专题17期末复习之书面表达16篇(重庆名校真题)七年级英语下学期期末复习查缺补漏冲刺满分（人教版）

期末复习之书面表达16篇(重庆名校真题)1．（2223七年级下·重庆·期末）你校即将迎来30周年校庆。你校校报想做一次生日派对专刊，用同学们美好的故事向学校献礼，一起庆祝学校30岁生日。现向全校同学发起征文搜集最开心的生日派对。请你以“AHappyBirthdayParty”为题，写一篇短文，讲述你是如何过生日的。要求：1.60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：1.生日会上吃了什么；2.收到了什么礼物；3.生日会上做了什么（唱英文歌、跳舞、演奏吉他……）；4.……AHappyBirthdayPartyLastMondaywasmythirteenthbirthday.Ihadahappybirthdayparty.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2223七年级下·重庆渝中·期末）尊老敬老是中华民族的传统美德，上周六我们去了养老院(theOldPeople’sHome)和那里的老人一起过了一个有意义的周末。请根据英文提示，以日记的形式记录下这次活动。要求：1.80~100词，日记开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文章中不得出现真实姓名、班级和学校；3.语句通顺，字迹工整。内容提示：Saturday,June23rd

Sunny_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2223七年级下·重庆大足·期末）假如你是李华，上周过了一个愉快的端午小长假，你的网友Peter想知道你是怎样度过的端午节。请你参考以下要点提示，用英语写封电子邮件，分享你的愉快假期。要点提示：（1）今年端午节在6月22日；（2）我和父母开车去看望了住在乡下的祖父母；（3）做了很多有趣的事：①为祖父母买了礼物；②包了各种各样的粽子；③喂鸡、钓鱼、陪祖父下棋等；（4）你的感受。写作要求：（1）包含以上所给信息，可适当发挥；（2）条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整、规范；（3）70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearPeter,Thankyouforyourlastemail.I’mveryhappytotellyousomethingaboutmyDragonBoatFestival.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4．（2223七年级下·重庆南岸·期末）你的美国笔友Rick给你来信，请你介绍你居住的环境。假如你是李华，请给Rick回一封邮件，介绍你居住的环境（如图），你喜欢的地方及其理由，再介绍一次最近你去这个地方的经历。要求：1.80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：1.介绍你居住的环境（如图），喜欢的地方和理由；2.描写一次最近你去这个地方的经历（when,who,where,what,how）；3.……DearRick,How’sitgoing?I’mhappytotellyousomeplacesinmyneighborhood.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua5．（2223七年级下·重庆丰都·期末）做家务可以培养自我能力。在周末，帮助父母做家务是应该的。请你描述你在周末所做的家务。内容包括：（1）做家务的原因；（2）在周末你做的家务（至少两件事）；（3）你的感想。作文要求：（1）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的校名和个人的真实姓名；（2）语句连贯，词数60个左右。词汇提示：做家务dosomehousework________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2223七年级下·重庆沙坪坝·期末）我们常说人生就像一次旅行，我们会遇见不同的人，做不同的事，请以AnUnforgettable(难忘的)Trip为题目写篇短文。要点：1.旅行的时间、地点、出行方式、同行的人……；2.旅行中的所见所闻（天气、活动、食物……）；3.你的感受；4.……要求：书写工整，卷面整洁，60—80词左右。AnUnforgettableTrip_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（2223七年级下·重庆巴南·期末）假如你是李华。暑假即将来临，你打算跟父母一起去旅游。请根据下列提示信息给你的笔友Amy写一封电子邮件，和她分享你的旅游计划。提示：1.旅游的目的地以及出行的交通工具；2.计划出行的时间、在那里待多久、需要携带的物品；3.旅途中要做的事，如参观名胜古迹、购物、品尝美食等；4.……要求：1.意思连贯、通顺，条理清楚，可适当发挥。2.80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。DearAmy,Howareyoudoing?Thesummerholidayising.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Pleasegivemylovetoyourparents.Yours,LiHua8．（2223七年级下·重庆·期末）谁言寸草心，报得三春晖。母爱是伟大的，母爱也是细致入微的。学校正在举办感恩母亲征文大赛，请你以“MyMother”为题写一篇文章投稿，介绍你的母亲并分享你与母亲之间的快乐时光。要求：1.80—120词；2.文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：1.介绍母亲(外貌、职业、爱好等)；2.回顾快乐时光(事件、感受)；3.……__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．（2223七年级下·重庆·期末）重庆因其独特的山水人文吸引了各地的游客。你的朋友Watson发来一封邮件，计划暑假来你家乡重庆游玩。假定你是李华，请根据来信内容写封回信。要求：1、必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；2、80词左右。已给出的词语不计入总词数；3、文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。4、参考词汇：hotpot（火锅）DearLiHua,Howiseverything?I’mveryhappythatthesummerholidaysareing.Iwanttogotoyourhometown—Chongqingthisyear.Canyoutellmesomethingaboutyourhometown?What’stheweatherlike?WhatdeliciousfoodcanIhave?WhatshouldItakewithmethere?I’mlookingforwardtoyourletter.Givemybestwishestoyourparents!Yours,WatsonDearWatson,I’mgladtohearfromyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua10．（2223七年级下·重庆开州·期末）假设你是Jim，上周日正好是你朋友Tom的14岁生日，你和Tim在他家为他举行了生日活动。请你以Myfriend’sBirthday为题，记录并分享这有意义又难忘的一天。要求：1.80120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：参考词汇：有意义的，meaningful；难忘的1.Tom的情况(短的卷发，中等身高，喜欢吃牛肉和面条)；2.生日当天的活动(唱歌、讲故事、下棋、制作卡片、拍照、吃生日蛋糕并许愿等)；3.……Myfriend’sBirthdayIhaveagoodfriend._________________________________________________________________________________________________11．（2122七年级下·重庆南川·期末）为了丰富中学生的校园生活，每个学校或班级都组织了各种形式的活动。假设你是新华中学八年级2班的学生李明，在你所参加的活动中，你记忆最深刻的活动是什么请你根据以下提示，自拟题目，完成一篇短文。提示1.你记忆最深刻的活动是什么2.简述活动过程3.谈谈你的体验或收获4.……要求1.词数70词左右，可适当发挥。2.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．（2122七年级下·重庆巴南·期末）学期快要结束了，暑假即将开始。假如你是李华，你想要在暑假的时候在重庆市内旅游。请根据以下提示和要求，完成一份旅行计划。提示：1.你的目的地，为什么选择去那里；2.打算如何去，和谁一起去；3.玩几天，如何玩；4.……要求：1.80﹣120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Thesummerholidaysareing._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．（2122七年级下·重庆涪陵·期末）国家提出了将劳动教育纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，你校上周末组织初一年级同学作为志愿者去养老院参加了一次特别(special)的劳动之旅。同学们在这次活动中体验了各种劳动，并体会到了助人的快乐。现请你以“ASpecialSchoolTrip”为题，记录下上周末特殊的学校之旅。要求：1．60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：1.出行基本信息（出行方式、天气……）；2.在养老院所做的事（打扫房间、表演才艺、一起做饭……）；3.……ASpecialSchoolTripLastweekend,ourschooltookustotheoldpeople’shome.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．（2122七年级下·重庆万州·期末）妈妈，一位点亮孩子生命之光的人。请你根据下列表格介绍下你伟大的妈妈。职业与长相教师；中等身高、短直发、戴眼镜性格与爱好友好、善良、乐于助人；游泳、牛肉面、熊猫周六活动上午带我去动物园；下午去电影院…………要求：1.意思连贯，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名。3.70词左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）Mymotheristhegreatestwomanintheworld.Iwouldliketointroduce（介绍）hertoyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mreallythankfulforwhatshedidforme.Loveyou!15．（2122七年级下·重庆秀山·期末）假如你叫Emma，在英语角活动中向大家介绍一下你最喜欢的一天及原因。根据要求写一篇60﹣80词的短文。要求会表达自己喜欢的学科，给出理由。如果不喜欢,给出理由。重点考查学生以下能力：

1.学科的名词；

2.why与because的句型使用；

3.形容词的正确使用。

参考要点：

1.自我介绍：基本信息；

2.一天课程的安排及最喜欢的科目和原因表述。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．（2122七年级下·重庆·期末）亲爱的同学们，首先祝贺大家顺利完成了七年级的课程学习！在这一年的学习中，大家经历了开心、紧张、感动、无助、伤感、难忘的日子。请以“Adaytoremember”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你印象深刻、难忘的一天。要求:1.6080词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.不能在文中出现教师的真实姓名及学校的真实名称。参考信息：1.经历：时间、地点、人物、事件……2.为什么难忘你的感受……3.你从中学到了什么……AdaytorememberItwasanunforgettable(难忘的)dayforme.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：1．例文AHappyBirthdayPartyLastMondaywasmythirteenthbirthday.Ihadahappybirthdayparty.Mymothergotupearlytopreparethebirthdaycakeandotherthingsfortheparty.Myfatherboughtmemyfavoritebirthdaypresent,abicycle.ThenwesangHappyBirthdaytogether.Wealsoplayedsomegamestogether.Myfathertookmanyphotosforus.Althoughwewereverytired,wewereveryhappytocelebrateourbirthdaywithourfamily.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：时态为一般过去时；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，按提示要求描述吃了什么。第二步，按提示要求描述收到什么礼物，可以加以说明是谁送的。第三步，描述生日会上做了什么等。[亮点词汇]①getup起床②takemanyphotos拍许多照片[高分句型]①Mymothergotupearlytopreparethebirthdaycakeandotherthingsfortheparty.（and表并列）②Althoughwewereverytired,wewereveryhappytocelebrateourbirthdaywithourfamily.（Although引导的让步状语从句）2．例文Saturday,June23rd

SunnyRespectingtheelderlyisthetraditionalvirtueoftheChinesenation.LastSaturday,wewenttotheOldPeople’sHomeandspentameaningfulweekendwiththeelderlythere.Weplayedgameswiththeminthemorning.Theyalsotaughtussomeofthegamesoftheirtime.Wehadneverplayeditbefore,sowefounditveryinteresting.Atnoon,wecookedlunchtogetherandsharedlunchwiththem.Intheafternoonwetoldthemsomeinterestingstories.Wealsosanganddancedforthem.Althoughweweretiredthisday,wewereveryhappy.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇日记；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：日记要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇引出话题，说明尊老敬老是中华民族的传统美德；第二步，根据提示的要点讲述在养老院里所做的事情，要列举具体的事例；第三步，抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①sharesthwithsb和某人分享某物②tellsbstories给某人讲故事[高分句型]①RespectingtheelderlyisthetraditionalvirtueoftheChinesenation.（动名词作主语）②Althoughweweretiredthisday,wewereveryhappy.（although引导的让步状语从句）3．例文：DearPeter,Thankyouforyourlastemail.I’mveryhappytotellyousomethingaboutmyDragonBoatFestival.TheDragonBoatFestivalfallsonJune22thisyear.Lastweek,Ihadagoodholidaywithmyparents.Peoplealloverthecountrycelebratethefestival.Wealsohadaholidayforthreedays.MyparentsandIdrovetovisitmygrandparentswholivedinthecountryside.Wedidalotofinterestingthingsthere.Weboughtpresentsforourgrandparents.Assoonaswegotthere,westartedtomakeallkindsofzongzi.Atnoon,weatedeliciouszongzimadebyourselves.Intheafternoon,wefedthechickens,wentfishing,playedchesswithmygrandfatherandsoon.Wereallyenjoyedourtrip!Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接开头，引出话题；第二步，具体阐述端午节做了什么；第三步，你的感受。[亮点词汇]①buysth.forsb.为某人买某物②assoonas一……就……[高分句型]①MyparentsandIdrovetovisitmygrandparentswholivedinthecountryside.（who引导的定语从句）②Assoonaswegotthere,westartedtomakeallkindsofzongzi.（assoonas引导的时间状语从句）4．例文DearRick,How’sitgoing?I’mhappytotellyousomeplacesinmyneighborhood.MyhomeisonNewStreet.Theenvironmenthereisverygood.Livinghereisveryconvenient.Becausenearmyhousethereisasupermarket,apizzeriaandashoppingcenter.MyschoolisrightnexttotheBigpizza.Thereisalibraryacrossfrommyhome.Thereisalsoapark,whichisaplaceforpeopletoexerciseandrelax.IlikethelibrarybestbecauseIlikereadingbooksinit.LastSunday,myclassmatesandIwenttoGreenParkforapicnic.Wewenttherebybike.Wealsohelpedcleanthepark.Wehadagreattime.Weletomyhome.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：根据提示信息介绍自己的社区并介绍自己最近一次去这个地方的经历，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整。[写作步骤]第一步，引出主题；第二步，介绍居住的环境，喜欢的地方和理由；第三步，描写一次最近去这个地方的经历；第四步，书写结语，欢迎对方来自己家。[亮点词汇]①convenient方便的②nextto紧挨着③like...best最喜欢④haveagreattime玩得开心[高分句型]①Livinghereisveryconvenient.(动名词作主语)②IlikethelibrarybestbecauseIlikereadingbooksinit.(because引导原因状语从句)5．例文Ioftendosomehouseworkathome.It’simportantforstudentstodosomehousework.Asafamilymember,it’sourdutytohelpourparentsdohousework.LastSunday,whenmyparentswentoutshoppingtobuyfoodforlunch,Ibegantocleanmyhouse.First,Isweptthefloorandwipedthetable.Then,Icollectedallthebooksandotherthingsandputtheminplace.Finally,Itookalltherubbishout.Whenmyparentscameback,theyweresurprisedandpraisedme.Ifeltsohappyatthattime.SoIkeepdoinghousework,suchassweepingthefloorortidyingtheroom.Sharingthehouseworkwithourparentsmeansshowinglovetothem.SoIsuggestallofusshouldtakeactionfromnowon.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍学生应做家务的原因；第二步，介绍自己在周末做的家务；第三步，谈谈自己的感想。[亮点词汇]①keepdoingsth.不停做某事②suchas例如③takeaction采取行动[高分句型]Whenmyparentscameback,theyweresurprisedandpraisedme.（when引导时间状语从句）6．例文AnUnforgettableTripOnthelastsummervacation,IwenttoGuangzhoubyplanewithmywholefamily.GuangzhouisinthesoutheastofChina.Itisabeautifulcity.WestayedinGuangzhouforthreedays.Theweatherwasfine.ThefirstdaywevisitedYuexiuPark.Therewasabiglake.Isawsomepeoplerowingboatsonit.TheseconddaywewenttoZhujiangNewCity.WevisitedGuangzhoulibrary.Weatesomedeliciousfood.ThenwewenttoHuangpu.Wetookaship.WesawZhujiangRiver.ThethirddaywewenttoChanglongwherewevisitedthezooandsawsomelovelyanimals.Wewereveryhappy.Whatanunforgettabletrip！【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出“广州之旅”的话题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、地点、出行方式、旅行中的所闻所见”等方面进行介绍；第三步，书写结语，总结全文。[亮点词汇]①stayin待在②inthesoutheastof在……的东南部③seesb.doingsth.看见某人正在做某事[高分句型]①ThethirddaywewenttoChanglongwherewevisitedthezooandsawsomelovelyanimals.（where引导的定语从句）②Whatanunforgettabletrip!（以what开头的感叹句）7．例文DearAmy,Howareyoudoing?Thesummerholidayising.Iamgoingtohaveatrip.IfeelexcitedthatIamgoingtoQingdaowithmyparents.Sinceflyingsavesalotoftime,wewillgotherebyplaneonJuly20th.Wearegoingtostaytherefortendaysduringtheholiday.We’llbringsomeusualmedicinesandclothes.Visiting,swimmingandeatingseafoodwillbethemainpartofourtrip.Itwillbeawonderfultimeforallofus.Besides,wearegoingtobuysomesouvenirs.I’msurethatwe’llhaveagoodholiday.Pleasegivemylovetoyourparents.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：以“一般将来时”为主；③提示：信息要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，可适当添加细节，完善作文内容。[写作步骤]第一步，表达问候，介绍写作背景（已给出）；第二步，介绍有关旅行的基本内容：目的地、交通方式、出行时间和停留时间、携带的物品、旅途中要做的事等；第三步，书写结语（已给出）。[亮点词汇]①haveatrip去旅游②alotof很多③byplane乘坐飞机④[高分句型]①IfeelexcitedthatIamgoingtoQingdaowithmyparents.(“sb.feelexcitedthat...”句式)②Visiting,swimmingandeatingseafoodwillbethemainpartofourtrip.(动名词作主语)③I’msurethatwe’llhaveagoodholiday.(“sb.besurethat...”句式)8．例文MyMotherMymotherisLiuMei,sheis39yearsold.Sheistallandslim.Sheisabeautifulwomanwithlongblackhairandglasses.Mymotherworksasanurse.Sheispatientandkind.Shealwayshasasmileonherface.Peoplealllikeher.Sheisalsohardworking.Sometimessheworksatnight.Mymotherlikescookingverymuch.Ithinkthatshecanmakethemostdeliciousmealintheworld.Soweoftencooktogether.MymotherandIarelikefriends,weoftenplayandchattogether.Irememberthatwewouldhaveatriptogetherwhentheholidayscame.AndeachtimeIhadadifferentharvest.SoIloveherverymuch.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，点题，介绍“我”的母亲；第二步，具体介绍和母亲之间的快乐时光；第三步，书写结语，总结全文。[亮点词汇]①patient有耐心的②delicious美味的③arelike像[高分句型]①Ithinkthatshecanmakethemostdeliciousmealintheworld.（that引导的宾语从句）②Irememberthatwewouldhaveatriptogetherwhentheholidayscame.（that引导的宾语从句与when引导的时间状语从句）9．例文：DearWatson,I’mgladtohearfromyou.YouwanttotraveltoChongqingduringthesummervacation,andIwouldbehappytointroducethisbeautifulcitytoyou.ChongqingislocatedinthesouthwestofChina.Theweatherisveryhotinsummer,soyoucanbringsomecoolclothes.Chongqingisfamousforitscuisine,especiallythespicinessofSichuancuisine.Youcantryhotpot,DandannoodlesandMapotofu,whicharelocalspecialties.Inaddition,therearemanytouristattractionsinChongqing,suchastheThreeGorges,YuzhongBridgeandMonumenttothepeople’sLiberationPedestrianStreet.YoucanalsoenjoythenightviewofthecityfromthetopofMountHuangshanPark.IhopeyouhaveapleasanttimeinChongqing.Ifyouneedanyhelp,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeatanytime. Yours, LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示中的信息，介绍重庆这座城市，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，介绍重庆这座城市；第二步，具体阐述，从城市的天气、美食、风景及注意事项进行介绍；第三步，书写结语，表达期望。[亮点词汇]①befamousfor因……而出名②belocatedin坐落于③cuisine美食④inaddition除此之外[高分句型]①Youcantryhotpot,DandannoodlesandMapotofu,whicharelocalspecialties.(非限制性定语从句)②Ifyouneedanyhelp,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeatanytime.(if条件状语从句)10．例文Myfriend’sBirthday

IhaveagoodfriendnamedTom.Heisofmediumheightwithshortcurlyhair.Helikeseatingbeefandnoodles.LastSundaywashis14thbirthday,andTimandIorganizedabirthdaypartyforhimathishome.Itwasameaningfulandunforgettableday.

Westartedthecelebrationbysinging“HappyBirthday”andtellingstoriesthatmadeusalllaugh.Tomlovedthechessgameweplayed,andwemadebirthdaycardsforhimasasurprise.ThehighlightofthedaywaswhenwecutthecakeandTommadeawish.Wetooklotsofphotostocapturethememories.

Thisbirthdaypartywasnotjustabouthavingfun;itwasaboutcelebratingourfriendshipandthegrowthwe’veexperiencedtogether.Thedayremindedmeoftheimportanceofcherishingthemomentswesharewithourlovedones.

Throughthisexperience,Irealizedthatabirthdayisnotjustaboutthepersoncelebratingitbutalsoaboutthebondswestrengthenandthememorieswecreatetogether.Itwasadayfilledwithjoy,laughter,andasenseofbelongingthatIwillalwaystreasure.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态应为一般过去时；③提示：写作要点已给出，适当添加细节，使故事更加生动和具体。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇引入。简短介绍Tom和他的生日以及你和Tim为他举办的生日活动。第二步，活动描述。详细描述生日当天的活动，包括唱歌、讲故事、下棋、制作卡片、拍照、吃生日蛋糕并许愿等。第三步，个人感悟。表达通过这次生日活动学到的教训、感悟或收获，以及这次活动对你们友谊的影响。[亮点词汇]①bemediumheight中等身高②madeawish许愿[高分句型]①ThehighlightofthedaywaswhenwecutthecakeandTommadeawish.(表语从句)②Thedayremindedmeoftheimportanceofcherishingthemomentswesharewithourlovedones.(定语从句)11．例文

Therehavebeenmanymeaningfulactivitiesinthepastthreeyears.OneofthemisNewYearParty2021.

AllmyteachersandclassmatescelebratedtheingNewYeartogetheronthelastdayof2020.Myclassmatesshowedtheirvarioustalentsatthisparty.Ialsosangasong.Attheendoftheparty,wereadapoemthatwaswrittenbyourselvestoourteachers.ThepartywasmeaningfultomebecauseInotonlyhadahappytimebutalsohadagoodchancetoexpressourthankstoourteachers.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。这篇短文写作范围及内容如下：在你学校或班级组织的各种形式的活动中，你记忆最深刻的活动是什么？并要简述活动过程，最后还要谈谈你的体验或收获。2.题干解读：本文采用一般过去时为主；人称采用第一人称和第三人称为主；文章可采用三段式，第一段介绍记忆最深刻的活动是什么；第二段介绍活动过程；最后一段介绍体验或收获。文章确保条理清晰、语言连贯，符合写作要求。12．例文Thesummerholidaysareing.I’dliketotakeatriptoYouyang.Itisabeautifulplaceandhasmanydeliciousfood.Iwanttogothereforalongtime.Iplantogotherebycarwithmyparents.Weplantostaythereforthreedays.Iwilltakeacamerawithme.Iwishtovisitsomeplacesofinterestandtakemanybeautifulpictures.Icanalsoenjoythedeliciousfoodthere.IpreparewellforitandIthinkIwillhaveagoodtimethere.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍你暑假在重庆内的一份旅行计划。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具