高考英语二轮复习应用文写作+我们的成长+讲义

高考英语写作我们的成长上个月，你校举办了“我的成长”的英语主题分享请你写一篇英语短文，汇报你们小组四人的分享内容，需包括以下要点.MemberFangFangSunLeiZhaoYunYouAspectsstudyvoluntaryworkenvironmentalprotectionProgresshavegoodlearninghabitshelpothersinrecycleoldthings范文一Hello,everyone!Wehadasharingsessionon"MyProgress"lastmonth.Hereiswhatwesharedinourgroup.

Everyonehastheirownprogress.Firstofall,FangFang,whowaspoorinstudies,hasdevelopedagoodlearninghabit.Thus,shecanstudyinanefficientway.

Inaddition,SunLeididalotofvoluntarywork,whichprobablyhelpedhimbecomeresponsible.Whenhefinishedhelpingothersinneed,herealizedthatitisnecessaryforteenagerstotakepartinsocialactivities.Moreover,recyclingoldthingsmadeZhaoYunfeelfulfilled.Hecertainlyenjoyedprotectingtheenvironmentbyhimself.AsfarasI'mconcerned,Iwasdealingwithmymentalhealthproblem,anditwasabigsuccess.Iwasgladtochangemydietbecauseitcouldpreventmefromseriousdiseases.Overall,everyoneinourgrouphasmadegreatprogress.Let'smakeadifferencetoourdailylives!范文二Hello,everyone!Wehadasharingsessionon"MyProgress"lastmonth.Hereiswhatwesharedinourgroup.Eachindividualhasforgedtheirownuniquepathofadvancement.

Toillustrate,FangFang,whohadpreviouslystruggledacademically,has

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大家好！上个月，我们参加了一个名为“我的进步”的分享会。请允许我概述一下我们小组内发生的事情。

每个人都开拓了自己独特的进步之路。举例来说，芳芳，之前在学业上遇到了困难，现在已经培养出了优秀的学习习惯，从而提高了她的学习效率。

此外，孙磊投身于众多的志愿活动中，这无疑磨练了他的责任感。在完成慈善工作后，他开始理解青少年参与社会活动的重要性。另外，赵云从升级利用废旧物品中获得了成就感，真正享受到了为环境保护做贡献的机会。就我个人而言，我面对了自己的心理健康挑战，并最终取得了显著的成功。调整饮食对预防潜在的健康问题很有帮助。最终，我们小组的每位成员都取得了显著的进步。让我们共同努力，对我们的日常生活产生深远的影响。范文一与范文二优化改写理由供参考1.“Lastmonth,weparticipatedinasharingsessiontitled'MyProgress.'”使用更正式的“participatedin”替换了原先的“had”，提升了句子的正式度，同时明确了分享会的主题。2.“Allowmetorecapitulatewhattranspiredwithinourgroup.”采用了更书面化的用语“recapitulate”和“transpired”，来替代原先的口语化表达，使文章显得更加正式和专业。3.在描述芳芳的进步时，用“cultivatedanexemplarystudyregimen”替换了“developedagoodlearninghabit”，使表达更加生动和具体。4.“therebyenhancingherefficiencyinlearning”中的“thereby”增强了句子的逻辑性，指明了学习习惯与学习效率之间的因果关系。在描述孙磊的部分，用“embarkedonnumerousvolunteerendeavors”替换了“didalotofvoluntarywork”，使表达更加丰富多彩。5.“honinghissenseofresponsibility”比原先的“becomeresponsible”更加细腻地描述了孙磊责任感的提升过程。6.“Uponconclusionofhischaritableworks”中的“uponconclusionof”使句子更加流畅，并强调了时间顺序。7.在描述赵云的部分，用“derivedfulfillmentfromupcyclingdiscardeditems”替换了“recyclingoldthingsmade...feelfulfilled”，使表达更加准确和生动。“genuinelyrelishingtheopportunitytocontributetoenvironmentalpreservation”中的“genuinelyrelishing”和“contributetoenvironmentalpreservation”提升了句子的表达层次，使其更具深度和内涵。在8.“Iconfrontedmyownmentalhealthchallenges”中的“confronted”比原先的“dealingwith”更加生动和有力。9.“Adjustingmydietprovedbeneficialinwardingoffpotentialhealthcomplications”中的“wardingoffpotentialhealthcomplications”更加具体和准确。10.“Ultimately,everymemberofourcohorthasachievedremarkable