2024届高考英语作文复习专项读后续写：拯救小猫任务单素材

读后续写：拯救小猫（教师版）

一,＞原文

Myteenageson,Jordan,alwayscomplainedabouthavingtobehomeearlierthanallhis

friends.Hewouldtellmethathewasalreadyseventeen,butstillhadacurfew（宵禁）.He

believedhewaspracticallyanadult.Ipointedoutthathewasnotanadultashewasstillin

highschool.

“Youdon'ttrustme!"heyelled.BeforeIcontinued,herolledhiseyes,slammedthe

doorandwalkedaway.Isighed.HowcouldImakeJordanseethatIonlywantedtokeephim

safe?

Idecidedtogoforawalk,hopingtheDecemberairwouldclearmyhead.Iopenedthefront

doorandnearlysteppedonher:asmallblackcat,justlikeameatball."Hi,Meatball,“Isaid,

bringingherintomyarms.Iwalkedbackin,touchingherneckgently.Meatbailseemedhappy

enoughtocomeinthehouse,butafteranhourortwo,shesatbythedoor,meowingtogoback

outside.

“Whywon'tshejuststayinwithusalltheNathan,myyoungestsonasked.

Iexplainedtohimthatshewashappyherebutshelikedbeingabletocomeandgoas

shepleased.

“Thatmustbenice,^^Jordanmutteredfromtheotherroom,complainingwhythecat,

nothim,couldcomeandgo.HeevenaskedmetogiveMeatbailacurfew.

Meatballbecamearegular.

Onenight,temperatureswereunusuallylow.Meatballstoodatthedoor,meowingtogooutside.I

shookmyheadather,afraidthatshemightfreezetodeath.Shestaredatmeandmeowedagain.I

pattedherhead,"Iknowyou'renothappy,butit*sforyourowngood.”

“Mom'snotbeingmeantoyou,“Nathantoldthecat."She'sjusttryingtokeepyoufrom

turningintoafrozenmeatball.^^Webothlaughedathisjoke.

Thenextmorning,Icouldn'tfindMeatbail.Iaskedthekidsifanyonehadseenher.

Paragraph1:Jordannodded,'〕letheroutlastnight.”

Paragraph2;As/drovetotheanimalhospital,JoYdcmsatintheback,holdingMeatball

insidehiscoat.

二、分句练习

Paral:Jordannodded,（iIletheroutlastnight.

(1)我几乎用颤抖的声音吼了起来。“她会冻死的。出去找她！”

①用颤抖的声音inatremblingvoiceIalmostroaredinatremblingvoice."She

②冻死freezetodeathwillfreezetodeath.Gooutandfindher!”

(2)我们毫不迟疑地冲了出去，试图寻找户球的踪迹。

①①冲冲出出去去ttrrottouttsiideeWetrottedoutsidewithoutdelay,

②毫不迟疑withoutdelayattemptingtosearchforthetracefor

③…的踪迹thetracefbr...Meatball.

(3)“她在这里'呐森叫道，脸上带着绝望的恐惧和焦虑的表情。

①带着……的表情withanexpressionof...“Heresheis!”Nathanexclaimed,withan

onone'sfaceexpressionofdesperatefearandanxietyon

②绝望的恐惧desperatefearhisface.

(4)那可怜的东西被发现躺在外面的花园里，发抖且浑身湿透。

①被发现正在做某事befounddoingsthThepoorthingwasfoundlyingoutinthe

②浑身allovergarden,shakyandwetallover.

(5)蹲下来，我检查了她的情况，歇斯底里地喊道:“我们应该开车送她去动物医院。现

在！”

①蹲下来crouchdownCrouchingdown,Icheckedherconditionand

②歇斯底里地hystericallyyelledhysterically,uWeshoulddrivehertothe

/hi'stenkli/animalhospital.Now!”

Para2:AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehis

coat.

(1)我们静静地坐着，偶尔，内森痹鼻子的声音会穿透寂静的空气。

①静静地insilence

Wesatinsilenceandoccasionally,thesoundof

②偶尔occasionally

Nathanblowinghisnosewouldpiercethrough

③痹鼻涕blowone'snose

thesilentair.

④刺穿pierce/pios/

(2)从后视镜里，我看到乔丹的眼睛里充满了悔恨的泪水。

①后视镜therear-viewmirrorFromtherear-viewmirror,Icouldsee

②含满〔泪水〕brimJordan'seyesbrimmedwithregretful

/'moIstforalz/tears.

(3)“对不起，我只是想让她自由。我不是有意的……”后面传来乔丹的低语。

①让某人自由setsbfree“Sorry,Ijustwanttosetherfree.Ididn't

②有意做某事meantodosthmeanto・・."fromthebackcameJordan's

③低语whisperwhisper.

(4)显然，他完全意识到了自己行为的严重后果。

①意识到某事beawokentosthObviously,hewasfullyawokentothe

②某人行为的后果theconsequenceofseriousconsequencesofhisact.

one'sact

(5)幸运的是，兽医成功地把肉球从死亡的边缘拉了回来。

①兽医vetFortunately,thevetmanagedtopull

②把某人从死亡边缘拉回来pullsbfromtheMeatbailfromthebrinkofdeath.

brinkofdeath

(6)她刚苏醒过来，乔丹就诚恳地向我道目炎。

①苏醒comebacktolifeScarcelyhadshecomebacktolifewhen

②一…就…ScarcelyhadsbdoneJordanapologizedtomesincerely.

whensbdid

(7)他不再抱怨宵禁了，他知道这是为了，也好。

①为了某人好forone'sowngoodHedidn'tcomplainaboutthecurfew

anymore,which,heknewwasforhisown

good.

三、最终自测

Jordannodded,(tIletheroutlastnight.我几乎用颤抖的声音吼了起来。“她会冻死

的。出去找她！”我们毫不迟疑地冲了出去，试图寻找肉球的踪迹。“她在这里”内森叫

道，脸上带着绝望的恐惧和焦虑的表情。那可怜的东西被发现躺在外面的花园里，发抖

且浑身湿透。蹲下来，我检查了她的情况，歇斯底里地喊道:“我们应该开车送她去动物

医院。现在！“

AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehis

co点.我们静静地坐着，偶尔，内森探鼻子的声音会穿透寂静的空气。从后视镜里，我看

到乔丹的眼睛里充满了悔恨的泪水。“对不起，我只是想让她自由。我不是故意的……”

后面传来乔丹的低语。显然，他完全意识到了自己行为的严重后果。幸运的是，兽医成

功地把肉球从死亡的边缘拉了回来。她刚苏醒过来，乔丹就诚恳地向我道歉。他不再抱

怨宵禁了，他知道这是为了他好。

四、最终范文

Paral:Jordannodded,'7letheroutlastnight."Ialmostroaredinatremblingvoice.

“Shewillfreezetodeath.Gooutandfindher!,9Wetrottedoutsidewithoutdelay,attempting

tosearchforthetraceforMeatbail."Heresheis!”Nathanexclaimed,withanexpressionof

desperatefearandanxietyonhisface.Thepoorthingwasfoundlyingoutinthegarden,

shakyandwetallover.Crouchingdown,Icheckedherconditionandyelledhysterically,C6We

shoulddrivehertotheanimalhospital.Now!”

Para2:AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinside

hiscoat.Wesatinsilenceandoccasionally,thesoundofNathanblowinghisnosewould

piercethroughthesilentair.Fromtherear-viewmirror,IcouldseeJordan'seyes

moisturizingwithregretfultears."Sorry,Ijustwanttosetherfree.Ididn'tmeanfrom

thebackcameJordan'swhisper.Obviously,hewasfullyawokentotheseriousconsequences

ofhisact.Fortunately,thevetmanagedtopullMeatbailfromthebrinkofdeath.Scarcelyhad

shecomebacktolifewhenJordanapologizedtomesincerely.Hedidn'tcomplainaboutthe

curfewanymore,which,heknewwasforhisowngood.

读后续写：拯救小猫（学生版）

一,＞原文

Myteenageson,Jordan,alwayscomplainedabouthavingtobehomeearlierthanallhis

friends.Hewouldtellmethathewasalreadyseventeen,butstillhadacurfew（宵禁）.He

believedhewaspracticallyanadult.Ipointedoutthathewasnotanadultashewasstillin

highschool.

“Youdon'ttrustme!”heyelled.BeforeIcontinued,herolledhiseyes,slammedthe

doorandwalkedaway.Isighed.HowcouldImakeJordanseethatIonlywantedtokeephim

safe?

Idecidedtogoforawalk,hopingtheDecemberairwouldclearmyhead.Iopenedthefront

doorandnearlysteppedonher:asmallblackcat,justlikeameatbail."Hi,Meatball,“Isaid,

bringingherintomyarms.Iwalkedbackin,touchingherneckgently.Meatbailseemedhappy

enoughtocomeinthehouse,butafteranhourortwo,shesatbythedoor,meowingtogoback

outside.

“Whywon'tshejuststayinwithusalltheNathan,myyoungestsonasked.

Iexplainedtohimthatshewashappyherebutshelikedbeingabletocomeandgoas

shepleased.

“Thatmustbenice,^^Jordanmutteredfromtheotherroom,complainingwhythecat,

nothim,couldcomeandgo.HeevenaskedmetogiveMeatbailacurfew.

Meatballbecamearegular.

Onenight,temperatureswereunusuallylow.Meatbailstoodatthedoor,meowingtogooutside.I

shookmyheadather,afraidthatshemightfreezetodeath.Shestaredatmeandmeowedagain.I

pattedherhead,"Iknowyou'renothappy,butit*sforyourowngood.”

“Mom'snotbeingmeantoyou,“Nathantoldthecat."She'sjusttryingtokeepyoufrom

turningintoafrozenmeatball.^^Webothlaughedathisjoke.

Thenextmorning,Icouldn'tfindMeatbail.Iaskedthekidsifanyonehadseenher.

Paragraph1:Jordannodded,“Iletheroutlastnight.”

Paragraph2;As/drovetotheanimalhospital,Jovdcmsatintheback,holdingMeatball

insidehiscoat.

二、分句练习

Paral:Jordannodded,<(Iletheroutlastnight.

(1)我几乎用颤抖的声音吼了起来。“她会冻死的。出去找她！”

①用颤抖的声音inatremblingvoice

②冻死freezetodeath

(2)我们毫不迟疑地冲了出去，试图寻找肉球的踪迹。

①冲出去trotoutside

②毫不迟疑withoutdelay

③…的踪迹thetracefbr...

(3)“她在这里''内森叫道，脸上带着绝望的恐惧和焦虑的表情。

①带着……的表情withanexpressionof...

onone'sface

②绝望的恐惧desperatefear

(4)那可怜的东西被发现躺在外面的花园里，发抖且浑身湿透。

①被发现正在做某事befounddoingsth

②浑身allover

(5)蹲下来，我检查了她的情况，歇斯底里地喊道:“我们应该开车送她去动物医院。现

在！”

①蹲下来crouchdown

②歇斯底里地hysterically

/hi'stenkli/

Para2:AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehis

coat.

(1)我们静静地坐着，偶尔，内森痹鼻子的声音会穿透寂静的空气。

①静静地insilence

②偶尔occasionally

③攥鼻涕blowone'snose

④刺穿pierce/pios/

(2)从后视镜里，我看到乔丹的眼睛里充满了悔恨的泪水。

①后视镜therear-viewmirror