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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Istaredatmyselfinthemirror:bluetights,yellowvest,afishtailtrailingbehindme,andlargeeyessittingatthetopofmyhead.Iraisedmyeyebrowsandsighed.“Mom,Idon’tthinkthiscostumeisright,”Isaid.“Maybethemakeupwilladdsomething,”Momrepliedhopefully.SomehowMomhadconvincedmetoplaytheFishFootmaninAliceinWonderland.Ican’tsayit’sbeenthetimeofmylife.“WhatifIforgetmylines?”Ihesitated.“OhRiley,isthatwhatyou’reafraidof?Iknowyou’vebeenrehearsingfortwomonths,youwerethefirstoff-bookinyourscene,andIcouldn’tbeprouderofyou.”Momsaid,kneelingdownandhuggingme.Thenextdaywepulledintotheparkinglot,andIsteppedoutofthecar,wearingthequestionablecostume.Ishrankinsidemyself,butMompulledmetowardthemakeuproom.Whenthemakeupwasdone,Ilookedatmyselfinthemirror.Myjawdropped.“Mom!Ican’tgoonstagelikethis!”Icried.“Whynot?”“I’dbealaughingstock（笑柄）!”“Riley,lookaroundyou!You’renottheonlyoneinanoddcostume.”“Whatifwejustsneakout?Noonewillmissme.”Iwhispered.Mom’slipsdisappearedintoathinline,andIknewIhadgonetoofar.“Riley,I’mgoingtowatchyougooutonthatstagetonight.Andthat’stheendofit.”Thenmomdisappearedintotheaudience.Isatthere,aloneandbored,astheplaybeganandthecurtainroseon.ThetwoboysdressedasTwoofClubs（梅花2）nearmechattedcasuallyaboutthisandthat.Suddenly,theyasked,“You’reawfullyquiet.Isthisyourfirstshow?”Itriedtorespond,butmyvoicecaughtinmythroatandrefusedtoescape.Icoughedandnearlyyelled,“YES!”TheAceofDiamonds（方块A）sittingnearbylaughed.“Theaudiencewillcertainlyhearyouifyoutalkthatloud.Butyoumighthavetoclearyourthroatfirst,”shechuckled.Igavethemaweaksmile.“Don’tworryaboutus,”theAcesaid.“We’reonlyteasing.”“Yeah,”theTwosaid.“Whenyou’vedoneasmanyshowsaswehave,projectingwillbesecondnaturetoyou.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Whenmynamewascalled,Isteppedontothestageuneasily._______________________________________________________________________________SuddenlyIwasdeterminedtomakealastingimpression._____________________________________________________________________________________中文意思：我凝视着镜子里的自己：蓝色紧身裤，黄色背心，身后拖着一条鱼尾，头顶上有一双大眼睛。我扬起眉毛叹了口气。“妈妈，我觉得这套戏服不对，”我说。妈妈满怀希望地回答说：“也许这个妆容会增加一些东西。”。不知怎么的，妈妈说服了我在《爱丽丝梦游仙境》中扮演鱼人。我不能说这是我一生中最美好的时光。“如果我忘了台词怎么办？”我犹豫了一下。“哦，莱利，这就是你害怕的吗？我知道你已经排练了两个月了，你是第一个出镜的，我为你感到无比骄傲。”妈妈跪下来拥抱我说。我们把车开进停车场，我下车，穿着那件可疑的服装。我吓了一跳，但妈妈把我拉向化妆室。化妆后，我看着镜子里的自己。我目瞪口呆。“妈妈！我不能这样上台！”我哭了。为什么不呢？“我会成为笑柄(笑柄）!”“莱利，看看你周围！你不是唯一一个穿着奇怪服装的人。“如果我们偷偷溜出去怎么办？没人会想念我的。”我轻声说道。妈妈的嘴唇消失在一条细线中，我知道我做得太过分了。“莱利，我今晚要看你走上舞台。到此结束。”然后妈妈消失在观众席上。戏开始了，幕布拉开了，我一个人无聊地坐在那里。两个男孩打扮成两个俱乐部(梅花2）我旁边漫不经心地聊着这聊着那。突然，他们问：“你太安静了。这是你的第一场演出吗？”我试图回应，但我的声音卡在喉咙里，拒绝逃跑。我咳嗽了一声，差点大喊：“是的！”钻石王牌(方块A）坐在旁边的人笑了。“如果你说得那么大声，观众肯定会听到你的。但你可能必须先清嗓子，”她笑着说。我勉强地笑了笑。“别担心我们，”王牌说。“我们只是在开玩笑。”“是的，”两人说。“当你做了和我们一样多的节目时，投影将是你的第二天性。试题分析●写作分析1.主要人物:①I:Riley,didn’tliketheoddcostume,wantedtosneakoutoftheperformance②Mom:不断地鼓励我参与演出③演出的小伙伴们:twoboysdressedasTwoofClubs,theAceofDiamonds2.视角：第一人称3.主题：人与自我（如何在妈妈和小伙伴们的帮助下找回信心、找到自我）4.前文故事梗概:因表演服太丑，我不太愿意参加演出，想找各种借口“逃脱”。但是，在妈妈和参与表演小伙伴的鼓励下，还是很不自在地上台表演。……5.续写安排:第一段:Whenmynamewascalled,Isteppedontothestageuneasily.①（与前一句和前文衔接）当时的情绪和想法②（过渡）接下去的表现③（承上启下）临近表演结束，又有了什么想法第二段:SuddenlyIwasdeterminedtomakealastingimpression.①（与前一句衔接）怎样的impression呢②（过渡）我做了些什么③（收尾）通过这次经历明白了什么下水作文Whenmynamewascalled,Isteppedontothestageuneasily.NowaycouldIhavetosneakoutofthestage,thelightsbrighteningthewholestage.Whatsurprisedmemostwasthateveryoneinthescenewasintheuglyandoddcostumes!Butnooneelsewasinalowspirit!Notimecouldbewasted.Withthemusicon,allthepeopleonthestageimmediatelyfellintotheirroles.Iwasnoexception.WhatIhadtodowasactaccordingtowhatIhadbeenrehearsingfortwomonths.Fortunately,thequestionablecostumedidn’tbothermeatall.Theperformancewentonsmoothlyandnolineswereforgotten.Fearseemedtoleavemegradually,andherecamemyincreasingconfidence.(115words)

SuddenlyIwasdeterminedtomakealastingimpression.Mom'scontinuousencouragementandthethreecompanions'casualchatbroughtmethethought."Whynottryingactingmyselfinsteadofjustperformingaccordingtothescriptandlines?"Isecretlyinvolvedmycreativelinesinmypartanditwasperformedsonaturallythatnoonesensedthechange.AmorevividFishFootmancameinfrontoftheaudience.Eventually,whatIharvestedwasthethunderousapplause,whichrangthroughthehall.ThefirsttimeIcametorealizethatasmallpartcouldbringagreatimpactonlyifyouputyourheartinit.Andjustasthecompanionssaid,projectingwouldbesecondnaturetomeafterjoininginshowsandshows.(116words)参考范文Whenmynamewascalled,Isteppedontothestageuneasily.Thebrightlightsblindedmeforamoment,andIfelttheweightoftheaudience’sexpectantgazes.Despitethat,mymusclememorytookover.WehadrehearsedsomanytimesthatIwaslikearobot,recitingmylinesinthemostmonotone（单调的）voiceimaginable.AsmallpartofmybrainwhisperedthatIhadsaidtheselinesmuchbetterinrehearsal,butIpushedthatvoiceaway.Ijustwantedtogetoffstageasfastaspossible.Soon,theendofmyscenewasapproaching,andIgrewuncomfortablyawarethattheaudiencehadindeedbeenveryquietduringit.HadIdonesomethingwrong?Didtheynotlikeme?(117words)SuddenlyIwasdeterminedtomakealastingimpression.IrememberedtheTwoofClubsandtheAceofDiamonds,theireasyconfidence.They,too,hadstartedsomewhere,likelyjustasnervousanduncertainasIwasnow.ThenIstraightenedmyspine,clearedmythroat,andyelledwithalltheforceIcouldmuster.Obviously,theaudienceheardme.Asthedialoguebegan,Ifoundmyvo