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考向38读后续写之如何延续故事高潮故事中的高潮(climax)也通常是故事的转折点(turningpoint),是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的“危机”点。有时它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点时,发生了一些事情,或者人物必须做出决定,从而导致一个结果或其他。营造故事发展的高潮可以通过营造冲突实现。冲突带来紧迫感,因此营造冲突是一种有效地将故事推向情节发展的高潮的方式。在英语读后续写中,我们可以可通过营造:①人物之间的冲突(人物观点不同,竞争需要等);②人物与环境之间的冲突;③增加障碍,让人物克服挑战;④放大内心活动冲突也有助于设置一个高度紧张和不确定的气氛。例如,如2020浙江高考7月卷中,续写第二段首句中提到thatverymoment,那么第一段可营造一个冲突,把此刻设计为整个经历中最危险的时刻,即北极熊马上要突破围栏冲进来了。【典例赏析】1.常见故事高潮Alittlegirlhasbeensearchingforherlostdog.Allofasudden,shehearsabarkcomingfromaroundthecorner,andshelooksaroundtosee...Kevinhasworkedveryhardtotryoutforthesoccerteamatschool.Thecoachhaspostedalistofthisyear'steammembersonhisofficedoor.Kevinwalksforwardtolookatthelist....Mary'sparentshavebeendiscussingwhetherornottomovetoanotherstate.TheycallMaryandhersisterdowntotalkwiththemabouttheirdecision...Loishasperformedinthestategymnasticsfinals.Shewaitsanxiouslytohearthenamesofthewinners.Theannouncersays,"Andfirstplacegoesto..."2.文学名著中的一些故事高潮ThedeathsofRomeo(whokillshimselfbecausehethinksJulietisdead)andJuliet(whokillsherselfwhensheawakesandseesRomeodead).RomeoandJuliet,Shakespeare(《罗密欧和朱丽叶》)WhenGastonandthetownspeoplecometoattackthebeast,andBelleadmitsherloveforthebeast.BeautyandtheBeast,Disney(《美女与野兽》)In"TheThreeLittlePigs,"suspensebuildsupuntiltheconfrontationbetweenthethirdpigandthewolf.Thisconfrontationistheclimax.(三只小猪)Howtocreateaclimaxofastory?一、高潮冲突思维1:.增加外部冲突增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感,将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃。1.角色之间的冲突(人物观点差异,竞争需要等)【真题再现】(2017年11月浙江英语高考)Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn'twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.开车找旅馆---徒劳无功---母亲建议搭帐篷在他人后院---David和我倍感紧张,心有不悦(母子的观点不一)2.角色与环境之间的冲突【真题再现】(2017年6月浙江英语高考)ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.……hesawinstantlythatitwasn'tadogatall,butawolf:quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac'sheartjumped.……,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,…….Thenit……,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellback……Mac骑车独自行,路遇饿狼,与之搏斗,险象环生。(人(角色)----狼(环境)大战)3.时间依赖的发展:决策变得紧急【真题再现】(2017年6月浙江英语高考)Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim."Getintothecar."PaulshoutedatMac.MacjumpedoffthebikeandslidintothecarwithoutdelayasthewolfwasjusttwostepsawayandwasabouttotearMacintopieces.Whatanarrowescape!骑车突停面前---急喊上车---Max上车避险---饿狼近在咫尺(此情此景,刻不容缓)4.增加的障碍:人物角色必须克服挑战,以达到他们的目标【真题再现】(2018年6月浙江英语高考)Butbeforewejumpedoffthehorses,wefoundthatwehadbeenoffthebeatentrackandgotlost.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Exhaustedandhungry,Iwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.小兔突现---马儿受惊---草原迷路(障碍1)----天色渐黑(障碍2)----又累又饿(障碍3)----心理恐慌(障碍4)二、高潮冲突思维2:放大内心冲突放大内心冲突(你的角色的内心斗争)也有助于建立一个高度紧张和不确定的时刻。【真题再现】(2016年10月浙江英语高考)Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn'thelpcrying,"Hadn'tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn'tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.夫妇争吵---独自行走---荒野走散---夜色渐黑---独处森林---阴森恐怖---后悔莫及(内心冲突的刻画)内心独白(往昔对比+虚拟语气使用+旁边描写是常见技巧之一)三、高潮冲突思维3:使用环境描写增加不确定性充分利用环境描写可以起到烘托故事高潮的作用,具体方法可以看上期读后续写微技能。当故事角色在碰到困难时候,我们往往要加大笔墨来描写故事环境的黑暗,恐怖和不祥。强化环境描写增强了高潮元素。我们感受到了紧张的倍增。【典例赏析】Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest(黑暗).Evenworse,thetemperaturesuddenlydroppeddramatically.(寒冷)Itdidn’ttakelongfortheforesttobeenvelopedindarkness(黑暗).Herraspingbreathsteamed(寒冷)inthemoonlightandherthroatwasparchedfromthirst.【检测训练】1.阅读下面材料,根据其内界和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ihavekeptawatchfrommygrandfather.WhenIwasaschoolboy,thewatchhungbymygrandfather'sbed.ThefacewasmarkedwithelegantRomannumeralsandthecasewasgold.ItwasasplendidwatchandIoftenstaredatitlonginglysittingwithmygrandfather.Hewouldoftenaskaboutmyprogressatschool.ThedayItoldhimmysuccessintheexaminations,hewasovercomewithpleasure.“You'llbegoingtoanewschoolnext.Andthenyou'llgotouniversity,willyou?”heasked.“Butyou'llneedplentyofpatience.Patienceandhardwork.That'sthewaytosucceed.”Hetookoffthewatchandwoundit.“Itwasgivenmeforfiftyyearsoffaithfulservicewithmyfirm,”hesaidproudly.Finally,hehandedmethewatchduetotheprogressinschool.Iheldit,feelingitsweight.AsIwasleavinghim,hesaid,“Andyou'llnotforgetwhatItoldyou?”Iwassuddenlyverymoved.“No,Granddad,”Ipromised,“I'llnot.”Arrivinghome,mymotherwastoholditintrustuntilsheconsideredmeoldenoughtolookafterit,butIprotestedsostronglythatshefinallyagreedtohangitwhereIcouldalwaysseeit.Thesummerendedanditwastimeformetoenterthenewschool.Inevermadefriendseasilythere.Oneboy,Crawley,wasawelltodofellowwhosewayofimpressinguswastoshowoffhispossessions.Hisbicyclewasnew;hisbootswereofthebesthide;everything,infact,wasbetterthanours—untilhebroughtawatch.Crawleysaidhiswatchwasabsolutelythefinestwatch.“Ihaveabetterwatch,”Iannounced.“Well,showittous,”Crawleysaidsneeringly(讽刺地).“I'llbringitthisafternoon,”Isaid.“Thenyou'llsee.”Irodemybikehome,wonderinghowIwouldpersuademymothertoletmetakethewatch.Luckily,shesteppedoutsideandIslippedthewatchintomypocket.1.续写词数应为150左石:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Irodemybikefasttoschoolafterlunch,excitementthroughme.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:WhenIsaidmymothercouldn'tletmebringthewatch,theyburstintolaughter.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。NoOneWillEverKnowKaren,JudyandIwerethelastonesbackintheclassroomafterlunch.Alloftheothersixthgraderswerealreadyoutside,sinceitwasapleasantspringday.“LookatwhatIfoundthismorninginthestoragecupboardwhenIwasgettingoutsomeartsuppliesforMrs.Eiffler.”saidKaren,holdingupawoodenboxfilledwithshortpiecesofchalkineverycoloroftherainbow."Wow!Whatfunitwouldbetowriteonthechalkboardwhileeveryoneisoutside.”Judysaid.“ButM“s.Eifflerdoesn'tallowustowriteonthechalkboard.”Iresponded,alreadyfeelingguilty.“Don'tbeafraid,Janet.Noonewilleverknow,”saidKaren.Iunwillinglyjoinedmyfriendsintheartwork,butwasafraidofbeingcaught.Iknewwellthatwewerebreakingnotone,buttwoclassrules.Thesecondrule-wasthatnoonewasallowedtostayinsideatnoonwithoutawrittenexcusefromhomeiftheweatherwasnice.Tryingvariouscolors,wedrewhouses,treesandthree-dimensionalboxes.Itwasfun!ThenJudyhadanidea."We'reallright-handed.Let'sseewhocanwriteournamesbestusingourlefthands.JudyandKarenpickeduptheirchalkandstartedwriting.Ichoseawhitepiecefromtheboxandwrotemyname.“IthinkJudyisthewinner,”saidKaren.“Hersisthebest.”“We’dbettergetthisboardcleanedoffbeforeMrs.Eifflercomesback,”saidJudy,erasingourartworkfromtheboard.Everythingcameoffbutmyname!Indisbelief;IlookedcarefullyatthechalkIheldinmysweatyhand.Itwasn'tchalkatall,butasmallpieceofwhitecolorcrayon.Mymotherhadasaying:"Fools,namesandfacesalwaysappearin.publicplaces.”Ineverunderstoodfullywhatitmeantbefore.NowIdid!Mykneesfeltweak.WhatwouldMrs.Eifflerdotome?Andtheteacherwouldbereturningsoon.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1“Quick,let’sgetsomewetpapertowels,”saidJudy.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2Wewerejustslippingintoourdeskswhenthebellrang.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。InDecember2020,FloresGonzalezhadher4-year-olds,LunaandGianella,tietheirliststotwoballoonsandreleasethemintotheskyabovetheirhomeinLiberal,Kansas.ItwastheirwayofreachingSantaClaus.FloresGonzalezthoughtitwasimportanttodosomethingspecialforherdaughtersbecauseofthehardyeartheyhadduringthepandemic(大流行病).Theschoolswereshutdownandshewasoutofworkformorethantwomonths.Everyoneseemedtobeinlowspirits.Shewantedtocheerthefamilyupandwantedthegirlstofeelthat2020wasanotheryearspentwithmommakingbeautifulmemories.Itwasneverwiththepurposethatsomeonewouldfindtheballoons.Shethoughttheballoonswouldjustfloatawayanddisappearsomewhereinatreenearby.ButoneoftheballoonsdidmakeittoAlvinBamburg,whowasdeerhuntinginGrandCane,Louisiana,inlateDecemberwhenhespottedaballoontangled(纠缠)inatree.Hetoldhimselfheneededtogetthetrashoutofthewoods.However,whenhegotit,henoticedafoldedyellowpieceofpapersealedwitharedstaranditwasaChristmaslistfromagirlnamedLuna.ShehadaskedSantatobringhercandy,aSpiderManball,aFrozendollandadachshund(腊肠狗)puppy,whichwashermostdesiredpresent.TheholidayskeptAlvinBamburgandhiswifebusy.Theyhadfamilyreunionsandorganizedseveralcharitypartiestohelpwhoeverneededhelpbuttheydidn’tforgetaboutthelist.InearlyJanuary,BamburgsharedhisdiscoverywithfamilyandfriendsonFacebook.“Iwouldlovetoknowwhenitwaslaunched.Itlookslikeittravelled600miles,”hewrote.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。SomanypeoplesharedthepostthatiteventuallyreachedFloresGonzalez.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aftermonthsofcommunication,itwastimefortheBamburgstogivethemonelastpresent.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Father’sDayChessItwasDale'sthirdSundayvolunteeringattheretirementhome.Hehadthoughtitwouldbeagoodwaytogiveback.Buttodayhejustfelttired.Whileonashortbreak,Daletookawalkthroughthegarden.Therewerepeoplesittingonbenches,chattingtogether.Awomansatknitting,lookingverypleasedwithherself.Thestrandsofbrightly-coloredyarndisappearedquicklythroughherhands.Acrossthecourtyard,therewasamansittingaloneatatablewithachessboardinfrontofhim.Dalewatchedwithcuriosityasthemanwouldstareatthepieces,thenmovethem,andthenwoulddothesamefromtheothersideoftheboard.Onhiswayhomeafterthedayhadended,Dalefoundhimselfthinkingabouttheman.Howhewashunchedoverindeepthought,playingagameagainsthimself.Howodd,hethought.EachSunday,Dalewouldseethemandoingthesamething.Whileeveryoneelsetalkedwithoneanotherorhappilycarriedon,themanwouldsit,slightlybentoverandscratchinghischin.Hiseyesrarelycameoffofthechessboard.OneSunday,Dalewenttothegardenonhisbreakexpectingtoseethemanathisnormalspot.Buthewasn'tthere.ItwasFather'sDayandthereweremanyvisitorsatthehome.Daleshruggedandthoughtthemanmustbebusywithhisfamily.Thatafternoon,Dalewasmoppingthehallwayswhenhehappenedtopassbytheman'sroom.Thedoorwasslightlyopenandhecouldseethemansittinginachairnexttothewindow,peeringoutatthecourtyard.Daleknockedlightlyandaskedtocomein.Themannodded.Dalesawacollectionofframedphotographsonthebedsidetable.“Arethoseyourchildren?”heasked.“Yes,they’reallgrownandlivefaraway.Theyhavetheirownkidsnow,”hereplied.Dale,notwantingthemantobealoneonFather'sDay,hadanidea.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para.1:Hewentoutsideandgotthechessboardfromthetable.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2:Dalewasgladthathevolunteered.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。PamBalesplannedasix-hourhikethroughNewHampshire^Mount.Onthedashboard(汽车仪表板)wasadetailedplanensuringshecouldreturnbeforethearrivalofsomeforecastedbadweather.Differentfromformerhike,though,thistime,shehadpackedforalmosteveryaccidentandintendedtowalkalone.Atabout8a.m.,she'dcheckedtheweatherforecast.Balesknewfromexperiencethatherhikewasrealistic.Besides,shehadtwoemergencyplansandextralayersofclothingtobetterprotecthercoretemperatureasconditionschanged.Balesfeltexcitedasshewalkedupintosnowypaths.Shewaswearingafleecetanktop(绒衣)andhikingpants,andnoglovesorhatbecausetheairwasmild.Thirtyminuteslater,sheclimbedintocolderairanddeepersnows.Shenowwasinaquarter-zipfleecetopandgloves.At10a.m.?theweatherwasshowingitsteeth.Balesaddedmorelayerstoresistcoldwindsanddensefog.Makingherwayacrossthesnow-coveredridge,shenoticedsomething:asinglesetoffootprintsmadebyapairofsneakers.Notgivingthemmuchthought,shewalkedon.By11a.m.?Baleswasgettingcold.Shedecidedtoreturntohercar.Onherwaydown,sheagainspottedthesneakertracks,whichsuddenlymadeahardleft-handturnoffthetrail.Nowshefeltgenuinelyalarmed.Shewassurethehikerlosthiswayinthelowvisibility.IfBalescontinuedtofollowthetracks,she'daddriskandtimetoherreturn.Butshecouldn'tletthisgo.Sheturnedtotheleftandcalledout,“Hello!"Nothing.Balesfollowedthetracks,roundedaslightcomerandsawamansittingmotionless.Heworetennissneakers,shorts,alightjacketandfingerlessgloves.Hisskinwaspaleandhehadaglazed(呆滞的)lookonhisface.uOh5hello/5Balesapproachedandsaid,"What'syourname?”Themandidn'treact.Obviously,nothingwasconnectingforhimandhewasinreallybigtrouble.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Balesstoppedbeingacuriousandconcernedhiker,andbeganafull-onrescuemission._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Overthenexthour,themanbegantomoveandspeak._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Likemostchildren,Itookmyparentsforgranted.Itwasn'tuntilIbecameanadultthatIrealizedtheirdesiretomakeadifferenceinthelivesofothers.MamaandDaddyperformedtheirangelmagicwithneitherfanfare(炫耀)noradesireforrecognition.BecausetheirkindnesstootherswassomethingIacceptedasamatterofcourse,Imightneverhaveevaluatedthisaspectoftheirpersonalitieswereitnotforaneventthatmymothermentionedinpassing.ArizonainJulyusheredinthemonsoon(季风)season,whichwasinfullswingandjustthatmorninghadhittheSouthernArizonadesertwithseverethunder,lightining,rain,andhighwinds.MamaandDaddychosetospendthedaywanderingthedry,air-conditionedmall,havingabitetoeat,andtakinginamovie.ItseemedanicewaytospendaSaturdayafternoonwhileleavingthestormoutdoors.Theychoseacasualrestaurantforlunchandwerereadingthemenuwhentheirwaitress,ayoun
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