2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼二十七含答案解析

2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十七）目录内容PartA读后续写模考经典原文PartB读后续写思路引导PartC写作优秀句式翻译PartD篇章写作润色PartE课后练笔巩固提升GaryMessina,aninvestmentbankinganalyst,now38,wasonhismorningrunalongNewYorkCity'sEastRiver.Suddenlysomethingcaughthiseye-alarge60-year-oldmanbalancingonthefour-foot-highrailing(栏杆)thatguardedthepathfromthewater.Ashegotclosertothescene,themantookastepforwardandjumpedintothedark,roughriverbelow.Messinarushedtotherailingtofindthatthemanwasstrugglinginthewater,clearlyunabletoswim.Ifhehadintendedtokillhimselfthatmorning,hehadnowchangedhismind.Thejumperscreamedcrazilyforhelpastherapidspulledhimawayfromtheseawall（防波堤）.Otherjoggersalsoheardtheman'scalling.JohnGreen,now31,immediatelydroppedhisphoneandkeysonland,alongwithhissneakers,andjumpedinthecoldriver."Peoplehadcalledthepolice,butitwasunclearwhenthey'dgetthere,"saysGreen,acommercialinsurancebroker."Ijustreacted."Soonafterthat,Messinajoinedhimintheriver.Theflowwasrapidwhilethetemperaturewasfreezing.Reachingtothejumperseemedtobeanearlyimpossibletaskforthetworescuers.Luckily,justasthejumperwaslosingstrength,Greengrabbedholdofhim.Thepairwereabout30yardsfromtheseawallwhenMessinacaughtupwiththem.Theystabilizedtheman,withMessinasupportinghisbackandGreenholdinghimupfromeitherside.Hewasunresponsivebutnotunconscious.Asthemenmadetheirwaytowardtheconcreteseawallthatstretchedforblocksineachdirection,Greenhadanawfulrealization:Withthewaterflowingagoodeightfeetbelowthelipofthewailandnoladderordock（码头）insight,therewasnowayoutoftheriver.What'sworse,thejumper,whowassixfoottwoandweighedaround260pounds,wasdeadweightinhisrescuers'arms,whichmeanttheycoulduseonlytheirlegstosupportthemselvesinthewater.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Arescueboatisonitsway,"someoneshoutedtothem._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:However,theyencounteredanewthreat:Theflowcreatedbytherapidswassuckingthemundertheboat._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PartB 读后续写思路引导本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了GaryMessina和JohnGreen勇敢救落水老人，但在过程中不断遇到险境的故事。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“‘救援船已经在路上了，’有人对他们喊道。”可知，第一段可描写在救援船来之前三个人遇到的危险情况。②由第二段首句内容“然而，他们遇到了一个新的威胁：急流产生的水流把他们吞没在船下。”可知，第二段可描写经过艰难险阻后最终获救的过程。2.续写线索：踩水困难——到河边——救援船出现——新威胁的出现——回到陆地——回到工作3.词汇激活行为类①随着时间推移：astimegoesby/withthepassageoftime/thenAsTimePassed②变得困难：becomedifficult/becometough③到达：arrive/getto/reach④出现：turnup/comeout⑤设法抓住：catchat/reachoutfor/graspat情绪类①幸运的是：beluckytodo/

fortunatelyfortheweek②毫无疑问：beyondallquestion/beyonddoubt/withoutdoubt③精疲力尽：deadbeat

/beusedupPartC 写作优秀句式翻译“一艘救援船正在途中，”有人对他们喊道。随着时间的推移，踩着的水变得越来越困难了。十分钟后，他们设法到达了河边。格林试图用一只手和一只英尺咬进墙上的一个小裂缝里，结果在这个过程中割伤了自己。与水流搏斗，把那个人抱在水面上，很快就变得筋疲力尽，于是他们一边尽可能靠近墙，一边漂流。幸运的是，救援船终于出现了。然而，他们遇到了一个新的威胁：急流造成的水流把他们吸到船上。墨西拿记得就在救援人员被打倒时，救援人员抓住了这名男子，让他放手。“我已经完全没有活力了，”他说。不知怎么的，他抓住了一根固定在甲板上的杆子，毫无疑问地把他带到了安全的地方。十分钟后，这群人就回到了陆地上。他们救下来的那个人被送往医院接受评估。至于救援人员，他们俩在上午10点半都在上班了。“我有点晚了，”格林微笑着承认。“但我有一个很好的借口。”参考答案："Arescueboatisonitsway,"someoneyelledtothem.Treadingwaterwasgettingtougherastimewentby.Aftertenminutes,theymanagedtogettotheriver'sedge.Greentriedwedgingahandandafootintoatinycrackinthewall,resultingincuttinghimselfintheprocess.Fightingthecurrentandholdingthemanabovethewaterquicklybecameexhausting,sotheygaveintodriftingwhilestayingasclosetothewallastheycould.Fortunately,therescueboatfinallycameinsight.However,theyencounteredanewthreat:Theflowcreatedbytherapidswassuckingthemundertheboat.Messinaremembersbeingpulleddownjustastherescuersgrabbedontothemanallowinghimtoletgo."Iwascompletelyoutofenergy,"hesays.Somehow,hegraspedapoleattachedtotheboatdeck,whichundisputedlybroughthimtosafety.Withintenminutes,thegroupwasbackonland.Themantheyhadsavedwastakentothehospitalforevaluation.Asfortherescuers,bothofthemwasatworkby10:30a.m."Iwasabitlate,"admitsGreen,smiling."ButIhadagoodexcuse."PartD 篇章写作润色"Arescueboatisonitsway,"someoneyelledtothem.Treadingwaterwasgettingtougherastimewentby.Aftertenminutes,theymanagedtogettotheriver'sedge.Greentriedwedgingahandandafootintoatinycrackinthewall,resultingincuttinghimselfintheprocess.Fightingthecurrentandholdingthemanabovethewaterquicklybecameexhausting,sotheygaveintodriftingwhilestayingasclosetothewallastheycould.Fortunately,therescueboatfinallycameinsight.However,theyencounteredanewthreat:Theflowcreatedbytherapidswassuckingthemundertheboat.Messinaremembersbeingpulleddownjustastherescuersgrabbedontothemanallowinghimtoletgo."Iwascompletelyoutofenergy,"hesays.Somehow,hegraspedapoleattachedtotheboatdeck,whichundisputedlybroughthimtosafety.Withintenminutes,thegroupwasbackonland.Themantheyhadsavedwastakentothehospitalforevaluation.Asfortherescuers,bothofthemwasatworkby10:30a.m."Iwasabitlate,"admitsGreen,smiling."ButIhadagoodexcuse."PartE 课后练笔巩固提升.WhentragedystruckhislittlegirlduringtheDepression(大萧条),thisfatherdidtheonlythinghecould.Thetragedyhappenedintheyear1933.Iwasonly6yearsoldwhenIwasrushedtothehospitalwithtwocrushedfeet.MyparentsweretoldImightneverwalkagain.TheaccidenthappenedwhenIwassittinginfrontofourhouseinLowell,Massachusetts.Iwasplayinginapuddle(水坑)afterarainstormandsuddenlyfeltahugeweightonmyfeet.WhenIlookedup,therewasacartireonthem.Icriedout,butthemotorwasrunningandnoonecouldhearmeovertheengine.Thedriverhadrunacrossthestreetforanewspaper.Whenhegotbacktohiscar,hedroveaway—neverknowinghehadparkedonmyfeet.Justaboutthen,ourneighbor’ssoncamehomeandsawmebentovermyfeetinpain.Heimmediatelycarriedmehome,andIrememberthinkinghowtallandstronghewas.Anambulancecame,andIremainedinthehospitalfor3weekswhilemyfeetwere“repaired”.WhenIreturnedhome,Icouldhardlywalk.Isatinourbaywindowandwatchedthechildrenplayonthestreetandlongedtojointhem…butIcouldn’t.Ifeltsoleftoutdespitemyparents’company.MyparentsweretoldthatifIwasevertowalkagain,I’dneedtreatment,whichinthosedaysmeantridingatricycle(三轮车)tostrengthenthemuscleandeventuallygetmyfeetbackintoconditionforwalking.Ourfamilycouldn’taffordsuchanextravagance(奢侈品).TimesweretoughduringtheDepression,andtherewerefivemouthstofeed,besidesbuyingcoalandwoodforthestove.Dadcouldn’taffordthebusfareandoncoldwinterdayshewalked7mileseverydayinhisonlywintercoattogettowork.No,therewasnomoneyforatricycle.Iwouldbeacripple(瘸子)allmylife.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1：Thenonday,whilesittingatmyusualplaceinthewindow,Isawmyfatherwalkingupthestreetcarryingatricycleonhisshoulder._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:ItwasmanyyearslaterbeforeIlearnedwhereandhowDadhadgotthetricycle._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________