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2021年陕西省西安市大学英语6级大学英

语六级真题(含答案)

学校:班级:姓名:考号:

一、l.Writing(10题)

1.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOn

IndependentSpirit.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutline

givenbelow:

1.大学新生报道的时候,都是家长拎行李;

2.出现这种现象的原因及其不良后果;

3.培养独立精神的重要性。

OnIndependentSpirit

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledMyViewonAutomobiles.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.汽车给人类带来的益处;

2.汽车给人类带来的副作用;

3.我的观点。

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

compositiononthetopicCompetitionandCooperation.Youshouldwriteat

least150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)

below:

1.现代社会中竞争无处不在;

2.竞争和合作的关系。

4.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTo

CurbSpending?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutline

givenbelow:

1.现在许多大学生花钱大手大脚

2.有人认为社会整体生活水平提高了,大学生花钱多一些无可厚非

3.你的看法

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledOntheImportanceofEnvironmentalProtection.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.人类面临的环境问题越来越多,如气候变化、环境污染、生态失衡等

问题

2.但许多人仍然不懂得去保护环境

3.我的看法

OntheImportanceofEnvironmentalProtection

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledLeft-behindChildrenintheCountryside.Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.留守儿童的现象在农村非常普遍

2.这种现象带来的弊端

3.我诊断该如何时处理这些问题

7.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

StudyingAbroad.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutline

givenbelow:

1.当前出国留学的人数日益增多

2.留学的优势和劣势

3你的看法

8.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealettertoyourparents.

Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowin

Chinese:

1.告诉父母你决定毕业后去西部发展

2.说明你做此决定的原因

3.希望父母给予理解和支持

ALettertoParents

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic:SalaryorInterest.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowing

theoutlinegivenbelow:

1.1.如今大学毕业生面临的职业选择:兴趣重要还是工资重要

2.你的观点

3.结论

SalaryorInterest

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledSelf-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents.Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.大学生出去旅行经常会选择“自助游”

2.分析大学生选择“自助游”的原因

3.我的看法

Self-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10题)

11.

Inmanycases,theinternallydisplacedarevirtuallythosewhoare.

12.

Manypeoplenowpreferthesaying"earlyripe,earlyrich"tothesaying"early

ripe,earlyrot."

A.YB.NC.NG

13.

Whethertheemploymentofwomenhasledtogreateregalitarianismis

14.WhycouldAdamSmithbethelasteconomistasthefaceonabanknote?

A.Noeconomicthinkercouldbemorehonorable.

B.Cashisveryversatileandenduring.

C.Wewillnotneedmoneyinthenearfuture.

D.Electronicmoneywillreplacecashinthefuture.

15.

TomSchroederis.

A.goodatdefendingthoseidentitytheftvictims

B.indifferenttoByrd'scase

C.worriedaboutByrd

D.willingtohelpByrd

16.

Webecomelessasthetechnologygetsevermoresophisticated.

17.

Withouttheprenuptialtalk,it'snotlikelythatcoupleshaveanactualplanfor

theirlivestogether.

A.YB.NC.NG

18.

Bionicsisnowdevelopedtoaremarkablelevel.

A.YB.NC.NG

19.HeartheMusic,AvoidtheMashPit

ArtistsFindTheirAudienceOnline

MusicianSuzanneVegagotherstartintheNewYorkfolkscene,butnowthe

1980sstarhasfoundafollowingincyberspace.Withfilehelpofsome

programmers,Vegacreateda3Danimatedimageofherself,calledan

avatar(化身),andsherecentlyperformedinsideaworldaccessibleonly

throughawebsite,whereotherpeoplerepresentedbyavatarsattendedthe

concert,streamedlivetocomputersailovertheglobe.

AsVegastrummed(弹奏)herguitarinsidearealstudio,about100luckyfans

satattheircomputersandguidedtheiravatarsintotheonlinesceneofan

outdoor'amphitheater,whereVega'savatar-youthful-lookingwithshorthair

andbangs-appearedonstage.Whenthereal-worldartistplayedandsang,her

onlinealterego(另—)我)didthesame,thoughtheavatar'slipsdidnotmove.

Fansheardtheconcertontheircomputerspeakersandcommandedtheir

avatarstosmileormovetothemusic.

Later,Vegaansweredaudiencequestions,sentasinstantmessagesvisibleto

everyoneinattendance.

TheAug.3event,organizedbyapublicradioprogram,wasoneofthefirst

attemptsbyamajorartisttointeractwithfansinacompletelycomputer-

fabricatedworld.

"Theresponsewasterrific!Iamstillhearingfrompeoplewhowereinthe

room,friendsoffriendsandpeopleallovertheworldwhowerethere,"Vega

saidinane-mail,notingthatshetookanactiveroleinpickingoutthemaroon

blouse,blackcardiganandwhitetennisshoesheravatarwore.

Marketingandrecordlabelexecutivessaywebsitesthatputusersinto

video—game—likevirtualworldsareauniquewaytoreachouttoaudiences,

whoaxeincreasinglyspendingtheirtimeandmoneyonthecomputerinstead

ofatconcertsandmusicstores.Althoughstillexperimental,suchsitesoffer

fansmorewaystointeractwithoneanotherandbandmembersdirectly.

The1980sbandDuranDuranhasreunitedandplanstoperform,aliveconcert

laterthismonthonSecondLife,theworldwhereVegaperformed,onitsown

virtualisland.Afewmonthsago,singerandpianistReginaSpektorbuiltfour

virtualManhattanloftswherefanscouldwalkaround,hangoutandlistento

streamingmusicfromhernewalbumamonthbeforeitwasreleased.Even

fansaretakingpart:AgroupoffriendscreatedavatarsofthebandU2andhas

putonseveralvirtualconcerts,usingmusicfromtheband'srealshowsand

mimickingeverydetail,downtoleadsingerBono'shairstyle,sunglassesand

clothing.

Other,lesser-knownbandsandmusicianswhotypicallyhaveusedsocial

networkingsiteMyStobuildafollowingarealsoturningupon

SecondLifeandothervirtualworlds,suchasT,toshowcasetheir

music.

"AvirtualworldbringssomethingtothetablethataWebsitedoesn't-it's

buildingamoreimmersiveexperienceYoukindofloseyourselfinit,"said

EthanKaplan,directoroftechnologyforWarnerBros.Records,whosaidhe

hasplayedaroundwithSecondLifeforyears."It'sreallycoolandalotmore

funandcreativethanjustputtingaMySpacepageup."

Musiciansareincreasinglyusingthevirtualworldtoholdliveconcerts,at

specifictimesanddates,orlisteningloungeswheretheirmusicplayswhen

anavatarpaysavisit.Thevirtualworldprovidesarichandcolorful

environmentsimilartocomputeranimatedfilmslike"ToyStory,"onlya

notchlesssophisticated.

Userscontroltheiravatarsbyclickingonarrowsormovingthemouse,but

themovementandappearanceseemahitslowattimes.Unliketherealworld,

though,avatarscanflyaroundorbeam(发射)themselvesinstantlyfrom

beachtourbanenvironment.Sevvyavatarscanevenrecordanexperienceon

SecondLi

A.YB.NC.NG

20.

WhydowecallMadagascaraDarwinianplayground?

A.Becauseofitsgeographicisolation.

B.Becauseitsnatureisstillinoriginalform.

C.Becausemostofitsplantsareendemic.

D.Becausemostofitsanimalsareendemic.

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10题)

21.(35)

Altstrees.

Bitsstonewalls.

C.Itsrockgarden.

D.Itspronunciation.

22.(24)

A.Becausetherearesomanyverypeopleenjoying.

B.Becauseplayerscanbuilduptheirbody.

C.Becauseitisveryfast,withlotsofaction.

D.Becausethevolleyballisinterestingtowatch.

23.

[B6]

24.(17)

A.Shedisagreeswiththeman.

B.Shedoesn'tenjoylongspeeches.

C.Shehadn'tknownhowlongthespeechwouldbe.

D.Shedoesn'thaveaspecialopinionaboutthespeaker.

25.听力原文:I'mMr.Britain,theheadlibrarian,andtodayI'dliketo

introduceyoutothefacilitiesinouruniversitylibraryandshowyouhowto

usethem.Thefirstroomonourtouristhereferenceroom,whereyou'llfind

allsortsofreferencematerials:dictionaries,bibliographies,literatureguides,

e-yentelephonebooks.Youmayusethesebooksonlyinthereferenceroom

itself.Thenextroomistheperiodicalsroom,whereyou'llfindvarious

newspapers,magazinesandacademicjournals.Thecurrentissuesareusually

directlyavailabletoyouontheshelves.Andyoucangetanolderissueby

fillingoutaslipforthelibrarian.Theseitemsmustalsobeusedinthisroom.

Thisnextroomcontainsthecardcatalogs.Allthelibrary'sbooksarelisted

herebytitle,byauthorandbytopic.Whenyouarelookingforabookyou

mustwritethebook'scallnumber,titleandauthorontheseslipsandpresent

themwithyourlibrarycardatthedesk.Thebooksthemselvesaxekepththe

slacks,whichamopenonlytograduatestudentsfacultymembersandlibrary

staffOurlibraryhasoveramillionvolumesthesestackswhichcoverfive

floors.Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestionsaboutusingthelibrary,I'dbegladto

helpyouafterthetour.Thankyouforyourattention.

(30)'

A.Useoflibraryfacilities.

B.Libraryregulations.

C.Librarypersonnel.

D.Locationofthelibrary.

26.(36)

A.HumanBasicNeeds.

B.MaterialComfort.

C.Food:HumanBasicNeed.

D.BasicNecessitiesofLife.

27.(14)

A.Secretary-Boss.

B.Client-Lawyer.

C.Student-Teacher.

D.Patient-Nurse.

28.听力原文:M:Lilyreallylosthertemperatthatmeeting.She'sgonnahave

tolearntobealittlemoretactfulthanthat.

W:Right,butyouhavetoadmitthattakingastandneedscourage.

Q:WhatdoesthewomanthinkofLily?

(16)

A.ShethinksLilyshouldtakeabusinessclass.

B.ShegetsangrywithLilyatthemeeting.

C.SheadmiresLilyforexpressingheropinion.

D.ShedoesnotunderstandwhatLilysaid.

29.[B3]

30.(28)

AltwasthelargestcityofAlaska.

B.Itwasacityof40,000people.

C.Therewerealotofwildanimalsaroundit.

D.Therewasnosignofhumanpresencearoundit.-

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3题)

31.

Thepassageindicatesthatlitigantswholosetheircasesinthestatetrialcourt

maytakethemtoa.

A.differenttrialcourtinthesamestate

B.courtinadifferentgeographicregion

C.federaltrialcourt

D.statesupremecourt

32.

[C8]

33.Whilelearninghowtorunabakery,CordiaHarringtontriedtomakeher

effortknownby

五、5.ErrorCorrection©题)

34.[S5]

35.Let'slookbackinhistorytoanearlierwayoflife.Atone

time,peopledidn'tusemoneytogetthethingstheyneedfromS1.

theirphysicalenvironment.Wecansaythatpeopleusedto

liveoffthelandsamewaywildanimalsdo.IfpeoplewantedS2.

food,theycouldhuntanimalsorgatherplants.Iftheycouldn't

catchfood,theywoulddie.Thatwasallthereweretoit.S3.

Therewasnoneedtoplaceavalueoncertainobjectsanddecide

whatthingswereworthyinrelationtoeachotherIfyouwereS4.

hungry,thenfoodwasthemostvaluablething.Ifyouwere

cold,thenawarmplacewasthemostimportantthing

BackinthoseprimitivetimesitwasnecessarytohaveaS5.

specialform,ofexchangevalueforeverythinglikeaprice.In

thosetimeswhentheonlythingsthatwerereallyvaluableS6.

weretheskillstosurvive.Butassocietybecamemore

complexpeopledependedmostonotherswhowerelivingfarS7.

awayandthenitbecameimportantforpeopletodevelopsome

methodforexchangingvaluewithouthavingtoexchangethe

actualgoods

ThisneedtodevelopamethodforexchangingvaluewasS8.

ledtotheuseofmoney.MoneywasameaningofexchangingS9.

valuewithouthavingactuallyexchangedthespecificthingsyou

wanted.Beforetheuseofmoney,peoplehadtotrade

thingsforeachother,anditwasusuallyverydifficulttoS10.

decidethecomparativevalueofanitem.Withtheintro­

ductionofmoneyallthingscouldbegintohaveacommon

valuethateverybodycouldknowabout.

[SI]

36.

[sio]

六、6.ErrorCorrection©题)

37.Technically,anysubstanceotherthanfoodthataltersourbodilyor

mentalfunctioningisadrug.Manypeoplemistakenbelievethetermdrug

[SI]

refersonlytosomesortofmedicineoranillegalchemicaltakenwithdrug

[S2]______

addicts.Theydon'trealizethatfamiliarsubstancessuchasalcoholand

tobaccoarealsonotdrugs.Thisiswhythemoreneutraltermsubstanceis

now[S3]

usedbymanyphysicianandpsychologists.Thephrase"substanceabuse"is

[S4]

oftenusedinsteadof"drugabusive"tomakeclearthatsubstancessuchas

[S5]

alcoholandtobaccocanbejustasharmfullyusedasheroinandcocaine.We

[S6]

liveinasocietywhichthemedicinalandsocialuseofsubstancesispervasive

[S7]

:anaspirintoquiteaheadache,somewinetobesociable,coffeetoget[S8]

goinginthemorning,acigaretteforthenervous.Whendothesesocially[S9]

acceptableandapparentlyconstructiveuseofasubstancebecomemisuses?

Firstofall,mostsubstancestakeninexcesswillproducepositiveeffectssuch

[S10]______

aspoisoningorintenseperpetualdistortions.Repeateduseofasubstance

canalsoleadtophysicaladdictionorsubstancedependence.

[SI]

38.

[S4]

39.

[S2]

参考答案

l.OnIndependentSpiritWhenthereceptiondaycomesforcollegefreshman

wecanseemanyparentstakingcountlessluggagesfortheirchildrenand

someevenbuylotsofunnecessaryarticlesfordailyuse.Itisoftensaidthat

theyounggeneration(1)lacksindependentspirit.AsIseeit.thisphenomenon

istruly(2)notrareinfact.Therearereasonsaccountingforthisphenomenon.

(3)Theforemostoneisthatborninthe1990'smostofthenewcollege

studentsarethe(4)onlychildinthefamilyreceivingendlesscarefromtheir

parentsgrandparentsandevenrelatives.Oneoftheconsequencesofthisis

thattheyoungmaylosetheindependentspirit.(5)What'smorewithparents

undertakingthewholethingmanyyoungpeopleareeasytobetiredwith

everythingwhencomingacrosswithan(6)intractableproblemtheymayfind

itdifficulttocopewithontheirown.(7)Inmyviewcollegestudentsshould

formagoodhabitofindependencefortheyhavetofacethefiercecompetition

andthegreatpressureinreallifebythemselvesoneday.Parents'loveand

carecannotbewiththemforever.Besidesparentsneedtorealizethe

importanceoftheirchildren'sindependenceandgivethemmoretimeand

spacetogrowup.Asthesayinggoes(8)selfhoodbeginswithwalkingaway

andloveisprovedinthelettinggo.OnIndependentSpiritWhenthereception

daycomesforcollegefreshmanwecanseemanyparentstakingcountless

luggagesfortheirchildren,andsomeevenbuylotsofunnecessaryarticlesfor

dailyuse.Itisoftensaidthattheyounggeneration(1)lacksindependentspirit.

AsIseeit.thisphenomenonistruly(2)notrareinfact.Therearereasons

accountingforthisphenomenon.(3)Theforemostoneisthatbominthe

1990's,mostofthenewcollegestudentsarethe(4)onlychildinthefamily,

receivingendlesscarefromtheirparents,grandparentsandevenrelatives.

Oneoftheconsequencesofthisisthattheyoungmaylosetheindependent

spirit.(5)What'smore,withparentsundertakingthewholething,manyyoung

peopleareeasytobetiredwitheverything,whencomingacrosswithan(6)

intractableproblem,theymayfinditdifficulttocopewithontheirown.(7)

Inmyview,collegestudentsshouldform,agoodhabitofindependence,for

theyhavetofacethefiercecompetitionandthegreatpressureinreallifeby

themselvesoneday.Parents'loveandcarecannotbewiththemforever.

Besides,parentsneedtorealizetheimportanceoftheirchildren's

independenceandgivethemmoretimeandspacetogrowup.Asthesaying

goes,(8)selfhoodbeginswithwalkingawayandloveisprovedintheletting

go.解析:(1)lackindependentspirit”缺乏独立精神”

⑵notrare"不罕见”

⑶theforemostone"最重要的—

(4)onlychild“独生子女”

(5)What'smore"而且,,

(6)intractable“棘手的”

(7)inmyview提出自己的观点

(8)selfhoodbeginswithwalkingawayandloveisprovedinthelettinggo”父

母放手孩子才能长大”

2.MyViewonAutomobilesAutomobilesastheproductofmodern

civilizationhavebeenplayingavitalpartinthedailyactivitiesofhuman

society.Firstofallcarsofferconvenienceandmobility.Wecannowdriveto

workgoshoppingvisitfriendsandeventravelacrossthecountry.Fastand

laborsavingautomobileshavebecomesoessentialandindispensabletous

thatitisnoexaggerationtosaythatourmodernsocietyismovingonfour

wheels.Butautomobileshavealsogivenrisetoaseriesofproblems.Pollution

trafficaccidentsandenergyconsumptiontonamejustafewarefollowingin

theworkofautomobiles.Howevertheseproblemsareoffsetbythe

advantagesderivedfromautodevelopment.Obviouslyautomobileslike

anythingelsehavemorethanoneface.Whiletakingadvantageof

automobileswemusttrytofindwaystoreducetheirdisadvantagestoa

minimumsoastoletthemserveourpurposesbetter.Withthenumberofcars

inourcountrytheeraoftheautomobilelikeanyothertechnologicalagewill

come.MyViewonAutomobilesAutomobiles,astheproductofmodern

civilization,havebeenplayingavitalpartinthedailyactivitiesofhuman

society.Firstofall,carsofferconvenienceandmobility.Wecannowdriveto

work,goshopping,visitfriends,andeventravelacrossthecountry.Fastand

laborsaving,automobileshavebecomesoessentialandindispensabletous

thatitisnoexaggerationtosaythatourmodernsocietyismovingonfour

wheels.Butautomobileshavealsogivenrisetoaseriesofproblems.Pollution,

trafficaccidents,andenergyconsumption,tonamejustafew,arefollowing

intheworkofautomobiles.However,theseproblemsareoffsetbythe

advantagesderivedfromautodevelopment.Obviously,automobiles,like

anythingelse,havemorethanoneface.Whiletakingadvantageof

automobiles,wemusttrytofindwaystoreducetheirdisadvantagestoa

minimumsoastoletthemserveourpurposesbetter.Withthenumberofcars

inourcountry,theeraoftheautomobile,likeanyothertechnologicalage,

willcome.

3.CompetitionandCooperationCompetitionisacommonphenomenoninour

sociallife.Wecompetewhenweplaygames;wetrytodobetterthanothers

inourstudyandthereisconstantcompetitionforjobscustomersmoneyand

soforth.Wecansaytosomeextentcompetitionisoneofthemotiveforces

ofthedevelopmentofsociety.Wecanalsofindcompetitionandcooperation

atthesametime.Takeabaseballgameforexample.Oneteamiscompeting

againsttheother.Alltheplayerswanttotrytheirbesttodefeattheiropponents

andwinthegamebutthesingle-handedeffortofoneplayerislimitedand

eachmemberoftheteamhastocooperatewithhisorherteammates.Inmost

caseswecannotwininthecompetitionwithoutcooperation.Thus

competitionandcooperationareequallyimportant.Whileweareadvocating

competitionwecannotforgetcooperation.Pureandexclusivecompetition

leadstoconflictsandfailures.Onlycooperationincompetitioncanhelpus

reachourgoalsandsatisfyourneeds.CompetitionandCooperation

Competitionisacommonphenomenoninoursociallife.Wecompetewhen

weplaygames;wetrytodobetterthanothersinourstudy,andthereis

constantcompetitionforjobs,customers,money,andsoforth.Wecansay,to

someextent,competitionisoneofthemotiveforcesofthedevelopmentof

society.Wecanalsofindcompetitionandcooperationatthesametime.Take

abaseballgameforexample.Oneteamiscompetingagainsttheother.Allthe

playerswanttotrytheirbesttodefeattheiropponentsandwinthegame,but

thesingle-handedeffortofoneplayerislimitedandeachmemberofthe

teamhastocooperatewithhisorherteammates.Inmostcases,wecannot

wininthecompetitionwithoutcooperation.Thuscompetitionand

cooperationareequallyimportant.Whileweareadvocatingcompetition,we

cannotforgetcooperation.Pureandexclusivecompetitionleadstoconflicts

andfailures.Onlycooperationincompetitioncanhelpusreachourgoalsand

satisfyourneeds.

4.ToCurbSpending?Themonthlyexpendituresofcollegestudentshavebeen

ontheriseinthepastfewyears.Somearguethatifthestudentsearnthe

moneythemselveshowtheyspenditisnoneofotherpeople'sbusiToCurb

Spending?Themonthlyexpendituresofcollegestudentshavebeenonthe

riseinthepastfewyears.Somearguethatifthestudentsearnthemoney

themselves,howtheyspenditisnoneofotherpeople'sbusi

5.[1]Wearefacedwithmoreandmoreenvironmentalproblemsnowadays

suchasclimatechangeenvironmentalpollutionandecologicalimbalance.

Theseproblemswillultimatelydogreatharmtohumanbeings.Seriousasthe

situationismanypeople[l]Wearefacedwithmoreandmoreenvironmental

problemsnowadays,suchasclimatechange,environmentalpollution,and

ecologicalimbalance.Theseproblemswillultimatelydogreatharmtohuman

beings.Seriousasthesituationis,manypeople解析:本文标题是“沦环境

保护的重要性”,所以尽管。utline中提到环境恶化、很多人不注意环境

保护等内容,但这些内容似乎都不应该作为重点,而只能是不可缺少的

“引子”,作文论述的重点应该还是正面阐述“重要性”。

环境保护问题当然是“老生常谈”,但动笔具体写的时候,却让人为难,

可能总是转不出“环境保护对人类的生存至关重要”这么一条理由。如何

阐述理由,使这些理由相互关联却又截然不同,显得层次分明,是考生

写作思路训练的重点。

Analysis

[1]第一段可以把outline中相应内容简要介绍一下。

[2]前一句中的让步结构(seriousasthesituationis)运用巧妙,而这一句

就给出主题句。

[3][4]关于环保的重要性,能够给出什么理由呢?这里只列了两条:环

保可以拯救地球——我们生存的家园;只有环保才能让我们拥有健康生

存所需要的资源。理由只列两条时,可以使用foronething…foranother

的套话引出。注意,这里的两条理由之间没有重复交叉。如果举出四五

条理由,只不过分别说环保使我们得到干净的水、空气、土壤、粮食等

等,虽然不算错,但内容上是重复的,说服力就不够。

[5]结尾段重复一遍主题是必要的,注意语言上要有变化。本文用到

important,importance,significant和vital等不同的词表示"重要",所以

语言就富有变化。

6.Left-behindChildrenintheCountrysideEveryyearmillionsofpeoplefrom

ruralareas①pourintocitiestofindjobs.①Andthephenomenonofleft-

behindchildrenisprevalent.②Left-behindchildrenaresufferingaseriesof

problems.Theyarenottakengoodcareofbytheirparentsbecauseofthe

distance.Thereforemanyofthemareratherweakphysicallyand

psychologically.Besidestheyareeasilyledastrayduetotheabsenceof

parentalloveandguidance.③Inmyopinionmeasuresshouldbetakento

solvetheproblem.FirstlybothpeopleintheCitiesandcountrysideshould

endeavortoofferloveandconcerntothesechildren.Theparentsinparticular

shouldnotmakemoney(3)atthesacrificeofignoranceoftheirchildren.

Secondlypoliciesshouldbeimplementedsothatchildrenfromcountryside

canalso③haveaccesstoeducationalopportunitiesmedicalcareandother

servicesinthecity.Finallyitisurgenttodevelopeconomyintheruralareas

sothatpeoplecangetwell-paidjobsneartheirhomes.Left-behindChildren

intheCountrysideEveryyear,millionsofpeoplefromruralareas①pour

intocitiestofindjobs.①Andthephenomenonofleft-behindchildrenis

prevalent.②Left-behindchildrenaresufferingaseriesofproblems.They

arenottakengoodcareofbytheirparentsbecauseofthedistance.Therefore,

manyofthemareratherweakphysicallyandpsychologically.Besides,they

areeasilyledastrayduetotheabsenceofparentalloveandguidance.③In

myopinion,measuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblem.Firstly,both

peopleintheCitiesandcountrysideshouldendeavortoofferloveandconcern

tothesechildren.Theparentsinparticularshouldnotmakemoney③atthe

sacrificeofignoranceoftheirchildren.Secondly,policiesshouldbe

implementedsothatchildrenfromcountrysidecanalso③haveaccessto

educationalopportunities,medicalcareandotherservicesinthecity.Finally,

itisurgenttodevelopeconomyintheruralareas,sothatpeoplecangetwell-

paidjobsneartheirhomes.解析:[写作点拨]①审题及布局。根据提纲,

这篇作文的第一段阐述现象,第二段阐明此现象的弊端,第三段提出解

决办法。这三个部分的论述要有侧重点,我们可以把重点放在第二段或

第三段。第一段阐明留守儿童现象是随着大批进城务工者的出现而出现

的。第二段阐述留守儿童所遭遇的问题:缺少父母的关爱,他们的身心

都很有可能得不到健康的发展。第三段可以根据弊端的根源即缺少关爱

人手,提出一系列建议,让他们感受到关爱,得以健康成长。②语言。

这篇文章讨论的是当前的情况,用一般现在时即可。在第二、三段的论

述中,为了达到表意清晰,逻辑性强,要使用各种关联词,同时注意用

词的鲜明、准确。

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morepopular.Tensofthousandsofstudentsaretryingtheirbesttoapplyto

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nearyouworryalotaboutmyjob.HereI'mwritingtotellyouthatI'mdeA

LettertoParentsDec.24th,2006Dearmomanddad,Asgraduationdraws

near,youworryalotaboutmyjob.Here,I'mwritingtotellyouthatI'mde

9.SalaryorInterestUpongraduationvirtuallyallcollegestudentswill

confronttheproblemofchoosingtheircareers.Itistrulyaroughchoice.

Students'opinionsdiffergreatlyonthisissue.Someholdthatpriorityshould

begiventotheirinterestinthejobbutotherstaketheattitudethatsalaryis

themostcriticalfactorinfluencingtheircareerchoices.AsformyselfIprefer

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numberofpeoplewithnoexceptiontome.Althoughitmightbeimpossible

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careerchoices.Asformyself,Ipreferthelatterview.Awell-paidjobexerts

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