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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwascoldoutside.Itseemedasifasnowstormwasapproaching.Aseveningfell,thewindpickedupitspace,howlingthroughthestreetslikeawoundedbeastseekingsolace(安慰)indestruction.Thenthesnowstarted.Asusual,TomandIworkedovertimeinthecompany.Afterfinishingthework,wewerereadytogohometogether.Thesnowwascomingdownevenharder.Withinminutes,Iwasinawhiteout.AftergivingTomaride,strugglingtonavigatetheicypath,Itookashortcut(近路)soastogethomeearlier.Thewindhowledandwhipped(吹打)theflakesofsnowintoafrenzy(疯狂),makingitimpossibletoseemorethanafewfeetahead.Thecarwasfrozenandgettingcoveredwithsnow,so

Isloweddownandrolleddownmydriver'ssidewindow,thinkingIcouldbetterfollowtheroadedgeandkeepastraightline.Butinfact,IhadnocluewhereIwas.Istoppedandkeptthecarrunningtostaywarm.Icalled911.Unfortunately,theoperatortoldmethattheweatherwastoobadtodomeafavorandaskedmetowaitoutthestormforthenight.Thecallleftmeinatotalpanic.“Breathe,”

Itoldmyself,attemptingtokeepcalm.Tomknewwhathadhappenedtome.“Maybeyoucouldaskforhelponlineandtheremustbesomepeoplelivingnearbyyourlocationandtheycanshowyoutherightdirection.”Hetoldmeonthephone.IpostedmylocationonlineandexplainedwhatIwasgoingthrough,wishingforanyonetocometomyrescue.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Withinminutes,responsesstartedfloodingin.

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文章大意文章讲述了作者在一场暴风雪中被困的惊险经历。在寒冷的夜晚，作者和同事Tom加班后一起回家，但由于暴风雪的加剧，作者决定抄近路，结果迷失了方向。在尝试寻求帮助无果后，作者在网上发帖求助，并得到了许多人的回应。其中，一位名叫Sarah的当地居民和一位有经验的卡车司机Mike伸出了援手。Sarah冒着风雪前来引导，而Mike则驾驶卡车带领作者安全回家。这次经历让作者深刻体会到了在困境中社区的力量和陌生人的善意，也认识到了在紧急情况下保持冷静的重要性。作者对那些在危难时刻给予帮助的人充满了感激之情，并承诺将来也要帮助他人。在原文中，有几处伏笔为续写部分做了铺垫：1.暴风雪的描述：文章开头描述了暴风雪即将来临的情景，为作者迷路和寻求帮助的情节埋下了伏笔。2.作者和Tom加班：提到作者和Tom加班，暗示了他们可能会在恶劣天气中回家，增加了故事的紧张感。3.作者决定抄近路：作者选择抄近路以便早点回家，这为之后迷路的情节埋下了伏笔。4.天气状况恶化：作者描述了天气状况的恶化，这为作者感到恐慌和寻求帮助的情节做了铺垫。在续写中，这些伏笔得到了回应：1.网上求助：由于迷路，作者在网上发帖求助，这是对之前恶劣天气和迷路伏笔的直接回应。2.Sarah的回应：Sarah的回应和出现是对作者在网上求助的回应，解决了作者的困境。3.Mike的引导：Mike的引导和帮助是对作者在恶劣天气中迷路的情节的回应，最终帮助作者安全回家。4.作者的反思和承诺：文章结尾作者的反思和承诺是对整个经历的总结，也是对之前伏笔的回应，表明作者从这次经历中学到了重要的教训。这些伏笔和回应共同构建了一个完整的故事，展示了作者在困境中如何得到他人的帮助，并从中学到宝贵的经验。主旨升华句1.Theordealinthesnowstormhastaughtmethateveninthebleakestofcircumstances,thekindnessofstrangerscanbeabeaconofhope.2.I'velearnedthatcommunityandconnectionarenotjustabstractconcepts,butlifelinesinourdarkesthours.3.Thisexperiencehasshownmethateverychallengewefacecanbeanopportunitytogrowandtoappreciatethesupportofothers.4.Theincidenthasinstilledinmeadeepersenseofempathyandacommitmenttobeasourceofhelpforthoseinneed.5.Throughthisharrowingjourney,I'vecometounderstandthatthetruemeasureofhumanityliesinourwillingnesstoreachouttooneanotherintimesofcrisis.参考答案Withinminutes,responsesstartedfloodingin.Somepeopleofferedwordsofencouragement,tellingmetostaystrongandthateverythingwouldbeokay.Otherssharedtheirownexperiencesofbeingstuckinsimilarsituationsandhowtheymanagedtogetthroughit.Afewevensuggestedpracticalsolutions,likestayinginthecarandwaitingforthesnowtostoportryingtofindanearbyshelter.Ifeltasenseofwarmthandhopeamidstthecoldanddarkness.ThenIsawabigfigureinthedark.Asthefigureapproached,Irealizeditwasamanwearingathickcoatandcarryingashovel.Heintroducedhimselfasaneighborwholivednearbyandhadseenmypost.Withouthesitation,hestartedclearingthesnowaroundmycarandhelpingmepushitoutofthesnowdrift.Withhishelp,Iwasfinallyabletogetbackontheroadanddrivehomesafely.IwasextremelygratefulforhiskindnessandthesupportIreceivedfromtheonlinecommunity.下水文1Withinminutes,responsesstartedfloodingin.Peoplefromalloverwereofferingadviceandencouragement.SomesuggestedIstayinthecarwiththeenginerunningforheat,whileothersprovidedtipsonhowtonavigatethroughasnowstorm.Themessagesofsupportwereheartwarming,andIfeltaglimmerofhopeamidstthechaos.Oneparticularmessagestoodout—alocalresidentnamedSarahsaidsherecognizedtheareafrommydescriptionandwasonherwaytohelp.ThenIsawabigfigureinthedark.Asthefigureapproached,IrolleddownthewindowtofindSarah,bundledupinathickcoatandarmedwithaflashlight.Shehadbravedthestormtoguidemehome.Withherhelp,wemanagedtoslowlymakeourwaythroughthetreacherousconditions.Sarah'spresencewasabeaconofhopeinthebleakwinternight,andherkindnesswasatestamenttothepowerofcommunityandhumanconnection.Whenwefinallyreachedmyhouse,Iwasoverwhelmedwithgratitude.Thewarmthofmyhomewasastarkcontrasttothebitingcoldoutside,andIknewIhadbeenincrediblyfortunatetohavefoundsuchageneroussoulwillingtocometomyaid.下水文2Withinminutes,responsesstartedfloodingin.Thescreenofmyphonelitupwithcommentsandmessages,astarkcontrasttotheicydarknessoutside.Strangerswereofferingadvice,sharingtheirownstoriesofbeingstranded,andsomeevenofferedtocomeoutandhelp.Itwasahumblingreminderthateveninthemostisolatingofconditions,wearenevertrulyalone.AmongthemessageswasonefromanexperiencedtruckdrivernamedMike,whohaddealtwithsuchweatherconditionsbeforeandwasconfidenthecouldguidemetosafety.ThenIsawabigfigureinthedark.Asilhouetteemergedthroughtheswirlingsnow,andasitgotcloser,Irecognizedthebrightsafetyvestandthef