节的句子1．简又害怕又无助，靠着一棵树坐下，歇歇疼痛的双脚。,Janesatagainstatree,.(形容词短语/非谓语动词作状语)2．“如果我没有和汤姆吵架，我现在就不会被困在这里了，”她想，悔恨的泪水模糊了她的眼睛。“，”shethoughttoherself.(虚拟语气的倒装句，with复合结构)3．她挣扎着站起来寻找那个湖。4．她精疲力竭，她爬上一块大石头，躺了下来，很快睡着了。(so...that状语从句，一连串的动作)5．简醒来时天已经亮了。6．尽管很沮丧，她还是决定继续前进。,shedecidedtocontinueforcingherwayahead.(让步状语从句),shedecidedtocontinueforcingherwayahead.(状语从句的省略句)7．随着小溪的声音，她向水边走去。,shewalkedtowardthewater.(非谓语动词作状语)8．突然，她注意到远处有一个熟悉的身影向她走来。(非谓语动词作宾补)Ⅱ.将以上补全后的各句合并为短文，注意恰当的衔接过渡【典例示例】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。SamWattswasa37­year­oldfishermanlivingandworkinginCanada.Oneday,SamplannedtoheadoutintothePacificat9amandworkstraightthroughuntil5pmthenextday.JoiningSamwouldbehiscrewman,24­year­oldTomBuck.AlthoughSamhadbeenwarnedthatastormwascoming,therewaslittlethatwouldkeephimfromgoing.Ashesailedthroughthewavessome120kilometersfromland,Samletouthisthree­kilometer­longfishingline.Thestormwasgainingstrengthonlandbuthadyettoreachthemenfaroffshore.Thatchangedaround1am.Wavesrockedthesmallboat,whichbegantoturnsidewayslikeanamusementparkride.“Getusoutofhere！”TomscreamedtoSam.“Let'sgoback！”Withthewindsandwaveskickingup,theboatbegantofillwithwater.SamandTomtriedtopullinthefishinglinetogether,butthehighwavesfilledtheboatwithwater,forcingSamtomakeaharddecision.Hecuttheline,losingthousandsofdollars'worthofequipmentandfishinthesea.Hethenpointedtheboattowardaportfivehoursaway.Samthencalledhisboss,WilliamFox,toreporthisposition.Withdawncoming,Samspottedtheriseofthemountainsonthehorizon.Hewasfiguringoutaroutethroughthedangerouswaterswhensuddenlythemotorstopped.“Icouldn'tbelieveit，”Samsaid.“Wewere24kilometersoffthecoast,andthemotordied.”Highwavesraisedanddroppedtheboat,sendingthemencrashingintothesides.“William,William！”Samyelledintotheradio.“Ifyou'recomingtogetme,comenow！”“We'recoming！”Williamshoutedback.Paragraph1Shortlyafter,theradiodiedandthewindcontinuedtoblowstraightoffshore,drivingthemenfartherouttosea.Paragraph2Thenextmorning,Samspottedafishingboatinthedistance.【写作分析】文章主旨：原文叙述SamWatts和船员TomBuck去海上捕鱼时，突遇风暴，在危险之际SamWatts做出了艰难的抉择：割断鱼线，损失了价值数千万美元的设备和鱼。虽然和老板报告了自己的位置，然而SamWatts和TomBuck船上的发动机熄火。续写部分应叙述他们被救出的过程。续写第一段：根据首句关键信息“theradiodied”和“drivingthemenfartherouttosea”可知该段应叙述Sam和Tom在发动机熄火和无线电死机的情况下，被困海上面临死亡。此时应用心理活动描写，描写他们的恐惧以及Sam后悔的心情，后悔自己不顾风暴的警告固执地出海的决定。续写第二段：根据首句关键信息“afishingboat”结合原文中提到到海上寻找他们的William可知，该段应叙述他们最终获救。该段的叙述可利用动作描写显示他们见到来营救他们的船只时高兴的心情。【参考范文】Paragraph1Shortlyafter,theradiodiedandthewindcontinuedtoblowstraightoffshore,drivingthemenfartherouttosea.FearseizedTomandhewastrembling,forthewaterhadnotonlywethisclothesbutalsoruinedhishopeofsurviving.Sammurmured,“Iwaswarnedthatastormwascoming.Haditnotbeenformystubbornness,wewouldnothavelostourequipmentandhadtofacesuchaterriblesituation.”Hisvoicegraduallydisappearedaswavesrockedtheboat,makingterrifyingsounds.Afterwhatseemedtobeacentury,agreatdarknessfell.Exhausted,theyfellasleep.Paragraph2Thenextmorning,Samspottedafishingboatinthedistance.HeexcitedlywokeTomup.Tomrubbedhiseyesandstared.Oncehecaughtsightoftheboat,hewasalsolitup.Thechanceofsurvivingmadethemregainstrengthandtheybegantoshoutloudly.Theboatsawthemandtheywentaboard.OntheboattheymetWilliamandothercrewmembers.Althoughtheyhadlostthousandsofdollars,theycametounderstandthevalueofhope.【检测训练】1.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Tobythecatwasinasmallcardboardboxmarked“freekittens”whenDaisymethimandtookhimhome.Andfromthatmomenton,helovedboxes.Hesleptinhatboxes,giftboxesandtakeoutfoodboxes.HesleptinDaisy’ssockdrawer,ifsheleftitopen.Whenhewasakitten,thesizeofasmallloafofbread,hehadsleptinshoeboxes.Buthegrewandgrew,andnowhewasalotbiggerthanaloafofbread.Whenhetriedtosleepinashoebox,hisfurrystomachhungoverthesides.Tobydidn’tjustsitinboxes,though.Sometimeshesatinflowerpots,orlaundrybaskets.Daisyhadabeautifuldollhouseforherbirthday,adarkgreenthree-storyhousewithlotsoffurniture.Daisylovedit.SodidToby.Helikedtopushthefurnitureoutofalltheroomsandsitinthebedroomonthesecondfloor.OnedayDaisycamehomefromschool,andshecouldn’tfindToby.Hewasn’tinthedollhouse,orhersockdrawer,eventhoughshe’dforgottentocloseit.“Mom,Dad!”Daisywailed.“Tobyisgone!”Daisy’smomlookedintheattic.Therewereboxesanddustbunnies,andevenamousethathadescapedToby’snotice,butnoToby.Daisy’sdadlookedinthekitchencabinets.Therewerepotsandpans,andcansofsoup,butnoToby.Suddenly—“Ifoundhim!”Daisycried.Thebigcatwasinsidehermom’snewglassvase,andhedidn’tlookhappyatall.Daisytippedthevaseovergentlyandtriedtopullhimout,butTobyjusthowled.“We’llhavetobreakthevasetogethimout!”Daisycried.Nowhermomdidn’tlookhappy.Itwasabeautifulvase.“No,”saidherdad.“Ifwebreakit,theglasspiecesmighthurtToby.Maybewecanputbutterontheinsideofthevaseandslidehimout,likethetimeyougotthatringstuckonyourfinger.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Immediately,Daisyfetchedsomebutter.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Soontheywereatthevet'soffice.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.阅读下面材料，根据所给内容进行续写,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasdeepintothenightmanyyearsago.Therainjustcamepouringdownoutside.Anelderlymanandhiswifeenteredthelobby(大厅)ofasmallhotelinPhiladelphia,USA.Tryingtogetoutoftherain,thecoupleapproachedthefrontdeskhopingtogetaroomtostayinforthenight.“Couldyoupossiblygiveusaroomhere?”thehusbandasked.Theclerk,afriendlyyoungmanwithawinningsmile,lookedatthecoupleandexplainedthattherewerethreeconferencesinthetown."Allofourroomsaretaken,"theclerksaid.“ButIcan’tsendanicecouplelikeyououtintotherainatoneo'clockatnight.Wouldyouperhapsbewillingtosleepinmyroom?It'snotexactlyasuite,butitwillbegoodenoughtomakeyoucomfortableforthenight.”Whenthecoupledeclined,theyoungmanpressedon."Don'tworryaboutme.I'llmakeoutjustfine,"theclerktoldthem.Sothecoupleagreed.Ashepaidhisbillthenextmorning,theelderlymansaidtotheclerk,“Youarethekindofmanagerwhoshouldbethebossofthebesthotel.MaybesomedayI'llbuildoneforyou.”Theclerklookedatthemandsmiled.Thethreeofthemhadagoodlaugh.Astheydroveaway,theelderlycoupleagreedthatthehelpfulclerkwasindeedexceptional,asfindingpeoplewhoarebothfriendlyandhelpfulisn'teasy.Threeyearspassed.Theclerkhadalmostforgottenthethingwhenhereceivedaletterfromtheelderlyman.Itrecalledthatstormynight,whenheofferedhiskindhelptotheelderlycouple.Intheenvelope,therewasaround-triptickettoNewYork,andaletteraskingtheyoungmantopaythemavisit.Theyoungmandecidedtosetoutimmediately.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:“Doyoustillremembermypromiseyearsago?”theelderlymansaidtotheyoungman.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:“Youmustbejoking,”theyoungmansaid.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mr.Taylorcheckedagain:water,food,bandage,medicines,acompass,andamapwrappedinplastic...Bingo!Heputallthathepreparedforthecominghikingintohisbackpack.Mr.Taylorwasfondofhiking,thistimeinparticular,foritwasthefirsttimeforhimtohikewithhistwosons,HarryandJoel.JoellikedreadingbooksaboutexplorersandHarryjoinedthehikingclubinhisschoolthisterm.Itwillbeanunforgettableexperience,definitely,hewhisperedtohimselfunconsciouslyasmilespreadingoverhisface.HarryandJoel,however,arguedforthefirstthreemilesoftheirhikingtrip.HarryaccusedJoelofwearingsmellyoldshoes.JoelblamedHarryforusingallofthebugspray（喷雾防虫剂）.HarrytoldJoelhesmelledterrible.JoelcalledHarryacoward（懦夫）.“Willthetwoofyoujustquietdownandenjoyourhiketogether?”theirfathersaid."You’remissingallofthebeautifulscenery!"Itwastrue.NeitherJoelnorHarryhadtakennoticeofthebeartheirfatherhadspiedatthestartoftheirtrip.Theyhadn’tlookedupattheeaglehepointedoutoverhead.Worstofall,theyhadn’tpaidanyattentiontotheturnsandtwistsalongthewaywhiletheycontinuedtheirargument.“Joelthrewastickatme!”Harryscreamed."That’snottrue!”Joelshoutedback.Mr.Taylorcouldnolongercontainhisanger."Andbothofyouneedtostoparguing!"heerupted.Asheturnedtofacethem,hisleftfootcaughtonaroot.Heslippedbackwardanddownmuddybank,fallingintotheriverthatranalongsidethepath,HarryandJoelracedtotheirfather’sassistance.Theyhelpedhimupoutofthewater,andthendraggedhiswetbackpackupontoland.Fortunately,theirwet-throughfatherfoundhimselfjustslightlyinjured.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Buthisglassescameoffwhenhefellinthewater.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:“Justcalmdown."Mr.Taylorshouted,"Withoutmyglasses,weneedtoworktogethertofindourway."____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。JesseDuftonwasbornwithageneticcondition,retinitispigmentosa(色素性视网膜炎),andovertheyears,hiseyesightgraduallyworsened.BythetimehegottouniversityinBathtostudyChemistryithadgottothepointwherehecouldn’treallyseeimagesatall,onlythedifferencebetweenlightanddark.Andafewyearslater,hewasalmost100%blind.Jesse’smumwasateacherandhisdadranacharity,andthey’vealwaysencouragedandsupportedhimineverything.Jessestartedclimbingwhenhewasyoung.Hisdadtookhimuphisfirstrockroutewhenhewastwo.Allhisearlyclimbingwasoutdoortraditionalclimbing.HisdadhadbeenintheMountainRescueandwaspartofamountaineeringclub,sotheywouldgoforweekendsawayclimbingthroughouttheUK.Jesse’sfathertaughthimeverythingandguidedhisfirstrouteoutsidewhenhewas11.Atthistimehehadabout30%blurry(模糊不清的)centralvision.Hecouldjustseewellenoughtoplacerockequipment,butnotwellenoughtopickouttheroutesfromtheground.AtuniversityhejoinedtheMountaineeringClubandwasabletoclimbmuchmorefrequently.Theyhadregulartripstoindoorwallsandweekendsawayoutdoors.HedevelopedagreatcircleofclimbingfriendsandwentonmultipletripstoEurope.OnthesehestartedAlpineclimbingandiceclimbingtoo.Butwhenhissightdroppedtoalevelwherehecouldnolongerread,itstartedtobedifficulttoplaceequipmentashecouldn’tseewhetheritwasproperlyseated.Healsostoppedbeingabletopickouttheholdsatindoorwalls.Jessethoughthemighthavetogiveupclimbingashiseyesightgotworse.Buthisparentsnevergiveuphopesforhim.TheyplannedaclimbingforthefamilyandencouragedJessetohaveatryagain.Jessesmiledbecauseheknewhisparentswouldalwaysbehisbestguide.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Itwasroutelikemilestone(里程碑)anditwasnoteasy.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SomepeopleaskedJessewhyhechosetotryclimbing.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“MeetonemoreandI’lldefinitelyaskafavour.”Ginathought,lookingupatthestreetlights,everythingimmersed(沉浸在)inthedarknight.“Alas!Thisunluckystuffi”Shesaidtoherself,helpless.Behindhercamethejinglingofbicyclebells.HardlyhadGinaletout“ah”whenacyclingyoungmansweptpast.“Why,thecyclistwasback?”Ginawhisperedtoherself.TheyoungmansuddenlyreturnedandwasalreadyinfrontofGinabeforesheknewit.Gina’sheartwaspoundingunderhightension.“Whatwillhedoonsuchadarknight?”“Calledmejustnow?”Theyoungmangotoffhisbike.Ginashookherheadrepeatedlybutgently.Astrongsenseofself-defenseovercameherandsherefusedtosayyes.“Somethingwrongwithyourbike?”Apairofsmilingeyesmethers.Ginabecamesomewhatcalm.“Thefronttirehasgoneflat.”sheresponded,headdown,arayofhopearising.“Well,Ican’thelpitwithnotools.”Theyoungmanmanagedasmile.Gina’sheartsankagain.“Doyoulivefar?”theyoungmansearchedherfaceforananswer.“Me?”sheasked,keepingpushingherbikeforward.“Well,ontheleftsideofthestreetendisarepairshop.Wishyouluck!”Withthesewords,theyoungmanrodeaway.Ginaalmostburstintotears.“It’salmostmidnight.WherecanIfindarepairshop?Aliar.”Shestartedtohatetheyoungman.Almostattheendofthestreet,Ginacouldn’thelpbutlookup.Nearthesidewalk,therewasreallyashopwiththelightstillon.1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Shepausedhesitantly,andoutoftheshopcameagirlinhertwenties._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Withthehelpoftheyoungmanandthegirl,thetirewassoonrepaired._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。OnabeautifulThursdayofthisApril,AmyandAlanGreentooktheirdaughterAbbeyoutforawalkintheneighborhood.Ontheirwayback,AmypickedupakiteforAbbeyfromtheDollarTree,bluewithrainbows—therearealotofrainbowsdecoratinghomesaroundtheregionthesedays,whichhelpsmakelifelessdullduringthecoronaviruspandemi