人教版中考英语写作专项训练Better +Your+++Writing+-

BetterYourWriting写作黄金五条1、文章分成三段。（注意审题）2、惊艳----制造亮点（尤其第一段）3、清晰----标志词的使用（主体段）4、不用自己不懂的词语。5、卷面保持整洁，书写工整。八大功用句式1、描述类：阅读经典书籍很重要.Readingclassicsisveryimportant./Itisveryimportanttoreadclassics.Readingclassicsisplaysanextremelyimportantrole.句型1：……isofimportance.“……很重要”Readingclassicsisofgreat/utmostimportance.句型2：……playsanimportantrole.“……很重要”eg:做好个人防护对于每个人都很重要。Personalprotectionplaysanextremelyimportantroleineveryone’slife.经典开头句：∆Itcannotbedeniedthat……不可否认的是……∆Thereisagrowingrecognitionthat……人们越来越认识到……∆Itgoeswithoutsayingthat……毋庸置疑的是……Itgoeswithoutsayingthatpersonalprotectionplaysanextremelyimportantroleineveryone’slife.做好个人防护对于每个人都很重要，这是毋庸置疑的。2、重视类：我们应该重视教育/培养好习惯.Weshouldpayspecial/muchattentiontoeducation.Weshouldattachgreatimportancetodevelopinggoodhabits.句型：pay（much）attentionto……“重视、注意、关注”attachimportanceto……eg:作为一名中学生，我们应该重视基础知识。Asamiddleschoolstudent,oneshouldpaymuchattentiontobasicknowledge.Asamiddleschoolstudent,oneshouldattachgreatimportancetolearningbasicknowledge.(注意一致性问题)句型1：……capture/drawone’sattention.“……引起了某人的关注”eg:食品安全引起了大量公众关注。Foodsafetyhascaptured/drawnagreatdealofpublicattention.句型2：muchattentionhasbeenpaidto……“……引起了关注”eg:大家都很关注如何有效利用周末假期。Muchattentionhasbeenpaidtohowtomakefulluseofweekendseffectively.3、结果类：良好的习惯对我们的学习和生活产生了积极的影响.句型：haveaninfluenceon……“对……有影响”exertapositive（积极的）/negative（消极的）/great/huge(巨大的)impacton……eg:网络对于我们的日常生活产生了巨大的影响，这是不可否认的。ItcannotbedeniedthattheInternethasahugeimpact/influenceonourdailylife.类似：越来越多的人意识到，环境污染对于我们的健康产生了很大的影响。Thereisagrowingrecognitionthatenvironmentalpollutioncanhaveahugeinfluenceonourhealth.4、使动类：网络能让/使我们更有效地沟通.TheInternetallowsustocommunicatemoreeffectively.句型：enable/allow……to……“让……”“使……”eg:在线沟通让我们交流更加方便。Onlineconversationallowsustocommunicateinaneasierway.补充句型：offersb.sth.=offersth.tosb.为某人提供某物providesb.withsth.=providesth.forsb. 为某人提供某物bringsb.sth=bringsth.tosb.为某人带来某物eg:阅读能给我们提供丰富的知识。Readingcanprovideuswithsufficient/wealthyknowledge.5、议论类：线上支付是否能取代线下支付，这个问题产生了很多争议。Thereismuchcontroversyoverwhetheronlinepaymentcanreplaceofflinepayment.句型：Thereismuchcontroversyover……“……存在争议”eg:学习基础知识是否重要，这个问题引起了工作的广泛讨论。Thereismuchcontroversyoverwhetherlearningbasicskillsreallyplaysaroleinourlife.eg:是否要延迟退休，存在很多争议。Thereismuchcontroversyoverwhethertodelayretirement.6、见证类：近几年来，中国经历了经济的飞速发展。版本1:Inrecentyears,therehasbeenarapideconomicdevelopmentinaChina.版本2：Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessed/seenarapideconomicdevelopmentinChina.版本3：Duringthepastseveralyears,Chinahaswitnessed/seenarapideconomicdevelopment.替换：Chinahasexperiencedarapideconomicdevelopmentinrecentyears.Europehassufferedfromagreatfinanciallossinrecentyears.eg：近几年来，中国见证了信息的爆炸。Chinahaswitnessed/seenthegreatinformationexplosion(爆炸)duringthepastseveralyears.ThepastseveralyearshaveseenthegreatinformationexplosioninChina.7、引出类：孩子的教育已经成为最重要的社会问题之一Children’seducationhasrecentlybecomeoneofthemostimportantsocialproblems.句型1:……hasbecomeoneof……“……已经成为……”句型2:……hasarisenasoneof……句型3:……hasemergedintoone’svision.eg:信息安全近来成为了一个热门话题。Informationsafetyhasbecomeoneoftheheatedtopics.eg:环境问题在近几年进入到了我们的视野中。Theissueofenvironmentalproblemhasemergedintoourvisioninrecentyears.8、趋势类：越来越多的人开始重视如何有效利用周末假期。Agrowingnumberofpeoplearepayingmuchattentiontohowtomakefulluseofweekendseffectively.句型1：moreandmorepeople……句型2:Anincreasing/Agrowingnumberofpeople……句型3:peopleingrowingnumbers/mountingnumbers.eg：随着网络的出现，网络课程越来越受欢迎。Withtheappearance/emergenceofInternet,onlinecoursesbecomeincreasinglypopularamongcollegestudents.eg：网络在我们的日常生活中越来越重要。TheInternethasplayedanincreasinglyimportantroleinourdailylife.随着时间的推移，越来越多的人已经意识到食品安全的重要性。Astimegoesby/on，agrowingnumberofpeoplehaverealizedtheimportanceoffoodsafety.写作思维导图(mindmap)Stage1:审体裁________________时态________________人称________________Stage2:抓动词短语句子结构Stage3:扩-----扩成句子MakeuptheneededsentencesStage4:连-----连句成篇1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas和,both…and,notonly…butalso不仅，而且,neither…nor既不，也不;2.表示选择:or,either…or要么，要么;3.表示转折:but,however,although,though,afterall毕竟,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand;7.表示解释:forexample,suchas,8.表示顺序:firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,fromthenon,finally,intheend;9.表示强调:also,besides,what’smore而且,actually实际上,infact事实上,10.表示结论:altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking总的来说,ingeneral总而言之Stage5:改----注意细节谋篇布局1、“两点”“”“三点”如何表述？∆Firstly,…Secondly,…第一点…，第二点…∆Ontheonehand,…ontheotherhand,…一方面，…另一方面，…∆Tobeginwith/Firstofall/Atfirst,…首先Furthermore(此外，而且),…∆Inthefirstplace,…第一点Besides,…而且，并且Lastbutnotleast（最后但同样重要的是）,…2、“顺接”和“转接”如何表述？顺接：∆asaresult结果/asaconsequence/consequently/therefore(因此)转接：however然而/nevertheless(然而，不过)/nonetheless（然而）3、“总结”如何表述？总之：inconclusion,allinall,inaword，tosumup简而言之：inshort,inbrief,如前所述：ashasbeenmentionedabove.giventhefactorsIhavejustoutlined(factor.n.因素，要素；outline.v.概述)4、“个人观点”如何表述？asfarasIamconcerned/asfarasIknow/asfarasIcanseeinmyeyes/inmyopiniontomyknowledge/tothebestmyknowledgeasformefrommyperspective/frommypointofview万能模板句式Withthereformandopening-upinrecentdecadesinChina,people’slivingstandardhasbeenverymuchimproved.随着中国近几十年的改革开放以来，中国人民的生活水平大幅度提升。Withthedevelopmentofeconomyandsociety,competitionisincreasinglyfierce.随着经济和社会进步，竞争日益激烈。Itiswell-knownthatweexistinadynamicworldwithvariousdifficulties.Wecandonothingbutfacethem.Attitudeisthekeypointtotakethefirststep.众所周知，我们生活在一个充满很多困难的动态的世界。除了面对别无他法。态度是迈出第一步的关键。S