BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷15（共18题）

BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷15（共9套）（共18题）BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第1套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、Yourcompany’sSalesDepartmenthasaskedyoutogiveatalknextFridayonyourmostrecentproject.WriteanemailtoMrs.JayintheSalesDepartment:agreeingtogivethetalkandsuggestingatimesayingwhatequipmentyouwillneedrequestinginformationabouttheparticipants.Write40-50words.标准答案：To:AnnaJayFrom:Sicky<sicky@126.com>Date:lMay,2011Subject:TalkNextFridayIwouldliketogivethetalksuggestedbyyouandIthink9:30am.,afterthebreakwouldbetheperfecttime.Requiredequipment:-OverheadProject-FlipchartwithPensPleasegivemesomeinformationaboutthepeopleparticipating.Renate知识点解析：本文是对商务电子邮件的考查，是对公司销售部门主管回复答应做报告的回复，内容要求是答应作报告并建议作报告的时间、所需要的设备，提供参与者的有关信息。文章语气要谦逊、措辞要得体。二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、Yourdepartmentneedstorecruitmorestaff,yourlinemanagerwantsyoutowriteareportexplainingyourrequirementsandcommentingonrecruitmentmethods.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.标准答案：ReportonstaffrecruitmentAsourcompanyisdevelopingseveralnewproducts,thedepartmentofR&Dneedsnewstaffurgentlytohelpdesignandmonitorourproducts.Thusweneedtorecruit35newstaff,includingelectricalengineersandproductdevelopers.Allofthemshouldhaveatleasttwoyears’experienceinrelevantfield.Morespecificrequirementswillfinallybedecidedinafewdays.Astorecruitmentmethods,thedisadvantageofrelyingonrecruitmentagencyisthatweneedmoretimeandprocedurethanwecanafford.SoIsuggestweturntoamoredirectwayofNewspaperadvertisement,whichhasbeenusedmanytimesandprovedeffective.Comparingthetwonewspapers,EchoandChronicle,weprefertheformerbecausethoughitcharges￡500morethanthelatter,thegeneralreadersare400,000more,mostofwhomarehighly-educated.Wearesuretogetreplysoonafterwelaunchtherecruitmentcampaign.知识点解析：本题是对商务报告的考查，内容要求是因部门需要招聘更多的员工，你的经理要求你写一份报告以解释招聘要求，并讨论一下招聘的方式。内容方面，根据题目所给出的信息，首先介绍报告的目的，其他内容包括解释为什么需要新的员工，说出需要什么类型的员工，解释通过招聘机构来招聘存在的缺点，阐述报纸广告的优点，最后总结写此报告的结论。要按照商务报告的格式和内容要求来完成文章的写作，语言必须简洁，信息不能遗漏，选词要准确，因是写给上级的报告，故用语要正式严谨。BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第2套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、Youarethefactorymanagerofacarcompany.Youarewaitingforurgentlyneededcomponentsfromyourpurchasingdepartment.WriteanotetoMrGrayson,theAssistantPurchasingManager:enquiringaboutthereasonforthedelaystatingwhenthecomponentsareneededsuggestingameetingtodiscussfuturedeliveries.Write40-50words.标准答案：IamwritingtoenquireaboutthereasonforthelatedeliveryofthecomponentIordered,needbynextMonday.Inordertowhichare,Isuggestthatwehaveameetingtodiscussfuturedeliveries.知识点解析：本文是对商务便条的考查，是汽车公司工厂经理写给采购经理的便条。内容要求是询问订购的元件拖延的原因，说明什么时间需要元件，建议组织一个讨论将来交付的会议。写作时按照商务便条的写作形式，将所给信息阐述详细即可，因是两经理之间的留言，措辞及语气要谦虚得体。二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、Youaretheownerofaclothingfactory.Acustomerhassentyoualettersummarizingarecentnegotiation.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Thenusingallyourhandwritennoteswritea120-140wordsreplytothebuyerusingtheletterandyournotes.Write120-140words.标准答案：DearStephanie,Thankyouforyourletterof1March.WearedelightedthattheShebarangewillbeinyourcatalogue.Thereare,however,somesmallpointswhichneedclarifying.TheShebarangecomesinsixcolours.Pleaselookatthesamplesandconfirmwhichthreecoloursyouwouldlike.Youreferredtothefurtheroptionof3,000pieces.Ithoughtwehadagreedon4,000.Pleaseconfirmthecorrectfigure.Icanconfirmtheoptionalpieceswillcost$5.25each.Unfortunately,duetoafullorderbook,weareunabletodeliverbyAug.1,1999.TheearliestdatewouldbeAug.15,1999.Ihopethiswillbeacceptable.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,ParveenMirza知识点解析：本文是对商务信函的考查，要求以一家服装厂的老板的口吻，针对客户在谈判后关于谈判内容的来信，写信给予回复。内容方面，题目所给出的信息是你对谈判也比较满意，进一步确认对方所需要的衣服是哪三种颜色，确认进一步选择的数量，确认已商定的每件衣服的价格和衣服出厂交付订单的时间。按照商务信函的格式要求，完成文章的写作，因是双方的协商与确认，所以用词要婉转准确，语气要和蔼，语言组织要简洁明了。BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第3套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、•YouaretheChiefAccountantforanImport-ExportAgency.Youhaveseenanadvertisementforashorttrainingcourseaboutanewfinancialmanagementprogram.•Writeamemoofwordstoyourbosstoinclude:•arequesttogoonthecourse•somedetailsaboutthecourse(e,g.date,cost)•whyyouthinkthecoursewiltbeuseful.•Write40—50wordsonaseparatesheet.标准答案：To:TheManagingDirector(orsimilartitle)From:ChiefAccountantDate:14April,2005Subject:ASmartFinancetrainingcourseIshouldliketoattendthiscourseaboutanewfinancialmanagementprogram.Thecourseison23SeptemberandcostsUS$500.Ithinkthatattendingthiscoursewillhelpmetodomyjobbetterinfuture.知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、WHEREPEOPLESPENDTHEIRHOLIDAYSYouareaclerkinLuckyTourismCompany.Youareresponsibleforarrangingtravellinglines.Oneday,youreceivedthedataasfollows:Readthefollowingtablewhichshowsthechangesinthewaypeoplespendtheirholidays.Thetabledividesthetourismbusinessintofourparts,tellingthedifferentpercentagesin1990andin2000,fromwhichyouwillnoticethetrendofcurrenttourismbusiness.Usetheinformationinthetabletowriteashortreport(about100~120words)emphasizingchangesofthemainbusinessforyourcompany.WriteonyourAnswerSheet.标准答案：TheChinesepeasants’personalincomerosesteadilyfrom1978to1986.Attheendofthe1980’sthepeasants’incomewasratherlow.Theirave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ofParksidestaffleavingstoresproblem,Imadeareportasfollows:Atfirst,lookatdraw,fromthisoneyoucansee,Year2007.Highgatelost4person.Parksidelost5.Until2008,Highgate’srateisreduced,butParkside’srateisgrewsohighmorestaffleavingwillmakethestorepaymoretime&moneyemployanotheroneinsteadofthisone.Thisiswastetothemanualresource&money.ThroughcommunicatewiththeParksidestaff,Iknowtherearethreepointveryimportant.Firstly,trainingwanted.Thestaffwanttomoretrainingtoimprovethemselves’level,everydaytheirmakethesamejob,longandlong,theirwillhatethisjob.Ithinkthecompanyneedtoprovidethisbenefittothestaff.Secondly.Morepaidholiday.Ithinkthisisthefirst,butthestaffisnotpayattentionit,sothatisnotpossible.Thirdly.BonusScheme,ifthecompanycanpaymoremoneyemploythenewstaffwhycannotpaymoresalarytothecurrentstaff?SoIsuggestthecompanyprovidethedouble-salaryasthebonuspayforthecurrentstaffendoftheyears.That’sall.Sincerely,Lucy.Band2Thereportisconsiderablylongerthantherecommendedwordlengthanddoesnotcoverallthecontentpoints.Althoughthereportisadequatelyparagraphed,cohesionisweak.Theregisterandformatofthereportarenotalwaysappropriate;errorsarenumerousandimpedeclearcommunicationofthemessage.SampleDReportonstaffturnoverIntroductionThisreportaimstoexplainthehighstaffturnover2008inParksideandtoproposemeasurestoimprovestaffloyalty.FindingsThefiguresclearlyshowthatthehighnumberofstaffleavingthestoresisaproblemthatonlyaffectstheParksidestorein2008.WhilestaffturnoverintheHighgatestoreremainedonalowlevelthenumberofstaffleavingParksideshootupfrom5to20.Thisunfortunatelyhasabadimpactoncustomerservice.Researchamongststaffrevealedtheirrequirements.Firstlystaffrequiresmoretrainingwhatwouldalsobenefitthecompanyastheserviceislikelytoimprove.Anothergoodideaistheintroductionofabonusschemeforvaluedstaffthatwouldimprovestaffloyalty.Unlikethementionedproposalstherequestforalongerannuallavecouldnotbemet.RecommendationsItisrecommendedtoofferboththerequestedtrainingopportunitiesandabonusschemeforvaluedstaff.Band5Allcontentpointsareclearlycovered,andthereportiswellorganisedwithgoodcohesion.Boththeregisterandformatareconsistentlyappropriate.Generally,thelanguageusedisaccurate,andagoodrangeofstructuresandvocabularyisdemonstrated.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第7套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、Youareamanagerinthemagazinedepartmentofaninternationalpublishingcompany.Yourcompanyisaskedtoholdthe11thBookFairtogetherwithsomerelatedagencies.Writeanemailtothemanagerofdespatchdepartment:sayingwhentheBookFairstartsandhowlongitwilllastexplainingtheimportanceofholdingtheBookFairtellinghimwhatheshoulddotopreparefortheBookFair.Write40-50words.To:JimGreenFrom:WilliamKingDate:December11th,2012Subject:the11thBookFairPreparations标准答案：To:JimGreenFrom:WilliamKingDate:December11th,2012Subject:the11thBookFairPreparationsMr.Green,Asisplanned,the11thBookFairwillbeheldfromDecember18thto24th.Thefairisvitalforthepromotionofournewlypublishedbooks.Pleasebepreparedforthefairbymakingafulllistofourbooksshownduringthefair,aswellasthenamesoftheagenciestobeinvited.Thankyou.William知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、Thecompanyyouworkforisplanningtoundertakesomeinitiativestoreducethestaffturnoverandimprovetheworkingefficiency.Yourlinemanagerisinterestedinbenefitsandincentives,andhasaskedyoutowriteareportsummarisingthestaff’sopinions.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.标准答案：Reportonbenefits—levelofstaffmembersIntroductionThisreportaimstoshowwhetherourstaffmembersaresatisfiedwiththecompany’sbenefitsystemornot.FindingsTherecentmeetingshowsthatthestaffissatisfiedwithemployeebenefits.Especially,manyofthemthinkhighlyofourinsurancerelatedbenefitsandpaidvacations.Nevertheless,somecomplainedaboutmealallowance,astheyworkfarawayfromhomeandtherisingpriceoffoodinsuchdowntownareasisaheavyburden.Besides,thepoorhousingallowancewasmentioned.Manyofthemaredissatisfiedwithourincentivesystem:theysuggestthatthechanceofeconomicincentivegivespeoplethegreatestmotivation.Finally,Iwouldsuggesttoincreasethenumberofmealandhousingallowanceandsupplyvariousformsofincentivestokeepthestaffmotivated.ConclusionInmyopinion,weshouldtrytoimprovetheconditionsofbenefitsandincentivesforthiswillenableourcompanytohavealowstaffturnoverandwillalsoimprovetheworkefficiency.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第8套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、Youarethepublicrelationsmanagerofalargeexportcompany.PeterJames,animportantclient,isgoingtovisityourcompanyforhalfamonthfromApril15th.Writeamemotoyoursecretary:askinghertobookahotelroomtellinghertheexactdatesayingwherethehotelshouldbe.Write40-50words.MEMOTo:From:Date:Subject:标准答案：To:MaryGellerFrom:JohnBrownDate:1stAprilDearMary,I’mreallysorrytohavetointeruptyou,butPeterJames,areallyimportantclient,isgoingtovisitourcompanyforhalfamonthfromApril15th,todiscusstheimportofournewly-developedproduct.WillyoupleasebookahotelroomforMr.Jamesnearourcompanyassoonaspossible?Thanksalot.知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、YouworkintheCustomerServicesDepartmentofaninductioncookercompany.Youhavebeenaskedtoprepareareportforyourdepartmentmanageraboutcustomers’complaints.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.标准答案：ReportonCustomerComplaintsINTRODUCTIONThisreportaimstopresentthereasonsforcustomercomplaintsaboutinductioncookersofourcompanyfromApriltoJunein2012.FINDINGSThenumberofcustomercomplaintswereceivedinAprilwas260.Thenitincreasedto370inMaybecauseoftheplugleakageofsomeproducts.InJune,thisnumberreducedbecauseoftherecallofthosedefectiveproducts.ThereasonsforcomplaintsfromApriltoJunewereanalysedasfollows:Firstly,thecompanyreceivedcomplaintsfordefectiveproducts.ThissituationbecamebetterinJune.Secondly,somestaffhaspoormaintenancetechniques:consideringit,ourcompanyhasplannedtotrainemployeesnextmonth.Finally,customerscomplainforbadmannersofCustomerHotlinestaff.Inordertosolvethisproblem,regularperformanceevaluationshouldbecarriedoutassoonaspossible.CONCLUSIONSAfteranalysingthereasonsfordifferentcustomercomplaints,manymeasureshav