应用文：求助信

求助信【试题探究】假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。请你给外教MissEvans写一封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介;2.指导内容;3.商定时间、地点。注意:写作词数应为80左右。Step1:精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称、第二人称时态一般现在时和现在完成时要点1.写邮件的目的2.说明求助事项Step2:字斟句酌巧饰亮点要点1:我写邮件是想就我们改编自课本的一个剧本征求您的意见。①高级词汇:I’mwritingtoaskyouforadviceregardingaplayadaptedfromourtextbook.②高级句式(利用定语从句升级):I’mwritingtoaskyouforadviceregardingaplaythatwehaveadaptedfromourtextbook.要点2:我们不确定情节是否完整,我们也想知道如何使用适当的语气来完美地说台词。①高级词汇和句式(宾语从句):Weareuncertainwhethertheplotiscomplete.Wearealsowonderinghowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectly.②高级句式(利用notonly...butalso合并两个句子):Wearenotonlyuncertainwhethertheplotiscomplete,butalsowearewonderinghowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectly.③高级句式(利用倒装句升级):Notonlyareweuncertainwhethertheplotiscomplete,butalsowearewonderinghowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectly.Step3:衔接过渡斐然成篇DearMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritingtoaskyouforadviceregardingaplaythatwehaveadaptedfromourtextbook.Theplayisabouthowmoneyinfluencestheattitudeofpeopletreatingothers.However,notonlyareweuncertainwhethertheplotiscomplete,butalsowearewonderinghowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectly.Hopefully,youwouldbesokindastogiveussomeguidance.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetat8:30a.m.tomorrowintheschooltheater.We’dappreciateitifyoucoulddousafavor.Yours,LiHua【句式储备】1.篇头——开篇表意,请求帮助①Iwonderifyoucoulddomeafavortopickupmyuncleattheairport.我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙,到机场接我叔叔。②Wouldyouliketodomeafavortohavemydraftpolished?你愿意帮我润色草稿吗?2.篇中——详细描述,讲清困难①Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceonmathslearning?面对上述问题,我渴望得到你的帮助。你能给我一些数学学习建议吗?②Now,Istrugglealotinmystudy.I’vefoundthathardlydoItakesportsduetotoomuchhomework.现在,我在学习上很痛苦。我发现由于作业太多,我几乎没时间运动。3.结尾——盼回复,希望得到帮助①Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Iwouldreallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我,我真的很感激。②Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldoffermesomenecessary/timelyhelp(give/lendmesomepractical/valuableadvice).如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助(给我一些实用的/有价值的建议)我会很感激。【拓展储备】假定你是李华。最近你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“魅力中国”的演讲比赛,请给你的外教Cheslie写一封电子邮件,请她帮助润色你的演讲稿并给予你有关演讲技巧的指导。内容包括:1.写信原因;2.你的困惑;3.请求帮助。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearCheslie,Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考范文】DearCheslie,Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.I’llparticipateinanEnglishspeechcontestwiththetitle“CharmingChina”.I’vefinishedmyspeechdraft,butIfinditfarfromsatisfactory.Firstly,I’mnotsureofsomeproperexpressionsinEnglishandnotawareofthemistakesingrammarandsentencestructures.Wouldyoupleasegothroughtheattachmenttothisemailandthenhelpmecorrectthemistakesandpolishthespeechdraft?Besides,Iamprettynervousaboutthespeech,soI’dlikeyoutooffermesomepresentationskills,whichcanimprovemyperformance.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeyourguidance.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yourssincerely,LiHua【要点精练】1．假定你是李华，你的英语听力存在一些问题，你想让你的英国笔友Wesley给你推荐几个提高英语听力水平的网站。请你给他发一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.你的英语听力情况介绍；2.提出请求；3.期待回复。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearWesley,Howareyoudoing?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua2．假设你是李华，去纽约旅游，从机场乘一辆黄色的出租车去假日饭店(HolidayInn)，到达酒店后发现遗失了一件行李箱。在失物招领处，工作人员要求你用英文写一份书面材料。内容包括：●行李遗失的过程；●行李箱的概况；●联系电话:1-703-3543269。注意：1.字数80左右。2.文章中不能出现个人真实信息。DearSir/Madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua3．假定你是学生李华，你写了一篇介绍剪纸艺术的英文博客（blog），希望请外籍教师Bob润色一下。请你给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1.写信的事由：2.表达感激。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearBob._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely.LiHua4．假定你是李华。自进入高中以来你妈妈不允许你使用智能手机，她认为这会影响学习和视力，而你认为智能手机能解决学习中的困惑且方便与同学交流。你们之间的冲突让你感到很苦恼。请你用英语给某英语报社编辑Mr.Advice写一封信寻求帮助。注意：1.词数120左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jenny这学期作为交换生第一次离开父母来到中国学习，常常感觉孤独，来信向你求助。请你给Jenny回信，要点包括：1、表示理解;

2、你的建议及理由;

3、表示祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯;3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJenny,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua6．假定你是学校音乐俱乐部的负责人李华，在做户外音乐会的准备工作时遇到了一些问题。请给有组织经验的美国笔友Jack写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.介绍准备情况；2.征求建议。DearJack,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,sincerelyLiHua7．假设你是李华，是一名高三学生，你面临着毕业也面临着职业的选择，但是你很迷茫，不知道如何选择和判断自己未来适合从事哪种工作，为此你写信给已是大学一年级的美国朋友Lily，希望她能给你一些建议。信的内容如下：①你面临职业选择的迷茫；②希望对方给出一些建议；③感谢和祝福对方。注意事项：①词数在80左右；②可以适当增加细节使行文流畅。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假定你是校英语戏剧社社长李华，在排练课本剧《百万英镑》TheMillionPoundNote中AtTheTailors这一幕时遇到一些困难，希望得到同样酷爱戏剧表演的外教Betty老师的指导。你发邮件邀请她来排练现场，并请求她的帮助。内容包括：(1)发出诚挚邀请；(2)说明排练难处；(3)请求现场指导。注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇：排练v.rehearse

n.rehearsalDearBetty,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua参考答案1．DearWesley,Howareyoudoing?Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.Asyouknow,myEnglishlisteningskillsarenotasstrongasI’dlikethemtobe.Despitemyeffortstoimprove,IstillfinditchallengingtounderstandspokenEnglish,especiallywhenitcomestoaccentsorfast-pacedconversations.ConsideringyourproficiencyinEnglishandyourfamiliaritywithonlineresources,IwaswonderingifyoucouldrecommendsomewebsitesoronlineplatformsthatarespecificallydesignedtoenhanceEnglishlisteningskills.I’dgreatlyappreciateyourassistanceandlookforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给英国笔友Wesley发一封电子邮件，请求他给听力存在一些问题的自己推荐几个提高英语听力水平的网站。【要点分析】1.词汇积累尽管：despite→inspiteof英语口语：spokenEnglish→oralEnglish考虑到：considering→given/inviewof提高：enhance→elevate2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.拓展句：Iamwritingtoaskifyoucandomeafavor.[高分句型1]Despitemyeffortstoimprove,IstillfinditchallengingtounderstandspokenEnglish,especiallywhenitcomestoaccentsorfast-pacedconversations.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)[高分句型2]ConsideringyourproficiencyinEnglishandyourfamiliaritywithonlineresources,IwaswonderingifyoucouldrecommendsomewebsitesoronlineplatformsthatarespecificallydesignedtoenhanceEnglishlisteningskills.(运用了if引导宾语从句、that引导限制性定语从句)2．DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,atouristfromChina.Thismorning,IarrivedatNewYorkairportandtookayellowtaxitoHolidayInn.Unfortunately,onreachingthehotel,Idiscoveredoneofmysuitcaseslostinthetaxi.Whatwasworse,Itooknonoticeoftheplatenumber.Thesuitcaseisablackplasticone,about60cmby40cmby16cm.Thereisavideocamera,twopairsofpantsandsomebooksforchildreninit.Thecamerahasrecordedallmyexperienceinthiscountry,whichmeansalottome.WhenyouhavegotANYinformationofmysuitcase,pleasecontactmeat1-703-3543269.Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作解析】这是一封求助信。要求考生以李华的身份，就你去纽约旅游，从机场乘一辆黄色的出租车去假日饭店(HolidayInn)，到达酒店后发现遗失了一件行李箱，在失物招领处，工作人员要求你用英文写一份书面材料一事，写一封求助信。【要点分析】1.词汇积累到达：arriveat→attainthedestinationof注意：takenoticeof→bemindfulof大约：about→approximately得到：get→obtain2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：Thismorning,IarrivedatNewYorkairportandtookayellowtaxitoHolidayInn.拓展句：Thismorning,uponmyarrivalatNewYorkairport,Iembarkedonajourneyinayellowtaxi,whichconveyedmetoHolidayInn.【高分句型1】Unfortunately,onreachingthehotel,Idiscoveredoneofmysuitcaseslostinthetaxi.（使用了介词短语作状语）【高分句型2】Thecamerahasrecordedallmyexperienceinthiscountry,whichmeansalottome.（使用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句，先行词为前面一整句话表示的内容）3．DearBob,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.Iamwritingtorequestyourexpertguidanceonmyrecentblogpost,“AJourneyThroughtheIntricateLabyrinthsofChinesePaper-CuttingArt,”whereIdelveintothebeautyandculturallegacyofthisage-oldcraft.Givenyourlinguisticprowessanddeepculturalunderstanding,Ibelieveyourinputwouldsignificantlyenhanceitsclarityandappeal.Ikindlyaskforyourassistanceinreviewingmydraft,seekinganygrammaticalcorrections,refiningsentencestructures,andofferinginsightstobetterarticulatethedistinctivetechniquesandrichhistoryofpaper-cutting.Yourfeedbackwillnotonlyrefinemywritingbutalsodeepenthereaders’appreciationofthisfascinatingtradition.Thankyouinanticipationofyoursupport.Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生请外教Bob写信润色一篇介绍剪纸艺术的英文博客。【要点分析】1.词汇积累帮助：assistance→help提高：enhance→increase提供：offering→providing迷人的：fascinating→charming2.句式拓展同义句替换原句：Thankyouinanticipationofyoursupport.同义句：Ieagerlyanticipateyourvaluablesupport,knowingitwillsignificantlycontributetotheexcellenceofmyblogpost.【高分句型1】Iamwritingtorequestyourexpertguidanceonmyrecentblogpost,“AJourneyThroughtheIntricateLabyrinthsofChinesePaper-CuttingArt,”whereIdelveintothebeautyandculturallegacyofthisage-oldcraft.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Yourfeedbackwillnotonlyrefinemywritingbutalsodeepenthereaders’appreciationofthisfascinatingtradition.(运用了not…only…but…also…连接的并列句)4．DearMr.Advice,IamLiHua,aSeniorHighstudent.Ihavebeentroubledbyaproblemandhavetoaskyouafavorwiththehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtohelpmeout.Mymotherhasnotallowedmetousemysmartphonesincethebeginningofthenewterm.Inheropinion,smartphoneswillhaveanegativeeffectonmystudiesandeyesight.However,Idon’tagreewithher.Withthephone,Icaneasilyfindanswerstosomedifficultquestions.Meanwhile,Icansharemyworriesandjoyswithmyfriendsonline,whichcanhelptoreducemystress.WhatdoyouthinkIshoulddo?I’dappreciateitifyoucanoffermesomepracticalsuggestions.Yours,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生自进入高中以来，妈妈不允许考生使用智能手机，她认为这会影响学习和视力，而考生认为智能手机能解决学习中的困惑且方便与同学交流。和妈妈之间的冲突让考生感到很苦恼，要求考生按照要求用英语给某英语报社编辑Mr.Advice写一封信寻求帮助。【要点分析】1.词汇积累帮助某人：helpsb.out→givesb.ahand允许：allow→permit意见，看法：opinion→view消极的：negative→passive2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：IamLiHua,aSeniorHighstudent.拓展句：IamLiHua,whoisaSeniorHighstudent.【高分句型1】Ihavebeentroubledbyaproblemandhavetoaskyouafavorwiththehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtohelpmeout.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)【高分句型2】Meanwhile,Icansharemyworriesandjoyswithmyfriendsonline,whichcanhelptoreducemystress.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)5．DearJenny,Youwrotethatyoualwaysfeellonelybecauseit’sthefirsttimethatyouhavebeenawayfromyourparentsandstudiedinChinaasanexchangedstudent.Iunderstandyouquitewellandperhapsthefollowingsuggestionsmaybehelpful.Firstofall,Irecommendthatyoumakevideocallswithyourparentsfromtimetotime,whichwillhelptoreduceyourloneliness.Besides,itwouldbeagoodideatotakepartinsomeextra-curricularactivities.Inthisway,youcanmakemorefriendsandleadamorecolorfullife.Idohopethatmyadvicewillbeofsomeusetoyouandthatyouwilladapttothenewlifesoon.

Yours,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国朋友Jenny作为交换生感觉孤独，来信向你求助，现要求考生给他回信。其内容包括：表示理解、你的建议及理由和表示祝愿。【要点分析】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion→advice首先：firstofall→tobeginwith而且：besides→moreover适应：adaptto→fitinwith2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides,itwouldbeagoodideatotakepartinsomeextra-curricularactivities.Inthisway,youcanmakemorefriendsandleadamorecolorfullife.拓展句：Besides,itwouldbeagoodideatotakepartinsomeextra-curricularactivities,throughwhichyoucanmakemorefriendsandleadamorecolorfullife.【高分句型1】Firstofall,Irecommendthatyoumakevideocallswithyourparentsfromtimetotime,whichwillhelptoreduceyourloneliness.（运用了虚拟语气和which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Idohopethatmyadvicewillbeofsomeusetoyouandthatyouwilladapttothenewlifesoon.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）6．DearJack,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?Iaminchargeofourschoolconcertclub.NowIcomeacrosssomeproblemswhenpreparingforanoutdoorconcert.Knowingthatyouhaverichexperienceinorganizingsuchkindofevent,I’mwritingtoaskforyoursuggestions.Ihavealreadymadesomepreparationsforit.Forexample,thetimeandplaceaswellasthethemeoftheconcerthavebeenannouncedpubliclytousstudents.ButthedifficultiesthatI’mfacedwithduringarrangement(安排、筹备)upset(使苦恼)mesomuch.Tobeginwith,I’mnotsureabouthowtoarrangethevenue(布置场地)toleaveagoodimpressionontheaudience.WhatmakesmemorefrustratedisthatIdon’tknowhowtohosttheconcert.Bytheway,isitnecessaryfortheperformerstoputonmake-up?I’mveryanxioustogetyoursuggestionsabouttheproblemsmentionedabove.I’mconvincedthatyourpreciousadvicewillmakeagreatdifferencetomypreparingfortheconcert.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyatyourmostconvenience.Yours,sincerelyLiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你是学校音乐俱乐部的负责人李华，在做户外音乐会的准备工作时遇到了一些问题。要求考生给有组织经验的美国笔友Jack写一封电子邮件介绍准备情况和征求建议。【要点分析】1.词汇积累负责：beinchargeof→takechargeof活动：event→activity沮丧的：frustrated→depressed焦虑的：anxious→worried/nervous2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’mveryanxioustogetyoursuggestionsabouttheproblemsmentionedabove.拓展句：I’mveryanxioustogetyoursuggestionsabouttheproblemswhicharementionedabove.【高分句型1】Knowingthatyouhaverichexperienceinorganizingsuchkindofevent,I’mwritingtoaskforyoursuggestions.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句结构）【高分句型2】WhatmakesmemorefrustratedisthatIdon’tknowhowtohosttheconcert.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）7．DearLily,Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.Iamwritingtosharewithyoumyconfusionaboutmyfuturecareerchoice.Asahighschoolsenior,Iamatacrossroads,uncertainaboutwhichpathtotake.Withgraduationlooming,Ifindmyselfoverwhelmedwithpossibilities,yetcluelessastowhichonewouldbethemostsuitableforme.Iknowyouwentthroughthisphasenottoolongago,andIwaswonderingifyoucouldoffersomeinsightoradvicebasedonyourexperience.Perhapsyoucouldsharehowyounarroweddownyouroptionsorwhatfactorsyouconsideredwhenmakingyourdecision.Anyguidancewouldbegreatlyappreciated.Thankyouinadvanceforyourhelp.Iwishyouallthebestinyourstudiesandhopetoseeyousoon.Sincerely,LiHua【写作解析】本篇是应用文写作。你是一名高三学生，你面临着毕业也面临着职业的选择，但是你很迷茫，不知道如何选择和判断自己未来适合从事哪种工作，要求考生为此写信给已是大学一年级的美国朋友Lily，希望她能给你一些建议。【要点分析】1.词汇积累不确定：uncertain→unsure迫近的：looming→approaching合适的：suitable→fit/appropr