2025届高考英语复习 读后续写六、提升作文颜值 导学案

读后续写六、提升作文颜值一、巧用形容词Useadjectivestoconveyavividpicture!1.Janeroseatthebreakofday.2.Fortunately,wegotinthehelicopter3.Shebegansobbing.4.Marysatstillagainstthedoor.5.Wewerethrilledtoseetheboywasrescued.Wejumpedtoourfeet.6.Shewasexhausted.Shestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlung.7.Youcan'tmaginethatIwasveryanxiouswhenIknewyouwereinabadmood.→升级版:1.Janeroseatthebreakofday,_hungryandthirsty.2.Fortunately,wegotinthehelicopter,_safeandsound.3.Frightenedandfrustrated,Shebegansobbing.4.Lostintheaght,Marysatstillagainstthedoor.5.Sothrilledwerewetoseetheboywasrescuedthatwejumpedtoourfeet.6.Exhaustedas/thoughshewas,shestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlung.7.Youcan'timaginehowanxiousIwaswhenIknewyouwereinabadmood.→句式总结！①主谓...，adj(短语)②adj(短语)，主谓③so+adj+that...④adj+as/thoughsbis/was...⑤How+adj.+主谓Practice1.Mary满脸通红、气喘吁吁地从大门口跑了进来。2.Jack是如此的焦急以至于他在他的房间里来回踱步。3.困在迷雾中，我什么也做不了，只能哭泣，无助又失落。答案:Flushedandbreathless,Maryrushedoutofthegate.SoanxiousasJackthathepacedupanddowninhisroom.Trappedinthedensemist,Icoulddonothingbutburstintotears,helplessanddisappointed.二、活用副词①副词使表达更具活力②副词突出画面感例如:1.Tearsofjoyfloodedhereyesassheprayedsilently.2."She'sstolenmywatch!”Leesaidangrily(怒地说),"Itwentmissingatschoolyesterday.3.Deeplymoved(深地被感动)，weappreciatedhimandfeltasenseofwarmth.4.Hopelesslystandingontheroadside(绝望地站在路边),Iwassosadthatthetearswerefilledwithmyeyes.5.Myparentsscoldedmeforrunningoutofthehousesecretly(偷地跑出房间)butwerealsogladthatIwasnotseriouslyinjured(我受伤并不很严重).6.Totally/Absolutely/Completelyfrightened(完全被吓着)Macrodehisbikeasquicklyashecould.三、非谓语动词1.动词的一种形式，可以充当出了谓语以外的其他成分。它不受人称和数的限制。在句中起n.adj.adv.的作用。1.Hewastremblinginablanketandhesaid,“I’mcold.”=Tremblinginablanket,hesaid,“I'mcold.”2.Whenshearrivedthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,andaskedforZatanna'sdormitoryfromdoortodoor.=Arrivingthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,askingforZatanna'sdormitoryfromdoortodoor.3.ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere.Iheldthatten-dollarbillandIwonderedwhattobuyandwhotobuyitfor.=ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere,holdingthatten-dollarbillandwonderingwhattobuyandwhotobuyitfor.4.Shewrote“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit.ThenshedrovemeovertoBobbyDecker'shouseassheexplainedIwasofficiallyoneofSanta'shelpers.=Havingwritten“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit,shedrovemeovertoBobbyDecker'shouse,explainingIwasofficiallyoneofSanta'shelpers.Practice1.我小心翼翼地打开信，希望能找到一些有关钱包主人身份的线索。2.女孩微笑着，长发在微风中飘动。3.他的妻子伤心极了，眼里满是泪水。4.他又沮丧叉低落，低着头，走在队伍的最后。5.他聚精会神地听着，咬着嘴唇，眼睛盯着地板。6.天亮时Jane醒了，觉得头晕晕的。7."当然有圣诞老人啊"，奶奶说道，一边用手指拨弄着我的头发。8.她穿着圣诞老人的服装，悄悄溜进房间，没有被看到。9.Ronny沉浸在强烈的恐惧感中，一句话也说不出来。10.好奇心切，她从河岸边跑开，穿过田野去追兔子。11.他痛苦地喘着气，强迫自己站了起来，迈着缓慢的步子，摇摇晃晃地开始走。答案:1.Iopenedthelettercarefully,hopingforsomecluetotheidentityoftheownerofthewallet.2.Thegirlsmiled,withherlonghairflowinginthebreeze.3.Hiswifewasindeepsorrowwithhereyesfilledwithtears.4.Depressedandlow-spirited,hewalkedattheendofthelinewithhisheaddrooping.5.Helistenedwithcloseattention,bitinghislipsandstaringatthefloor.6.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeupwithherheadspinning.7."Ofcourse,thereisaSantaClause."Grandmasaid,strokingherfingersthroughmyhair.8.DressedinaSantaClauscostume,sheslippedintotheroomwithoutbeingnoticed.9.Immersedinastrongsenseofscare,Ronnycouldn'tutterasingleword.10.Burningwithcuriosity,sheranawayfromtheriverbankandacrossthefieldtochaseaftertherabbit.11.Gaspingwithpain,heforcedhimselftohisfeetandwithslow,shakysteps,begantowalk. 四、with的复合结构句式①:with+情感名词，主谓/[withone'seyesfullof+n.]1.周围的人满意地笑了。Peoplearoundmesmiledwithsatisfaction.2.她生气地盯着我。Shestaredatmewithanger.3.我热泪盈眶,冲出公寓，沿着街道跑。Withmy eyesfulloftears,Irushedoutoftheflatandranalongthestreet.4.他停下来转向我，眼里满是恐惧。Withhiseyesfullofterror,hestoppedandturnedtome.句式②:with+宾语+doing/done/todo,主谓1.Hestoodsilently.Tearsofregretwererolling/sliding/strearingdownhischeeks.=Hestoodsilentlywithtearsofregretrollingdownhischeeks.2.Herushedtotheroom.Hisheartbeatwildly.=Herushetotheroomwithhisheartbeatingwildly.3.Asherplanwasruinedbytheaccident,sheletoutacrywithanger.=Withherplanruinedbytheaccident,sheletoutacrywithanger.4.Asalltheexamswerepassed,shedancedwithjoy.=Withalltheexamspassed,shedancedwithjoy.Practice:① Heissmiling__________②Heburiedhisfaceinhishands,crying_________.③Seeingtheunexpectedpresent,shejumpedtoherfeet________.④Afterseveralattemptstosaveherself,shesatstillinthelift,waitingforrescue__.⑤Figuringoutthatshehadmadeastupidmistake，shesmiled____andapologizedtotheman.五、无灵主语一、Whatis"无灵主语"→用无生命的事物做主语，用人或者是社会团体的行为动作做谓语="无灵主语+有灵谓语"[有种拟人化表达]eg:Romewitnessedmanygreathistoricevents.罗马发生过许多重大历史事件。Rome-→无生命的事物witness-→目击，是人的动作，有灵谓语→→无灵主语:物品，动作，情感，时间，地点等vs有灵主语:有生命的①Suddenly,Ihaveagoodidea.→→→②Agoodideasuddenlystrikesme.二、无灵主语的分类①情感状态的抽象名词+谓语→描写人物情绪/心理时，可以替换掉"sbfeel..."“情感状态的抽象名词+谓语动词”的描写有：①Feargrippedthevillage.(整个村庄笼罩在恐怖之中)②Couragedesertedhim.(他失去了勇气)③Angerchokedmywords.(我气的说不出话)④Awaveofnervousnesswashedoverhim.(一阵紧张的情绪涌上他的心头)⑤Achillofhorrorsuddenlysweptoverhim.(他突然感到不寒而栗)⑥Excitementseizedhim.(他好兴奋)Tips:◆常见的情绪名词：happiness,joy,delight开心快乐；surprise,astonishment惊奇惊讶；shame羞耻羞愧；anger愤怒；despair绝望；regret遗憾后悔；sorrow悲伤；horror惊恐；anxiety焦虑；disappointment失望沮丧；satisfaction满意满足；puzzlement困惑不解；等等。◆常见的谓语动词：seize侵袭；choke噎住堵住；flood充满；creep不知不觉产生；grip紧抓；givewayto被xx代替；washover洗涤侵袭；deserted丢弃遗弃；等等。②思考/动作行为的名词+谓语→描写人物动作/思考行为时，可以替换"sbdo..."“思考/动作行为的名词+谓语动词”的描写有：①Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.(看到这个情景我心中充满了恐惧)②Aterriblethoughtsuddenlystruckme.(我突然想到一个可怕的想法)③Atenminutes’walkbroughtustothehotel.(我们步行十分钟就到了旅馆)④Thethoughtofseeinghersonverysoonfilledherheartwithgreathappiness.(想到不久就要见到她的儿子，她心中感到十分快乐)Tip：◆常见词汇补充，可根据文中人物动作或思考的行为，挑恰当的词自行搭配：常见的人物行为词汇有：sight看到，thought想法，glance一瞥，look看到，idea想法，feeling感受，walk走路；等等。◆常见的谓语动词：overwhelm压倒；strike打击侵袭；arouse唤起；remind想起；fill...with充满xx；change改变；bring带来；等等。③身体部位/音容样貌+谓语→描写人物外貌性格时，可以替换"sbis..."“身体部位/音容类名词+谓语动词”的描写有：①Smilecrumpledhisface.(他笑得一脸皱纹)②HerfacebrightenedwhenIgaveherthepresent.(我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩)③Hiswordssentmeaquiverthroughmybody.(他的话让我全身不寒而栗)④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.(笑声在房间里萦绕)⑤TearswelledupinAnni'seyes.(泪水从安妮的眼中涌出)Tip：◆常见词汇补充，可根据文中的人物的外貌或性格，挑恰当的词自行搭配：常见的身体部位/音容的名词有：face；laughter；smile；tear；words说的话；等等。◆常见的谓语动词：lightup，brighten照亮；linger继续存留；wellup涌出；flash闪烁；crumple弄皱；等等。④时间地点场景类+谓语→描写故事的时间或背景时“时间/地点/场景类名词+谓语动词”的描写有：①Ahushfellupontheclassroom.(教室一片寂静)②Beijinghaswitnessedgreatchangesinrecentyears.(北京见证了最近几年的的巨大变化)③Duskfoundthechildcryinginthestreet.(黄昏时，孩子在街上哭)④Thatchillyafternoonwitnessedhimtrudginginthesnow.(那个寒冷的下午，他在雪地里跋涉)⑤Nighthasfallenoverthecountry.(夜幕已经笼罩着乡间)Tip：◆常见词汇补充，可根据文中需要交代的时间或地点背景，挑恰当的词自行搭配：常见的时间/地点/场景类名词：slience，hush安静沉默；dusk黄昏；dawn黎明破晓；morning；afternoon；night；等等。◆常用的谓语动词有：see看见；witness见证；find发现；fall降临进入；等等。⑤自然现象类名词+谓语→描写环境时，可以替换"Itissunny..."“自然现象类名词+谓语动词”的描写有：①Asuddenshowerkilledthewind.(突然下了一阵雨，风停了)②Aheavyrainvisitedthecity.(这个城市刚下过一场大雨)③Thesunhascomeout.(太阳出来了)④Thethickfogblanketedthefield.(浓雾笼罩着整个大地)Tip：◆常见词汇补充，可根据续写所需的环境描写，挑恰当的词自行搭配：常见的自然现象名词：sun；sunshine；moon；moonlight；fog，mist雾；rain；earthquake地震；等等。◆常见的谓语动词：blanket覆盖；come；bring；prevent妨碍阻止；strike打击侵袭；threaten威胁/即将来临；等等。练习一1.他没有了勇气。Couragedesertedhim.2.他感到非常轻松。Agreatsenseofrelaxationfloededoverhim.3.他感到不寒而栗/恐惧。Asenseofhorrorseized/creptuponhim.4.一阵焦虑撕名