2024年高考英语读后续写语料积累之如何表达紧张背诵与测试（词-句-文）讲义（解析版）

读后续写语料积累之如何表达感动背诵与测试（词-句-文）讲义

解析版

背诵积累区：背诵迁移举一反三

一、必背单词

1.紧张类形容词：

nervous紧张的；uneasy不安的；tense紧张的；anxious焦虑的；restless不安的；uptight紧张

的

2.紧张类名词：

nervousness,unease,tension,anxiety,restlessness

二、高频语块

1.one'sheartsinks心头一沉

2.takeadeepbreath深呼吸

3.holdone'sbreath屏住呼吸

4.pacebackandforth来回踱步

5.sitonpinsandneedles如坐针毡

6.aflood/waveoftension一阵紧张

7.tremblewithanxiety焦虑不安

8.withbutterfliesinone'sstomach心里发慌

9.hide/conceal/holdbackone'sanxiety掩饰紧张/焦虑

10.withone'sheartinone'smouth提心吊胆地

11.beburdened/beconsumed/seizedwithanxiety焦虑不安

12.pound/beat/race/thump/hammerwildly/violently心怦怦直跳得厉害

13.shiver/quiver/tremble/shakewithnervousness紧张得发抖

14.murmurinatremblingvoice用颤抖的声音小声喃喃

15.stammer/stutterunderone'sbreath结结巴巴地小声说

三、佳句赏析

l.Hisnervousnessdepriveshimofthepowerofspeech.他紧张得说不出话来。

2.1feltsonervousthatIcouldn*tmoveaninch.我很紧张，一步也挪不动。

3.Herheartbeatwildlyandherlegstrembled.她的心剧烈跳动，腿打着颤。

4.Fullofanxiety,Ifeltlikesittingonpinsandneedles.我焦虑不安，坐立不安。

5.Hecouldfeelthethunderousbeatofhisheart.他能感觉到心脏雷鸣般的跳动。

6.Hewaspacingnervouslyupanddowntheroom.他紧张地在房间里踱来踱去。

7.Myheartbegantoraceandmymindwentblank.我的心跳加速，头脑一片空白。

8.Henervouslymoistenedhislipswithhistongue.他紧张地用舌头湿润了一下嘴唇。

9.Jerryhadhadaharddayandhisnerveswereonedge.Jerry累了一天,神经很紧张。

10.Hisfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.他的脸色苍白，站在那里说不出话。

11.Mylipsquivered,bigtearsrollingdowncheeks.我的嘴唇颤抖着，眼泪顺着脸颊滚落。

12.Beforethefinalexam,Ialwayshavebutterfliesinmystomach.期末考试前，我总是紧张不安。

13.Hespokethroughclenchedteeth,strugglingtokeephisvoicesteady.他咬紧牙关说话，努力保持声音

稳定。

14.Whilewaiting,hisheartbeatwildlyandhispalmsweresweaty.等待的时候，他的心跳得很厉害，手心

出汗。

15.WhenIfinallywentonthestage,myheartwasinmymouth.当我终于走上舞台时，我的心都提到嗓

子眼儿了。

I6.S0anxiousdidIfeelthatmyheartalmostjumpedoutofmythroat.我太着急了，以至于我的心都快跳

出来了。

17.Withthebusgettingcloserandcloser,hissweatrandownhisforehead.随着公交车越来越近，他的汗

水顺着额头流下来。

18.Standinginfrontoftheline,Emilyfeltherthroattightandherpalmssweating.站在队伍的前面，艾

米丽感到喉咙紧绷，手心出汗。

测试巩固区：分级测试步步为赢

一、高频语块汉译英

1.深呼吸

2.屏住呼吸

3.如坐针毡

4.一阵紧张

5.焦虑不安

6.心里发慌

7.掩饰紧张/焦虑

8.提心吊胆地

9.心怦怦直跳得厉害

10.紧张得发抖

【参考答案】

1.takeadeepbreath深呼吸

2.holdone'sbreath屏住呼吸

3.sitonpinsandneedles如坐针毡

4.aflood/waveoftension一阵紧张

5.tremblewithanxiety焦虑不安

6.withbutterfliesinone'sstomach心里发慌

7.hide/conceal/holdbackone'sanxiety掩饰紧张/焦虑

8.withone'sheartinone'smouth提心吊胆地

9.pound/beat/race/thump/hammerwildly/violently心怦怦直跳得厉害

10.shiver/quiver/tremble/shakewithnervousness紧张得发抖

二、佳句赏析汉译英

1.我很紧张，一步也挪不动。

2.她的心剧烈跳动，腿打着颤。

3.我焦虑不安，坐立不安。

4.他紧张地在房间里踱来踱去。

5.我的心跳加速，头脑一片空白。

6.他的脸色苍白，站在那里说不出话。

7.期末考试前，我总是紧张不安。

8.等待的时候，他的心跳得很厉害，手心出汗。

9.我太着急了，以至于我的心都快跳出来了。

10.站在队伍的前面，艾米丽感到喉咙紧绷，手心出汗。

【参考答案】

1.1feltsonervousthatIcouldn'tmoveaninch.我很紧张，一步也挪不动。

2.Herheartbeatwildlyandherlegstrembled.她的心剧烈跳动，腿打着颤。

3.Fullofanxiety,Ifeltlikesittingonpinsandneedles.我焦虑不安，坐立不安。

4.Hewaspacingnervouslyupanddowntheroom.他紧张地在房间里踱来踱去。

5.Myheartbegantoraceandmymindwentblank.我的心跳加速，头脑一片空白。

6.Hisfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.他的脸色苍白，站在那里说不出话。

7.Beforethefinalexam,Ialwayshavebutterfliesinmystomach.期末考试前，我总是紧张不安。

8.Whilewaiting,hisheartbeatwildlyandhispalmsweresweaty.等待的时候，他的心跳得很厉害，手心出

汗。

9.SoanxiousdidIfeelthatmyheartalmostjumpedoutofmythroat.我太着急了,以至于我的心都快跳出

来了。

10.Standinginfrontoftheline,Emilyfeltherthroattightandherpalmssweating.站在队伍的前面，艾

米丽感到喉咙紧绷，手心出汗。

三、情感表达片段运用

请运用以上必备单词或高频语块，把下面的语篇补充完整。

WhenIfinishedhertestingperformance,IthankedMr.Butlerandknewtheresultwouldbeposted

onthedoorofthechoralroomthenextday.]（我在床上辗转反

侧了一整夜，无法入睡）.Bythenextmorning,Ihurriedtotheschooland2（紧张地）

glancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom,3（感觉好

像我的心都提到嗓子眼儿了）.There,atthetopofthelistwaspostedmyname.Inspired,Ipracticed

evenharderforthedayofperformance.Finallythedayfortheperformancecame.WhenIwasstanding

backstage,4（紧张感席卷全身）.WhenmynamewascalledIcould5

（心里忐忑不安）.Mytremblinglegsbroughtmeonstage,andIcould6（我

手心冒汗,心跳加速）.Thehallcrowdedwithaudiencemademeevenmore7（不安的）.

8（我的心扑通扑通地好像要跳出来了）.Atthatmoment,

myeyesparkedonMr.Butleratthecorner.Henoddedandexchangedadeterminedglancewithme,

whichtimelyputmyheartbackinplace.Withthemusicrising,Ibeganmysinging.WhenIfinished,the

auditoriumeruptedintoaseaofcheers.

【参考答案】

WhenIfinishedhertestingperformance,IthankedMr.Butlerandknewtheresultwouldbeposted

onthedoorofthechoralroomthenextday.Icouldn'tfallasleep,tossionandturninginbedfora

wholeniqht・Bythenextmorning,Ihurriedtotheschoolandnervouslyglancedatthelistonthedoor

ofthechoralroom,feelingasifmyheartwereinmymouth.There,atthetopofthelistwaspostedmy

name.Inspired,Ipracticedevenharderforthedayofperformance.Finallythedayfortheperformance

came.WhenIwasstandingbackstage,nervoiisness/tensioiicamefloodinqoverme.Whenmyname

wascalledIcouldfeelbutterfliesinmystomach.Mytremblinglegsbroughtmeonstage,andIcould

feelmypalmssweatingandheartracing.Thehallcrowdedwithaudiencemademeevenmoreuneasy.

MyheartwasDOunding/thumDinghard,asifitwereabouttoDOD.Atthatmoment,myeyesparked

onMr.Butleratthecorner.Henoddedandexchangedadeterminedglancewithme,whichtimelyputmy

heartbackinplace.Withthemusicrising,Ibeganmysinging.WhenIfinished,theauditoriumerupted

intoaseaofcheers.

四、情感表达语篇运用

1.（2023上•重庆•高三重庆巴蜀中学校考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，

使之构成一篇完整的短文。

“Mum!Dad!MyCAIEresulfsout,“exclaimedHala,sittinginfrontofherlaptoponherstudytable.Her

motherranfromthekitchenandmovedclosertoHala,andherfathersprangfromthesofa.

Smilingeartoear,Halafinallybrokethedreadfulsilence,“IgotanAinbiology,physics,additional

mathematicsandchemistry.TherestareAs."HerfatherkissedHala'sforeheadandhadstarsinhiseyeswhenhe

said,t6Onceagain,mydaughterhasmademeimmenselyproud.,,t6A*inbiology?Thensettobeadoctorandwalk

inourfootsteps,huh?^^saidhermotherwhowasanexcellentcardiologist.

Onhearingit,Haladidn'tseemascheeryasshehadbeenwhenshehadannouncedherresults.

Soon,Hala'seldersistercamefromhermedicalcollegeandwasexcitedbythisnews.Sherushedstraightto

Hala'sroomandcongratulatedher.€tBajjo,doyouexpectmetobeadoctoraswell?'Therewasashortsilence

afterwhichBajjoreplied,4tWell,don'tyouwanttobe?Whenyouwerelittle,allyoucouldthinkaboutwasbeing

adoctor,likefather.9,

“Iwanttobecomeapilot,Bajjo!Iwanttoseetheworldfromabove.Iwanttogooutintheworldandsee

howifslike,^^Halarepliedwithpersistence.Halawentovertothewindowandwatchedthecloudsasthough

imaginingherselfflyingthroughthecloudsalready.<6Girlscanbepilots.Someday,you'llseemeflyingoutsidein

theaeroplane,dancingwiththeclouds.^^Halapointedtothesky.

“Okay,“Bajjosighedclearlyfromtheexhaustionoftheuniversity,butalsofromthethoughtoftheupcoming

dramainthehouse.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thoughhesitant,Halafinallydecidedtovoicewhatshehadbeenthinking.

Atherinsistence,Halaenteredaflyingacademytoprovethatgenderisnoobstacle.

【满分作文】

Thoughhesitant,Halafinallydecidedtovoicewhatshehadbeenthinking.Herpalmswerecold,yet

shivering,frozentoesandbutterfliesinstomach.atDad,I...Idon'twanttopursuemedicalscience,saidHala

inadeterminedmannerandcontinued,t4Iwanttostudyaviation.^^Thoughshocked,DadexplainedtoHalathat

theyhadalreadypavedherwaytowardsmedicinebybeingexcellentdoctorswiththeirownprivateclinicsetup,

whichshewouldjoinsomeday.Besides,asawoman,shemightfindaviationstudiestobeverydemanding.Her

parentstoldtheirconcernstoher,butastheyalwaysencouragedhertobefirminherdecisions,shedidnotwant

tochangehermind.Halalookedatherparentsandflashedamillion-dollarsmile,"Iwon'tletyoudown,I

promise.^^

Atherinsistence,Halaenteredaflyingacademytoprovethatgenderisnoobstacle.Gradually,Halarealized

thatgettingthepermissionfromherparentswasonlythetipoftheiceberg.Thenextfouryears,aswarnedby

herfather,wereextremelytiresome.Shehadtostudyround-the-clock.Andherrelativesdidn'tmakeiteasier

either,alwayssaying“medicalwassaferforgirls”.Butshewasn'tgoingtogiveupbecauseplanesalwaystakeoff

againstthewind,notwithit.Itiswellsaidthatuntilyouspreadyourwings,youhavenoideahowfaryou'llfly.

Shewasdeterminedtodemonstratethathergenderwouldneverbeahurdleinhercareerandthatshecouldearn

respectandadmirationasapilot.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Hala成绩优异，从医的父母想让她学医，姐姐也上了医学院，但

是她没有听从父母的建议去学医，Hala想成为飞行员。经过考虑，Hala告诉了父母自己的梦想，父母很担

忧，但是最终也表示了理解和支持。最后Hala进入了飞行学院，但她不打算放弃。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“虽然犹豫，Hala终于决定说出她一直在想什么”可知，第一段可描写Hala告诉父母

自己想当飞行员的想法以及父母的反应。

②由第二段首句内容“在她的坚持下，Hala进入了一所飞行学院，以证明性别不是障碍”可知，第二段可描

写Hala进入飞行学院，努力学习，如何克服性别障碍赢得尊重和钦佩。

2.续写线索：告知父母想法一父母表示担忧一Hala坚持一进入飞行学院一努力学习一Hala感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

决定：decide/makeupone'smind

从事：pursue/undertake/takeup

解释：explain/illustrate

情绪类

吃惊：shocked/surprised

坚定：firm/committed

【点睛】[高分句型1]Thoughshocked,DadexplainedtoHalathattheyhadalreadypavedherwaytowards

medicinebybeingexcellentdoctorswiththeirownprivateclinicsetup,whichshewouldjoinsomeday.（运用了

that引导的宾语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Butshewasn'tgoingtogiveupbecauseplanesalwaystakeoffagainstthewind,notwithit.（运用

了because引导原因状语从句）

2.（2023上•浙江台州•高二校联考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一

篇完整的短文。

Adandelion（蒲公英）keptinmydictionaryalwaysremindsmeofmylunchtimeswithmymother.

WhenIwasinthethirdgrade,Iwaspickedtobetheprincessintheschoolplay,andforweeksmymother

hadpractisedmylines（台词）sohardwithme.ButnomatterhoweasilyIdeliveredthemathome,assoonasI

steppedonstage,everyworddisappearedfrommyhead.Finally,myteachertookmeaside.Sheexplainedthatshe

hadwrittenanarrator?s（旁白）parttotheplay,andaskedmetoswitchroles.

Ididn'ttellmymotherwhathadhappenedwhenIwenthomeforlunchthatday.Butshesensedmypain,and

insteadofsuggestingwepracticemylines,sheaskedifIwantedtowalkintheyard.

Itwasalovelyspringdayandtherosevine（藤蔓）wasturninggreen.Underthehugetrees,wecouldsee

yellowdandelionspoppingthroughthegrassinbunches,asifapainterhadtouchedourlandscapewithalittlebit

ofgold.Iwatchedmymothercasuallybenddownbyoneofthedandelions.64IthinkI'mgoingtodigupallthese

weeds,"shesaid,suddenlypullingaflowerupbyitsroots.""Fromnowon,we911haveonlyrosesinthisgarden.^^

“ButIlikedandelions,9,1protested（抗议）."Allflowersarebeautiful--evendandelions.^^Mymotherlooked

atmeseriously."Yes,everyflowerhasitsownbeauty,doesn'tit?"sheaskedthoughtfully.Inodded,feeling

pleasedthatIhadwonherover.6tAndthatistrueofpeopletoo,“sheadded."Noteveryonecanbeaprincess.

Hence,thereisnoshameinthat.”

Relievedthatshehadsensedmypain,IstartedtocrywhenItoldherwhathadhappened.Shelistenedand

smiled.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。

Paragraph!:

＜（Youwillbeabeautifulnarrator,“shecomforted.

Paragraph2:

Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Istillfeltnervous.

【满分作文】

（iYouwillbeabeautifulnarrator,“shecomforted.Uponhearinghercomfortingwords,Iheldbackmy

bittertears,lostindeepthought.Hardlyhadshenoticedthesadnessonmyfacesoftenalittlewhenshe

caressedmyhair,adding,“Nooneisborntobeaprincess.Whynottakeadvantageofnarrator'spart?”With

mother'sencouragement,Ibegantoacceptthatthenarrator9spartwasofvitalsignificance.Inthefollowing

weeks,everylunchtimewithmymotherwitnessedmymightyefforttopracticemypartoflines.Sofastdidtime

passthattheperformancedayarrived.

Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Istillfeltnervous.Sweatoozingfrommypalms,itwasat

thatverymomentthatIfoundadandelioninmypocket.Inaflash,Irealizedmymotherhadpassedthe

flowertome,whichmeanttobeincompanywithme.Consumedwithcourageandconfidence,Iconcentrated

onmypartandtheperformanceturnedouttobeagreatsuccess,theaudiencestandingupandburstinginto

thunderousapplause.Aftertheplay,Iputthedandelionintomydictionary,whichwasareminderofourprecious

lunchtimes,bathedinthesoftmiddaylight.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者小时候参加学校的戏剧表演，因严重怯场不得不放弃主演的

角色，换作幕后的旁白；母亲看到了作者的失落，于是用院子里蒲公英的美丽这个道理来开导作者的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容““你会成为一个美丽的旁白”，她安慰到。”可知，第一段可描写母亲成功说服作者接

受成为旁白的过程，让作者明白小角色也很重要，也可以绽放美丽。

②由第二段首句内容“演出当晚，我在后台感到紧张。”可知，第二段可描写作者如何克服紧张及这朵蒲公

英对作者产生了什么影响。

2.续写线索：母亲鼓励和安慰作者一母亲说服作者成为旁白一演出那天作者发现了蒲公英一作者把

蒲公英带回家一作者和母亲关于蒲公英的对话一蒲公英对作者产生了的影响

3.词汇激活

行为类

①注意到：notice/takenoticeof/spot

②禾U用：takeadvantageof/makeuseof

③来到：arrive/come

情绪类

①悲伤：sorrow/sadness

②充¥防勇气和信心：consumedwithcourageandconfidence/filledwithcourageandconfidence/courageousand

confident

【点睛】[高分句型1]Hardlyhadshenoticedthesadnessonmyfacesoftenalittlewhenshecaressedmyhair,

adding,atNooneisbomtobeaprincess.Whynottakeadvantageofnarrator'spart?”（运用了部分倒装，和现在

分词作状语）

[高分句型2]Inaflash,Irealizedmymotherhadpassedtheflowertome,whichmeanttobeincompanywithme.

（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

3.（2023上・江苏•高三校联考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一

篇完整的短文。

OfficerJondawasdrivingonadangerousroadonecold,darkwinternight.Thestormmadeitdifficulttosee,

butshecouldtellthecarinfrontofherwasswaying.Althoughitwasstillwithinitslane,Jondahadasixthsense

foraccidentsandlivedinterrorofthemeversincethatawfulnightsomanyyearsago.Shestillcouldn'tabolish

theterribleimageofthatteenagerscreamingforhelp,herhelp.Helpthatshehadbeenunabletogiveasshewas

drivenbackbytheintenseheatofthecarfire.ThesewerememoriesJondacouldneverreallyturnoff.She

countedonhertrainingforsupport,andthesedayssheneverignoredanysignsofthenextaccident.

Herpartner,David,tookthefirststep."Let'spullthatcaroverbeforesomeonegetshurt,^^hesaid.The

caraheadsloweddown,butnotenoughtostop,andendedupslidingofftheroadintotheDaltonRiver.Jonda

quicklystoppedherpolicecarandrushedtothewatefsedge,yellingatDavidtocallforbackup.Therainhad

causedtherivertoriseandthecarwashalfsubmerged（淹没），trappedagainstatree,andthepassengerseatwas

underwater.Jondawasfilledwithasenseofdread.Intheheavyrain,shecouldbarelysee,butshecouldhearthe

trappeddriverscreamingandbangingonthewindow.

“Neveragain!,5Thisistoomuch,toofamiliar,Jondathought.

Shecalledforthewindowhammer,rushingtowardsthecar.Thewaterwasrisingquickly,reachinguptoher

waistandchillinghertothebone.Shehadtoworkfastorriskedlosingfeelinginherlowerbody.Throughthe

window,shesawanoldwomannamedSandy,chest-deepinwater,wearingaworkbadge.

DavidcaughtupwithJondaandpassedherthewindowhammer.Jondayelledattheoldwomantoturnaway

fromtheglass.Sheswungthehammer,butthethickglassbarelycracked.Herheartsankassherealizedthatthe

carwasslowlybeingfreedfromthetree.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Shestrucktheglassagain,andthistimeitbrokeintolittlepieces.