层级4完整版巧缜密的谋篇第1讲记叙文教师用书教案2

第1讲记叙文一、写人记叙文[谋篇布局][亮点句式]●夺人眼球开头句1．Mr.Zhangplayedanimportantroleinpromotingmystudies,whichleftadeepimpressiononme.张老师在我提升学习成绩的过程中起着重要作用，这给我留下了深刻的印象。2．WheneverItalkabouttheDragonBoatFestival,Ican'thelpthinkingofQuYuan,agreatpatrioticpoetinChinesehistory.每当谈论起端午节，我都不禁想起屈原，中国历史上一位伟大的爱国诗人。3．Martin,whoseChinesenameisMaLin,isouroralEnglishteacherthisterm.马丁是我们这学期的英语口语老师，他的中文名是马林。●亮点出彩篇中间4．Heishonestandalwaysreadytohelpothers.That'swhywemadehimourmonitor.他诚实且乐于助人。所以我们选他当班长。5．Thelongerhestayswithus,themorepopularwithushehasbecome.他与我们相处越久，就越受我们的欢迎。6．Thankstohishelp,Ihavemademuchprogressandcaughtupwithothers.多亏他的帮助，我取得了很大进步并赶上了其他同学。●韵味无穷结尾句7．Heissuchalearnedteacherthatallofusrespecthim.他是如此博学的老师，我们大家都很尊敬他。8．SuchisMr.Li,akind­hearted,humorousandresponsibleteacher.这就是李老师，一位心地善良、幽默、有责任心的教师。9．Lookingatmygrandma'spalefaceandwhitehair,Iwasclosetotears.看着奶奶苍白的面庞和满头白发，我眼泪都快掉下来了。[佳作背诵](2020·全国卷Ⅰ)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1．人物简介；2．尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意：1．词数100左右；2．短文题目和首句已为你写好。ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.Asforme,myEnglishteacher，MsLi，isthepersonIrespectmost.ThoughshehasbeenteachingEnglishfortwentyyears，sheisstillpassionateaboutteaching.Shealwaystriesnewwaystomakeherclasseslivelyandinteresting.Hard­workingandknowledgeable，sheisoneofthebestteachersinourschool，widelyadmiredandpraised.Sheiskindandconsideratetowardsusjustlikeourdearmother.Wheneverweencounterproblems，wewillturntoherforhelp.Shealwaystalkstouspatientlyandhelpsustofindasolution.Inoureyes，MsLiisnotonlyourteacher，butalsoourbestfriend.Shedeservesourloveandrespect.[针对性训练](2020·武汉市六月供题)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Robert看了BBC纪录片《杜甫：中国最伟大的诗人》后，发来一封邮件，询问中国人对杜甫的看法。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1．著述颇丰；2．心怀百姓。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearRobert，How'severythinggoing?I'mgladtohearthatyouhavewatchedthedocumentaryDuFu:China'sGreatestPoetmadebyBBC.HereIwillintroducesomethingaboutDuFutoyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wishyouallthebest.Yours，LiHua[参考范文]DearRobert，How'severythinggoing?I'mgladtohearthatyouhavewatchedthedocumentaryDuFu:China'sGreatestPoetmadebyBBC.HereIwillintroducesomethingaboutDuFutoyou.DuFuisregardedasoneofthegreatestpoetsinChinesehistory.Hewasquiteproductive,leavingabout1，500poemsbehind,mostofwhicharestillpopulartoday.Welovehimnotonlybecausehewrotemanygreatpoems,butbecausehelovedthecommonpeople.Inmostofhispoems,hedescribedthelifeofordinarypeopleandtheextremehardshiptheywerefacingaswellascriticizingthegovernmentwhodidn'tcareaboutthecommonpeople.I'mdelightedthatyouhaveaninterestinChineseculture.Ifyoulearnmoreaboutit,you'llhaveabetterunderstandingofChina.Wishyouallthebest.Yours，LiHua二、叙事记叙文[谋篇布局][亮点句式]●夺人眼球开头句1．YesterdayafternoonIwenttothepark,whereIhappenedtowitnessatouchingstory.昨天下午我去了公园，在那里碰巧目睹了一个动人的故事。2．LastnightIwasbusypreparingformytestwhenIheardaloudnoise.昨晚当我正忙着准备我的考试时，我听到一声巨响。3．TodayisthetraditionalChinesefestival—theMid­autumnFestival.今天是中国的传统佳节——中秋节。●亮点出彩篇中间4．Ablindmanwasmovingslowlywithawalkingstickinhishand.一个盲人手里拿着一根拐杖，慢慢挪动着脚步。5．Theblueseaandthegoldenbeachmadeusfeelcompletelyrelaxedandhappy.蓝色的大海，金色的海滩，令我们心旷神怡。6．Beforeweknewit,wehadtoseegoodbyeandgetbackhome.不知不觉我们必须说再见回家了。●韵味无穷结尾句7．Ithinkthattheunforgettableexperiencewillbefreshinmymindforever.我想这次难忘的经历会永远留在我的脑海中。8．Thetearssparklinginmymother'seyesmustbetearsofhappiness.妈妈眼中闪烁的泪花一定是幸福的泪花。9．Throughthismeaningfulactivity,Ilearnedsomethingthatcan'tbelearnedinclass.通过这次有意义的活动，我学到了一些课堂上学不到的东西。[佳作背诵](2020·全国卷Ⅱ)上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：1．农场情况；2．采摘过程；3．个人感受。注意：1．词数100左右；2．题目已为你写好。题目：MyWeekendMyWeekendLastweekmyclassmatesandIwenttoafarmtopickfruits.Therearemanykindsoffruittreesonthefarm,whichislocatedatthefootofthehillnearourschool.Webeganpickingfruitsintwogroups,onepickingfruitsandtheothercarefullyputtingthemintobigboxes.Bathedinthesunshine,wesangandlaughed,enjoyingbeingclosetonature.Whatawonderfuldaywehad!Throughthepickingactivity,notonlydidwegainrelaxationbutalsowebecameawareofthesignificanceofphysicallabour.[针对性训练](2020·临汾市模拟)教师节前夕，你和同学们准备通过录制节目为班级老师庆祝教师节。请根据以下提示，以“ASpecialTeachers'Day”为题，为校刊上的英语角栏目写一篇短文，记述你们的庆祝过程。内容要点：1．活动策划；2．录制过程；3．教师的感受。注意：1．词数100左右；2．短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。ASpecialTeachers'DayNevershallIforgetthespecialTeachers'Day.ItwasallstartedseveraldaysbeforeTeachers'Day.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[