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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasacold,snowyevening.Tommywasrunningasfastashecould,focusedonnothingbuthisdestination—theshoponthestreetcorner.Twoweeksago,hesawfigurinesofMarvelsuperheroesontheshelvesandfelthehadtohaveone.He'sbeenwalkingtheneighbor'sdogeversincethentoearnmoneytorealizehislittledream.Hewassoexcitedandhardlynoticingtheworldaroundhim.Maybethat'swhyhetrippedoverthelegsofahomelesswoman,whowassittingonthesidewalk,herbackagainstthewall.Hemurmured“sorry”andmovedontohisdestination.Onceheenteredtheshop,hewentstraighttotheshelveswithfigurines.Hulk,Thor,CaptainAmerica,IronMan,andmanymore—allofhisadmiredheroes.Withhisheartpoundinglikecrazy,hereachedforSpiderman.“Youlikethese,truebeliever?”Tommyturnedaround.Anoldmanwasstandingbehindhimwithawidesmileonhisface.“Y-yes…Yes,they'reawesome”answeredTommy.“They'restrongandfastandhelpotherpeoplealot…”theboylookedatfigurinesinadmiration.“IwishIcouldbeasuperherotoo.”“Thenbecomeone!”saidtheoldman.“How?”Tommyaskedinsurprise.“Idon'thaveanysuperpowers.”“Andwhywouldyouneedthem?”theoldmansmiled.Seeingtheconfusionontheboy'sface,hesquatted(蹲下)andputhishandsonTommy'sarms.“Didyouknow,thatshopkeeperladyovertherehasadisabledhusband?She'sbeenworkinghardandtakingcareofhimforyears.I'veneverheardawordofcomplaintfromher.Andthisperson—”hepointedataredheadman,whojustenteredtheshop.“He'safirefighter;he'ssavedcountlesslives.Henevergivesup,nomatterhowdangerousthesituationseemstobe.”TheoldmanlookedTommyintheeyesandsmiled.“Youdon'tneedasuperpowertobeaheroforsomeoneelse.Thepathofasuperherostartsnotinthemind,notinthemuscles,butintheheart”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para1:Tommyloweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.Para2:Thehomelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.文章大意在一个寒冷的雪夜,小男孩汤米为了实现拥有一个漫威超级英雄玩偶的梦想,努力赚钱并兴奋地前往街角的商店。途中,他不小心绊倒了一个坐在人行道上的无家可归的妇女,匆忙道歉后继续前行。在商店里,他被一位老先生的话启发,意识到成为英雄并不需要超能力,而是需要勇气和善心。老先生讲述了商店里其他人的故事,比如辛勤工作的店主女士和勇敢的消防员,他们都是普通人,但都在以自己的方式成为英雄。汤米深受感动,决定用他辛苦赚来的钱帮助那位无家可归的妇女,而不是买玩偶。他的行为证明了,真正的英雄主义来自于内心的善良和对他人的关怀,而不仅仅是拥有超能力。在原文中,有几处伏笔为续写提供了基础和方向:1.伏笔一:汤米对超级英雄的崇拜和渴望拥有一个超级英雄玩偶。这为续写中汤米的内心冲突和最终的选择提供了背景。2.伏笔二:汤米在前往商店的路上绊倒了一位无家可归的妇女,但他只是匆忙道歉后继续前行。这个事件为续写中汤米可能的反思和行动提供了契机。3.伏笔三:老先生与汤米的对话,特别是关于成为英雄不需要超能力的观点。这为续写中汤米如何理解英雄主义和采取行动提供了指导。在续写中,这些伏笔得到了回应:1.回应一:汤米在商店里选择了不购买玩偶,而是用钱帮助无家可归的妇女,这反映了他对超级英雄的崇拜转变为了实际行动,体现了他内心成长和价值观的转变。2.回应二:汤米在续写中回到无家可归的妇女那里,用他辛苦赚来的钱为她买食物和毯子,这不仅是对之前匆忙离开的反思,也是他将老先生的话付诸实践的具体表现。3.回应三:通过汤米的行为,续写强调了老先生关于英雄主义的观点,即英雄主义来自于内心的善良和对他人的关怀,而不仅仅是拥有超能力。汤米的行动展示了他如何理解和接受这一观点,并将其内化为个人行为。总的来说,续写通过汤米的行为和选择,回应了原文中的伏笔,展现了他的成长和对英雄主义的深刻理解。主旨升华句1."Trueheroismisnotabouttheabsenceoffear,butthetriumphoverittohelpothersinneed."2."Aheroisnotdefinedbytheirpowers,butbytheiractionsandthepositiveimpacttheyhaveonthelivesofothers."3."Theessenceofbeingasuperheroliesinthecouragetomakeadifference,nomatterhowsmall,intheworldaroundus."4."Compassionandkindnessaretherealsuperpowersthatcanchangelivesandinspirehopeintheheartsofmany."5."Thepathtoheroismispavedwithselflessnessandthewillingnesstostandupforwhatisright,evenwhenitrequirespersonalsacrifice."OnePossibleVersionPara1:Tommyloweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.Finally,heraisedhishead.“SoIamsupposedto…”hestoppedmid-sentencewhenherealizedthathewasalone.Heturnedhisheadleftandright,buttheoldmanwasnowheretobeseen.Tommysighedheavily—healreadyhadanideaofwhatheshoulddo.Helookedatfigurinesforthelasttimeandmovedtowardsthecounter.“Twosandwichesandacupofteaplease,”hesaid.Para2:Thehomelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.Tommycamecloserandcarefullygavethewomanhisbuys.Hereyesopenedwideinsurprise,thenfilledwithtears.“Thankyou,”shewhispered.Tommybowedhishead,turnedaroundandwentbackhome.Hewasmovingfasterandfasterandfinallyhestartedtorun.Strangeenergyfillinghisbodymadehimfeellikehecouldfly.Whenhefinallystopped,hewasbreathingheavily,buthedidn'tfeeltired.Hesmiledhappily—itwasawonderfulfeeling.Andnothingcouldstopit.下水文1Para1:Tommyloweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.Theoldman'swordsresonatedwithhim,echoinginhismindlikeaprofoundrevelation.Herealizedthatbeingaherowasn'tabouthavingextraordinaryabilitiesorwearingacape;itwasaboutthechoicesonemadeandthekindnessoneshowed.Hethoughtaboutthehomelesswomanhehadencounteredearlier,shiveringinthecold,andhowasimpleactofkindnesscouldmakeadifferenceinherlife.Hiseyeswelledupwithanewfounddetermination,andheknewwhathehadtodo.Para2:Thehomelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.Thistime,Tommyapproachedherwithadifferentperspective.Hereachedintohispocketandpulledoutthemoneyhehadearned,theverymoneyhehadplannedtospendontheSpidermanfigurine.Withagentlesmile,hehandedittoher,saying,"Ma'am,Ihopethiscanhelpyoustaywarmtonight."Thewomanlookedup,hereyesfilledwithgratitudeassheacceptedtheoffering.Inthatmoment,Tommyfeltasurgeofwarmthandpridethatnotoycouldeverreplicate.Hehadbecomeahero,notbypossessingsuperpowers,butbychoosingtohelpsomeoneinneed,justliketheoldmanhadsaid.Ashewalkedaway,heknewthatthefigurineofSpidermanwouldalwaysbethereontheshelf,butthefigurineofaherohadjustbeenetchedinhisheart.下水文2Para1:Tommyloweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.Theoldman'swordshadsparkedarealizationwithinhim,ignitingaflameofempathyandunderstanding.Heponderedonthetrueessenceofheroism,whichwasnotaboutphysicalprowessorsupernaturalgifts,butaboutthestrengthofcharacterandthewillingnesstohelpothers.Hisminddriftedbacktothehomelesswomanhehadinadvertentlybrushedpastearlier,andhefeltapangofguiltfornotofferingherthekindnessshedeserved.Withanewfoundsenseofpurpose,Tommydecidedtoturnhisdreamofbeingaherointoatangibleactofcompassion.Para2:Thehomelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.Thistime,however,Tommy'sapproachwasmarkedbyasenseofpurposeandaheartfullofgene
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