应用文练习写作训练-2024届高三英语写作复习备考

应用文练习写作训练：发帖-消防演习假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校组织的消防安全演习，请你在校英文论坛发表一篇帖子，分享此次经历，内容包括：1.

活动过程；2.

个人感悟。【注意】1.

词数80左右；2.

可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：消防安全演习firesafetydrill这一类演习/演练类的文章，可以等同为“活动内容”不一样的活动文章，主要侧重还是要在演习/演练的过程描写，因为此类话题范围比较小，所以积累这篇消防安全演习以及去年浙江金华二模的急救演练基本上就ok本篇文章虽然是帖子，但是其实就是报道类。第一段：帖子开头=报道开头（引出活动）Lastweek,Ihadtheopportunitytoparticipateinafiresafetydrillorganizedbyourschool,

which

provedtobe

aneye-openingand

educational

experienceforme.【最美结构，细节补充】【大众句式】Lastweekwitnessedmyparticipationin....

第二段：活动过程+个人感悟（也可以放P3）#

过程部分也有两种写法：①用我们之前讲过的活动类活动套句：讲座+演习；②纯演习的过程，这个写法更突出细节描写的能力。

【写法2】演习以一声突如其来的火警开始，标志着演练的开始。随后，我们被指示迅速而有序地疏散大楼，使用指定的逃生路线。最重要的是要尽量贴近地面行动，以避免吸入烟雾。Thedrillbeganwithanunexpectedfirealarm,signalingthestartoftheexercise.Weweretheninstructedtoevacuatethebuildingquicklyandorderly,usingthedesignatedescaperoutes.Themostimportantpartwastostaylowtothegroundtoavoidinhalingthesmoke.

【写法1】演习以一场关于消防安全重要性和火灾期间应遵循的正确程序的信息性讲座开始。接着我们将分组，每个小组被指派了特定任务，如疏散大楼、灭火或提供急救。Thedrillcommencedwithaninformativelectureontheimportanceoffiresafetyandtheproperprocedurestofollowduringafire.Wewerethendividedintogroups,eachofwhichwasassignedaspecifictasksuchasevacuatingthebuilding,extinguishingafire,oradministeringfirstaid.

第三段：个人感悟（注意“个人”）【暗连接】Personally,//Onapersonallevel,Thisexperiencetaughtmetheimportanceofbeingpreparedandawareofpotentialdangersandalsoemphasizedthesignificanceofteamworkandcalmnessduringemergencies.throughthisexperience,Irealizedthatfiresafetyisnotjustaboutknowingwhattododuringafire,butalsoabouttakingpreventivemeasurestoavoidone.【24届江西萍乡二模】你校最近开展了一次消防演练活动。请你为校英文报写一份主题为“FocusonFireSafety,CherishLife”的新闻报道，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.

活动过程和感受。【注意】1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.参考词汇：灭火器

fireextinguishers;

消防栓

firehydrants【不错范文】Inordertoenhancethefiresafety

awareness

andemergencyresponse

capabilities

ofthestudents,

afiredrillthemed

“FocusonFireSafety,CherishLife”

wassuccessfullyconducted

inourschool.Initially,professionalfirefighterswereinvitedtodeliveron-siteexplanations

and

demonstratethecorrectusage

offireextinguishersandfirehydrants.Then,duringthedrill,themomentthealarmsounded,allstudentscoveredtheirmouthsandnoseswithwettowelsbentdownlow,andpromptlyevacuatedtoasafeareainanorderlymanneraccordingtothepredeterminedescaperoute.Throughthisfiredrill,notonlydidweacquireessential

fireprevention

knowledgeandskills

butourfiresafety

awarenesswasfurtherstrengthened.假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你校即将组织急救演练，请你用英文写一则通知，内容包括：1.

时间、地点及参与人员；2.

具体内容；3.

注意事项。注意：1.

写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。【下水作文】AnnouncementforMedicalEmergencyDrillInordertopreparestudentsforanyunforeseenmedicalemergenciesthatmayoccurinourdailylives,amedicalemergencydrillwillkickoffnextMondayafternooninthehall.AllGradeOnestudentsarerequiredtoattend.Duringthedrill,variousmedicalemergencyscenarioswillbesimulated,includingheartattacksandinjuries.Inaddition,studentsmaygetthehangofbasicfirstaidskillslikeCPR,stitchingwoundsandbandaging,whichwillequipthemwithessentiallife-savingtechniques.Thesafetyofeveryoneinvolvedisofgreatsignificance.Pleaseremaincalmandfocusedthroughouttheexerciseandfollowtheinstructionsprovidedbythedesignatedpersonnel.TheStudentUnion【参考范文】AnnouncementforMedicalEmergencyDrillAimedatpreparingstudentsformedicalemergenciesthatmayarise,amedicalemergencydrillisscheduledtobeconductedontheschoolplaygroundthisFridayfrom3p.m.to4p.m.Allstudentsandstaffmembersarerequiredtoparticipate.Duringthedrill,amedicalemergencysituationwillbesimulated,wheretheparticipantswillacteitherasfirstaidersorvictims.Thefocuswillbeonprovidingbasicfirstaidforvictimsbeforeemergencyservicesarrive,suchasCPRandHeimlichmaneuver,whichcanmeanthedifferencebetweenlifeanddeath.Pleasenotethatalltheparticipantsmustfollowtheinstructionsoftheemergencypersonnel.Thankyouforyourcooperation.你校英文报将增设主题为“讲好中国故事”的栏目，你是栏目负责人李华，请你给外教Kate写邮件咨询她对栏目的建议。内容包括：1.介绍设想；2.咨询建议。【注意】1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。比较常规的题目套了新的说法而已。话题还是文化类，要点1：介绍设想→栏目介绍（目的啊内容啊皆可，这不是很常见么）；要点2：咨询建议（既然你问外教建议，所以一定是跟跨文化有关，所以可以咨询什么话题的故事外国学生会跟兴趣或者如何寻找好的资源网站，或者语言翻译上的一些求助。总体来说比较简单，但是站在学生的角度，限时的情况下，客观题的摧残下，还是有点小难度，所以朋友们淡定。）第一段：（自我介绍）+背景+写信目的#自我介绍（题干信息利用）I'mLiHua,inchargeofthenewlyestablishedcolumn"TellingChineseStories"inourschool'sEnglishnewspaper.#写信目的I'mreachingouttoyouforsomeadviceandinsightstomakethiscolumnexceptional.第二段：介绍设想+咨询建议#介绍设想≈栏目介绍（内容/目的等等）--用上SSS的介绍套句介【栏目内容】Thenewcolumnisdedicatedtoexploringawidearrayofaspectsof+细节细节1：Chineseculture,history,andcurrentevents.细节2：Chinesetraditionalfestivals,historicalfigures,literatureandarts,technologicalinnovations【目的】我们设想这个栏目不仅是向读者介绍中国的桥梁，还能够促进对中国传统文化和当代生活的更深入理解和欣赏。WeenvisionitasabridgethatnotonlyeducatesourreadersaboutChinabutalsofostersadeeperunderstandingandappreciationforthecountry'sheritageandcontemporarylife.#咨询建议：句式+内容(注意暗连接不一样主干主语也要不一样！)【V1】Asanexpertincross-culturalcommunication,couldyouofferussomesuggestions....?【V2】Tomakeitengagingandeducational,weareseekingyoursuggestions....【具体建议内容2选1或者都选】△1...如何选择和呈现能够引起我们广泛读者共鸣的故事。....onhowtoselectandpresentstoriesthatwillresonatewithourdiver