温州新力量联盟高二下学期期末读后续写讲解课件

2023学年第二学期

温州新力量联盟高二期末读后续写CentralParkNewYork前文解读01①Afewyearsago,thecompanythatIworkedforsentmywifeandmetoliveinNewYorkforayear.I’vealwayslovedrunning,soIwasreallyhappywhenIfoundIlivednexttoCentralPark.ThismeantthateverymorningIcouldgorunningbeforeIwenttowork.②Becausealotofpeoplehadtoldmetobecarefulofrobbersinthepark,sousuallyIdidn’ttakeanythingwithme.HowcouldtheyrobmeifIdidn’thaveanythingButonemorning,mywifegaveme10dollarsandaskedmetobuysomebreadontheway.Itwasabeautifulmorningandtheparkwasquietwithfewpeoplewalkingorjoggingaround.WhileIwasrunningthroughthepark,anotherjoggerknockedintome.Hesaidsorrytomeandcontinuedrunning.Forawhile,Ididn’tthinktoomuchofit.③However,whenInoticedthewidepathwhereIwasrunning,Ithoughtitwasalittlestrange.Thewarningofrobbersintheparkhitme.“Itcouldhavebeenarobber!”Isuddenlybecameanxious,soIcheckedmypocketandfoundthatthemoneywasmissing.Withoutthinkingtwice,Iranafterthatjogger.Ifinallycaughtupandheldhimbythearm.Ishouted,“Givemethe10dollars!Now!”Iamnotusuallyahot-headed(性急的)person,butIgotreallyangrythistime.Icouldn’tbelievetherobberywasactuallyhappeningtome.④Filledwithanger,Ishookmyfist(拳头)athim.Thisseemedtofrightenhim.Hequicklyputhishandinhispocketandgaveme10dollars.Thenheranawayasfastashecould.Iboughtthebreadandwenthome.⑤AssoonasIgothome,Icouldn’twaittotellmywifethestory.“Youwon’tbelievewhathappenedtome,”Isaidwithpride.Sheimmediatelystoppedme,“Iknow,youleftthemoneyforthebreadonthekitchentable.”①Afewyearsago,thecompanythatIworkedforsentmywifeandmetoliveinNewYorkforayear.I’vealwayslovedrunning,soIwasreallyhappywhenIfoundIlivednexttoCentralPark.ThismeantthateverymorningIcouldgorunningbeforeIwenttowork.②Becausealotofpeoplehadtoldmetobecarefulofrobbersinthepark,sousuallyIdidn’ttakeanythingwithme.HowcouldtheyrobmeifIdidn’thaveanythingButonemorning,mywifegaveme10dollarsandaskedmetobuysomebreadontheway.Itwasabeautifulmorningandtheparkwasquietwithfewpeoplewalkingorjoggingaround.WhileIwasrunningthroughthepark,anotherjoggerknockedintome.Hesaidsorrytomeandcontinuedrunning.Forawhile,Ididn’tthinktoomuchofit.

When:Where:Who:What:OnemorningCentralParkI,mywife,anotherjoggerIwastoldabouttherobbersinthepark.Iwentrunningandmywifegaveme10dollarstobuysomebread.Ajoggerknockedintome.

③However,whenInoticedthewidepathwhereIwasrunning,Ithoughtitwasalittlestrange.Thewarningofrobbersintheparkhitme.“Itcouldhavebeenarobber!”Isuddenlybecameanxious,soIcheckedmypocketandfoundthatthemoneywasmissing.Withoutthinkingtwice,Iranafterthatjogger.Ifinallycaughtupandheldhimbythearm.Ishouted,“Givemethe10dollars!Now!”Iamnotusuallyahot-headed(性急的)person,butIgotreallyangrythistime.Icouldn’tbelievetherobberywasactuallyhappeningtome.

④Filledwithanger,Ishookmyfist(拳头)athim.Thisseemedtofrightenhim.Hequicklyputhishandinhispocketandgaveme10dollars.Thenheranawayasfastashecould.Iboughtthebreadandwenthome.

ThewarningofrobbershitmeandIfoundthemoneywasmissing.Ithoughtofthejoggerasarobberandaskedhimtoreturnthemoney.Thefrightenedjoggergavemethemoneyandranaway.Iboughtthebreadandwenthome.

⑤AssoonasIgothome,Icouldn’twaittotellmywifethestory.“Youwon’tbelievewhathappenedtome,”Isaidwithpride.Sheimmediatelystoppedme,“Iknow,youleftthemoneyforthebreadonthekitchentable.”续写：

⑥Lookingatthemoneyonthetable,Istoodthere,shocked.

⑦ButIdidn’tgiveupfindinghimandforseveraldays,Iwaitedatthesameplaceinthepark.IwasabouttosharethestorywithmywifewhenIwastoldIleftthemoneyathome.

⑥Myfeelings(shocked),mymentalactivities(regret,guilt),Iwentbacktotheparktosavethesituation/correctmymistake.

⑦Ifoundthejogger,apologized/explained/wasforgiven,Ilearntanimportantlesson.前文理解02

①Afewyearsago,thecompanythatIworkedforsentmywifeandmetoliveinNewYorkforayear.I’vealwayslovedrunning,soIwasreallyhappywhenIfoundIlivednexttoCentralPark.ThismeantthateverymorningIcouldgorunningbeforeIwenttowork.

几年前，我工作的公司把我和妻子送到纽约住了一年。我一直喜欢跑步，所以当我发现我住在中央公园旁边时，我真的很高兴。这意味着每天早上我可以在上班前跑步。

(改错)②Becausealotofpeoplehadtoldmetobecarefulofrobbersinthepark,sousuallyIdidn’stakeanythingwithme.HowcouldtheyrobmeifIdidn’thaveanythingButonemorning,mywifegaveme10dollarsandaskedmetobuysomebreadontheway.Itwasabeautifulmorningandtheparkwasquietwithfewpeoplewalkingorjoggingaround.WhileIwasrunningthroughthepark,anotherjoggerknockedintome.Hesaidsorrytomeandcontinuedrunning.Forawhile,Ididn’tthinktoomuchofit.因为很多人告诉我要小心公园里的强盗，所以通常我什么都不带。如果我什么都没有，他们怎么会抢劫我但是有一天早上，我的妻子给了我10美元，让我在路上买一些面包。这是一个美丽的早晨，公园里很安静，周围散步或慢跑的人很少。当我跑过公园时，另一个慢跑者突然撞了我。他对我说了声对不起，然后继续跑走了。有一会儿，我并没有想太多。

③However,whenInoticedthewidepathwhereIwasrunning,Ithoughtitwasalittlestrange.Thewarningofrobbersintheparkhitme.“Itcouldhavebeenarobber!”Isuddenlybecameanxious,soIcheckedmypocketandfoundthatthemoneywasmissing.Withoutthinkingtwice,Iranafterthatjogger.Ifinallycaughtupandheldhimbythearm.Ishouted,“Givemethe10dollars!Now!”Iamnotusuallyahot-headed(性急的)person,butIgotreallyangrythistime.Icouldn’tbelievetherobberywasactuallyhappeningtome.

然而，当我注意到我跑步的那条宽阔的小路时，我觉得有点奇怪。公园里有强盗的警告击中了我。“可能是个强盗!”我突然着急起来，检查了一下口袋，发现钱不见了。我想都没想就追上了那个慢跑者。我终于赶上来，抓住他的胳膊。我喊道:“给我10美元!现在!”我通常不是一个头脑发热的人(性急的)，但这次我真的很生气。我不敢相信抢劫真的发生在我身上。

④

Filledwithanger,

Ishookmyfist(拳头)athim.Thisseemedtofrightenhim.Hequicklyputhishandinhispocketandgaveme10dollars.Thenheranawayasfastashecould.Iboughtthebreadandwenthome.我愤怒地挥舞着拳头(拳头)。这似乎把他吓坏了。他迅速把手伸进口袋，给了我10美元。然后他以最快的速度跑掉了。我买了面包就回家了。

⑤AssoonasIgothome,Icouldn’twaittotellmywifethestory.“Youwon’tbelievewhathappenedtome,”Isaidwithpride.Sheimmediatelystoppedme,“Iknow,youleftthemoneyforthebreadonthekitchentable.”我一到家就迫不及待地把这个故事告诉了我的妻子。“你不会相信发生在我身上的事，”我骄傲地说。她立刻打断了我，“我知道，你把买面包的钱落在厨房桌子上了。”范文赏析03Lookingatthemoneyonthetable,Istoodthere,shocked.Fortherestoftheday,Ifeltextremelyguilty,withtheinnocentjoggerandhis“helplessness”onmymind.“HowcouldIbesorudetohimwithoutknowingthetruthWhywasitthatthejoggergavemethemoneyIstillrememberedhisfrightenedfacewhenIscaredhimawaylikeamonster.Idecidedtofindachancetoapologizetohim.Thenextmorning,Igotupandwenttotheparkasusual,butnotforjogging.IjusthungaroundwhereIhadmetthatjogger,butinvain.ButIdidn’tgiveupfindinghimandforseveraldays,Iwaitedatthesameplaceinthepark.Buttomydisappointment,hedidn’tturnup.ItwasalmostaweeklaterbeforeIfinallyspottedhimagain.I,the“robber”,gavethe$10billbacktohimandsaidsorrytohimagainandagain.Fortunately,heforgavemeforwhatIhaddonetohimandsaid,“Oh,itdoesn’tmatter.”Manyyearshavepassed,butIcanstillfeelmycheeksburningwithshame.FromtheexperienceIhavelearnedthatitistooearlytojudgeapersonbeforeyouknowthetruth.Lookingatthemoneyonthetable,Istoodthere,shocked.Fortherestoftheday,Ifeltextremelyguilty,withtheinnocentjoggerandhis“helplessness”onmymind.“HowcouldIbesorudetohimwithoutknowingthetruthWhywasitthatthejoggergavemethemoneyIstillrememberedhisfrightenedfacewhenIscaredhimawaylikeamonster.Idecidedtofindachancetoapologizetohim.Thenextmorning,Igotupandwenttotheparkasusual,butnotforjogging.IjusthungaroundwhereIhadmetthatjogger,butinvain.看着桌上的钱，我站在那里，惊呆了。那天剩下的时间里，我感到非常内疚，那个无辜的慢跑者和他的“无助”一直萦绕在我的脑海里。“我不知道真相，怎么能对他这么粗鲁呢”为什么慢跑者会给我钱我仍然记得当我把他像怪物一样吓跑时他惊恐的脸。我决定找个机会向他道歉。第二天早上，我像往常一样起床去公园，但不是慢跑。我只是在我遇到那个慢跑者的地方闲逛，但一无所获。

ButIdidn’tgiveupfindinghimandforseveraldays,Iwaitedatthesameplaceinthepark.Buttomydisappointment,hedidn’tturnup.ItwasalmostaweeklaterbeforeIfinallyspottedhimagain.I,the“robber”,gavethe$10billbacktohimandsaidsorrytohimagainandagain.Fortunately,heforgavemefor

whatIhaddonetohimandsaid,“Oh,itdoesn’tmatter.”Manyyearshavepassed,butIcanstillfeelmycheeksburningwithshame.

FromtheexperienceIhavelearnedthat

itistooearlytojudgeapersonbeforeyouknowthetruth.

但我没有放弃寻找他，几天来，我在公园的同一个地方等着。但令我失望的是，他没有出现。差不多过了一个星期，我终于又见到了他。我，这个“强盗”，把10美元还给了他，一遍又一遍地向他道歉。幸运的是，他原谅了我对他所做的一切，并说:“哦，没关系。”许多年过去了，但我仍然感到羞愧得脸颊发烫。从经验中我了解到，在了解真相之前判断一个人为时过早。语料积累04feltextremelyguiltyhelplessnesswithsthonone’smindscaresbawayfindachancetodosthapologizetosbasusualhangaroundinvain

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