Unit7写作人教版英语七年级上册

2024人教七上英语写作Unit7HappyBirthday单元话题分析【课标话题】人与自我丰富，充实，积极向上的生活本单元以“庆祝生日”为话题，要求学生写一篇短文，向他人介绍自己如何庆祝生日。写作过程中学生需要掌握生日的正确表达方式，同时也要掌握有关生日活动的短语，句式等。【写作题目】每个人每年有一个生日，它是庆祝母亲给予我们出生的日子，不同的人有不同的庆祝方式。你是怎么庆祝自己的生日的？请以“Mybirthday”为题写一篇短文。要求：

1）文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名；

2）语言通顺，表达正确；

3）词数：70词左右。

参考词汇：celebrate,makeawish,blowout_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作思路【审题】审主题、审体裁：主题为介绍如何为自己庆祝生日；体裁为说明文；审人称、审时态：通常以第一人称为主，若以他人视角写作，则用对应的第三人称；时态以一般现在时态为主；（本题以第一人称为主）审要点：本期要求写一篇短文介绍自己如何庆祝生日，根据题目要求，首先要说明自己的生日是什么时候；其次，自己庆祝生日的方式；最后，详细介绍庆祝生日的过程，并描述自己的感受。【写作过程】开头部分：引入主题，介绍自己生日的具体日期以及庆祝生日的方式主体部分：详细介绍自己庆祝生日的过程，比如，安排了哪些有意义的活动。最后，谈谈自己对生日的感受。结尾部分：点明主题，表达自己对生日的感受Ialwayshaveagoodtimeonmybirthday.Howdoyoucelebrateyourbirthday?【实用表达】介绍出生日期Mybirthdayison13thMay(具体日期).介绍如何庆祝生日Iusuallyhaveabirthdaywithmytocelebrate.Iinvitemytomybirthdaypartytocelebrate.Onmybirthday,Iofteneatbirthdaynoodleswitheggs.Longnoodlesmeanalonglife.MyfamilyandItakeaphototogethertorememberthatday.Wesingthe“HappyBirthday”songtogether,andthenmakeawishandblowoutthecandles.Weenjoythecakeandopenthebirthdaygifts.Mymomalwayspreparesabigdinnerforus.Myfatheroftenbuysabigchocolatebirthdaycakeforme.Aftereatingthebirthdaycake,Iusuallyplaygameswithmyfriendsandfamily.Myfathermarksmyheightonthedooreveryyear.介绍感受Wealwayshaveagoodtimeonthatday.Ioftenhavefun/enjoymyselfonmybirthday.Ialwaysspendameaningbirthdaywithmyfamilyandfriends.Ilookforwardtothenextbirthday.Ilovetocelebratemybirthdayinthisway.【词汇储备】介绍庆祝方式haveabirthdayparty举办一个生日派对 eatbirthdaynoodles吃长寿面takephotos拍照 makeabirthdaycake做生日蛋糕makeawish许愿 blowoutthecandles吹蜡烛singthe“HappyBirthday”song唱生日快乐歌 enjoythecake吃蛋糕openthebirthdaygifts拆生日礼物 dosomethingdifferent 介绍感受haveagoodtime/havefun/enjoyoneself玩得开心meaningful有意义的lookforwardto期待【小试牛刀】我的生日在5月13日。Mybirthdayison.我通常会举办一个生日派对来庆祝。Iusuallytocelebrate.我会邀请我的好朋友们来参加我的生日派对。Itomybirthdayparty.我的妈妈总是会为我们准备丰盛的饭菜。Mymomalwaysforus.我的爸爸会提前买一个大大的巧克力蛋糕。Myfatherinadvance.我们先一起唱生日快乐歌，然后许愿，吹蜡烛。Wefirst,andthenand.接下来，我们会一起享受美味的蛋糕并且拆生日礼物。Afterthat,weand.除此之外，我们还会做一些不一样的事情。Besides,wealsodo.比如，我的爸爸每年都会在门上标记我的身高。Forexample,myfatheronthedooreveryyear.我总是会度过一个快乐且有意义的生日。Ialwaysspendaandbirthday.【答案解析】Mybirthdayison13thMay.Iusuallyhaveabirthdaypartytocelebrate.Iinvitemygoodfriendstomybirthdayparty.Mymomalwayspreparesabigdinnerforus.Myfatherbuysabigchocolatecakeinadvance.Wesingthe“HappyBirthday”songtogether,andthenmakeawishandblowoutthecandles.Afterthat,weenjoythecakeandopenthebirthdaygifts.Besides,wealsodosomethingdifferent.Forexample,myfathermarksmyheightonthedooreveryyear.Ialwaysspendahappyandmeaningfulbirthday.写作范例每个人每年有一个生日，它是庆祝母亲给予我们出生的日子，不同的人有不同的庆祝方式。你是怎么庆祝自己的生日的？请以“Mybirthday”为题写一篇短文。要求：

1）文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名；

2）语言通顺，表达正确；

3）词数：70词左右。

参考词汇：celebrate,makeawish,blowout_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【优秀范文】MyBirthdayMybirthdayison13thMay.Iusuallyhaveabirthdaypartytocelebrate.Iinviteallmygoodfriendstomybirthday.Theyalwaysbringmewonderfulbirthdaygiftstogivemeabigsurprise.Mymompreparesabigdinnerandmyfatherbuysabigchocolatebirthdaygiftformeinadvance.Whenweallsitaroundthetable,thepartybegins.Wesing“HappyBirthday”songtogether,andthenImakeawishandblowoutthecandles.Afterthat,weenjoythecakeandopenallthebirthdaygifts.Besides,wealsodosomethingdifferent.Forexample,myfathermarksmyheightonthedooreveryyear.Ialwaysspendahappyandmeaningfulbirthdaybothmyfamilyandfriends.Howdoyoucelebrateyourbirthday?【亮点词汇】invitesb.tosp.邀请某人去某处bringsb.sth.给某人带来某物givesb.abigsurprise给某人一个大大的惊喜prepare准备buysth.forsb.为某人买某物inadvance提前makeawish许愿blowoutthecandles吹蜡烛markone’sheighton在某处标记某人的身高【高分句型】Theyalwaysbringmewonderfulbirthdaygiftstogivemeabigsurprise.他们总是给我带来很棒的礼物，就是为了给我一个大大的惊喜。Whenweallsitaroundthetable,thepartybegins.当我们围着桌子坐好的时候，派对就开始了。Besides,wealsodosomethingdifferent.Forexample,myfathermarksmyheightonthedooreveryyear.除此之外，我们还会做一些与众不同的事情。比如，我的爸爸每年都会在门上标记我的身高。Ialwaysspendahappyandmeaningfulbirthdaybothmyfamilyandfriends.我总是能和我的家人，朋友度过一个开心且有意义的生日。写作练习假如你是Mary，下周日是你爸爸的生日，你和妈妈商量决定一起给他过生日，你想征询在英国长大的表妹Amy的建议。请你根据下表提示写一封邮件，介绍一下你和妈妈的想法，并请她给你提一些建议。要求：1．邮件内容需包括表格提示内容，也可增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2．语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；

3．词数不少于80；邮件的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。为爸爸庆祝生日的计划时间活动安排周日上午全家一起去公园拍照中午全家一起去饭店吃饭下午妈妈陪爸爸看电影，“我”去超市购物晚上举行生日派对，“我”要送爸爸鲜花DearAmy,Howiseverythinggoing?NextSundayismydad’sbirthday.MomandIhavesomeideastosharewithyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________注意审时态请根据以下提示，写一篇60词左右的文章。今天我玩得很愉快。今天是爷爷的生日，我们全家去爷爷家为他庆祝生日。妈妈做了许多好吃的，我们买了一个大蛋糕。我们举行了一个大型家庭聚会。我们送给爷爷一些礼物，并说：“祝您生日快乐。”下午我们去公园划船。我们玩得很开心，爷爷过了一个愉快的生日。

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