Unit5Goodmanners第4课时Writing（教师版）八年级英语下册讲义（牛津译林版）

Unit5Goodmanners第4课时writing八年级英语下册同步精品讲义（牛津译林版）知识精讲本单元主题是学会餐桌礼仪。目的是教会学生就餐礼仪。知识精讲主要内容包括:大家到齐了才能开始;就餐时不要吵闹;不要张大嘴巴吃饭;不要含着食物讲话;不要够别人盘子里的东西;离开之前要等别人吃完。

能力拓展能力拓展假如你是李晨,你的美国笔友Linda打算来中国度假。请你根据下面所给的要点提示给她写一封不少于80词的电子邮件,简单介绍一下中国的风俗与餐桌礼仪。

要点提示:

1.赴宴要准时,见面要微笑、握手。

2.每次不要吃太多。

3.当你吃饱了,对主人的劝菜应礼貌回绝。

4.告辞时,要对主人表示感谢。

思路点拨

本单元主要向别人介绍餐桌礼仪,要从以下三个方面人手:

A)赴宴要准时,见面要微笑、握手。

B)不要吃得太多,吃饱了对主人的劝菜应礼貌回绝。

C)告辞时,要对主人表示感谢。

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

DearLinda,

I’mgladtohearthatyouwilletomycountryforvacation.Differentcountrieshavedifferentcustomsandtablemanners.InChina,ifyou’reinvitedtodinner,youresupposedtobeontimeandshakehandswiththehostwithasmile.Whileeating,youshouldnoteattoomuchatatime.It’sgoodmannerstochewwithyourmouthclosedanduseanapkintowipeyourmouthsometimes.Whenyouarefullbutthehoststillasksyoutohelpyourselftosomemorefood,youshouldsay“Thankyou.

It’sdelicious,butI’mfull.”It’spolitetosaythankswhileleaving.Haveagoodtrip!

Yours,

LiChen

分层提分分层提分A今年是我市创建全国文明城市的关键一年。作为中学生，我们应积极参与。请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。l.尊敬老师，对人礼貌；2.帮助他人，友善待人；3.遵守交通规则，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯；4.保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不踩草地等；5.个人观点。参考词汇：尊敬

respect；对……礼貌bepoliteto；斑马线

zebracrossingOurcityisnowmakingitsefforttobeeanationalcivilizedcity.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ourcityisnowmakingitsefforttobeeanationalcivilizedcity.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?Weshouldrespectourteachersandbepolitetoothers.Weshouldalsohelpthoseinneedandbefriendlytopeoplearoundus.Besides,wemustobeytrafficrules.Whencrossingthestreet,weshouldwalkonthezebracrossing.Andwemustn'tgoacrossthestreetwhenthetrafficlightsarered.What'smore,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Forexample,Wemustn'tsteponthegrassandclimbtrees.Wemustn'tthrowlitter'everywhere.Let'stryourbesttomakeourhometownacivilizedcity.【详解】试题分析：本文是提纲类作文。首先认真审题和阅读提示。根据提示（作为中学生，我们应积极参与创建全国文明城市。）可知此文时态主要是一般现在时，要使用建议型句型（weshould/must/aresupposedto…），动笔前要认真阅读提示：（l.尊敬老师，对人礼貌；2.帮助他人，友善待人；3.遵守交通规则，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯；4.保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不踩草地等；5.个人观点。），内容要包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译。不要写得太少，字数在80词以上。要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。（一）根据要点列提纲：l.尊敬老师，对人礼貌：respectourteachersandbepolitetoothers.；2.帮助他人，友善待人：helpthoseinneedandbefriendlytopeoplearoundus.；3.遵守交通规则，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯：obeytrafficrules，Whencrossingthestreet,weshouldwalkonthezebracrossing，mustn'tgoacrossthestreetwhenthetrafficlightsarered.；4.保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不踩草地等：weshouldprotectourenvironment.，Wemustn'tsteponthegrassandclimbtrees.Wemustn'tthrowlittereverywhere.；5个人观点：Let'stryourbesttomakeourhometownacivilizedcity.（二）连词成句，连句成篇，注意使用连词；（三）写完以后再阅读一遍，检查是否有语法、单词拼写等错误，或不合适的地方。点睛：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）注意给出的起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。B目前，你所在的学校正在积极创建全市文明校园，请你以校学生会的名义就“创建文明校园”这一主题，根据下列提示用英语写一封80词左右的倡议书。要点提示如下：1.保持教室的整洁，不乱扔垃圾；

2.不在公共场所大声喧哗，图书馆保持安静；3.遵守交通规则，总是排队；

4.举止有礼，互帮互助；

5.……Dearschoolmates,Ourschoolistryingtobeabetterplaceforallofus.Weknowgoodmannersarereallyimportant.Andwecandosomethingforit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’sstartfromourselves!TheStudents’UnionJune13th,2018【答案】Dearschoolmates,Ourschoolistryingtobeabetterplaceforallofus.Weknowgoodmannersarereallyimportant.Andwecandosomethingforit.Inordertomakeourschoolmorebeautiful,weshouldkeepourclassroomscleaneveryday.Remembernottodroplittereverywhere.Andweshouldremembernottolaughortalkloudlyafterclassinpublicplaces.Whenweareinthelibrary,wemustkeepquiet.It’salsoimportanttofollowtrafficruleseverywhereandqueueforeverything.Weshouldalwaysbehavepolitelyandhelpeachotheranytime.Goodmannersmakeourschoolbetter,aswellasus.

Let’sstartfromourselves!TheStudents’UnionJune13th,2018【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，以校学生会的名义就“创建文明校园”这一主题，写一封倡议书。【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，写一封“创建文明校园”的倡议书。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：weshould……，Whenweare……，It’salsoimportantto……，Goodmannersmake……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了为了让学校成为一个更好的地方，我们有一些事要做，接下来介绍我们应该做的事，最后提倡要从我们自己开始。此处inorderto,remembernottodosth,keepquiet,eachother,aswellas等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。C假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom打算来安徽度假。请你根据下面所给的提示内容给他写一封电子邮件,简单介绍一下我们中国的风俗与餐桌礼仪。要点如下：1.会面亲戚朋友时要微笑,握手；2.每次赴宴要准时,同时不宜吃得太多；3.当你吃饱了,对主人的劝菜应礼貌回绝；4.离别时,要对主人表示谢意。注意：1.词数80～100；2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearTom,I'mgladtohearthatyouwilletoAnhuiforwintervacation.Differentcountrieshavedifferentcustomsandtablemanners.InChina,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.LiHua【答案】DearTom,I'mgladtohearthatyouwilletoAnhuiforwintervacation.Differentcountrieshavedifferentcustomsandtablemanners.InChina,youshouldsmileandshakehandswithyourfriendsorrelatives.Ifyou'reinvitedtodinner,youmustbeontime.Whileeating,youshouldnoteattoomuchatatime.It'sgoodmannerstosay“thanks”tothehostwhenheasksyoutohelpyourselftosomefood.Whenyouarefull,butthehoststillasksyoutohelpyourselftomorefood,youshouldsay,“Thankyou.It'sdelicious,butI'mfull.”It'spolitetosaythankswhileleaving.Haveagoodtrip!Bestwishes.LiHua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本题属于书信作文。题目要求以LiHua的身份向即将来安徽的美国笔友Tom写一封介绍中国风俗及餐桌礼仪的书信。2.写作指导：首先开篇已给出，中间要写明在中国具体的风俗和餐桌礼仪，最后表示对Tom的欢迎与祝福。人称主要采用第一人称，时态主要采用一般现在时。在描述中国风俗和餐桌礼仪时要把具体细节表达清楚，前后要贯通连贯。D学生会将要邀请MrBlack做一个关于礼仪的演讲，请根据下列内容，写一个不少于70词的通知，不包括所给的开头和结尾。Nameofthetalk:GoodtelephonemannersTime:2p.m.,13MayPlace:TheschoolhallContent:Someimportantrules,forexample:answeraphoneassoonaspossible,saysorryfordelays(延误),keepyourvoicedown,beyourselfandspeaknaturally,saygoodbyebeforehangingupHello,everyone,MayIhaveyourattention,please?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________