读后续写课件高三下学期英语作文复习专项

读后续写

其实很简单~其实并不难~两段共150词，每段70~80词左右，写6~7句话。圈出故事中的人物、时间、地点、原因、事件5Wh:who,when,where,why,what情节构思注重逻辑和情节衔接。第一段首句与第二段首句定为一段；第二段首句与正能量结局定为一段。先读文章，理清头绪读懂文章，抓住矛盾中心难点30mins写作如何理清头绪，避免“想多想歪想偏”原则一：

action

response

某人做出行动引起反应三原则Monsaid:“Whydidn.twefindahousewithabackyard(后院)andaskifwecouldsetupatentthere”DavidandIbecamenervous.

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responseDavid与这位母亲打招呼讲述自己的相似经历这位母亲感到羞愧的原则二：

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solution

抓住故事中心矛盾矛盾最终会被解决曲折性原则抓住故事中心矛盾角色与角色之间的矛盾角色与环境之间的矛盾角色与自己内心的矛盾内心独白母亲羞愧内心独白（忏悔、认识错误）正能量结局Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janewassotired,hungry,andextremelyfrightened.Shethoughttoherself,“IfonlyIhadnotquarreled(争吵)withTom.WhereisTomHemusthavemadetheemergencycall.WhatIneedisenoughcourage.IfIcontinuemyspiritstomorrow,Iwillbelikelytoguidethehelicopter.”

conflict

solution内心独白原则三：

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positive

遇到困难

正能量结局(happyending)正能量原则TheSwimmingDuckStars（游鸭状的星星）小女孩的家庭和村庄在寒冷中陷入寂寥受高人指点，当游鸭状的星星升起时，世界便温暖小女孩每天都去守星星最终等来了希望与温暖的降临，村庄又回归了幸福Canikarubbedhercoldhandstogetherandstampedherfeet.Herbreath,likesmallclouds,sailedoutofhermouthandnoseasshewalkedthroughthevillage.Notabirdsang,notadogbarked,notahorsewhinnied.Herfeelingofdreadmeltedaway.

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positive

happyending语言表达记流水账有代入感的优美记叙文课堂阅读、作业阅读、外刊阅读，积累背诵(say/see/hear/do/feel)+(环境/时间/地点)

故事中的人物说啥、看见啥、听见啥、做啥、有啥感受，

进行语言描写、心理描写、情绪描写、动作描写、环境描写栩栩如生、活灵活现尾段升华（凤尾）名言警句型呼应开头型概括总结型积累背诵万能升华句子助人为乐类：Therealhappinessofthisworldisnottotakebuttogive.这个世界真正的幸福不是索取而是给予。成长改变类：It’snevertoolatetogoforyourdream.Aslongasyougraspeveryopportunityandtakefulladvantageofit,youwillstandachancetorealizeyourdreams.追梦永不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。亲情类：Ifyouarethegrassinwinter,affection(亲情)isthesun,warmyourcoldbody.如果你是冬天的小草，亲情就是阳光，温暖你冰冷的身体。友情类：Afriendsinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。写作过程中的注意事项不增加多余的人物

不用过多对话不增加旁支情节

不用负能量结局不在文末设置悬念

不偏离主题不违背逻辑常理七不原则写作过程中的注意事项Para.1写好四句话Para.2首句（根据第一段提示句顺推）尾句（根据第二段提示句逆推）首句（根据第二段提示句顺推）尾句（正能量结局+主旨升华句）写作过程中的注意事项一看卷面书写二看思路、逻辑、不偏题三看语言表达、出彩句子读后续写之情绪描写高兴、兴奋一、高级词汇___________n.快乐；高兴；欢乐____________n.幸福、愉快____________vt.&n..使高兴；高兴____________n.高兴；愉快____________n.娱乐；娱乐活动____________adv.激动地joyhappinessdelightpleasureamusementexcitedly技巧1：with+情感名词（介词短语）e.g.Herhandsweretrembling(发抖)withjoy.extremelyjoy狂喜aflashofjoy一丝喜悦fullofhappiness充满喜悦asenseofhappiness幸福感一、高级词汇__________vt.&n.使激动；兴奋__________adj.令人愉快的；快乐的；高兴地__________adj.愉快的；高兴地__________adj.欣喜若狂；非常高兴thrillcheerfulmerryoverjoyed技巧2：adj/adjP作状语e.g.Delightedandthrilled,Iwenttothesupermarketwithmymother.thrilledadj.激动的excitementn.激动技巧3：with复合结构e.g.1Withprideandjoy,sheexplainedthatthesewerespecialty(特产)fromMexico(墨西哥).e.g.2Shecameuptohim,withasmileshininglikeadiamond.用来作状语或定语二、高级语块dancewithjoy/jumpforjoy_____________________givejumpintheair_____________________雀跃、高兴地跳起来高兴地蹦跶e.g.Samanthajumpedforjoywhenshefoundshehaspassedtheexam.e.g.Delightedandthrilled,Igaveajumpintheairandthenwenttothesupermarketwithmymother.二、高级语块lightup_____________________brightenone’sheart_____________________喜形于色使某人心情愉悦e.g.Asmilelighteduphisfaceandhedancedwithjoy.e.g.Thegoodnewsthathesignedupfortheadvancedliteraturesuccessfullybrightenedhisheart.

asmilelightupone’sface某人喜形于色定语从句，用来限定说明名词news读后续写我会了吗？(3’)“啊哈(Aha)！我抓住你了！”他的声音带着一丝喜悦。_____________________________________________________我高兴地点了点头，然后欢呼雀跃地跳起来。_____________________________________________________布莱恩(Brian)像一只狂喜的小白兔(rabbit)一样高兴地蹦跶着。_____________________________________________________“Aha!Icatchyou!”aflashofjoycanbenoticedinhisvoice.Inoddedwithpleasureandthenjumpedforjoy.Briangaveajumpintheairlikearabbitwithextremelyjoy.二、高级语块bewildwithjoy/delight/happiness_____________________beinagoodmood_____________________inhigh/cheerfulspirits_____________________toone’sdelight_____________________欣喜若狂心情好兴高彩烈让某人开心的是

toone’s+情绪名词“让某人……的是”onthetopoftheworld_____________________beoverthemoon_____________________amixtureofexcitementandhappiness___________________grinfromeartoear_____________________eyesareshining/twinkling/sparklingwithjoy_______________高兴坏了欣喜若狂既兴奋又开心咧嘴大笑双眸闪烁着喜悦的光芒读后续写我又会了！(5’)一看到这样一只如此可爱的兔子我就欣喜若狂。他喜形于色，双眸闪烁着喜悦的光芒。这时，一个快乐的声音从远处传来，是我们沉浸在狂喜之中。大家都笑得合不拢嘴。他高兴极了，像一只猴子一样在院子里上蹿下跳。一看到这样一只如此可爱的兔子我就欣喜若狂。_____________________________________________________他喜形于色，双眸闪烁着喜悦的光芒。_____________________________________________________Atthesightofsuch

alovelyrabbit,Iwaswildwithjoy.Asmilelituphisfaceandhiseyeswereshiningwithjoy.技巧1：with+情感名词介词短语引导原因状语从句这时，一个快乐的声音从远处传来，是我们沉浸在狂喜之中。大家都笑得合不拢嘴。_____________________________________________________他高兴极了，像一只猴子一样在院子里上蹿下跳。_____________________________________________________Thencameahappyvoicefromadistance,bathingusinextremelyjoy.Everyonewasgrinningfromeratoear.Fullofhappiness,hejumpedupanddownintheyard.Overjoyed,hejumpedupanddownintheyardlikeamonkey.技巧2：adj/adjP作状语复合句：现在分词作结果状语读后续写之情绪描写恐惧、害怕例：这只令人恐惧的老虎把她吓坏了。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、高级词汇_______________adj.害怕的、担心的_______________adj.害怕的，受惊的、惊吓的_______________v.使惊吓、使恐吓_______________n.&v.害怕_______________n.&v.恐慌_______________adj.害怕的afraidfrightenedfrightenfearscarescared技巧1：with+情感名词（介词短语）e.g.Herhandsweretrembling(发抖)withfear.一、高级词汇_______________n.惊恐v.使惊慌_______________n.恐怖_______________adj.极度惊慌的_______________n.恐怖_______________adj.令人恐惧的panicterrorterrifiedhorrorhorrible技巧2：adj/adjP作状语e.g.Terrifiedandfrightened,Iwenttothesupermarketalone.技巧3：with复合结构e.g.1Withterrorandpanic,shecouldn’thelpscreaming(尖叫).用来作状语或定语二、高级语块inpanic_______________bescaredsilly_______________freezewithterror______________withasinkingheart______________haveone’sheartinone’smouth______________jumpoutofone’sskin______________惊慌地被吓傻吓呆心情沉重地提心吊胆吓一跳

adj.愚蠢的

v.冻住；结冰

sinkv.下沉二、高级语块can’thelptrembling_______________scaredtodeath_______________havebutterfliesinone’sstomach_______________makeone’shairstandonend_______________scarethepantsoffsb_______________creepsbout_______________sitonpinsandneedles_______________情不自禁发抖吓得要死心里发慌使人毛骨悚然把某人吓得要命吓着某人如坐针毡

tremblev.发抖读后续写我更会了！(3’)我是如此害怕以至于蜷缩(crouch)在那里，情不自禁地发抖。_____________________________________________________这个消息真的把他吓坏了。_____________________________________________________比赛前她心里发慌，结果没有吃早餐。_____________________________________________________IwassofrightenedthatIcrouchedthereandcouldn’thelptrembling.Thenewsreallyscaredthepantsoffhim.Shehadbutterfliesinherstomachbeforethecompetitionsothatshedidn’teatbreakfast.读后续写我最会了！(5’)一阵强光闪过，孩子们吓得尖叫起来。_____________________________________________________Abrightlightflashedby,andthekidsweresofrightenedthattheyscreamed.高频句型读后续写高手的法宝Sbdosth,with+情绪名词“某人……做某事”Sbdosth,with+情绪名词+tearsrollingdownone’sface.“某人做某事，……的泪水顺着脸颊流下来”Atthesightof…,sbbewiledwithjoy“一看到……，某人就欣喜若狂”

Atthesightof…,sbbeoverwhelmedbyasenseof+情绪名词“一