高中英语作文技巧

学生：老师，我请假。老师：why?学生：我晕课，尤其是写作课，上作文课我就头疼。2021/5/91Badsample卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得10分samplesofstudentwork2021/5/92progresswell∧widenedare词汇有错误;卷面有涂改;得19分.samplesofstudentworkroadsMyhometownisbecomingmoreandmore2021/5/93词汇,句型,语法多样化

1.覆盖了所有的要点

2.应用高级的语法结构和词汇

3.有效地使用句子间的连接成分，使结构紧凑

4.书面干净整洁要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？2021/5/94

技巧2.使用较高级的词汇4.使用恰当的连接词词汇是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。生动活泼，语言简洁能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧3.使用较丰富的句式1.漂亮的书写形象面子工程的作用2021/5/95漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面2021/5/96Whichcompositionfeelsmoreattractive,why?2021/5/97影响给分的因素之二：

文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；2021/5/981.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.(幸亏…)2.Ithinkyou’dbetteraskwhatyoudon’tunderstand.

3.Luxunisnotonlyawriter,butalsoathinker.

Thankstothegoodweather,

ourjourneywascomfortable.I.怎样使用较高级的词汇AsfarasI’mconcerned,

you’dbetteraskwhatyoudon’tunderstand.Thereisnodoubtthat

Luxunisnotonlyawriter,butalsoathinker.感情细腻，表现恰当2021/5/99B.句型结构运用灵活多变,增加文章的魅力2021/5/910Inordertomyparents,Ishouldmakefulluseofeveryminutetostudywhatmyteachertaught.2)

我很乐意和你分享我是怎样学英语的I’mgladtosharewithyouhowIlearnEnglish.I’mgladtosharewithyoutheway_______IlearnEnglish*语法，句法高分tipsinwhich

定语从句Inordertomakemyparentshappy

宾语从句2021/5/911E.恰当使用特殊句式，增强语句表现力ＩＴ句，强调句，倒装句型，省略句，感叹句等将下列句子转换：1.Ididn’trealizethemistakeuntilIgrowup.(强调句）2.Wecanmakegreatachievementsonlybyworkinghard.（倒装句）3.Lastbutnotleast,enjoyingsomeEnglishwebsitesishelpfultous.(it)Itwas

notuntilIgrowup

thatIrealizedthemistake．OnlybyworkinghardcanwemakegreatachievementsLastbutnotleast,itishelpfultoenjoysomeEnglishwebsites.2021/5/912影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅

上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词2021/5/913and,also,besides,morever,what'smorefurthermore,inaddition…1.表递进２.表转折３.表因果４.表目的５.表总结but,however,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,inspiteof,despite…because,since,therefore,so,thus,

asaresult/consequence,onaccountof...inorderthat,sothat,forthepurposeof...inbrief,inshort,inaword,inconclusion,onthewhole...AsfarasI’mconcerned,2021/5/9142021/5/915Ifyouaretheteacher

假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你的英语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡，请你根据下列要点写回信。要点:

1.我学英语已经六年了，在老师和同学们的帮助下取得了一些进步；2.但是总觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法；3.今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取能用流利的英语和你写信；4.我的家乡发生很大的变化，盖起了许多高楼，拓宽了道路，变得越来越漂亮和现代化；5.如果有时间可以到中国来，我会带领你参观我的家乡。2021/5/916最近在武安市高三年级学生中就市政府“拆违”展开了一场讨论，请你就下表提供的信息给市长写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。约70％的学生认为：1．应该拆除违法搭建；

2．违法建筑占用绿化带并常堵塞交通；

3．大多数违法建筑陈旧过时，既破坏城市的美，又存在安全隐患。约30％的学生认为：1．不宜全部拆除；

2．许多违法建筑系下岗职工所建，以便经营一些小生意以养家糊口；

3．拆违会使一部分人失去谋生手段。WritingHomework2021/5/917注意：1．词数：100左右(不包括已给出部分)；2．文章应包括题中所给的主要信息。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头与结尾已为你写好。参考词汇：绿化带：greenbelt安全隐患：hiddendangerDearMayor,I'mastudentofSeniorThree.I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetherthecitygovernmentshoulddemolishillegalbuildings.Opinionsbetweenusaredivided.______________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes2021/5/918theillegalbuildingstakenupblockedthetrafficoutofdatebreaksthebeautyofthecityexistssomehiddendangersBrainstormingSupport:Notsupport:outofjobrunsomesmallbusinessMakealiving/supportone’sfamilypulldownthesebuildings2021/5/919影响书面表达得分的因素：“大错误”包括时态错误、句子结构错误、中式英语等，如：Myhometownhadbigchange,buildmanyhouses,……Myhometownhasgreatchanges.

◆语言表达出现“大错误”及“小错误”

→Greatchangeshadtakenplaceinmyhometownthere.Forexample,manynewhouseshadbeenbuiltandroadshadbeenwidened.2021/5/9203.IfyougettoChinathathavetime,mewithyoulookmyhometown.

4.Iwillwelcometoyou.

◆“小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、冠词介词使用不准确等方面,如：

Undermyteacherandclassmatesallhelptome,…….

→Ihopeyou’llgetachancetocometoChinaandI’llshowyouaroundmyhometownifyouarefree.→WelcometoChina.→Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,……2021/5/921◆没有使用高级词汇和复杂句1.Iwillvisitmyhometownwithyou.2.Ifyouhavetime,Iwilltakeyoutotravelaroundmyhometown.→Iwillshowyouaroundmyhometownifyouarefree.2021/5/922◆书写是否工整清晰也会影响答卷得分。卷面不整洁，涂改多；大小写;标点符号;书写不清，得分会很低！2021/5/923◆审题不认真，要点有所遗漏1.彻底理解题意，看准答题要求（包括字数要求）。2.把内容要点在稿纸上列成提纲。3.连词成句，连句成文。4.成文后认真检查，确信无一遗漏。注意：2021/5/924★完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。

★应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

★

语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。

★有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

书面表达评分最高标准（第五档21---25分）2021/5/925Onepossibleversion:

June8,2008

DearPeter,

I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.IwilltellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishstudyandhometown.

ItissixyearssinceIbegantolearnEnglish.Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,IhavemadesomeprogressinEnglish.HoweverIstillfindEnglishhardtolearn,suchassomedifficultidiomswhichmademeconfused.Nomatterhowharditis,Ihavemadeupmymindtomasterthisusefullanguagebymyhardwork.2021/5/926NotlongagoIreturnedtomyhometownandfoundgreatchangeshadtakenplacethere.Manynewhouseshadbeenbuiltandroadshadbeenwidened.Myhometownisgettingmodernandmoreandmorebeautiful.IhopeifyouhaveachancetocometoChinaandI’llshowyouaroundmyhometownwhenyouareonleave.

Bestwishes,

LiHua2021/5/927MySuggestions:1.beautifulwordsandexpressions2.propersentencestructures3.connectionsbetweensentences4.propercomplexsentences5.writingmodels2021/5/928Sixstepsforwriting(写作六步骤）

1.

Cross-question(审题)※

Mainidea※Style※

Verbtense※Person2.Seizethemajorpoints/keywords(抓要点)3.Arrangement(布局)！4.Sentencesconnection(连句)Words/phrasesSentences6.

Errorcorrecting(查错改错)5.Expressyouropinion

(发表观点）Conjunctions/conjunctiveadverbssentencespassage2021/5/929DearSmithLiHuaYours22

Iwassopleasedtohearfromyouandamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyschool.You’reright.Quiteafewchangeshavetakenplaceinourschool.Ononesideoftheroadisanewteachingbuilding;

Ontheotherside,where

theplaygroundusedtobe,

standsanothernewbuilding-ourlibrary.Theplaygroundisnowinfrontoftheschool.Wehavealsoplantedalotoftreesinandroundtheschool.Ihopethatyouwillbeabletoreturnandseethechangesforyourselfsomeday.Bestwishes,2021/5/930

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好。

June8,2008

DearPeter,

I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.IwilltellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishstudyandhometown.………….2021/5/931字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。

samplesofstudentwork2021/5/932readandwritefindithard

fluentEnglishtowriteGreatchanges

roads

hadtakenplaceinmyhometownbuildingswidenedItwillbewonderfulwhen

youcometoChinaifyouarefreeshowyouaroundIwillbegladto语言不地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多，得分13分samplesofstudentwork2021/5/933learnoftheteachersandmyprogressreadandwriteithardtolearnhardwork.writelettersinfluentEnglishfoundhadbecomeWelcometoChinaifyouhavetimeshowyouaround语言素质较好;基本功不差;语句仍有毛病；得15分.samplesofstudentwork2021/5/934PracticeFindsomesimilarwordsorphrasesofthefollowingsgood2.think3.cleverperfect

excellentoutstandingpleasantwonderfulfavorablemagnificent

inone'sopinion/viewholdtheviewthat…itiswidelysharedthat…

wisebrightsmartintelligentcute2021/5/935III.常用的连接词1.

表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容

另外，还有：2.表示转折关系

但是，然而，相反：

what’smore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition

but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;

onthecontrary.2021/5/9363.表示因果关系

因为，因此，所以:4.表示条件关系

如果，只要:

除非:

否则:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;if;oncondition(that);aslongasunless

orelse2021/5/937

5.表示时间关系当…的时候

:

when;while

在…之后:

after

在…之前:

before

直到:

until

直到…才…:

not……until……

一…就…:

assoonas

后来，然后:

later;

afterwards

不久:

soon

近来:

lately;

recently

自从…:since

从那时起:

fromthenon2021/5/9386.表示特定的顺序关系

首先:firstly

最主要的:

aboveall

其次:

secondly

然后:

then;next

最后:

finally;intheend7.换一种方法表述

换句话说:

inotherwords;thatistosay;

2021/5/9398.进行举例说明

例如，比如:9.用于陈述事实

forinstance;forexample;like;suchasthatistosay,namely,actually,andsoon,believeitornot,

totellyouthetruth,forthisreason实际上:

infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你说实话:

totellyouthetruth2021/5/94010.

对一个话题进行总结

总而言之，总的来说:

onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword,finally,inconclusion,generallyspeaking,asyouknow,intheend,其它常用到的副词

therefore;otherwise;finally;

furthermore;thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;2021/5/94112.

表示结果：

thus,therefore,so,asaresult,seeingthat,luckily,unfortunately

13.表示强调：

aboveall,indeed,surely,certainly,ofcourse,afterall,withoutanydelay,atleast,atmost,mostimportant,undoubtedly2021/5/9426.表示特定的顺序关系

首先:firstly

最主要的:

aboveall

其次:

secondly

然后:

then;next

最后:

finally;intheend7.换一种方法表述

换句话说:

inotherwords;thatistosay;

2021/5/943II.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。

HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!

Itwasthisyoungboywho

helpedtheoldgranny.

Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.

Theyreadwhilewalkingor

ridingonabus.

1.感叹句2.强调句3.倒装句4.省略句2021/5/944

Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.

Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.

That’swhatIshoulddo.

Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.

5、with短语6、定语从句7、各种名词性从句8、各种状语从句2021/5/945

联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。

2）词数：100-120之间。PracticeLadiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.2021/5/946Ladiesandgentlemen,