高考英语读后续写主题升华结尾句讲义

高英读续主题升华结尾句一、主题升华1.情感升华（2022年高考浙江卷6月）Thisexperiencemademerealizethattherearesomanypeopleinthisworldwhoneedourhelp.Italsomademerealizethatoursmallactofkindnesscanmakethemfeelwarmandmakeagreatdifferencetothem.Iwillneverforgetthewaytheylookedatmewhentheyweregivenfood.Iamanxioustourgetheworldtodoeverythingpossibletohelpthoseinneed.译文：这次经历让我意识到，这个世界上有这么多人需要我们的帮助。这也让我意识到，我们的小善举可以让他们感到温暖，并对他们产生巨大的影响。我永远不会忘记他们得到食物时看着我的样子。我急于敦促世界尽一切可能帮助那些有需要的人。结尾升华：Iamanxioustourgetheworldtodoeverythingpossibletohelpthoseinneed.2.名言警句升华Webegantoworkasafineteamandfinallyfinishedourprojectontime.OurhardworkpaidoffandDr.Henderson'swasverysatisfiedwithourwonderfulfindings.Fromthisproject,wealsolearnedthesignificanceofteammates.Justasthesayinggoes,onepersoncangofar,butagroupofpersonscantravelfarther.译文：我们开始作为一个优秀的团队工作，最终按时完成了我们的项目。我们的辛勤工作得到了回报，亨德森博士对我们精彩的发现非常满意。从这个项目中，我们也了解到了队友的重要性。俗话说，一个人可以走得更远，但一群人可以走得更远。结尾升华：Justasthesayinggoes,onepersoncangofar,butagroupofpersonscantravelfarther.二、画面定格1.动作画面定格（2021年新高考全国I卷）Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousandperfectbreakfastinfrontofher,shewasverysurprised.ltwasnotonlythebreakfast,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.Thetwochildrencouldfinishcookingabreakfast,whichshehadn’texpectbefore.Thechildrensaidloudly,“HappyMother'sDay!”Motherhuggedthemtightlyandkissedthemagainandagain.译文:双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了妈妈。当他们的母亲看到眼前美味完美的早餐时，她非常惊讶。让她非常感动的不仅是早餐，还有孩子们对她的爱。两个孩子能做完早餐，她以前从未想过。孩子们大声说:“母亲节快乐!母亲紧紧地抱着他们，一次又一次地亲吻他们。2.写景画面定格Lookingup,IsawthesunshinebrighterthanIeverknewbefore.Isawatreeinthedistanceglistengentlyasitreflectedthesun'srays.抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。3.物品画面定格Yearslater,lookingthroughthepicturesItookofthebear,Icouldstillfeelashiverdownmyspine.Thepictureslayquietlyonmydesk,remindingmeofthatdangerousbutworthwhilemoment.数年以后，看着我拍的熊的照片，我仍然感到脊背一阵颤抖。照片静静地放在我桌上，提醒着我那危险又值得的时刻。三、首尾呼应文章开头：Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymotherloving,sweet,yetabsentmindedandforgetful.我有一个有趣的童年，充满了惊喜和娱乐，都是因为我的母亲——有爱，却心不在焉，健忘。结尾：Despitemom'sbeingabsentmindedandforgetful,shewasstillakindandnicemom.尽管妈妈总是心不在焉，健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。文章开头：Itwassummerandmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.夏天我爸想给我一个前所未有的假期。他决定带我去西部旅行。结尾：NeverhadIhadsuchathrillingyetdangerousvacationbefore.ThespecialtriptotheWildWestwasdeeplyengravedinmymind.我从来没有过这么刺激又危险的假期。那次去西部的特别旅行,深深地印在我的脑海里四、对话结尾(2022年新高考全国I卷)IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartingline.Thestarter'sgunsounded,Buthehadonlygoneafewmetersbeforehetrippedandfellflatontheground.Myheartsank.AsIstartedtoshoutencouragement,othervoicesaroundmetookupthecall.“ComeonDavid,youcandoit!"Davidpickedhimselfupandstartedagainuntilhecrossedthefinishlinetowildcheersandapplause.Then,whenDavid'scoachslappedhimonthebackandsaidproudly,“Goodjob,David!”hecaughtmyeye,flashedmeatoothygrinandsaid,“Thatwaseasy!’译文:我看着大卫走到起跑线上。发令枪响起。但他只走了几米，就被绊倒在地上。我的心沉了下去。当我开始大声鼓励时，我周围的其他声音接听了。“来吧大卫，你可以做到的!”大卫振作起来，重新开始，直到他在疯狂的欢呼和掌声中越过终点线。然后，当大卫的教练拍打他的背，自豪地说:“干得好，大卫!”他吸引了我的视线冲我露出一个露齿的笑容，说:“这很容易!”Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.JackaskedPaisley,“Areyoureallywillingtoleadatoughlifewithme？”Shepattedawaytheashesonhandsandlookedatthewal